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Post by Trey_Vore on May 13, 2006 19:12:53 GMT -5
Here it is people, the fanfiction based on my signature! This is my first real fanfic to be posted. Grab your popcorn, there will be a lot of chapters here. Here we go...
Chapter 1: Lucky to be alive
One sunny day on the Dearly Farm, Lucky was now being regarded as a true hero; he was the only one who was capable of vanquishing Cruella's newest scheme to steal the Dearly Farm, and he did. He was reveling in his victory, with his entire family and friends congratulating him. Suddenly, without warning, the sky suddenly turned dark and cloudy.
Lucky: What? What's happening?!
Suddenly, the world appeared to turn dark, with only him on the farm. No one could be seen anywhere. The only light was coming from the moon and two waste barrels on fire. Basically, it looked as if the entire farm had just been evacuated. Lucky suddenly heard a voice call out to him.
Voice: You may be able to defeat Cruella. But you'll never vanquish me!
Lucky turned around to be met with a punch to his face. It was so strong Lucky was knocked on his back. On looking up, Lucky was staring into the evil eyes of a pup with an X over one eye and an O over the other...it was Tic-Tac! Tic-Tac lifted Lucky up by his neck and threw him aside. Once Lucky got to his feet...
Lucky: You'll never succeed in killing me, Tac!
Tic-Tac: That has yet to be seen...
Lucky and Tic-Tac charged each other. Lucky was about to throw a punch when suddenly, Tac was somehow able to ignite his fist and hit him from far away. As their fight continued, Lucky was unable to land any hits on Tic-Tac, while the evil pup was able to claim victory with no effort. Lucky soon found himself lying half-dead on the grass, and Tac lifted him up by his neck with one arm.
Tic-Tac: It would seem as though victory goes to me.
As Tic-Tac lifted Lucky up to finish him, from Lucky's P.O.V. was Tac with a psychotic grin on his face, and in the background was a shadowy figure that appeared to be on fire, on the hilltop. On its back was the Japanese sign for '*Ten'.
Lucky: ...Uggh...
Tic-Tac: My ambition is about to be complete. The force of good has fallen to the side of evil.
Lightning crashed as Tic-Tac was going to land the fatal blow...
*The Japanese sign for 'ten' means 'sky' or 'heaven' in Japanese.
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Post by Belchic on May 13, 2006 20:30:39 GMT -5
This looks awesome, Trey! Keep going.
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Post by SF Lucky on May 13, 2006 20:37:06 GMT -5
So So
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Post by Trey_Vore on May 13, 2006 20:44:23 GMT -5
Here's Chapter 2, it may have a different tone than Chapter 1.
Chapter 2: Allies to be made
Lucky tossed and turned in his sleep.
Lucky: No...no...Tac, don't--!!
Lucky awoke in a cold sweat.
Lucky: Oh...just a nightmare...
Suddenly, he heard Cadpig and Rolly call out his name.
Cadpig: Lucky! You've got to get up!
Lucky: Aw, Cadpig, I need more sleep.
Rolly: No, Lucky, it's urgent!
Lucky: What? How urgent?
Cadpig: Come on down and see!
As Lucky came down to the first floor of the barn, he saw that there was no trace of any of the other pups.
Lucky: Where's everyone else?
Rolly: We don't know. They're all gone.
Cadpig: ...wait, there's a note on the wall over there!
As the three pups made their way over to the note, it was addredded to Lucky. When it was opened, it read:
Lucky,
There is a two-way radio by the Chow Tower. Expect a call at 9 am.
Lucky: Who could be behind this?
Rolly: I hope it isn't a prank.
Suddenly, Belchic appeared at the doorway.
Belchic: Morning, y'all! ...where is everyone?
Cadpig: C'mon, Belchic, we'll explain on the way.
As Lucky, Cadpig, Rolly and Belchic made their way to the Chow Tower, they found Jewel, Patch, Two-Tone and Tripod eating by themselves.
Lucky: Oh, thank you.
Tripod: What are you mean, Lucky?
Rolly: Every last one of the pups! They're missing and so far, we are the only pups left!
Two-Tone: I'll say. The only others we actually saw today were Mom, Dad, Roger, Anita and Nanny.
Patch: Yeah, and there's a radio over there.
Lucky picked it up and then produced a digital watch. It was 8:58 am.
Lucky: We've got two minutes.
Tripod: Maybe we'll get the answers we're looking for...
As the pups gathered around the radio, a transmission soon picked up.
Voice: Lucky. Pleased to see you took the note seriously. I believe that you know who I am. I've got a wager for you.
Lucky: What? Who is this!?
Lucky then heard the yelping from other pups, could they be the same missing pups from earlier?
Voice: That's enough. Just to let you know I'm serious. You have 72 hours. My ultimatum is this: if you don't surrender yourself to me within that timeframe...then there is no telling what I will do to my 'guests'.
Rolly: Is that...Tic-Tac?
Lucky: It could be no one else.
Tic-Tac: The choice is yours, Lucky. Either you give yourself in to me or the pending fate of 86 others. And you will be solely responsible. Victory!
Voices: (saluting) Tic-Tac! Tic-Tac!
Lucky started to sweat as the transmission ended.
Back at Tic-Tac's hideout, Tac closed the pit of pups. The pit is in the middle of a main control room, with a huge wall of TV screens on one wall. Standing all around the base was a horde of nasty stray dogs who had pledged themselves to Tic-Tac. Duke was standing right behind Tac, acting as a bodyguard. In front of Tac was Lt. Pug, who no one liked, but given a position of military lieutenant in Tic-Tac's military forces. He was holding a radio for Tac to speak into.
Tic-Tac: Thank you, Pug.
Lt. Pug: You sure he'll honor your choice, Tim-Tom?
Tic-Tac: If I know Lucky, he will.
Two-Tone: Oh, Lucky...
Patch: Lucky, you can't--!!
Lucky: ...I...I don't feel so good...
Cadpig: Don't feel that way yet, Lucky!
Lucky: W-Why?
Cadpig: Because Rolly and I might have a lead.
Lucky: What kind of lead?
Rolly: Well, earlier, Spot said she heard some strange noises while she was at Hiccup Hole.
Tripod: ...so you sent her to investigate?
Cadpig: Yep! We've got her radio here!
Belchic: Intrigue! Killer concept!
Two-Tone: Lucky, you have my support. The farm is in our hands.
Jewel: I'm totally in.
Patch: I'm here to help.
Tripod: Lucky, for the farm, I'll do anything. It's on my honor.
Lucky: Cadpig? Rolly?
Rolly: We're always here for you, Luck!
Cadpig: Never to leave!
Belchic: Hey, don't forget me!
Lucky: ...man, you guys are the best...wait, has anyone seen Noggin?
Belchic: He might have been captured too.
Cadpig: ...(growls) I'LL KILL TIC-TAC IF HE HURTS NOGGIN!!!
Lucky: Then it's settled. We have three days to make it happen.
Together, Lucky, Cadpig, Rolly, Belchic, Jewel, Patch, Two-Tone and Tripod put their paws together in a circle...
All: Yeah!
And with that, the eight pups made a break for Spot's radio.
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Post by Belchic on May 13, 2006 21:32:08 GMT -5
Looking good, man! Looking good. So far, doesn't seem much like Street Fighter.
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Post by Two-Tone on May 14, 2006 1:58:21 GMT -5
wow, interesting
d**n I need to play some more street fighter, and I have Alpha 3 on my pc so *zips off*
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Post by Trey_Vore on May 14, 2006 15:11:11 GMT -5
Down by Hiccup Hole, Spot was now together with an all-white Dalmatian pup...of course, it's Oddball...they were inside a small warehouse watching a brawl inside a fight pit between Blaze, Little Dipper and two other dogs. Blaze was fighting quite well against his opponent--his fight style was similar to that of a Bushin-style ninja--but Little Dipper, using an original style which he claimed was 'the strongest' was always taunting and was now getting creamed...big time.
Spot: Oddball, what exactly is Little Dipper fighting for?
Oddball: He, Blaze and I are all searching for my brother Domino. They think by this method of 'street fighting' they can find the information to find Domino.
Their conversation was interrupted by Little Dipper hitting the cage. Blaze was capable of beating his opponent as well as Little Dipper's with his Jumping Spin Kick.
Blaze: Man, what a joke!
Spot: How do you know Blaze?
Oddball: Domino and Blaze were originally partners. Together they wiped out our town's crime syndicate in their prime.
The cage was cleared after the unconscious Little Dipper was dragged out. Next fight was being arranged.
Spot: (on radio to Lucky) Lucky, there is definitely something fishy going on here. I think...
Oddball: Wow.
Spot: What?
Oddball stood amazed at the fight between Wizzer, Dipstick and two other dogs. Wizzer and Dipstick were using a style like Shotokan karate. Oddball admired Dipstick's fighting ability.
Oddball: Who is that?
Spot: That's Wizzer and Dipstick. And wherever they are, Mooch must be close by!
After the fight was over, the ring was cleared and a huge gray-colored cat stepped inside.
Spot: P-P-Persian Pete?!
Yes, Persian Pete was behind this tournament. What exactly he was holding it for was not known, but Spot knew she had to find out.
Spot: (on radio to Lucky) Lucky, I think this fight is corrupt...it's being held by P-P-Persian Pete! And you won't believe this--I just saw Wizzer and Dipstick, so Mooch must be close by!
Persian Pete opened the next fight between Blaze and his next opponent.
Persian Pete: The next fight: the challenger: Blaze!
(Crowd cheers)
Persian Pete: Versus, my champion, Scorch!
(Scorch approaches the ring wearing a mask and a claw)
Spot: Lucky? Scorch is here, too!
Persian Pete: But, why not sweeten the deal? Let's make it Blaze vs. Scorch AND Mooch!
Mooch entered the ring with a pair of boxing gloves.
Persian Pete: All bets start: 100 chunks of kibble!
Blaze: C'mon! What do you got?
Persian Pete was about to start the fight when suddenly, a loud >TWEET< was heard. All the dogs in the crowd made a break for it, thinking it might be animal control. Only Persian Pete, Scorch, Mooch, Blaze, Spot, Oddball, Wizzer, Dipstick, some of Persian Pete's mercenaries and an unconscious Little Dipper remained.
Suddenly, Lucky and his team made their move, knocking out Persian Pete's mercenaries along the way. Tripod, who made it to the cage first, freed Blaze and trapped Persian Pete, Scorch and Mooch in their own cage.
Tripod: You're comin with us, Persian Pete!
Lucky and Tripod guarded the cage, while the others surrounded Wizzer and Dipstick, forcing them to surrender.
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Post by Trey_Vore on May 14, 2006 15:34:13 GMT -5
Chapter 4: A regular Florence Nightengale
Back at Tic-Tac's hideout, Noggin was secretly trying to lead a group of pups to safety.
Noggin: (whispers) C'mon! If we are quiet enough, you can escape!
Noggin was leading at least 15 pups around the lair, but upon entering a circular shaped room there was only one door...which was locked!
Noggin: Why do I get the feeling the jig is up?
Voice: Where do you think you're going?
Noggin turned around to see Duke and five other guards. Duke jiggled a key.
Noggin: You're going down, big boy!
Noggin charged Duke and the two started fighting. While Noggin was relying on his intelligence, Duke had his physical power. Punches were thrown, kicks were landed, but upon getting sucked into his Pile Driver, Noggin was stunned. In the end, this battle of brains versus brawns didn't go as hoped; Noggin was defeated. The other 15 pups had no choice but to surrender. Duke radioed into Tic-Tac.
Duke: Tac, I found a group of would-be escapers, led by a pup in a baseball cap and shades. But they did not escape.
Tic-Tac: Excellent, Duke! Re-prison the others, but bring Noggin to me.
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Post by monkey on May 14, 2006 16:58:00 GMT -5
Nice, even though I haven't played Street Fighter at all, I still think the story's good, keep it up man
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Post by Trey_Vore on May 15, 2006 11:29:42 GMT -5
Chapter 5: Can we trust them?
The next morning, Mooch, Scorch and Persian Pete were being held captive, while Wizzer and Dipstick were being interrogated by Lucky, Jewel, Cadpig, Two-Tone and Tripod.
Tripod: All right, you goons, talk! We know what you were doing at that arena!
Dipstick: Uh...what were we doing?
Jewel: Don't totally play dumb! You know what you were doing!
Wizzer: You'll never make us talk!
Lucky: Two-Tone, you were in their gang before. Surely you'd know how to make them talk.
Two-Tone: Indeed I do. (turns to Cadpig, starts whispering)
Cadpig: Mmm! Okay...(to Wizzer and Dipstick) ALL RIGHT, YOU JERKS, EITHER YOU HELP US TAKE OUT TIC-TAC OR MOM AND DAD ARE GOING TO GROUND YOU FOREVER!!!
Wizzer: ...okay, we'll talk.
Lucky: Spill it!
Wizzer: Mooch made an alliance with Tic-Tac's forces. He would do anything to make Lucky suffer and Tic-Tac would too.
Tripod: What was the tournament for?
Dipstick: It was there to recruit members for Tic-Tac's forces. Mooch was going to get us in.
Two-Tone: Wow. I'm glad I left Mooch's gang when I did.
Tripod: Hey, Lucky, I think Beavis and Butt-head here just served their purpose.
Jewel: Yeah, but the question now is, what do we do with them?
Dipstick: Why don't you let us help you?
Lucky: Why should I put my life in your hands? You never aided me instead of Mooch before.
Wizzer: ...well, we can get close. And, well, we'll get in trouble if we don't, so...
Two-Tone: I know we can trust them, Lucky. We'll need all the help we can get.
Lucky: All right, but they'd better be telling the truth.
Back in Tic-Tac's lair, Noggin is imprisoned in Tic-Tac's dunegon. He meets his cellmate...
Prisoner: Tried to escape, huh?
Noggin: What's it to you?
Prisoner: How do you think I got here?
Noggin: You...did too?
Noggin's cellmate turned out to be Domino.
Domino: I'm Domino. I was a hero in my time...
Noggin: I'm Noggin. I got captured along with the other 86 Dearly pups.
Domino: I believe my siblings and my friend are on the lookout trying to find anything about me. Maybe your friends are doing the same for you...?
Noggin: ...Yeah. They...
Lt. Pug spoke up.
Lt. Pug: Be silent, cretins! Your punishment will come soon enough!
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Post by Deleted on May 15, 2006 11:57:47 GMT -5
(sorry I never read your fic yet ive ben busy lately)but this is going to be cool I will keep reading it......I aways thought that Dipstick reminded me of Beavis in a way....look at a pick of beavis and Dipstick next to each other and youl see there alike kinda
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Post by Belchic on May 15, 2006 12:08:40 GMT -5
Still looking good. Noggin doesn't sound as cool or sarcastic as I had intended him to be. I hope there'll be some cool action coming on.
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Post by Trey_Vore on May 15, 2006 12:24:09 GMT -5
Chapter 6: Kennel break
It was the start of day two. Spot and Little Dipper were now leading Wizzer and Dipstick to be reincarcerated.
Lucky, Cadpig, Two-Tone, Belchic, Patch, Rolly, Jewel, Tripod, Oddball and Blaze were waiting inside the barn. Dipstick had a tracking device which Noggin invented inside his collar.
Lucky: Ok, guys. You all know what to do.
As anticipated, Mooch, Scorch and Persian Pete schemed to escape. As soon as Spot opened the door to the cage, Mooch threw the door open, crushing Spot. As soon as Mooch got out, Scorch swept Little Dipper off his feet and the three captives grabbed Wizzer and Dipstick and ran.
Mooch: Let's go, let's go!
Quickly, Mooch, Scorch, Persian Pete, Wizzer and Dipstick made a run for it. The other pups made their bid to try to recapture them (as it looked), but the five escaped into the woods.
Belchic: Aw, flimshaw.
Blaze: We lost 'em.
Cadpig: What a pity...how's Noggin's tracking device working?
Blaze: ...it works so far.
Rolly: We should be able to track 'em now, right?
Lucky: As long as nothing happens to Noggin's tracking device, things should be okay.
Oddball: Oh, I hope nothing happens!
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Post by Deleted on May 15, 2006 12:27:03 GMT -5
just wondering how menny parts will there be?
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Post by Trey_Vore on May 15, 2006 12:36:08 GMT -5
At last count, there was 25.
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