Post by Belchic on Mar 26, 2007 23:27:46 GMT -5
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Belchic: Oh, man! I can't believe the show has been cancelled! I hate those stupid rules that Disney made for it's cartoon shows! I love you guys! I love all three of you so much! Yes, I'm talking to you...Lucky, Cadpig, and Rolly.
Lucky: What's wrong?
Belchic: I was waiting for you guys to do one of those totem pole disguise things...ever since the series started! You never did! But now, the series is cancelled, and now you'll never do it!
Lucky: Huh...Rolly, Cadpig, come over here.
*Lucky Rolly and Cadpig huddle and whisper out a plan. Then, they go up to Belchic.*
Rolly: Belchic?
Cadpig: We've got a little surprise for you.
Lucky: We think you might like it.
Belchic: Really? What is it?
Cadpig: Now, if we told you, it wouldn't be a surprise, now would it?
Belchic: I love surprises!
Lucky: You'll get it in a few days.
Belchic: Alright! Can't wait!
The next day...
Belchic: Hey, guys! Guess what?
Cadpig: I'm thrilled with guessing games.
Belchic: I just had this cool dream last night! I dreamed that you guys really did a totem pole disguise! You were even stacked up in the order I wanted you to be stacked! It was so cool!
Cadpig: Hmmm...well, I see that you can predict the future.
Rolly: That's just what we were going to do!
Lucky: Dammit, Belchic, this was supposed to be a surprise!
Belchic: You've got to be kidding me.
Lucky: We're not! That's what we were going to do for you for real!
Belchic: *turning down* But I blew it! Curse that stupid dream I had! Why did I have to go and do that!
Cadpig: Aww, Belchic, don't be so hard on yourself.
Belchic: Now that I've ruined my own surprise, I guess I'm gonna have to kiss it goodbye!
Lucky: Aww, come on, Belchic. We'll still do it.
Belchic: No you won't. After what I did? I'm going back to my room.
*Belchic continued to cry and walked back into his room closing the door.*
Lucky: Man, I've never seen Belchic so upset.
*Meanwhile, back in his room, Belchic just stood up all night crying.*
Belchic: Why did I have that dream? I'm a dumbass.
The next day...
*Belchic's room is empty. There's a knock at Belchic's door.*
Lucky: Hello? Belchic? Is anyone home?
*The door opens. It's revealed that Lucky, Cadpig and Rolly are stacked up on one another wearing a long trench coat. Lucky is on top wearing a fedora.*
Lucky: Surprise! Huh?
Cadpig: *pokes her head out of the coat* That's funny. The place is deserted.
Rolly: *pokes his head out of the coat* Where's Belchic?
*Scene cuts to Belchic out in the middle of a road. He runs out in front of a speeding car, gets hit, but survives.*
Belchic: I'm a dumbass.
*Cut back to the main pups.*
Cadpig: Well, he snoozes, he loses.
*Two-Tone suddenly appears out of nowhere, jumps on top of Lucky and climbs inside the coat.*
Two-Tone: Now we're complete!
*The pups collapse.*
Lucky: Aww, Two-Tone! You ruined it!
Two-Tone: *whimpers*
*Cut back to Belchic.*
Belchic: *sigh* Well, I'm not going to solve anything just pouting about it. I guess I should go back home and face the pups.
*He starts to walk back, but gets stopped by a jerky bum.*
Bum: *constantly talks in a jibberish that Belchic doesn't understand*
That night...
*Belchic goes back into his room and comes in from the window.*
Belchic: Good to be away from that jerk! *Suddenly, he is shocked to see Noggin in his room.* Noggin, what are you doing in my room?
Noggin: Care to party?
*Noggin turns on the stereo, which starts playing Beatles music.*
Belchic: I LOVE THIS SONG! *Belchic puts a lamp shade on his head and starts dancing like crazy.*
*A knocking is heard at Belchic's door.*
Belchic: I'll get it! I'm a party abinal!
*He opens the door, and it turns out to be Lucky, Cadpig and Rolly once again in their disguise.*
Belchic: Oh, hello, Mr. grey man. How may I halep of you, sir?
Lucky: You're playing your music too loud.
Belchic: Of course! I'm a party abinal!
Lucky: You seem to be disturbing the peace.
Belchic: Oh, and I see you got a nice shiny thing right there.
Lucky: That's a badge.
Belchic: *suddenly jumps up and turns to Noggin* NOGGIN, THERE'S A PO-PO AT THE DOOR! HIDE THE JEWELS!
Noggin: What jewels?
Belchic: INTHEBOX!
Noggin: You can have 'em, Officer.
*Lucky, Cadpig and Rolly laugh.*
Belchic: Huh? *turns around*
*The pups open up the coat.*
Lucky/Cadpig/Rolly: SURPRISE!!!
Belchic: Well, whaddya know? Thanks for doing this for me, guys!
Cadpig: Well, it's nice to see Belchic's back to his old self again.
Belchic: You don't know how much this means to me!
Noggin: Not like I care.
Rolly: Well, now we do.
Lucky: Always for the clients pleasure, I always say!
Belchic: And I always say the cheese is always twice the fence post!
Noggin: I wish I had a fence post.
*Everyone laughs and continues to have fun.*
The end.
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Thanks go to you, cw, for the inspiring story!
Belchic: Oh, man! I can't believe the show has been cancelled! I hate those stupid rules that Disney made for it's cartoon shows! I love you guys! I love all three of you so much! Yes, I'm talking to you...Lucky, Cadpig, and Rolly.
Lucky: What's wrong?
Belchic: I was waiting for you guys to do one of those totem pole disguise things...ever since the series started! You never did! But now, the series is cancelled, and now you'll never do it!
Lucky: Huh...Rolly, Cadpig, come over here.
*Lucky Rolly and Cadpig huddle and whisper out a plan. Then, they go up to Belchic.*
Rolly: Belchic?
Cadpig: We've got a little surprise for you.
Lucky: We think you might like it.
Belchic: Really? What is it?
Cadpig: Now, if we told you, it wouldn't be a surprise, now would it?
Belchic: I love surprises!
Lucky: You'll get it in a few days.
Belchic: Alright! Can't wait!
The next day...
Belchic: Hey, guys! Guess what?
Cadpig: I'm thrilled with guessing games.
Belchic: I just had this cool dream last night! I dreamed that you guys really did a totem pole disguise! You were even stacked up in the order I wanted you to be stacked! It was so cool!
Cadpig: Hmmm...well, I see that you can predict the future.
Rolly: That's just what we were going to do!
Lucky: Dammit, Belchic, this was supposed to be a surprise!
Belchic: You've got to be kidding me.
Lucky: We're not! That's what we were going to do for you for real!
Belchic: *turning down* But I blew it! Curse that stupid dream I had! Why did I have to go and do that!
Cadpig: Aww, Belchic, don't be so hard on yourself.
Belchic: Now that I've ruined my own surprise, I guess I'm gonna have to kiss it goodbye!
Lucky: Aww, come on, Belchic. We'll still do it.
Belchic: No you won't. After what I did? I'm going back to my room.
*Belchic continued to cry and walked back into his room closing the door.*
Lucky: Man, I've never seen Belchic so upset.
*Meanwhile, back in his room, Belchic just stood up all night crying.*
Belchic: Why did I have that dream? I'm a dumbass.
The next day...
*Belchic's room is empty. There's a knock at Belchic's door.*
Lucky: Hello? Belchic? Is anyone home?
*The door opens. It's revealed that Lucky, Cadpig and Rolly are stacked up on one another wearing a long trench coat. Lucky is on top wearing a fedora.*
Lucky: Surprise! Huh?
Cadpig: *pokes her head out of the coat* That's funny. The place is deserted.
Rolly: *pokes his head out of the coat* Where's Belchic?
*Scene cuts to Belchic out in the middle of a road. He runs out in front of a speeding car, gets hit, but survives.*
Belchic: I'm a dumbass.
*Cut back to the main pups.*
Cadpig: Well, he snoozes, he loses.
*Two-Tone suddenly appears out of nowhere, jumps on top of Lucky and climbs inside the coat.*
Two-Tone: Now we're complete!
*The pups collapse.*
Lucky: Aww, Two-Tone! You ruined it!
Two-Tone: *whimpers*
*Cut back to Belchic.*
Belchic: *sigh* Well, I'm not going to solve anything just pouting about it. I guess I should go back home and face the pups.
*He starts to walk back, but gets stopped by a jerky bum.*
Bum: *constantly talks in a jibberish that Belchic doesn't understand*
That night...
*Belchic goes back into his room and comes in from the window.*
Belchic: Good to be away from that jerk! *Suddenly, he is shocked to see Noggin in his room.* Noggin, what are you doing in my room?
Noggin: Care to party?
*Noggin turns on the stereo, which starts playing Beatles music.*
Belchic: I LOVE THIS SONG! *Belchic puts a lamp shade on his head and starts dancing like crazy.*
*A knocking is heard at Belchic's door.*
Belchic: I'll get it! I'm a party abinal!
*He opens the door, and it turns out to be Lucky, Cadpig and Rolly once again in their disguise.*
Belchic: Oh, hello, Mr. grey man. How may I halep of you, sir?
Lucky: You're playing your music too loud.
Belchic: Of course! I'm a party abinal!
Lucky: You seem to be disturbing the peace.
Belchic: Oh, and I see you got a nice shiny thing right there.
Lucky: That's a badge.
Belchic: *suddenly jumps up and turns to Noggin* NOGGIN, THERE'S A PO-PO AT THE DOOR! HIDE THE JEWELS!
Noggin: What jewels?
Belchic: INTHEBOX!
Noggin: You can have 'em, Officer.
*Lucky, Cadpig and Rolly laugh.*
Belchic: Huh? *turns around*
*The pups open up the coat.*
Lucky/Cadpig/Rolly: SURPRISE!!!
Belchic: Well, whaddya know? Thanks for doing this for me, guys!
Cadpig: Well, it's nice to see Belchic's back to his old self again.
Belchic: You don't know how much this means to me!
Noggin: Not like I care.
Rolly: Well, now we do.
Lucky: Always for the clients pleasure, I always say!
Belchic: And I always say the cheese is always twice the fence post!
Noggin: I wish I had a fence post.
*Everyone laughs and continues to have fun.*
The end.
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Thanks go to you, cw, for the inspiring story!