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Post by Lucky on Jan 15, 2018 3:30:42 GMT -5
I haven't really done an idea for Tekken in a long time.
With Shawn being like Jin Kazama, Damon being Kazuya Mishima, Jenna being like Jun Kazama, Balance like Nina Williams.
Those were the only characters I could see at the time I was making it.
The rest was. "I'll cross that bridge when I come to it."
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Post by RaceFanX on May 10, 2018 23:12:35 GMT -5
The Karate Kit
After getting beat up by the Heartbreakers, who are now training with a local Doberman named Cobra to get tougher, Roxy realizes she needs to improve her ability to fight. Seeking something that could help her protect herself but that doesn't in and of itself encourage fighting she decides to try her paw at martial arts and remarkably Sgt. Tibbs knows another canid that could teach her some, a Japanese ezo red fox named Sensei Kesuke that lives in the woods outside Grutley and "knows karate or the closest thing a fox can to it." Roxy meets up with him but Kesuke refuses to train her and instead suggests working out her issues with the Heartbreakers peacefully. When those discussions flop, in part because of Cobra harassing them, Kesuke agrees to train the young kit. Roxy is quickly disappointed though to find his idea of training consists of learning typical "dog tricks" like fetching a stick he throws for her to retrieve again and again, shaking paws repeated, balancing on her hind legs or rolling over...and he also makes her wax Patriot's trucks. Slowly but surely she comes to realize he's working up her endurance, agility, and muscle memory while teaching her about the mental aspects of karate complete with a 1980s-style training montage. In the end when Thalia tries to bully Roxy and hits her Roxy lays her out in response with her new skills while the other Heartbreakers watch. Sensei Kesuke tells her he is pleased with her progress. Cobra meanwhile harasses Thalia for losing to a "wuss like that weak vixen" leading to Sensei Kesuke moving in to break it up, then humiliating the Dobie when he defeats him using passive tactics when Cobra tries to fight him.
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Post by RaceFanX on Jun 13, 2018 21:50:12 GMT -5
Towser: A 101 Dalmatians Story
In an origin story no one asked for but we're getting anyway we find out the backstory of Towser. When a young bloodhound washes out of tracking school Towser feels like his life is a waste and just sulks on a hill near the farm until a goose named Lucy crashes alongside side and he ends up dragged into an adventure with moonshine smugglers that help morph them both into the Twilight Bark heroes they will be later on.
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Post by RaceFanX on Aug 2, 2018 13:12:49 GMT -5
Quantum Luck
P.H. DeVil theorizes that one can time travel within about the last century and develops a quantum accelerator to give someone this power so he can send this person into the past to change it for his family's benefit. The pups try and succeed in stopping this plan but in the process Lucky is thrown into the accelerator and vanishes... He awakes trapped in the past living other pets lives, facing mirror images that aren't his own, and driven by an unknown force to try and change history for the better. Rolly is the only one able to help him, appearing as a hologram only Lucky can see. Together as Lucky leaps from life to life they try to put right what once went wrong as Lucky hopes, "like that guy on the one TV show," that his next leap will be the leap home...
The episode veers off into crossover territory as Lucky leaps into other characters for a quick adventure specifically... - Scamp from "Lady and the Tramp" who he has to help break his sister Collette of an aggressive streak that could end in her being run over by a car. - His own father Pongo during his younger puppy years, helping him through a rough spot in his youth leading to his adoption by Roger. - Toulouse from "The Aristocats," to Lucky's horror since he's a cat, who he has to help prevent his family from falling victim to Edgar the butler's revenge after he returns from Timbuktu. - An older Copper from "The Fox and the Hound," who has to help get both his human Amos Slade and the surrounding community past some of its racist views. - And, to his biggest shock, Marshall from "PAW Patrol," who he has to help complete a rescue at a burning gas station to save a young boy, his pal Chase, and himself. ...Clearing all of these Lucky is finally able to "leap home" where the accelerator is destroyed right after he does. Lucky jokes it was an incredible adventure that could probably have "won like six Primetime Emmys if it had been a TV show." The pups swear off sci-fi stuff for a bit but the episode ends on a cliffhanger when they decide to go play around in "that weird, blue 1960s British police box that just randomly appeared nearby."
Any thoughts on any of these guys?
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Post by Ace Jones on Oct 25, 2019 10:36:25 GMT -5
101 Dalmatian Street Halloween Spectacular
The cast of 101 Dalmatian Street hosts a Halloween themed variety show featuring Halloween based sketches and skits along with a few musical numbers including a special love song performed by Doug and Delilah themselves.
101 Dalmatian Street Viewers Request
Dylan and the cast host this special viewer's request episode whereas the audience chooses which one of the show's main characters will star in their own segment.
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Post by RaceFanX on Nov 17, 2019 19:49:43 GMT -5
I wonder what kind of requests they would get.
The (Treasure) Hunt is On
Flo's love of game shows leads her to volunteer for the Bark Brigade's annual charity game when she finds out it has a game show theme this year, expecting something humorous like a version of "Family Feud" or "Hollywood Squares" or "Card Sharks" if they are feeling obscure. Instead she finds herself wearing a bright blue jumpsuit and riding aboard a helicopter to serve as the "Skyrunner" when said game turns out to be their own version of the 1980s British TV game show "Treasure Hunt." Colonel hosts with Lucky and Cadpig as the contestants trying to solve clues and guide Flo in her airborne race through the English countryside to hopefully find the treasure. Will they make it?
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Post by Ace Jones on Nov 17, 2019 20:51:51 GMT -5
I wonder what kind of requests they would get. The (Treasure) Hunt is On Flo's love of game shows leads her to volunteer for the Bark Brigade's annual charity game when she finds out it has a game show theme this year, expecting something humorous like a version of "Family Feud" or "Hollywood Squares" or "Card Sharks" if they are feeling obscure. Instead she finds herself wearing a bright blue jumpsuit and riding aboard a helicopter to serve as the "Skyrunner" when said game turns out to be their own version of the 1980s British TV game show "Treasure Hunt." Colonel hosts with Lucky and Cadpig as the contestants trying to solve clues and guide Flo in her airborne race through the English countryside to hopefully find the treasure. Will they make it? Well the requests they'd get would be about how each one of the show's main characters would have their own segments that would also feature the show's recurring characters in cameo based roles. Dylan the star of the show would star in his own segment as it would be a parody or spoof of sci-fi movies and shows. Dolly the show's own co star would star in her own segment as it's a send up of sports. Dizzy and Dee Dee would star in their own segment as they poke fun at different genres of video games. Dawkins would star in his own segment whereas his experiments backfire on him as he undergoes different transformations. Diesel would star in his own segment whereas he imagines himself as Indiana Jones. Dante would star in his own segment whereas he fantasizes about being Batman. Triple D would star in their own segment mainly a send up of Charlie's Angels. Delgado would star in his segment as it would be a parody or spoof of Speed Racer. DJ would star in a segment which features him competing in a worldwide DJ tournament. Deepak would star in a segment that happens to be a homage of Street Fighter. Da Vinci would star in her very own segment as an artist who travels around the world. Dorothy would star in a segment of her own as she plays the role of Sweet Pea in a Popeye like cartoon. The Dimitri Trio themselves would star in their own segment that happens to a spoof of the Three Stooges. And both Doug and Delilah would star in their segment mainly a spoof of Popeye the Sailor Man with Doug as a Popeye the sailor man like character and Delilah filling the role of Olive Oyl.
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Post by Ace Jones on Jan 3, 2020 17:06:35 GMT -5
Sing a song of superheroes and supervillains: In this feature length 101 Dalmatian Street musical a team of villains that consists of Clarissa Prunella Arabella Cuddles and Bessie invade a big city one day and start causing trouble for everyone as the city's own mayor Doug Dalmatian his assistant and wife Delilah Dalmatian along with their child Dorothy Dalmatian realize there's only one team of heroes that can save the day along with stopping Clarissa and her team of villains in other words Team Super Dog as both teams perform both superhero and supervillain numbers that's set to different musical genres.
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Post by RaceFanX on Oct 18, 2020 18:21:56 GMT -5
The Relic
Pumpkin Whiskers is thrilled when he spots what he believes is the mythical Dartmouth Dagger, a 12th Century magical artifact lost for at least 400 years, in a pawn shop neighboring the Stifle Mall. It possesses an incredible power to channel magic through its handle and into its blade for maximum effectiveness. He makes plans to swipe the weapon only to have it purchased from the store by a shady owner. The new owner promptly uses the dagger in an armed robbery but gets beat up and arrested when he tries it. This works out to Pumpkin’s advantage. Since the dagger was used to commit a crime it faces a police-ordered destruction; opening the door for him to swipe it at a time when no one will miss it or even assume it still exists. With Samuel and Muffin busy with a cataloging effort at his store and a planned meeting with that Clayton dog the door is open for him to gain a powerful artifact and he makes his move when the dagger is transported with other contraband arms to be destroyed at the local scrapyard.
Meanwhile at the farm a fun day for most of the pups juxtaposes with Patriot’s ongoing sadness. The red, white, and blue pup has been on a losing streak of late with his beloved NASCAR and V8 engines now seemingly now put permanently out of style by the push toward electric cars, his country run through the ringer by politics and national emergencies far beyond his control leaving patriotism essentially a dead concept, and just a general feeling of being out of it as he faces an uncertain future. With the other pups not needing his expertise, as newer mechanic pups like Stirfry and Bill have pushed him far into the background, he’s begun pouring all his time and resources into his vehicles; having started an upgrade for his Canine Crusher monster truck while building up de facto fleet of fast, dog friendly vehicles that would give the PAW Patrol a run for its money. The need for a set of solid disc brakes for an off-road racing-style Ford Trophy Truck he’s building out of a wrecked police truck once used by the Grutley Sheriff leads Patriot to head for the scrapyard to source his items and inadvertently sets up an unlikely showdown of magical power against American ingenuity.
The police have collected a variety of criminal weapons and contraband, including guns, knives, smuggled goods, and drug-related items that were all used in crimes, with the goal of destroying all of the metal items by placing them in derelict vehicles being crushed and then shredded into oblivion by machinery in the yard before the resulting scrap is trucked off to a steel mill for recycling. Patriot has been coming to the yard to source parts for his vehicles forever, befriending the two Dobermans named Brian and Carson who serve as its junkyard dogs and using his small size to get some of the parts they need for their owner or other mechanics to cover the cost of the items he collects. There was some excitement in the junkyard as a military armored personnel carrier was dropped off earlier although it’s already been hacked apart with little left but the tracks and chassis at this point. Patriot says hi to them and thinks nothing of it when the police start dumping guns and drug pipes into the back of an old wrecked sedan before the yard’s giant crane hoists it away to destruction.
As Patriot picks apart a 1992 Ford Mustang that’s already expired to get his brakes the police leave to get lunch with the yard owner promising to have Brian and Carson watch their vehicle containing the contraband. Pumpkin takes advantage to sneak into the yard and when the two Dobermans confront him he hurts both of them with some illusionary fireworks before he knocks both of them out with a sleeping spell. The sound catches Patriot’s attention and when the canine from Kannapolis, North Carolina finds his friends hurt he takes notice. He suddenly notices the cat rifling through contraband weaponry and initially holds back a stern reaction on the belief it could be something innocent.
"Hey, what are you doing in there?" Patriot asks.
"It's not of your business canine," Pumpkin replies.
"I didn't think this yard had a cat but if your scavenging I suggest you stay out of the police stuff," Patriot replies. "None of that has been used for anything good so it all needs to be destroyed. Unless you are guarding that for the police I've leave it alone." Pumpkin picked up on Patriot's Southern accent and fast wrote him off as a dumb hick because of it. "I'm not from this yard and I'm no cop," Pumpkin replied. "Run along redneck, this is not of concern." "Do you know what happened to Brian and Carson?" Patriot asked.
"Who?" Pumpkin replied.
"The junkyard dogs, my friends," Patriot replied. "Relax, I knocked them out," Pumpkin replied. "They'll be fine in a few hours."
"You what?" Patriot replied. "I knocked them out," Pumpkin replied. "I suggest you cool off and do whatever you need here while they are out of commission, least you meet the same fate."
The red, white, and blue pup starts getting rather angered by the orange tabby's actions. Pumpkin finds the dagger in a box of contraband and pulls it out dramatically as Patriot watches. Patriot again tries to talk Pumpkin out of taking it only for Pumpkin to channel his fireworks magic through the dagger in a colorful blast of power that the Dalmatian only barely dodges. Patriot can't hardly fathom the powers he's up against, finding it hard to believe but all to real someone just hurtled a magical blast at him, but declares now it's on anyway and runs straight at Pumpkin only to leap out of the way at the last second when he fires again, vanishing behind some wrecked cars.
Pumpkin looks confused for a second only to have the doors swing open on a wrecked van in a pile of junker cars as Patriot takes a leap and catches him off guard. The dog tells the cat the junkyard is a second home for him and on this turf he's got the edge. Pumpkin shrugs him off and tries to leave only to have Patriot cut off his escape route sneaking ahead through the old cars. Pumpkin tries and alternate departure only to have Patriot again cut him off by turning on a wrecked car, putting a brick on the gas pedal, and using the runaway to knock over a stock of old jalopies in front of Pumpkin. Now its the feline's turn to get frustrated, declaring he'll "junk" Patriot for his transgressions.
With neither side having any form of backup a unique battle ensues as a cat and mouse game, or rather dog and cat game, ensues with both participants using their unique skills to counter the other in unexpected ways. Patriot grabs a chunk of old exhaust pipe and engages in a de facto "swordfight," swinging it like a Scottish claymore to keep Pumpkin from getting close enough to do any damage with the dagger. Pumpkin charges up the dagger and manages to swing it enough to bust the pipe and get the upper hand. The street magician gets arrogant as he closes in on Patriot with it and starts twirling the dagger like a showman...only to look control and have it slip from his paws and go flying. It hits his left ear and gives him his signature notch in the process. Patriot picks up the dagger and tries to leave only to fall for Pumpkin's silver tongue when the cat provokes an attack asking if the dog plans to use the artifact to "make America great again." Patriot clearly not backing that idea or those who throw it around charges Pumpkin with the dagger only for Pumpkin to dodge it, scratch him with a hiss, and knock the dagger from Patriot's paws.
Pumpkin attempts to escape into a building only for Patriot to find it contains cannisters of Nitrous Oxide gas. He knows "NOS" is great for a power boost in cars but it has a more commercial use; it's nicknamed "laughing gas" and used by humans as a sedative by humans for dentist work. He opens the tanks, covers his nose with a rag, and grabs the dagger while Pumpkin giggles like a kitten.
Back outside the building Pumpkin shrugs off the gas in the fresh air and uses an illusion to create multiple copies of himself appear in front of Patriot. Patriot surprisingly finds his way around this by grabbing a pawful of dirt and tossing it at each one. This works, he disperses several of the illusions but the real Pumpkin still gets a blow in before Patriot seemingly goes on the run again into a building marked "Glass." Pumpkin now finds himself staring at multiple Patriots as the dog has lured him into a warehouse full of old car windshields. Pumpkin sarcastically compliments the creativity but notes "my owner likes kung fu movies and I saw how to defeat this in 'Enter the Dragon.'" Pumpkin punches one of the windshields to try and break it but only hurts his paw. The warehouse only has one point of entry though so when Patriot tries to double back Pumpkin catches him off guard with a fireworks blast at point blank range joking playtime is over.
Pumpkin makes a last attempt to escape the junkyard but as soon as Patriot gives chase on an alternate route through the yard he knows so well. Just when Pumpkin thinks he's finally lost the dog Patriot catches him off guard from behind by popping out a car trunk. They lock paws with both having a grip on the dagger before Patriot gets it loose when Pumpkin tries to cast a spell. Patriot flings the dagger off to the side where the artifact gets imbedded in the side of a junk car that's has been stuck in a car crusher. The dagger isn't far enough into the car to be crushed into oblivion with it but the blade breaks off leaving it and the handle to fall out of the side of the car onto the ground as the crusher finishes its work. The handle sparks as some of the magic held within it is released. Patriot quips this is what detente looks like since neither of them got the weapon intact and jokes they should split it with Pumpkin getting first dibs on the handle or the blade. Pumpkin shrugs it off and beats a tactical retreat; he didn't get this artifact but there will be others and this dog isn't his rival, Samuel is. As Pumpkin leaves Patriot is seen collecting the remains of the Dartmouth Dagger but rather then returning it to the police bin he decides to find out what this was all about. He makes sure the now awaking Brian and Carson are okay before he gets his brakes and goes home; although he does ask for a favor from the junkyard dogs. Neither Pumpkin or Patriot ever figure out the other's identity throughout the junkyard battle.
Back at his owner's kiosk Pumpkin wonders where he went wrong. Given that the dog who battled him was a Dalmatian it had to be one of those Dearly dogs Samuel had been getting buddied up with of late. He determines which one doesn't really matter, that but knowing there are 101 of them discourages him from trying a counter offensive on the farm. The "Southern-fried redneck" probably isn't smart enough to be a threat to him or his overall plans anyway; why risk everything on a minor inconvenience. He still held his own against an unpredictable enemy and learned some flaws in his strategy for the next time his plans are really going to be set in motion; he'd work to improve his illusion magic for sure. He also decides the dagger is worthless now and moves on to seeking out other artifacts instead of reclaiming an all but destroyed one. Revenge, as a certain New Yorker who doesn't like gargoyles would say, is a sucker's game.
Patriot returns to the farm with the remains of the dagger and seeks out Doc's advice as his best source of information on the supernatural to try and figure out what on Earth he just fought tooth and nail for. He and Ginger direct the red, white, and blue Dalmatian to Clayton, Sandy, and their feline friends Samuel and Muffin at the Samuel's store. Patriot loads up his little blue go-kart and heads over there. His jaw hits the floor when he walks in to find Clayton in the process of shifting back into a dog after an afternoon apparently spent as his new feline alter-ego "Clay." Clayton and Sandy are surprised to find Patriot there and some explanation results into both their recent escapades before Patriot reveals the remains of the dagger and the trouble he went to to get it. Samuel is amazed the dagger turned up, and glad it didn't fall into Pumpkin's paws, but notes in its destroyed condition it is likely worthless. He casts off the blade noting all of the power is in the handle; since it can channel magic and increase its power it may be salvageable if a new blade or other attachment is forged for it. He decides to look into this. He almost throws out the blade noting the metal is only lightly enchanted; it can absorb magic but it will just disperse into nothing without the handle to channel it as needed into anything useful. Patriot decides to keep it as souvenir; deciding that it may come in handy someday. He decides to stay out of the magical battles, well aware he probably only won because he knows the junkyard so well, but wishes the others luck in keeping the tabby in check.
As Patriot leaves he overhears the others talking... "You certainly have a lot of colorful siblings Clayton," said Samuel. "In the case of that red, white, and blue one, quite literally. What's the deal with him?" "That's Patriot," Clayton replied. "He's a good dog. My brother Doc knows him well. He's a skilled mechanic, hence why he went to the junkyard. If it's got an internal combustion engine he can really unlock its potential." "Internal combustion?" Samuel replies. "Pity. Favoring mortal engineering like that means he is likely more of a relic than the dagger ever was." Clayton gives him a dirty look, Samuel may not be the biggest fan of dogs in general but wasn't going to let him popshot his sibling. Patriot however hears it and hangs his head low as he leaves the mall. He got to be the hero one more time but he's still out of fashion. V8 power is still on its way out...but then he rises his head in defiance. The end won't be today and before it goes he decides he's still got some stuff to achieve.
The episode ends with Patriot going back to his garage with the blade. That relic comment sticks with him and he decides he’ll show them all he’s still got a purpose and what he’s capable of. The soundtrack changes from the usual music to 1980s-sounding instrumental music. Quietly he starts making metal molds based off an old car part before he pulls out his faithful blowtorch and melts the broken blade down with it. He then recasts the magic-dispersing metal into a trio of hood ornaments for his vehicles and a new dog tag for himself, initially going for an eagle before that’s out of style too and recasting it again into a fox head shape to indicate a decision to go it alone more, a rebellion against authority, and a move to become more cunning. The hood ornaments all look like the greyhound one that was used on Ford and Lincoln vehicles during the late 1920s and early 1930s, Patriot was using one of the old ones to make the molds. After they cool he hangs the tag from his signature Petty Blue Ford collar. As he installs one of the hood ornaments and the now repaired Mustang brakes on his trophy truck we see in the background that Patriot has acquired something else from the junkyard, as a result of that favor he asked the junkyard dogs he now has the armored personnel carrier's remaining chassis and treads. On his workbench he appears to already be sketching out some blue prints to build some form of tank out of it.
Patriot finishes his truck, while still in a gray primer livery he paints the name "Street Fox" on the door and climbs into his purpose-built, dog-sized seat behind the wheel. He buckles a seat belt and puts on a crash helmet. Dramatically he flips a few switches and fires the engine. It comes to life sounding more like a roaring race car than a street vehicle. The garage door opens slowly before a cascade of bright lights flips. Patriot and the truck race out into the night on a shakedown run. The old pup is back on the prowl...
Well, what do you think? Would you want to read a fic like that? Is Patriot still got a purpose in a changing world? Will Pumpkin be back more dangerous than ever using the lessons from his defeat?
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Post by Stirfry on Oct 19, 2020 15:41:52 GMT -5
That was a really good short story. I liked the little reality check where Pumpkin realized that windshield glass is... actually very hard. =P I enjoyed it. It was fun.
The only bad part was Samuel's comment at the end. I'm not really sure where you got the idea that Samuel doesn't like dogs. The only group he is kind of wary about is Christians because... well, Christians and witches didn't exactly get along historically. He is also a very progressive witch and respects human technology and thinks it makes life a lot more convenient. He is also exceptionally polite and just wouldn't want to say something rude like that. It's out of character on multiple levels.
You would be more likely to get some kind of snarky comment like that from Sandy, especially because she would be annoyed that he destroyed a valuable historical magical artifact. But given that it was an accident, she couldn't exactly blame him. She still might let out a snarky comment, regardless.
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Post by RaceFanX on Oct 19, 2020 18:48:02 GMT -5
I'm sorry for the mixup. I didn't have a profile sheet to review for Samuel and I couldn't find Sandy's one if there is one so I tried my best. I think my interpretation was based off these bits... www.deviantart.com/personofnointerest/art/Case-Study-101-795755088 (Which I misinterpreted or misunderstood as him snarking at Clayton because he's a dog or misread that bit about Clayton starting to dislike dogs as being a trait of Samuel by mistake) www.deviantart.com/personofnointerest/art/Magic-Duel-844936182 (The latter being why Pumpkin is going for the illusions a lot in this one, I know he can do them from here. Admittedly against a non-magical foe he probably didn't think he need his top stuff and went for his stuff here) Samuel calling him a "relic" wasn't supposed to be anti-technology but a reference to the kind of stuff Patriot likes being old, outdated tech in the growing era of electric or automated vehicles. "The Relic" of the title is supposed to refer to Patriot a bit as a twist instead of just the dagger. That last part could easily be changed though to fit them better though. Perhaps Sandy could be snarking at him in anger over the dagger's destruction as you said and let that slip in reference to his reckless tactics. It can be reworked if anything more is done with this idea to remedy the issue, I try not to mess up characters. I did try to research them and I'm sorry there was a miss there. Still I'm glad that overall you enjoyed it. I hope the others also had some fun reading it too.
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Post by Stirfry on Oct 19, 2020 19:04:13 GMT -5
I'm sorry for the mixup. I didn't have a profile sheet to review for Samuel and I couldn't find Sandy's one if there is one so I tried my best. I think my interpretation was based off these bits... www.deviantart.com/personofnointerest/art/Case-Study-101-795755088 (Which I misinterpreted or misunderstood as him snarking at Clayton because he's a dog or misread that bit about Clayton starting to dislike dogs as being a trait of Samuel by mistake) www.deviantart.com/personofnointerest/art/Magic-Duel-844936182 (The latter being why Pumpkin is going for the illusions a lot in this one, I know he can do them from here. Admittedly against a non-magical foe he probably didn't think he need his top stuff and went for his stuff here) Samuel calling him a "relic" wasn't supposed to be anti-technology but a reference to the kind of stuff Patriot likes being old, outdated tech in the growing era of electric or automated vehicles. "The Relic" of the title is supposed to refer to Patriot a bit as a twist instead of just the dagger. That last part could easily be changed though to fit them better though. Perhaps Sandy could be snarking at him in anger over the dagger's destruction as you said and let that slip in reference to his reckless tactics. It can be reworked if anything more is done with this idea to remedy the issue, I try not to mess up characters. I did try to research them and I'm sorry there was a miss there. Still I'm glad that overall you enjoyed it. I hope the others also had some fun reading it too. Ah, okay. That's cool. That comment in the case study picture was actually Samuel's skeptical comment toward the claims that the spirit that was possessing Clayton was saying. When a spirit possesses someone and claims to be an ancient god or Satan himself, it's kind of like the spiritual equivalent of a random person claiming to be Napoleon Bonaparte. What he doesn't know, is this time the spirit actually is Mafdet. As for that line, it could easily be transferred to Sandy because she is more into high technology and thinks things like simple internal combustion engines are... simple. Maybe with some slight rephrasing because Sandy's speaking style is very blunt and unrefined. =P Anyway, if you wanted to make this a full fic, I would be interested in reading it. I kind of like the arc that Patriot feels outdated, and I definitely see a potential for a larger story here. Maybe write this, and a part two where he faces off with Pumpkin again. If you have plans, I say go for it. If you need my characters to be in the story, I could write some detailed bios and put them up here on Sparky's. I actually deleted some bios due to them being outdated and never got around to updating them. That's why you can't find them here.
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Post by RaceFanX on Jan 14, 2023 20:47:37 GMT -5
Delgado Gymkhana: Bustin' Loose in the Streets of London
In a special episode of 101 Dalmatian Street speed demon Delgado pays tribute to the late Ken Block by swapping out his normal wheelchair for a modified skateboard powered by a four-stroke engine he "borrowed" from Clarissa's owner's lawn mower. He proceeds to blast around London landmarks doing donuts, power slides, jumps, flips, and all sorts of hooning with his miniature ride. This includes jumping Tower Bridge as it opens, doing donuts on the sidewalk in front of Buckingham Palace, and at the climax blasting through the front doors of Parliament to cut tricks on the floor of the House of Commons.
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