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Post by Belchic on May 1, 2009 17:32:43 GMT -5
Okay, this makes a lot more sense now.
For Belchic's score, I came up with... 2.
And for Noggin's score... 11.
So that's a little different then what babclayman came up with. So yeah. Noggin's more of a Gary Stu than Belchic is, and it looks like I made Belchic a solid character!
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Post by Trey_Vore on May 2, 2009 4:34:42 GMT -5
Congrats dude.
Let's welcome Belchic in the Non-Marty Stu club!
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Post by Two-Tone on May 3, 2009 5:41:48 GMT -5
yay!
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Post by Belchic on May 4, 2009 1:07:11 GMT -5
Wow. I guess Two-Tone really does like Belchic.
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Post by Nemo on Jun 5, 2009 15:55:07 GMT -5
After seeing some stuff on here, I have modified the test to fit more with some of the things going around on the forum (in particular roleplays).
Only things edited were a couple questions, along with some of the 'point reducers' being removed, and another question was added to the test.
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Post by babclayman on Sept 13, 2009 15:15:13 GMT -5
Since Nemo updated the test, i should re do the test too
Clayton
1. Is your character’s name... A. His name was partcially inspired by Clara Claytons name from “Back to the Future Part III” as I noticed it sounded like my alias “BabCLAYman” and when I found out Clayton was a boys name. That was it. B. No. I am ok with my real name. C. No. D. No E. No
2. No
3. No
4. No
5. No
6. His intelligence is normal…so no… A. No
7. No A. No B. No
8. The Size Remote however it is non canon A. No B. No C. No D. No E. No F. Not all the time.
9. Was your character.... A. No B. No C. Does it count if he was taken by his parents as a tiny pup and sent to the pet store? Fine. Yes =/ D. No E. No
10. No
11. No
12. No A. No
13. No A. No
14. No A. No B. No
15. Well there is always going to be someone who doesn’t like you, so no.
16. No
17. No A. No B. No
18. Yes A. No B. No
19. No A. No
20. No
21. No
22. No
23. No A. No B. No
24. No A. No B. No
25. No A. No
26. No A. No
27. No
28. No A. No
29. No Total so far: 4
Point Reducers Here you can get points subtracted from your 'Total so far' to make your character less of a mary sue/gary stue.
1. No A. No
2. Well I guess he does have a fear. And I don’t think he gets over it, so yeah.
3. Yes
4. Not a single power at all.
5. Yes
Clayton Overall: ZERO =D
Kendra
1. Is your character’s name... A. Not a character from another series. No B. No C. No D. No E. Well Kendra does have some special meanings. So maybe yes.
2. No
3. No
4. No
5. No
6. No A. No
7. No A. No B. No
8. No
9. Was your character.... A. No B. No C. No D. No E. No
10. No
11. No
12. No A. No
13. No A. No
14. No
15. Well there is always going to be someone who doesn’t like you, so no.
16. No
17. No
18. No
19. No
20. No
21. No
22. No
23. No
24. No just a twin sister
25. No
26. No
27. No
28. No
29. No
Total so far: 1
Point Reducers Here you can get points subtracted from your 'Total so far' to make your character less of a mary sue/gary stue.
1. No
2. I think she trained herself for bark brigade not to fear much. So I don’t think there’s any big phobia
3. I guess
4. None
5. Yes
Total: -1 or -2
Doc
1. Is your character’s name... A. Well he is a Dr Who fan so yeah, Doc. B. No C. No D. No E. No
2. No
3. No
4. No
5. No
6. He is just a big geek, so I guess not.
7. No
8. No
9. Was your character.... A. No B. No C. No D. No E. Yes
10. No
11. No
12. No
13. No
14. No
15. Some people are cautious cause his geeky ness
16. No
17. No
18. No
19. Race made his toy a weapon once. A. It was a toy of the Sonic Screw Driver
20. No
21. No
22. No
23. No
24. No
25. No
26. No
27. No
28. No
29. No
Total so far: 4
Point Reducers Here you can get points subtracted from your 'Total so far' to make your character less of a mary sue/gary stue.
1. No
2. I can’t think any at the moment
3. Yeah. He is a geek
4. None
5. Yes
Total Score: 1
Well my 3 main pups aren't sues =P
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Post by Shadow Dearly on Sept 13, 2009 17:30:44 GMT -5
Shadow:
1: A: No B: No C: No D: No E: Yes (+1)
2: No
3: No
4: No
5: No
6: No
A: No
7: Yes A: No B: No
8: A: No B: No C: No D: No E: Yes(+1) F: Yes (+1)
9: A: No B: No C: No D: No E: No
10: No
11: Yes (+1)
12: No A: No
13: No A: No
14: No A: No B: No
15: No
16: No
17: No A: No B: No
18: No A: No B: No
19: No A: No
20: No
21: Yes(+1)
22: No
23: Yes (+1) Shadow's good at singing A: No, he doesn't want to B: No, he already has a girlfriend
24: No
25: No
26: No A: No
27: No
28: No
29 : No
Point reductions:
1: No
2: Yes (-1) A: Yes(-1)
3: Yes (-1)
4: He has powers
5: Yes (-1)
Total: 7 in all plus 4 point reductions, brings up to a total of 3. Which means.....SHADOW IS NOT A GARY STU ANYMORE!!!!
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Post by Avenger (Rave Blitz) on Oct 27, 2009 20:37:24 GMT -5
1. A. I got the name "Avenger" from my nickname The Dark J Avenger B. No C. No D. No E. No
2. No
3. No
4. Maybe
5. Well.... He tends to silently sneak up on people
6. A. He is pretty smart
7. A. No B. No
8. A.No B.No C.No D.No E.No F. Yes (+1)
9. A. No B. No C. No D. No E. No
10. Yes. (+1)
11. No.
12. A. No.
13. A. No.
14. A. No. B. No.
15. Yes. (+1)
16. No.
17. A. No. B. No.
18. A. No. B. No.
19. A. No.
20. No.
21. No.
22. No.
23. A. No. B. No.
24. A. No. B. No.
25. A. No.
26. A. No.
27. No.
28. A. No.
29. No.
Point Reducers---
1. A. No.
2. No.
3. No.
4. Yes (+1)
5. No.
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Post by Avenger (Rave Blitz) on Oct 27, 2009 20:38:47 GMT -5
My total: 4 points
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Post by Avenger (Rave Blitz) on Oct 27, 2009 20:40:29 GMT -5
Sorry my bad I meant 2 points
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Post by Shadow Dearly on Oct 27, 2009 20:43:45 GMT -5
Congrats Man!
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Post by Nemo on Oct 28, 2009 14:26:50 GMT -5
The 101 Dalmatians Mary Sue Litmus Test has once again been updated!
2 new questions have been added, and a couple of the previous questions have been modified! Reasons for the new additions and changes is because the '101 Dalmatians' cartoon series is a really down to Earth show. So you most likely would not hear of puppies with magical powers, or anything extremely abnormal.
~Nemo
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Post by Belchic on Oct 29, 2009 1:05:07 GMT -5
No offense, Nemo, but this test is really tedious.
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Post by Tic-Tac on Oct 29, 2009 9:00:31 GMT -5
Tac's about as original as it gets. I don't think this applies to me. >=3
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Post by Tic-Tac on Oct 29, 2009 9:10:44 GMT -5
1. Is your character’s name...
A. Is your character named after a character from an already existing character from another series? (This also includes videogames, comic books, etc...) Tic-Tac...no. He's named after a children's Game.
B. Would you like to have your character’s name? I don't think so.
C. Japanese sounding if they are not Japanese. It's American. From America.
D. Do they have more than one unique sounding nickname. Just Tac.
E. If a noun, is it related to nature, a weapon, a gemstone, darkness, or something mystical. Do YOU think breath mints or child's board games are mystical?
2. Is your character described as extremely beautiful or handsome? He's a runt of the litter.
3. Do other characters constantly tell your character how beautiful he/she is? No especially.
4. Does your character have an attractive scent? He smells like Chemicals. You know that wet, sour smell...kind of like batteries.
5. Does your character have a particularly piercing (EG, "can stare straight into your soul"), haunting, captivating, or dazzling gaze? Crystal Blue eyes.
6. Do they have an abnormally high IQ level? A. Is the character a genius? Yes, yes, and Yes.
7. Does the character have an abnormal power? A. +2 points if it's a power like that of a comic book character? B. +2 points if it's the same exact power from an already existing character? (Saiyan from Dragon Ball Z, Kyuubi from Naruto, etc..) Nope.
8. Do they possess an ITEM with an abnormal/magical power? A. Is it a crystal? B. Medallion? C. Gemstone? D. Amulet? E. Cape? F. Do they carry/wear it around with them all the time? No...unless you men his shock collar, but that's not 'magical.'
9. Was your character.... A. Abused? B. Raped? C. Orphaned? D. Raised him/herself? E. Lived in the streets? This counts? Same thing happened to EVERY other 'original' 101 dalamatian. Orphaned by Cruella...
10. Is your character best friends with any of the canon characters (Lucky, Cadpig, Rolly, Spot, Two Tone, etc...)? Dipstick
11. Are they shunned by everyone at the farm? He chooses his solitude
12. Does your character like Thunderbolt more than Lucky? A. To the point of over obsession? Nope.
13. Can your character eat more food than Rolly? A. WITHOUT gaining any weight? Nope.
14. Is your character an experiment made in a laboratory? A. Made to kill and destroy? B. Made to kill a main character from the show? Nope. He's not "Made" to kill anybody.
15. Does EVERYONE like/love your character? (+2 points if you answered yes) Not in the slightest.
16. Does your character angst over something that wasn’t even their fault? Yup. He's a pitiful momma's boy.
17. Was a parent of your character killed? A. BOTH of them killed? B. Right in front of your character’s eyes? Oh, come on!! XD Yes, it's been hinted at that Tac's mommy died in front of him. Also been hinted at that she didn't actually die...
18. Does your character have a crush on any of the characters in the show? A. Do they end up getting paired up? B. Do they have children? Nope.
19. Does the character carry around a weapon with them all the time? A. +2 points if it's a weapon that another character from a different show, videogame, etc has? Nope. Tac doesn't -ALWAYS- have his Shock Collar.
20. Do they easily foil Cruella’s plans without moving a paw? Nope. He doesn't lift a paw to stop her- unless you mean "Long Road Home" in which he got the living spots beaten off him.
21. If your character is an animal can they talk to humans in their tongue? Nope.
22. Is your character one of the original 15 dalmatian puppies? (+2 points if you answered yes) Nope.
23. Can your character sing so well that it gets the attention of others? A. Do they become famous anywhere for it? B. Can they use it to seduce others? Hehehe remember that Picture I drew of Tac trying to Sing to Aria?
24. Does your character have an evil clone? A. Do they constantly haunt or stalk the character they were cloned from? B. Do they want to KILL the person they were cloned from? Two, actually. Tic and Toe. And they are quite...mean.
25. If not an evil clone, is your character haunted by an evil spirit? A. Can the spirit possess your character? Nope.
26. Is the character a evil clone of one of the canon characters? A. A clone of one of YOUR own characters? Nope.
27. Can your character transform into a more powerful form when they are angry? Nope.
28. Can their eyes change color depending on their mood? A. When they're angry? Nope.
29. Is your character cursed in some way? Nope.
30. Was your character originally a human, but turned into a dalmatian or any other animal? Geebus, No.
31. Was your character born with an unnatural hair color? (If it's dyed, don't add any points to this question) Nope.
Total so far:
Point Reducers Here you can get points subtracted from your 'Total so far' to make your character less of a mary sue/gary stue.
1. Does your character have some kind of disorder (mentally disabled, retarded, etc)? A. Do they ACT like a person should with said disorder? Tac is an introvert and doesn't hang out at all with the other puppies. If you can call that a disorder.
2. Does your character have a truly debilitating phobia that does not mysteriously disappear at a crucial moment? nope.
3. Do you ever poke fun at your character's faults/weaknesses and/or use them as plot devices? Yes. XD (Remember when he got beaten up by Aria...for...ok any story he's in with Aria. XD )
4. Does your character NOT have any weird bizarre powers? Nope.
5. Have you actually taken time to amend faults with your character? No, Tac's Faults stay the same. GRAND TOTAL:
0-5 points: Most likely a non-sue, you shouldn't have to worry about them.
6-10: Your character can go either way at this point, it would probably do some good to edit them a little.
11+: At this point it's best you either start over or just get rid of them.
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