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Post by babclayman on Dec 4, 2010 14:45:51 GMT -5
Well, I have counted your Results and...Chloe... =s
I am affraid you got, 26 Points. Meaning, she is a Mary Sue. =s
Probably best to work on Lightning a Bit, so to reduce these factors a bit. =3
Wonder what your updates hold. X3
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Post by Nemo on Dec 4, 2010 15:54:54 GMT -5
To Bab: You remembered to do the subtraction right? o.o (at the end of the test) But yes, sue indeed... you're gonna want to work on your character. Like getting rid of the boys telling her she's pretty, cause none of my characters would ever do that neither would Lucky, or the canon chars for that matter.
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Post by The Modern Major General on Dec 4, 2010 18:15:24 GMT -5
1. Is your character’s name... A. Is your character named after a character from an already existing character from another series? (This also includes videogames, comic books, etc...)
No
B. Would you like to have your character’s name?
Why would I want to be named after an onion?
C. Japanese sounding if they are not Japanese.
No
D. Do they have more than one unique sounding nickname.
No
E. If a noun, is it related to nature, a weapon, a gemstone, darkness, or something mystical.
Well Chives are a plant, and Plants are part of nature. I guess that is a yes then.
2. Is your character described as extremely beautiful or handsome?
No
3. Do other characters constantly tell your character how beautiful he/she is?
No
4. Does your character have an attractive scent?
No
5. Does your character have a particularly piercing (EG, "can stare straight into your soul"), haunting, captivating, or dazzling gaze?
No
6. Do they have an abnormally high IQ level?
Yah he is pretty smart.
A. Is the character a genius?
I wouldn't say a genius.
7. Does the character have an abnormal power?
No
A. +2 points if it's a power like that of a comic book character?
it isn't
B. +2 points if it's the same exact power from an already existing character? (Saiyan from Dragon Ball Z, Kyuubi from Naruto, etc..)
8. Do they possess an ITEM with an abnormal/magical power? A. Is it a crystal? B. Medallion? C. Gemstone? D. Amulet? E. Cape? F. Do they carry/wear it around with them all the time?
He doesn't have one.
9. Was your character.... A. Abused? no B. Raped? no C. Orphaned? no D. Raised him/herself? I guess since he had deadbeat parents. E. Lived in the streets? no 10. Is your character best friends with any of the canon characters (Lucky, Cadpig, Rolly, Spot, Two Tone, etc...)?
no
11. Are they shunned by everyone at the farm?
no
12. Does your character like Thunderbolt more than Lucky?
no
A. To the point of over obsession?
no
13. Can your character eat more food than Rolly?
Definitely not! A. WITHOUT gaining any weight?
no
14. Is your character an experiment made in a laboratory? A. Made to kill and destroy? B. Made to kill a main character from the show?
no to all of those
15. Does EVERYONE like/love your character? (+2 points if you answered yes)
no
16. Does your character angst over something that wasn’t even their fault?
no
17. Was a parent of your character killed?
A. BOTH of them killed? B. Right in front of your character’s eyes?
no to those
18. Does your character have a crush on any of the characters in the show? no A. Do they end up getting paired up? no B. Do they have children? no
19. Does the character carry around a weapon with them all the time? A. +2 points if it's a weapon that another character from a different show, videogame, etc has?
Only his brain.
20. Do they easily foil Cruella’s plans without moving a paw?
no
21. If your character is an animal can they talk to humans in their tongue?
no
22. Is your character one of the original 15 dalmatian puppies? (+2 points if you answered yes)
no
23. Can your character sing so well that it gets the attention of others? A. Do they become famous anywhere for it? B. Can they use it to seduce others?
no
24. Does your character have an evil clone? A. Do they constantly haunt or stalk the character they were cloned from? B. Do they want to KILL the person they were cloned from?
no
25. If not an evil clone, is your character haunted by an evil spirit? A. Can the spirit possess your character?
no
26. Is the character a evil clone of one of the canon characters? A. A clone of one of YOUR own characters?
no
27. Can your character transform into a more powerful form when they are angry?
no
28. Can their eyes change color depending on their mood? A. When they're angry?
no
29. Is your character cursed in some way?
no
30. Was your character originally a human, but turned into a dalmatian or any other animal?
no
31. Was your character born with an unnatural hair color? (If it's dyed, don't add any points to this question)
no
Total so far:
Point Reducers Here you can get points subtracted from your 'Total so far' to make your character less of a mary sue/gary stue.
1. Does your character have some kind of disorder (mentally disabled, retarded, etc)? A. Do they ACT like a person should with said disorder?
no
2. Does your character have a truly debilitating phobia that does not mysteriously disappear at a crucial moment?
He is irrationally terrified of bees, spiders, shots, and anything that likes to sting, bite, or cause him pain.
3. Do you ever poke fun at your character's faults/weaknesses and/or use them as plot devices?
nah
4. Does your character NOT have any weird bizarre powers?
he has no powers.
5. Have you actually taken time to amend faults with your character?
Not sure what you mean here so I am just going to say no.
so if I have calculated right then that is a score of two for Chive.
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Post by Spott on Dec 12, 2010 8:25:14 GMT -5
Well, I have counted your Results and...Chloe... =s I am affraid you got, 26 Points. Meaning, she is a Mary Sue. =s Probably best to work on Lightning a Bit, so to reduce these factors a bit. =3 Wonder what your updates hold. X3 I wanted her to be a Mary Sue,but I didn't know if she was a Mary Sue,so I took this test.
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Post by babclayman on Dec 12, 2010 8:29:26 GMT -5
Wait, Why would you want her to be a Mary Sue? You are aware, Mary Sue is a bad thing, right? =s
Still, Wonder how this would help to develop your Pups more. X3
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Post by Nemo on Dec 12, 2010 10:44:56 GMT -5
You know Mary sues are a BAD thing right? =/
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Post by babclayman on Dec 12, 2010 11:26:24 GMT -5
You know Mary sues are a BAD thing right? =/ Just like I said, Nemo. =3 But yeah, Unless you are trying to create a Pup who is a Parody of a Mary Sue... If you wish for your Pups to be taken into account, try to lower your score on this test. ;3 I wonder what other Pups have for this test? =3
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Post by Shadow Dearly on Dec 12, 2010 11:29:14 GMT -5
I'm not going to get sucked into this.....
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Post by Deleted on Oct 26, 2014 15:19:16 GMT -5
I know this is an old thread but .. wanted to see what score Desdemona got. x)
1. Is your character’s name... A. No.. well, unless Shakespeare counts as a series.. B. No. Too outdated. xD but it does sound cool. C. No D. Yes +1 E. No
2. No
3. No
4. No.. o.o
5. No.
6. No. A. No.
7. No
8. No
9. Was your character.... D. She.. sort of raised herself? +1
10. No
11. Yes, for the most part. +1
12. No
13. No
14. No
15. No
16. Umm.. not sure about this one.
17. Nope!
18. Nope! She's second gen so..
19. No
20. No. but she's never tried so xD
21. No
22. No
23. No
24. No
25. No
26. No
27.No
28. No
29. No
30. No
31. No
Total so far: 3
Point Reducers Here you can get points subtracted from your 'Total so far' to make your character less of a mary sue/gary stue.
1. Does your character have some kind of disorder (mentally disabled, retarded, etc)? No A. Do they ACT like a person should with said disorder?
2. Does your character have a truly debilitating phobia that does not mysteriously disappear at a crucial moment? No
3. Do you ever poke fun at your character's faults/weaknesses and/or use them as plot devices? yes -1
4. Does your character NOT have any weird bizarre powers? yes, no powers.
5. Have you actually taken time to amend faults with your character? I'm working on it =S
GRAND TOTAL: 0?
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