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Mar 13, 2007 10:50:21 GMT -5
Post by cw on Mar 13, 2007 10:50:21 GMT -5
Well done CW! Forcing Tac to sleep to relive his nightmares over and over and over again! I Love it! XD! A wonderful burst of vengeance, cause Tac's deep seated fears to take root, and teasing him about his inability to rescuse his mother surely resulted in unbridled anger. Well done indeed! *Rubs head* Oh,(nervous laugh), thanks, Tac. I was actually in a bit of a hurry, and physical pain's not really my style...so I just came up with that. I'm glad you liked it still. oddball: Man, I wanted him to suffer! There are so many things worse than death! But it's a good story, man!
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Mar 13, 2007 11:58:18 GMT -5
Post by oddball on Mar 13, 2007 11:58:18 GMT -5
Well I wanted to drag it out longer, but I was bored and couldn't think straight. Besides, I can always have Celeste raise him from the dead and then the fun can continue...
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Mar 13, 2007 16:15:28 GMT -5
Post by Tic-Tac on Mar 13, 2007 16:15:28 GMT -5
Ahhh, Mr. Oddy. The first to write a quickie involving Tac's actual death! I salute you sir, well done indeed! Yes, yes, I was wondering when someone had the plan to brutally splatter Tac's blood across the room, and bring the scent of hot death to the farm. He deserves it, no? ^-^ Splendid tale of terror Oddy. And no, you guys, no hard feelings at all. Like I said, makin' Tac suffer is the total point of this RP. You've all done a terrific job so far! =D
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Mar 13, 2007 16:59:54 GMT -5
Post by ripsta on Mar 13, 2007 16:59:54 GMT -5
I got something else in mind that I'll do a bit later on.
Completely opposite from Rip's idea of torture.
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Mar 13, 2007 17:12:21 GMT -5
Post by monkey on Mar 13, 2007 17:12:21 GMT -5
(Yup. Definately fits the Scarecrow's profile to a T. Professor Crane would be proud) Yeah, I got the idea after watching Batman Begins, of how Crane got a dose of his own medicine, so to speak and saw another "version" of Batman. Thought that would be a good thing for this anyway
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Mar 13, 2007 17:53:05 GMT -5
Post by monkey on Mar 13, 2007 17:53:05 GMT -5
I thought of an alternative version to what Drake could've done to Tac:
Tac had glanced around at his surroundings, he was inside the shed, no one was around though, however, a TV was situated not too far from him The TV turned on and a mask appeared on the screen, it was a white mask "Hello Tac. You're an genious(sp?) at an interlect(sp?) level, all these years, depending on your potions, antidotes and whatever else you may come up with, and you always know that they'll save you in the end. Tonight, you will show me that your words are true. Within your body is a slow acting poison, where you have only three minutes to live, if you can find the antidote. Where it is, you may ask? Think, and you shall be able to come up with one, I have left a list of all the symptoms that the poison may show. However, the door to the shed will lock after three minutes, leaving you trapped in here forever. Live or die, make your choice Tac" The tape then turned off, leaving Tac with only three minutes left to find the antidote and escape. Tac had managed to untie himself and headed over to the table "This should be rather simple" he muttered to himself as he read over the list, however, it seemed as though the test was tougher than he had believed. Though, he begun to work on the antidote to the poison, time was starting to run out.
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It took him nearly all his time to finally get the antidote correct, however, there was a beeping sound and before he could react, the door to the shed locked and out of frustration, Tac seemed to throw the vial that contained the antidote, at the shed door, completely shattering it.
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Tac staggered around the room, his vision imparred as he headed to the bench, but before he could do anything, he had collapsed, dying.... Rest....close your eyes....sleep an eternal sleep.... Tac had lost the game and his result was death....
(The whole trap idea and all that is (c) to the Saw creators, but yeah, just wanted to try it out and see what that one was like....)
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Mar 14, 2007 2:37:47 GMT -5
Post by Two-Tone on Mar 14, 2007 2:37:47 GMT -5
oooh nice
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Mar 14, 2007 12:43:39 GMT -5
Post by oddball on Mar 14, 2007 12:43:39 GMT -5
Tic-Tac sat inside the poorly lit room, a group of dogs sat across from him. "Hmm... Let me think. What would be best for you?" A knife shot across the room, graving Tac's right ear. He whined pathetically under the gag around his muzzle.
"No that won't do... Maybe this?" Ice began to form around his feet, slowly climbing and encasing his trembling form. Tac tried to move, but his body wasn't working.
"Takes too long... Let me try." A scythe blade swung across his face, the blade passing within a hairs width of his eyes. Sweat began forming on his face and brow, his body shook badly from the ice around his feet. His ear ached from the wound inflicted by the passing dagger.
"Maybe something a little more damaging?" A lone figure behind Tac stepped forward into the soft beam of light. "Something that best fits his past..."
"Save that one for last... I want to try something." A long black tail coiled out of the darkness and wrapped itself around Tac's body. Large amber eyes shone through the dim light as a face came to greet him. The mouth opened wide, revealing rows of razor teeth. The mouth came and clasped onto Tac's left shoulder, the teeth ripping into his body. Tac yelled loudly, though it only sounded like a mumble. Blood trickled down from the bite marks, as the face returned to the darkness. The tail recoiled as he spoke again. "He tastes like crap..."
"I'll help you get the taste out of your mouth later..." said one of the earlier voices as the scythe swung again, this time removing several hairs from the top of Tac's head.
"Now?"
"My turn now... Then you can go..." Tac's eyes went wide in horror as flames lept from the shadows and attached themselves to his body. He struggled to get loose, to put himself out, but no use. His wounds bled, staining his once white fur. He tried to yell, but the gag was too tight. He could barely breath now. All at once the fires went out, leaving his fur singed and body in pain. "Now..."
"Finally..." The sound of shifting hands echoed in the empty space, a rumbling soon followed. With a crash something burst from the floor behind Tac, followed by a long and hollow creak. A delicate paw, half decayed from the passage of time, rested itself on Tac's un injured right shoulder. Tac turned to face the new presence, what he met was someone he never expected to see again.
"Hello Son..."
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Mar 14, 2007 21:26:21 GMT -5
Post by cw on Mar 14, 2007 21:26:21 GMT -5
OMG. I'm speechless. Now I remember what I forgot! (Sorry if this is a little too much.) ********* (3 hours later) Tic-Tac woke up from his horrific nightmare. "Well, back among the living, I see." "You! What are you still doing here?!" "What do you think? Treat you? Give you candy? Let you go?" answered Q, sarcastically. "Come now. I have a little gift for you. Look up." Tac looked up and saw a TV. "Remember this?" came another voice. It was Cadpig. "The very same TV you used on me? Hmmm?" "The brain is a wonder of nature. It is unimaginably complex, yet comprehensible. This computer was used to read your REM brainwaves while you slept and converted it to video. So, we all know what you had in your nightmare. Not only that, we recorded it on this video CD!" The others merely smiled. " You, my dear 'friend', are going to watch your nightmare on the TV for 24 hours a day, 7 days a week. You don't like sleeping because of this nightmare? Too bad. Because you are going to watch it on TV. And you can't sleep 'cos you are gonna face this nightmare in your dreams! So, now what? You can't sleep, you can't stay awake... There's no escape! You thought just now was bad....HAH!!...It's going to get alot worse!" He grinned. "It's the never ending nightmare for you. You can kill yourself, maybe then you can see your mother. But, seeing all that you've done, she probably won't even want to face you! And you can't move!" By now, Tac was in tears and he was full of rage. "You'll pay for this when I escape!" "Look at yourself! See how pathetic you look! It's so pitiful, all tied up, crying like a baby. No, it is your turn to pay. For what you did to my sisters. For what you did to my friend. For what you did to my brothers. Yes, it most certainly is time. Once I'm through with you, me killing you would be heaven-sent!" "Besides," put in Cadpig, "You've been running away from your fears for too long. You need to accept that your mother is gone and that killing us will not make a difference. Think of it as therapy, only more painful and agonising!" she said and beamed. "Besides, if you killed us, what purpose for your existence would there be?" Both of them laughed and exited the room as the video CD played on the television....
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May 4, 2007 12:10:21 GMT -5
Post by Two-Tone on May 4, 2007 12:10:21 GMT -5
(Thanks to Tac I got my perfect revenge)
Tac struggled against the straps restraining his body, the room was dimly lit except for a single light above him, he heard the opening of a door. He looked at the femine figure that had walked in.
"Tac at last your going to get what's been coming to you for along time." Two-Tone walked around the chair Tac was strapped into
"Ooh and what will you do to me? Slap me like the weak big butted girl you are?" Tac chuckled earning a growl from Two-Tone.
"No, I intend to make you feel the same thing you made me feel in P.H's lab." Two-Tone began to bring a pair of wires out. "Only your going to wish you never been born." A evil grin formed across the female pup's muzzle
"You don't have the brains nessisary to do this Two-Tone, where's your little knight in shining armor at?" Tac calmly gazed at Two-Tone while watching her movements.
"You can question my intelegence Tac, but what you did to my fur I'll never forgive you for!" Two-Tone walked into the light showing several missing patches of fur.
"Aw, early fur loss. My heart bleeds for you, no seriously it does." Tac sarcastically taunted. Two-Tone growled and smacked Tac across the face with her paw.
"Your going to pay for what you did to me in that cage Tac and believe me not even your mommy will recognize you in the afterlife when I'm done!" Two-Tone produced a pair of clamps that would normally be used to charge a car battery.
"You have no right to mention my mother's name you sl*t!" Tac hissed then noticed the clamps, he smirked. "Don't tell me you rigged this chair like an electric chair, what kind of lame cliches did your friendly person mother Perdita raise you with?" Tac asked.
"And you have no right mentioning my mother Tac!" Two-Tone glared at Tac as she produced a bucket of water, this puzzled Tac a bit as to why Two-Tone had car battery clamps and a bucket of water. "Your a genius Tac, you should know this by now but salt water conducts electricty much faster than fresh water." Two-Tone took the bucket and doused Tac with it soaking him in salt water, the smaller pup gagged and coughed now dripping wet, he glared at Two-Tone then he went pale, his eyes wide as he realized what Two-Tone was intending to do.
"Wait! Two-Tone! Sis! Don't!" Tac begged as Two-Tone picked up the clamps, on the other side the clamps were connected to a rather large car battery.
"Afraid?" Two-Tone brings the clamps together as sparks shoot from them.
"Please! I promise I won't kill you or your boyfriend or family again! I'll...I'll even embrace Perdita and Pongo as my parents!" Tac pleaded
"Really?" Two-Tone looked at the terrified maniac, an wide grin forms across her face. "Tac, I only have one word for you." Two-Tone opened the clamps and with a single thrust she attaches the clamps onto Tac's manhood "Crimson" Two-Tone muttered as the current suddenly surges right into Tac causing him to scream so loud he could wake the dead, all at once smoke started to emmit from the mad pup's electrified body, Two-Tone watched on cringing a bit seeing the smaller runt litterally roast infront of her. The battery soon ran out of current as the room was filled with smoke, Two-Tone opened the door to air the room out and exited leaving Tic-Tac's charred remains as they were. "That was for my fur you singed off." She muttered as she rejoined the other pups in the barn satisfied that her family would be safe from now on.
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May 4, 2007 22:49:46 GMT -5
Post by Thunder on May 4, 2007 22:49:46 GMT -5
Oooh d**n... I really do feel for him... all kinds of torture. Physical, Psycological.... Well I shall have to input my own little spin, not that I really dislike him despite the fact that he has tried to kill me on numerous attempts. It was then the Genius puppy awoke from his slumber. He slowly flickered his eyelids and tried to look around, but his eyes were unfocused from his deep slumber. Once his eyes finally adjusted and things began to become clear to him, Tac realized he was in a very small room void of any light aside from a small horizontal beam that appeared to be coming from the bottom of a door frame. He attempted to move, however he soon realized he was bound tightly to the chair, buit not bound with ordinary rope, instead razor tape. Every attempt to stuggle from his bindings dug the razor sharp metal into his poor beaten body. He yelled in agony, but to no avail. All he wished for was to become free and get out of this mess, but then he wondered to himself, "How did I get here in the first place?" He was soon to find out. Just as he completed that thought he could hear a doorknob being turned, then a stream of blinding bright light flooded the room overwelming the pup's sensory array. He was scarred out of his mind, not expecting this at all; he was so disoriented he couldn't even think logically at the moment. He then felt a searing pain errupt from the side of his face, and soon felt the taste of his own blood in his mouth. He then looked up to see the face of his long time nemesis, Lucky. "Welcome Tac, now I know you may be wondering where you are right now, but you see, you don't need that information, in fact you don't need to know anything at all except for the fact that you are stuck here and I am in control." said his captor with a vengful tone. The Brilliant puppy mastermind seemed to blow off this comment basing it off the fact that Lucky's intellect was far inferior to many of the pup's on the farm, and didn't even come near his own. "Well Tac, I can tell you doubt my abilities, but I think with time I can persuade you to change your mind..." Tac was about to respond with a sarcastic response when Lucky produced a small scalpel from the stainless steel table from which Tac was sitting next to. In fact on further examination, it appeared Lucky had a number of less-than desirable tools with him. "Now Tac, today I would like to share some knowledge with you I learned from my time with the FIA division of the Bark Brigade. I know you weren't there to learn any of this as you viewed it as worthless, but now I will aid you in acquiring that knowledge by giving you a first-paw demonstration." As he finished that sentence he took Tac's left arm and begin to make numerous small incisions into Tac's shoulder and arm. Tac scoffed at this tactic at first until he felt a surge of searing pain that made the razor tape feel like a tap on the shoulder. All his pain receptors in his shoulder and arms were firing off like mad, overloading his nervous system with pain messages. Tac was losing it, he felt the pain building up with each decisive slice his captor made. He could not hold it in any longer, the pain was so great Tac screamed out in shear pain and tears suddenly began streaming down his eyes. "Oh, does that hurt? Well Tac, this is only the beginning... it only gets worse from here on out." With that, Lucky put on some rather thick rubber gloves and picked up a contain off the table labelled "Hydrochloric Acid". He then poured this liquid all over Tac's arm and shoulder sending Tac over the edge. The pain for the poor captive puppy was so great that he felt his mind screaming inside him, pure pain in every thought; suddenly it all went black. Lucky noted the once mighty master of methodical torture and evil had passed out, and proceeded to clean him up and make sure he would not bleed to death. As he was taking his supplies out he heard Tac beginning to stir again. As he turned out the light he left Tac with a bone-chilling message," Rest well, Tac... today was bad, but just wait until you see what I have in store for you next time..." The door shut with a resounding clank, and then Tac began to worry about what might happen next. Though the thoughts of what might happen next were bad enough, but the most agonizing part was not knowing when to expect it...
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Post by Two-Tone on May 7, 2007 3:28:01 GMT -5
oooo acid, that will hurt Nice one Lucky, sure topped me
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Post by cw on May 7, 2007 7:21:29 GMT -5
Wow! Extreme...both of you....
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May 7, 2007 12:58:05 GMT -5
Post by Two-Tone on May 7, 2007 12:58:05 GMT -5
Thanks
I could do worse, much worse to that emo runt given the chance
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May 7, 2007 15:39:55 GMT -5
Post by Tic-Tac on May 7, 2007 15:39:55 GMT -5
Leans back and claps his paws quietly. Bravo you two, bravo indeed. Absolutely splendid display of torture and horror. Vengeance to the highest degree. Good show!!
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