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Post by Two-Tone on May 6, 2007 7:31:31 GMT -5
Interesting
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Post by Belchic on May 17, 2007 17:51:58 GMT -5
Chapter 4 -
*Belchic follows Tippy crawling through the tunnels. They come to a split passage.*
Tippy: Shall we split up?
Belchic: I don't want to leave you, Tippy.
Tippy: Very well, then let's go right.
*They proceed. Tippy is now off-camera with the camera on Belchic.*
Tippy: *yells as if falling*
Belchic: Tippy? *proceeds, but then falls* Yyyaaaaaaaaaaaahh!
*The pups have fallen down a hole. Tippy lands on the ground first, then Belchic falls on top of Tippy.*
Tippy: Get off of me. *throws Belchic off her back* As much as I love giving you piggyback rides, I'd rather not get hurt.
Belchic: Hey, I didn't do it on purpose!
Tippy: Shh, shh...I hear something...
*They listen carefully and hear beeps.*
Belchic: It sounds like it's coming from behind that curtain.
*The pups go over to the curtain and peek behind it.*
Belchic/Tippy: *gasp*
*Tic-Tac's lab is revealed behind the curtain. Belchic closes up the curtain and turns to Tippy.*
Tippy: *whispering* I can't believe this. Tic-Tac's lab is down here?
Belchic: I knew he was behind this.
Tippy: What's he up to?
Belchic: Let's listen in...*he peeks through the curtain trying to keep himself as invisible and quiet as possible*
*Cut to Tic-Tac.*
Tac: Good! My secret weapon is almost complete! All it needs is one more finishing touch. All I gotta do is attach this one piece! Then I'll be ready to terminate Lucky for sure!
*Cut back to Belchic and Tippy. Belchic is still listening in; he's starting to sweat.*
Tippy: *stomach growls*
Belchic: *turns to Tippy*
Tippy: *clutches her belly and blushes*
Belchic: Shhh!
*He looks back out. Cut back to Tic-Tac welding the last piece to his unknown invention.*
Tac: *after he finishes* At last! It's finally done! *reveals...* The Depuppyator!!! Before I set it out to assassinate Lucky, I will have to decide on a time when to do it. I can't do it too soon, because I know those pups know that I'm up to something. I'll have to come up with a time I can do it by surprise when they'll least expect it.
*Cut back to Belchic and Tippy.*
Belchic: This does not look good for Lucky. What are we going to do, Tippy?
Tippy: The best we can do is rely on Noggin, I guess.
Belchic: I think you're right.
Tippy: How can things possibly get any worse?
Belchic: *feels a sneeze coming on* Uh...Ah...AHHH...*Tippy blocks Belchic's nose just in time.* Oh, thanks, Tip.
Tippy: *sighs with relief, but then suddenly...* ACHOO!!!
*Cut to Tic-Tac.*
Tac: Dipstick, are you catching a cold?
Dipstick: No. Why?
Tac: Didn't you just sneeze?
Dipstick: It wasn't me.
Tac: *gasps* Someone else is here! My lab's been discovered! Dipstick, go see who's hiding behind the curtain, so I can kill whoever's back there!
Belchic: Run, Tippy.
*Belchic and Tippy make a run for it.*
Dipstick: *opens the curtain* Huh. No one here. Wait...
*Dipstick starts to run through the tunnels. He then runs past a coat rack. Hanging on the rack is a long jacket with a hat on top of it. Belchic pops his head out from the collar picking up the hat with his head.*
Belchic: Hehe, I think we gave him the slip, Tippy.
*Tippy peeks out of the coat's mid-section.*
Tippy: Qucik thinking, Belchic.
Belchic: What are we gonna do now? We can't hide like this forever.
*Tippy sees a door.*
Tippy: That must be the exit over there, so we'll just quietly retreat.*
*Tippy pulls her head back in. Her feet pop out of the bottom of the jacket. Belchic and Tippy sneak away disguised.
Dipstick: *off-screen* What the heck is that?
Belchic: Make tracks, Tippy!
*Tippy runs out the door carrying Belchic. Cut to Dipstick.*
Dipstick: Who was that guy? *walks away*
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------- To be continued...
Confusing? I realize. More will be revealed in Chapter 5.
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Post by Two-Tone on May 17, 2007 17:56:27 GMT -5
sounds interesting and just what is Tac's invention supposed to do?
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Post by Trey_Vore on May 17, 2007 23:33:57 GMT -5
It's going to start spelling trouble...
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Post by Belchic on May 18, 2007 22:36:51 GMT -5
I'm going to make the next chapter hopefully tomorrow night...if I get to it.
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Post by monkey on May 21, 2007 17:56:42 GMT -5
I haven't read this from the first chapter, and I don't plan to even try to understand it.... I despise stories like this, it makes it worse off, I'd rather read something actually in story form.
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Post by Tic-Tac on May 21, 2007 19:30:10 GMT -5
it's not his fault he doesn't know how to write a real story. Give him a break, he does the best he can.
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Post by monkey on May 21, 2007 20:28:35 GMT -5
I know, I never said there's nothing wrong for it, I mean, he can write it if he wants, I just wont be reading it, other may, and that's fine. So yeah, he can carry on with he wants, I mean, he shouldn't stop cause of what I had said.
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Post by Belchic on May 21, 2007 22:27:28 GMT -5
Whatever rocks your boat, Drake.
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Post by Belchic on May 24, 2007 14:37:10 GMT -5
Chapter 5 -
*As Tippy continues to run carrying Belchic, their guise flies off, but Tippy keeps running. Scene cuts to inside the barn. Here, we see Lucky, Cadpig, Rolly, Two-Tone, Noggin and Spot.*
Lucky: How's the progress coming, Noggin?
Noggin: Pretty good.
Lucky: What exactly is it that you're doing?
Noggin: None of your business. If I told you out loud, there might be a strong possibility that Tic-Tac could overhear. You see, I've known him long enough to find out how intellegent he is.
*Belchic and Tippy suddenly barge in. Tippy is still holding Belchic on her shoulders. The two of them are breathing heavily and look like they're in fear.*
Rolly: Belchic! Tippy!
Cadpig: You guys look like you've seen a ghost!
Tippy: No. Actually, we saw something a lot worse.
Two-Tone: What did you see?
Belchic: *jumps off of Tippy and comes up to the pups* We've discovered Tic-Tac's secret lab!
Lucky: Isn't his lab in the shed?
Belchic: Yes, but apparantley, he has an underground lab that we don't know about.
Tippy: We found it on accident.
Belchic: Things are looking pretty bad, Lucky. Tic-Tac has invented his most deadly weapon of all time. It's called, The Depuppyator!
Lucky: AAAHH! *jumps into Two-Tone's arms* Save me, Two-Tone! I don't want to be depuppyated!
Two-Tone: Ha, I won't let anything happen to you, Lucky!
Lucky: You're right. *jumps off* With you and the others on my side, we're invincible. Besides, how many times has breath mint boy failed to kill me?
Tippy: I think this is the real deal, Lucky. I think he knows that we were there.
Belchic: Well, he doesn't know exactly who, but it sounds like he's going to kill not just Lucky, but all of us!
Lucky: Aww, man. Now we're all gonna die! What are we going to do?
Cadpig: Well, if you find it hard to think happy thoughts, then there's really just one thing that we can all do... *starts singing* You put your left foot in, you put your left foot out... You put your left foot in, and you shake it all about... You do the Hokey Pokey, and you turn yourself around... And that's what it's all about!
*As Cadpig sang this, everyone looked at her like she wasn't helping a bit.*
Noggin: *after a pause* Anyway...
Spot: Sounds like tomorrow might be armaggedon for us!
Lucky: Cadpig may have a point. If we're all going to die tomorrow, we should just live tonight like there's no tomorrow!
*Meanwhile, back in Tac's lab.*
Tac: Did you find anyone, Dipstick?
Dipstick: Well, not really. All I found was some tall dude in a trench coat run outside, but nobody I'd recognize.
Tac: You idiot! That had to have been Lucky and Two-Tone in one of their stupid totem-pole disguises! I should have gotten Two-Tone for when she stole Nanny's box of yard sale clothes and decided to keep it for herself!
Dipstick: I don't think it was them. He had kind of a big head and skinny legs.
Tac: It could have been anybody, then! If that is the case, then I'll have to watch my monitors all day and night long this day. I will start up my Depuppyator to kill them all when they are least expecting it. That will not be easy, because I know that they're expecting something from me. For now, the best I can do...is just wait...
To be continued...
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Post by Belchic on Jun 2, 2007 19:06:58 GMT -5
Chapter 6 -
*It is now night time, and the pups are all hanging out in the barn.*
Belchic: *off-screen* PIZZA TIME!
*Belchic runs on with 4 pizza boxes.*
Belchic: Okay, so how did we decide to split this? Tippy and I got the pepperoni and canadian bacon.
Lucky: Two-Tone and I got the plain pepperoni.
Noggin: Cadpig and I got plain cheese.
Belchic: And, Rolly, you got the works.
Rolly: Oh, papa!
*They all start eating and having a good time.*
Lucky: This was a sweet idea, Belchic.
Cadpig: Say, how did you order this pizza, anyway?
Belchic: Oh, I have my ways.
Noggin: Ahem!
Belchic: But I give Noggin credit.
*Cut to Tac's lab.*
Tac: Excellent! They don't seem to have any cares in the world! Now's my chance!
*Tac activates the Depuppyator. It starts to shake and make all these sounds, but then, it falls apart.*
Tac: CURSES!
*Cut back to the barn. The pups are gathered around the TV playing Nintendo 64. Lucky, Noggin, Konami and Tippy are playing.*
Lucky: Ha, ha! I'm invincible!
Noggin: You'll never beat me, Lucky!
Tippy: You guys are so addicted.
Konami: Dream on. You'll never beat the master!
Belchic: Come on! You can beat Konami!
Cadpig: *sigh* Who knew that video games would help these pups forget about breath mint boy?
Spot: They probably just will never grow up.
*Cut back to Tac's lab.*
Tac: Thankfully, I have a backup plan.
*Tac brings up a remote control and presses a button on it. Nothing happens. He tries it several more times, still, nothing happens. He then opens up the back side and discovers no batteries.*
Tac: *making an insanley mad face* FREEEEEEEEEAAAK!!!
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To be continued...
(I had a dream last night that helped me come up with ideas for this fic, so I'll probably write Chapter 7 tomorrow.)
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Post by Two-Tone on Jun 2, 2007 21:48:26 GMT -5
lol!
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Post by Belchic on Jun 10, 2007 1:32:34 GMT -5
Chapter 7 (and believe me, it's going to get a lot more suspensful now) -
(It's the next day, and the pups are about to go on a mission.)
Noggin: Okay, listen up, everyone. Belchic and Tippy seem to know the secret entrance to Tac's hideout. You six are going to split up into three groups and go through that passage. I've set up a computer system to guide you guys. Lucky, Two-Tone, I'm going to be guiding you. Rolly, Cadpig, Spot will be your guide. And Belchic and Tippy, your guide will be Konami. Ready? Go!
*They all run off. Cut back to Tac in his lab.*
Tac: This can't be! Now even more pups will discover my lab! Hehe...no matter. Little do they know, I've made some modifications to those secret tunnels. They'll never get passed my booby traps!
*Cut to Lucky and Two-Tone.*
Lucky: Okay, Noggin, we're ready for directions.
Noggin: *voice-over* Okay, I want you two to take the right tunnel.
Two-Tone: Okay.
*They go through.*
Noggin: *voice-over* Now, there will be a slight drop...
*Lucky and Two-Tone suddenly fall down a long drop. Two-Tone grabs a ledge. Lucky continues to fall, but Two-Tone grabs his tail just in time. Lucky is now face to face with a spikey ground.*
Lucky: Thanks for the warning, Noggin!
Noggin: *voice-over* Now, swing into that doorway and continue onward.
*Two-Tone throws Lucky into the doorway and jumps through it.*
*Cut to Rolly and Cadpig.*
Cadpig: How did I get stuck with you, Rolly? You stink.
Rolly: Hey! I can't be as stinky as Belchic!
Spot: *voice-over* Now, guys, I want you to go through the center passage, but watch out, because there's something there that keeps appearing and disappearing.
*Suddenly, a flame wall appears for a couple seconds, then disappears.*
Spot: *voice-over* Go! Hurry!
*They jump across, then the flame wall comes back. It is revealed to be an obstacle course of flame walls.*
Cadpig: Spot, did we have to go through Death Valley?
*Cut to Belchic and Tippy.*
Konami: *voice-over* Head left. Now keep following the pathway. Now, watch out for the mace!
Belchic: What mace?
*Suddenly, a spike ball comes out of the wall and hits the other wall. Belchic and Tippy just barely dodge it.*
Belchic: Oh. That mace.
Konami: *voice-over* Now, go up that hill.
*Cut to Rolly and Cadpig.*
Rolly: Uh, Spot, are you sure we have to board the pendelum?
Spot: Yes. It's the only way to get to where Tac is.
*The pendelum comes, and Rolly and Cadpig board it.*
Spot: Now, avoid the fireballs.*
Cadpig: Fireballs?
*Fireballs shoot rappidly around the area.*
Rolly: You never told us we had to deal with fireballs!
*They successfully dodge the fireballs until the pendelum gets to the other side. They get off, and a fireball just barely burns the tip of Cadpig's tail. Cadpig licks her paw and douses her tail.*
Cadpig: I hope this is what Belchic and Tippy had to go through.
*Cut to Belchic and Tippy.*
Tippy: This is not what Belchic and I had to go through.
Konami: *voice-over* Now go through the route straight ahead of you, and you should be at home stretch.
Belchic: That yellow room straight ahead?
Konami: *voice-over* Yep. That's where you're going.
Belchic: Oh, this should be a piece of cake! *Belchic starts heading towards the room but stops suddenly in fear only to discover that it's full of bees.* AAAHH!!! BEES!!! *He runs behind Tippy.* I am not going in there!
Tippy: We have to, Belchic. It's the only way.
Belchic: *still shaking* No! I don't want to get stung!
Tippy: *bends down* Grab on, Belchic. *Belchic gets onto Tippy's back, and then she stands up.* Hold on tight.
*Tippy runs through the room as fast as she can. The two get through safely.*
Belchic: Oh, that was too close!
*Cut back to Lucky and Two-Tone.*
Noggin: *voice-over* Now, all you have to do is get through the fan blades, and you should be there.
*They come across a row of fan blades.*
Two-Tone: There is no way we can get through these!
Noggin: *voice-over* Yes there is. There is a broken blade on each fan. If you can find the broken blade on the first blade and run straight through it, you should just keep going, and you'll get through safely.
Lucky: Alright. *They get lined up.* Ready...go!
*They run and make it through.*
Two-Tone: We made it!
Lucky: Thanks to Noggin. And look! Everyone else is here too!
Cadpig: I guess it's time breath mint boy had a little confrontation.
Belchic: Uh...I think Tippy and I will stay out of this mess.
Tippy: Yeah, I think we've caused enough trouble here. *They exit.*
Rolly: Well, it looks like we're minus two teammates.
Lucky: Two-Tone, you should go with them.
Two-Tone: What? I don't think so. I'm in this with you, Lucky.
Lucky: Two-Tone, I seriously think you should stay out of this.
Two-Tone: What? So you, Rolly and Cadpig will hog all the glory again? I'm sick of you guys having all the fun! I should have been with you guys on all the adventures you had instead of that good for nothing chicken! I only got spotlight in no more than one episode of this entire show!
Lucky: Two-Tone, listen! This isn't about me! I want you to stay out of this because I don't want to lose you! Tic-Tac is a dangerous puppy. He's determined to kill us all. If you come in with us, we'll have a better chance of dying. I'm risking my life to put an end to Tic-Tac's rage, and Rolly and Cadpig are all I need at my side. I just want you to understand that I don't want to see you get killed.
Two-Tone: Okay. I understand Lucky. *leaves* Good luck.
To be continued... ---
Don't miss the final chapter where I'm going to show the final showdown!
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Post by Trey_Vore on Jun 10, 2007 11:39:12 GMT -5
Hmm...okay, I'll be waiting. Only question is, why do Belchic and Tippy leave so abuptly?
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Post by Belchic on Jun 10, 2007 13:50:49 GMT -5
Here's the final confrontation - Chapter 8 -
*The pups enter Tac's lab.*
Tac: WHAT? THIS CAN'T BE! THOSE BOOBY TRAPS WERE PERFECT! THERE'S NO WAY YOU COULD HAVE SURVIVED!
Lucky: Tic-Tac, this whole killing of me thing has got to stop!
Tac: I don't take orders from anybody but myself!
Lucky: GET HIM!
*Lucky, Rolly and Cadpig charge towards Tac, but Tac puts out his hand and uses force to blow them back and pin them against a wall.*
Tac: Now that I've got you right where I want you, it's time I send you to a place I've always wanted to see you.
Lucky: What do you mean?
Tac: In just a few minutes, you, Lucky, lead guitarist of your band, instead of playing a guitar, you'll be playing a harp! Dipstick, activate the Depuppyator!
Dipstick: *salutes and turns on the machine*
Tac: Hahaha! There's no failing this time!
*All of a sudden, a brick comes flying through and into the machine breaking it.*
Tac: WHAT? What gives here?
*From out of nowhere, Noggin appears.*
Noggin: So, Tic-Tac, I finally see your secret lab!
Tac: NOGGIN! *pulls out a bottle of liquid* Luckily I came prepared. Eat poison!
*He throws it at Noggin, who doesn't move. Noggin just tilts his head causing the bottle to fly past him. Tac tries several more times, but keeps missing. Tac tries one more time, and Noggin somehow teleports behind him.*
Noggin: Had enough? Outrageous as it may seem, Tac, your superior intellect has been outsmarted by my fast intellect.
Tac: This is very interesting. A one on one combat with two genius pups. And I think I know who's going to win this confrontation! *busts out a light saber*
Noggin: The old Star Wars cliche, huh? Luckily I thought ahead! *busts out a light saber* Now, let's make this a fair fight.
Tac: In your dreams!
*They begin fighting in classic "Star Wars" style for about 30 seconds.*
Tac: You're very good with the light saber, Noggin.
Noggin: Yes, but there's still one thing you don't know.
Tac: What's that?
Noggin: I'm left-handed! *Noggin switches the saber to his left hand and gains advantage.*
*They continue to fight. This fight includes Noggin doing a flying sommersault over Tac.*
Tac: You may have brains and brawn, but I see there's one thing you don't have.
Noggin: What?
Tac: A double-bladed light saber! *Tac's saber turns out to be a double-bladed saber, and he gains advantage.*
*They continue fighting intensely. Noggin seems to be moving faster than Tac, but Tac manages to keep up with his speed. Eventually, he pins Noggin down.*
Tac: In all my life, I learned that there's no room on this barn for two geniuses, and if one is evil and one is good, the good one has to go!
Noggin: Then you've learned nothing! *gets up and battles Tac more intense than ever*
*The battle goes on for a few more minutes.*
Noggin: *whistles through his fingers*
*Afterburners runs on. Afterburners locks onto Noggin and flies him upward.*
Tac: You can't battle me from way up there!
Noggin: Wanna bet? *shoots lasers out of his sunglasses*
Tac: AH!
Lucky: Whoa! I didn't know Noggin had lasers in his sunglasses!
Noggin: *to Lucky* Actually, the technical name is "stun" glasses!
*The battle continues for quite a while. Then, finally, Noggin plants himself in front of the Depuppyator.*
Tac: Aha! *puts on rocket boots* Now I've got you! Prepare to die, Noggin!
Noggin: Oh, I'm prepared.
Tac: Good, cos that's what you're going to do!
*Tac activates his rocket boots and flies up to Noggin, and just when he's a millimeter from Noggin, Noggin zips out of the way causing Tac to fly into the Depuppyator. Dipstick turns it on thinking Noggin's inside.*
Tac: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*Tac ends up getting chopped into pieces leaving his life at rest. There is now a moment of silence. Lucky, Cadpig and Rolly are removed from the wall.*
Lucky: Wow, Noggin! That was incredible!
Cadpig: I knew you'd find a way to help us get rid of Tic-Tac once and for all!
Rolly: I'd give a lot of money just to see that again!
Noggin: Well, it looks like we won't have to worry about any more evil pups on this farm for a while.
Lucky: Uh...I'm not sure. I have a strange feeling that breath mint boy will be back.
Rolly: Sounds likely.
Cadpig: Well, in the mean time, we can just have fun in peace.
Noggin: I continue to get smarter every day, so IF he comes back, I'll be ready for him!
Rolly: Let's get out of this dump. I'm starving.
*They all exit.*
Lucky: Say, Noggin, where'd you learn all those moves anyway?
Noggin: My little secret.
Cadpig: Come on, Noggin. You'd tell me, won't you?
Noggin: Well, it's amazing what kind of training tips you'd find on the Internet.
Rolly: Doesn't sound like stuff for me.
Noggin: You can use some exercise, fat dude.
Lucky: Come on, guys! Let's just get back to the barn! I don't want to miss "Thunderbolt"!
Noggin: Alright, let's go!
Cadpig: Last one there gets a flea bath!
*They run back laughing.*
THE END.
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Wow. I managed to get my story done before I got my new computer. Well, I guess I won't have to worry about leaving this fic unattended.
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