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Post by Nemo on Nov 4, 2012 15:13:35 GMT -5
Belchic snorted when he found out Nemo was deliberately ignoring him. "If she does that to me again, I'm going to mount her!" he thought to himself. "And I know how much she hates that, so she'd better learn to behave herself!" ..... Um, not trying to offend Belchic.. but that sounds like he wants to rape her ' Since dogs well.. 'mate' by mounting. And a tip, if you want your character to be 'thinking' something, you should italicize the text like this so people don't mistake it for the character speaking aloud.
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