|
Post by Two-Tone on Oct 29, 2007 19:26:07 GMT -5
Well, were you planning to destroy Lil Lightning the Corgi?
|
|
|
Post by crosswise on Oct 29, 2007 19:29:53 GMT -5
Crosswise: Maybe. I really didn't think this out beyond getting Thunderbolt off the air. That's why I have Aria and Dipstick to help me....I'm so screwed!
|
|
|
Post by Two-Tone on Oct 29, 2007 19:51:51 GMT -5
so you are trying to get Thunderbolt canceled to hurt Lucky *growl* I should lay you out right here and now
|
|
|
Post by crosswise on Oct 29, 2007 19:57:44 GMT -5
Crosswise: I can think of three very good reasons not to! The first one is....bye! *Runs*
|
|
|
Post by Two-Tone on Oct 29, 2007 20:20:54 GMT -5
*chases* come back here Crosswise!
|
|
|
Post by Aria on Oct 30, 2007 0:06:15 GMT -5
*chuckles* I've been following your stories for a while, n' I'm pleased to see Aria included in one of them.
Can't wait to read more.
|
|
|
Post by sip on Oct 31, 2007 2:04:19 GMT -5
this looks good... ^w^.. great work cross... ^O^
|
|
|
Post by crosswise on Oct 31, 2007 17:27:33 GMT -5
&&&
The three pups hopped off the van and found that they had reached their destination. Crosswise beamed. “Ah London. Capital of England and the British Commonwealth. The Big…Foggy.” Crosswise waved his paw in front of his face to clear away some of the fog.
“Ooooh.” Dipstick gaped as he looked around. “The clouds are on the ground!”
“I forgot how muggy this place was.” Aria commented.
“Yeah it’s almost as thick as Dipstick.” Crosswise rolled his eyes. “Come on, we have to find the studio where Thunderbolt is filmed.”
“Which would be where?” Aria raised her brow. Crosswise coughed. “You didn’t bother to check before we left, did you?”
“I did.” Crosswise said defensively. “I just…forgot to take the note I wrote it down on with me.” He finished sheepishly. Aria rolled her eyes.
“Brilliant.”
“Hey, this isn’t over until the fat pup sings.” Crosswise retorted. “So keep your trap shut.” Aira made a fist and was prepared to bop him one on the noggin when she noticed Dipstick had wandered off.
“Where’d he go?” Aria cried out in alarm.
“Probably chasing butterflies.” Crosswise groaned, knowing that if he lost Dipstick Tac would never forgive him…assuming Tac didn’t just kill him outright. “Let’s find the twit.”
The two pups walked through the streets of London, calling out Dipstick’s name. Well, Aria was. Crosswise just calling, “Hey moron!” After about nine or so blocks, Aria finally plopped down under a park bench.
“Great, we lost him.” Aria groaned. “This is a DISASTER!”
“Are you blaming ME?” Crosswise asked, annoyed. “This isn’t my fault!”
“It’s your stupid plan!” Aria reminded him crossly. “So I’m holding you accountable for finding Dipstick!”
“Look, Tac is my boss, NOT you!” Crosswise snapped, defensive. “I didn’t ask you to come along or to start buzzing around the boss or—” Aria blinked.
“Waitaminute, are you JEALOUS?” She exclaimed. Crosswise turned red in the face.
“WHAT?” He yelped. “I am NOT!”
“You ARE!” Aria laughed. “You are you are you are!” Crosswise, if anything, blushed harder. “I KNEW it!”
“Look,” Crosswise grumbled. “The boss just pays more attention to you…and Dipstick…than me. It bugs me sometimes, all right? Yeesh! You’re making it seem like I have a crush on him!”
Aria chuckled. “Nah, you’re just clingy and needy. Not…you know. Besides,” She went on as Crosswise glared at her. “He may like Dipstick and me a heck of a lot more than he does you—no offense—but come on…how many pups does that maniac even let in his shed? Just the three of us. Out of one-hundred and one puppies, plus assorted farm animals: Third out of a hundred and one is pretty good. Better even.”
“Yeah, well he’s gonna have BOTH our hides if we lose Dipstick.” Crosswise winced. “Where could that little idiot be?” Aria looked around.
“There’s a park down the street.” Aria observed. Crosswise looked at where she was staring.
“This is the neighborhood where Pongo and his pet Roger used to live. That may be the park where they met Perdita and HER pet, Anita.” He noted. “Think he might be there?”
“He’s bound to like a park more than any dingy ally.” Aria answered. “Let’s check it out. And no more fighting…deal?”
“Deal.” Crosswise nodded.
TBC &&&
|
|
|
Post by Aria on Oct 31, 2007 17:35:24 GMT -5
Hmmm. My only slightly negative note, is that you're missing Aria's bit of an accent. She's rather lazy, and doesn't pronounce words completely unless stressing on them. You know, such examples as "Nothin'." or "Y'gotta, Y'gonna, Y'moron..." And, the ocassional 'Yer' instead of 'your/you're.'
Just some helpful critism, not to say that I'm not utterly honored that you've included one of my characters into your delightful story. ^-^ And, besides the missing accent, she's perfectly in character. <3
*snickers* Tac n' Crosswise sittin' in a shed...
|
|
|
Post by crosswise on Oct 31, 2007 17:40:45 GMT -5
Crosswise: *Turning red* Oh SHUT up!
Accent's aren't easy to do but I will make more of an effort to correct that in future bits! Thanks again! Aria's a doll!
|
|
|
Post by Aria on Oct 31, 2007 17:42:22 GMT -5
Oh, I'd enjoy the story just as much if you didn't include her accent; since I wouldn't want to make writing for my character anymore difficult...
And thank you. I personally love Crosswise's loyalty, and the way he picks on Dipstick. I love the little idiot, but it's good to see someone finally annoyed with him. X3
|
|
|
Post by crosswise on Oct 31, 2007 17:47:17 GMT -5
It just baffles Crosswise that Tac likes Dipstick--a moron at best, a hindrance to his plans at worst--more than Crosswise who is fairly intelligent. It's gaulling. But tough toenails for him.
|
|
|
Post by Tic-Tac on Oct 31, 2007 18:14:34 GMT -5
Honest Answer- Dipstick was the first one that made Tac laugh after his mom died. There ya go.
|
|
|
Post by crosswise on Oct 31, 2007 18:41:35 GMT -5
Crosswise: But I make you laugh all the time...when I fall flat on my face anyway.
|
|
|
Post by Two-Tone on Oct 31, 2007 23:04:46 GMT -5
*pokes Crosswise* I know where Dipstick is at *points at the office of Chloe Simon* She just adopted him this morning.
|
|