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Post by Lucky on Jul 10, 2015 16:55:38 GMT -5
Okay, I have to apologize for this, but Chapter 3 of the Living on the farm trilogy is taking a pretty long time, but I have a feeling that it will be done, I thought it over and I'm only going to do some of the stories, I know I've been saying I'm going to do 65 then 50 then 40, but as I have told Mizan and Bab, August's origin is pretty dark and I have my reasons on why I would want to ask if it's okay to post it up here.
I may go with the Joker route and have August explain how he got the scar between his eyes, I may keep the scene where it shows how he got the scar, I don't know, I just want to keep it at a low rating like either PG or PG-13.
Story 40 I can say is pretty much an epic one since it's something you would never see in the 101 Dalmatians unless you were to recall the episode. "The Great Cat invasion."
But I don't know what I'm going to do with the other stories I have after that point, the story of mine that I do want to focus on is the novel I was talking about.
For the head canon, that will not be posted here whatsoever, if you want to read a chapter of it, please contact me and let me know, but I will say that it's very similar to the Violence that was in the TMNT Comics from 1984, I haven't read the entire series but I have read Issues 1 & 2 though.
What I said above, I hope I didn't offend anyone it's just I wanted to warn you before you ask me. "Is it okay, if I read your head canon story of the 101 Dalmatians?" Cause and I will repeat that it has violence similar to the comics, I got the idea from DWoW, however this is what I want to say, despite me from saying DWoW, I will say that the only element from that board in the story is what happened to Penny, however I want the story not to have an adventure but mystery as well to the point where the reader would be like. "Who did this or why did that happen to a character?"
I have two pages to go, but judging from how I have writers block I may have to have it be one shots instead, I don't know just yet.
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Post by babclayman on Jul 10, 2015 17:18:56 GMT -5
Isn' the Jokr case, that alwys has diffrnt reasons, as to why he has his scrs? Or, you mean, he fll in that Chemical, like in the Burton Film?
Oooh, You imply that, he may allign himself, with some Felines, or soething, Shawn?
When you claim; Head Canon, as in; What August's Backstory is like, or what Continuity, this Story is set in, May I ask, Shawn?
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Post by Lucky on Jul 10, 2015 18:01:54 GMT -5
No, what I mean is that I may have him look at a pup that isn't my own main four and ask. "Do you want to know how I got this scar?" Then go into detail, but chances are he would have multiple origins on how he got the scar, however the personality I gave him is going to be the same.
The way I've gotten it written is that he will align himself with other Villains, like Swamp Rat, Burai, Rhonda and the Coyotes, etc, August has no problem with felines.
It's an AU, I figured that I would have the head canon that focus's on my four main pups focus on the DWoW universe, but since I've heard that OC's aren't allowed, I figured why not come up with a darker story for my Dals where they themselves try to cope with Penny's death which would affect each pup differently and how they would try to cope with it.
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Post by babclayman on Jul 10, 2015 18:08:18 GMT -5
I can picture one reason. Like, he claims he try to rsh otside, nt realising there's a Glass Door, or something like that, Eh? ;3
So, Your Stories are set in an; Altrnate Universe, are they, Shawn? You also have any Stories in; Canon Verse too, May I ask?
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Post by Lucky on Jul 10, 2015 18:12:50 GMT -5
Well the head canon is AU.
August's Origin and the stories I'm writing here on Sparky's is Canon.
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Post by Lucky on Jul 31, 2015 21:03:23 GMT -5
Here's the stories so far.
1-3 The Farm Life Trilogy
4. The Christmas Pup (Takes place after the Christmastime in the park.)
5. The Nightmare
6. Mack's Vengence (Takes place after the First RP with Lupus.)
7. Enter August (I'm debating to see if this should be in it's continuity or follow after the Dominitrix Isn't for pups.)
8. Enter Burai (Burai's first appearance.)
9-10. Shawn's Choice
11. A mate for Valentines Day. (First appearance of the Shawn and Jewel Pairing.) *Complete.*
12. Trouble at the Farm.
13. Lucky's date with Two-Tone. *Complete.*
14. Adventures in Cyberspace.
15. Damon Strikes Back
16. Tales from the Past.
17. Shane's Nightmares.
18. Ultimate Battle Part 1
19. Mother and Son *Complete.*
20. Ultimate Battle Part 2
21. Controlling Balance's Anger.
22. Tales of Damon and Jenna. (This is actually an origin of both Balance and her siblings along with their parents.)
23. Battle at the Warehouse.
24. Outsmarting the Pug.
25. Battle aboard the Cruise. (Captain De Vil's First Appearance.)
26. Discovering Diamond's Past. (Debating if I should do this one.)
27. Biff's Revenge. (This I believe would be a dark episode where P H De Vil causes a fusion between Burai and Biff, not sure yet.)
28. The Warning of War.
29. Power in Numbers.
30-31. Duel of the Pups. (Finally got the epic battles down.)
32. August's Origin. (Even though I'm working on this one, it's debatable on if I want to post this on Sparky's or not since this story has a very dark tone feel to it, due to a scene with August and his owner.)
33. Time Rift.
34. To the Future.
35. Cowabunga Burai. (Even though this is based on an episode that my sister and I love, I want to use my own ideas for this one.)
36-37. Exodus. (Last Appearance of Burai, Rhonda and the Coyotes.)
38. Kim Strikes Back. (I like the name but this is just something I want to do, since this focus's on teamwork that's been forgotten since the last story.)
39. August's Last Stand. (This is the last story focusing on Balance and her siblings, from now on once this story is complete, they will only make Cameo Appearances and only appear in future RP's.)
This is all the stories I'm going to do, if I decide on making more stories they will only focus on the main pups from the TV Series plus the other 99 pups.
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Post by Lucky on Aug 1, 2015 0:48:07 GMT -5
If anyone wants to have their characters in the stories I've posted, please let me know, I would like to give this a shot, but remember, if you want to have certain characters in a story, you can have up to either four or five of them, no more, unless you want them to appear in Duel of the pups Part 2, then by means have as many characters as you want, I do have to say that quirks are out, sorry, it's nothing against your quirks but I just don't see any use for them, however I would like to point out that people can choose up to three stories that they can have their characters appear in. Like for example if Lupus wanted me to put his character Lupus in the story where Balance has to control her rage and he wanted to have him help her out then I will do that, remember, unlike the three stories that are complete, the rest are in progress and I would love to see you guys say. "I want this character in that story." Cause it'll be fun for me, cause it will tell me that you want your characters to have some Adventures as well.
There are some characters I can't put in the stories though, for example Bab's character Sirius (Read Final War to find out what happened to him.) Or a character I do not know that well, however that doesn't mean I won't mention them or have them make a Cameo Appearance in the stories I'm working on. The characters can appear from Story 4 and onward.
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Post by babclayman on Aug 1, 2015 9:36:11 GMT -5
Darn, You have A LOT of Stories plan, I notice! o.o For the; August one, being a Sequel to; "Domina Trix" Story, you better ask; Trey on it, to check, Eh?
Though, seems like you have a Large Plan, How lng is ech Story, and you have a plan, for them too?
You can use some of my Dalmatians, in your Stories, if you like, Shawn, though; Can you check with me, on what they may try in them, so I can check if, what they try is; In-Character for them, Shawn? ;3 Also, Technically; Sirius is; Dodie Smith's Dalmatian Character, as he appears in the; "Starlight Barking" "Novel". ;3
May I ask, when you plan to post some of these Stories up, Shawn? ;3
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Post by Shadow Dearly on Aug 1, 2015 9:43:37 GMT -5
The three stories my characters will appear in is Adventures In Cyberspace, Time Rift, To the Future.
Adventures In Cyberspace: Shadow and Autumn
Time Rift: Shadow, Cecilia, and Rosalina
To the Future: Shadow and Rosalina.
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Post by Lucky on Aug 1, 2015 12:09:37 GMT -5
babclayman Yep. True. But as I said, I'm debating of having it as it's continuity in the storyline I'm making and won't follow DominaTrix at all, however the death of Diana would be mentioned even though you see her come back in Axis of Evil, I asked Trey if I could review that story, I've got to read it again though, the only question I do have is do I have to spoil the story if I review it? I don't know, probably 5 or 7 Chapters long. Awesome, I do need to know which stories you would like for them to be in. I'm not trying to be mean or rude to you, Bab, it's just that I do need to know so I can tell you what they will be doing is going to be in character. Ah, okay. I still can't use him though since I don't know what he's like and stuff like that. A mate for Valentines Day will be uploaded on Feburary of 2016, I want to focus on Chapter 3 of the Life on the Farm Trilogy, but I will be completing the stories that are in progress as soon as I can. Shadow Dearly Yep, that's true.
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Post by Lucky on Aug 30, 2015 18:50:51 GMT -5
Okay, here's an update, my writers block is getting better but only long enough for me to continue my work on Chapter 3 of the Life on the Farm Trilogy, I can make the other chapters longer or shorter depending on how fast I can get ideas for them, I do have an idea that most of these stories will have probably 5 or 7 Chapters but it should give you an idea of what my characters are like and to show their strengths and weaknesses.
Some of the stories I will write are probably going to be ten chapters at the most, but again I don't know, I want to prove that my characters aren't really weak to the point where you can actually knock them out or kill them in one go, if an RP calls for Coyotes and you want to kill them or knock them out in one go, then by all means go ahead, I have no problem with that, but remember to leave them for the rest of the RPers so they can have a chance at it.
I'm already working on Story 7 which will take place one week after the Party Crashers RP, I just don't know if I want to have the RP that my sister and I did mentioned where August would mean it was an embarrassment or it was the Party Crashers RP, either way the Party Crashers RP gave me something to work with here are the examples here.
1. What would happen if August were to cross paths with Pongo, Perdy and Clayton? 2. What if Shadow and Jacob had a round 2? 3. What if Kendra had to fight both August and Michelle. 4. Why does August want Lupus. (First Story Draft.) 5. Why does August want to know about Kit. (First Story Draft.) (Answered)
The possibilities are endless here, but there's still more stories to tell, cause there's still some villains and one particular character I'm interested in trying out that does seem to come into mind after playing Stranger's Wraith on the PS3.
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Post by babclayman on Aug 31, 2015 9:34:10 GMT -5
I can understand, not wishing to make your Dalmatians look weak, but I also suggest that they're able to get ht too. There do need to be times, where they do feel an attck or, may even tie in a battle. Cause, if they win every battle, that they're in, there is no real suspense, for how a battle may work in a Story or RP, You Know what I mean, Shawn? ;3
Pongo, Perdita & Clayton!? o.o May I ask, why those three, specificall? Is it cause, Clayton didn' attck and try to use more Logic agains him, or something?
Also, You claim August wishes to know on Kit, May I ask why? Or, do you plan to tell us why, in the Story, Shawn? ;3
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Post by Lucky on Aug 31, 2015 16:53:32 GMT -5
I do agree, Bab, but here's the thing, you went full force with Kendra causing me to believe that Kendra was intending to knock him out without having him get a chance to strike, same with Shawn, tackling him made it look like he would go out in one blow, That's why I'm doing this, this is August's first fight with the Dearly pups, I mean it would be a challenge for the Dearly's if he wasn't knocked out, I mean look at TMNT 2003 and 2012 TV Series with the battle with the Turtles and Shredder and Slash.
Do you see where I'm going with this? It would be a fun fight if the battle was even or the pups didn't knock out every character in one blow, I only done that with you and Nuke because all you and him did was tackle Shawn instead of giving him a real fight, that's all. ^^;
Yep, but he's only wanting Perdy and Clayton to observe the fight more than have them fight him themselves, he doesn't have anything against Clayton at all, he knows that Clayton won't fight back and it wouldn't be more of a challenge because of that. ^^;
I've asked the same question when I wrote the story, it seems like he believes that Kit knows the location of his (August's) Owners. :3
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Post by babclayman on Sept 2, 2015 10:45:21 GMT -5
Though, what I mean, in the RP Case is that, you also need to acknowledge when a Dalmatian gets ht. Even if it's so mch as them being like; "That hrt!" or something. I am discussing on the Battl Rules, with Nemo, when it comes to RP's. ;3
Why he wishes for Clayton & Perdita to observe a battl, May I ask?
Oooh, I wonder how Kit knows, where Augusts' Humans are?
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Post by Lucky on Sept 2, 2015 17:36:35 GMT -5
I know, you've done that too with Malinda since it made me believe that my post was null and void, same with Trey, but yeah, you don't have to worry about that with me.
He wants to prove to them why he's a formidable opponent.
I don't know, I don't think Kit does, but since Mr. Big meets his demise in an 101 Dalmatians Episode, that would leave his wife so August wants to know her location and believes that Kit has it.
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