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Post by alphawolfbraver on Jun 16, 2021 11:56:36 GMT -5
101 Dalmatians (alphawolfbraver version) Chapter 16: Fluffy’s revenge After arriving in London, Cobalt, the Dalmatians, and the cart roam the streets as night falls. They soon come across Fluffy.
PONGO: Why, it’s Fluffy.
FLUFFY: Oh, Pongo, right? I’ve been keeping track of your progress via some dogs in the neighborhood on the Twilight Bark. I see you guys have gotten out of my, ahem, “pet’s” hands safely.
COBALT: From your hesitation, I take it you don’t care for her?
FLUFFY: I despise her! Every time I have a litter of kittens, she drowns them! She doesn’t even show remorse for it!
PENNY: We always knew she was a monster, but… this is something else! No animal deserves to lose their precious little ones.
FLUFFY: Everyday, I attempt to avenge my heartache by scratching the walls and her coats, but, she never notices.
PEPPER: She wouldn’t notice if there was a giant elephant right in front of her rundown house.
FLUFFY: That’s not even the worst of it. I see her parade in the pelts of the animals she kills every day. It absolutely sickens me!
PRINCE: We’re not surprised. You don’t deserve to live with such a rotten woman.
FLUFFY: She only keeps me because of my value. She has no regard for my feelings.
MISSUS: There has to be a way to make things better for you. Maybe there’s a kindly cat lover living close by.
PONGO: Would you like to tag along with us for a while?
FLUFFY: On one condition. You help me ruin Mr. De Vil’s work.
PERDITA: Well… we did leave the De Vils and Baduns down a cliffside and it will be ages before they can get back. (to the children): What do you say, children?
COBALT: That woman has ruined the life of this cat and several other animals. I say it’s time WE return the favor!
LUCKY: Let’s do it! We’ll ruin that house in no time.
Fluffy leads the dogs to Cruella’s home in London, which is full of coats made from various animals.
DUKE: Let’s get them!
The puppies all grab hold of the coats with their teeth, yanking them off their coathangers. Some of them had rips in them before the puppies’ claws could touch them, which made the revenge all the more fun. Whizzer relieves himself on some magazines of Cruella.
WHIZZER: For once, my weak bladder is helpful for something.
COBALT: You’ve been holding it in for quite a while, Whizzer. I imagine you have quite a bit to let out.
WHIZZER: Yeah… I guess I didn’t want the van driver to get suspicious of us.
LUCKY: I’m honestly surprised you held it for this long. Must be a new record.
Jewel and Two-Tone were looking at some boxes of jewelry.
TWO-TONE: Ooh, this looks pretty.
JEWEL: Hmm, I don’t suppose revenge would count as stealing some jewelry, would it?
Giggling, the two female puppies took some and put it in the cart, being careful to leave enough room for the smallest puppies.
COBALT: I always thought you were more of a tomboy, Two-Tone.
TWO-TONE: With a girly streak, I am. What? A tomboy can’t like jewels, too?
COBALT: Okay, sorry for the insinuation.
TWO-TONE: It’s alright. Let’s have more fun!
The three-legged pup, identified as Tripod, knocks over a few racks of coats.
TRIPOD: More coats here, guys.
DIME: Thanks, Tripod. Nickle, let’s get this coat.
NICKLE: Ooh, I’m there!
The two puppies sink their claws and teeth into the coat and play tug of war with it.
PENNY: Don’t rule me out!
She jumps into the middle and starts to create a hole by sinking her claws into it.
COBALT: Are any of these paid for?
FLUFFY: Not a single one.
APACHE: Whoa, stealing the puppies from our adoptive parents wasn’t a one-off case then.
FLUFFY: Actually, I was referring to the coats themselves. But, you're right. Cruella does steal animals to get what she wants. But, only if she can’t get them with money. That’s why she stole a Siberian tiger.
PERDITA: Pongo and I did see our pets read that on the news.
FLUFFY: The De Vils got away with it by the skin of their teeth. The police came here an hour ago and confiscated the tiger’s pelt as evidence.
TANI: That’s a relief, though I do grieve for that poor tiger.
FLUFFY: You should. Especially since she was stolen from a zoo after being killed in it.
The puppies and Dalmatian parents stood in respectful silence for the tiger, as well as all the animals who had their skins lost to make the coats. Satisfied with the revenge, the dogs leave with Fluffy following them.
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Post by alphawolfbraver on Jun 17, 2021 12:31:45 GMT -5
101 Dalmatians (alphawolfbraver version) Chapter 17: Return to Regent’s Park Back in the Dearly house, Roger is checking his smartphone to track the Dalmatian parents.
ROGER: They are getting close. Antia, look!
Antia, who is petting Caramel, rushes to her husband’s side to check.
ANITA: But, where’s Cobalt?
CARAMEL (Worried): Son? Oh, Cobalt, please don’t be lost…
From the distance, the humans hear Pongo’s barks.
ROGER: You hear that?!
Caramel rushed out to the garden to bark a reply, asking if Cobalt was with them. She barely starts when she sees the light from the streetlamps shining off Cobalt’s glasses.
CARAMEL: Cobalt! Oh, he’s okay!
She dashes back inside, letting out happy barks. Soon enough, the soot covered Dalmatians and Cobalt run into the house through the open door.
ANTIA: Roger, what on earth…
ROGER: They’re Labradors!
NANNY FLORENCE (Chuckling): No, no, they’re covered with soot. Look, here’s Lucky. He’s all clean.
Nanny Debra dusts the puppies.
ROGER (Cleaning Pongo’s face): Pongo, boy, is that you? Oh, Pongo! (he starts dancing with him): Pongo! It’s Pongo!
ANTIA (Cleaning Peridtia’s face): And Perdy! (she hugs her): Oh my, darling.
NANNY DEBRA: And here’s Rolly. And Penny. And Freckles… oh my goodness, they are all here! The little dears.
NANNY FLORENCE: And several others!
ROGER: Look everyone, puppies everywhere!
ANTIA: There’s so many of them. You don’t suppose Cruella could have stolen these ones, too?
ROGER: We’ll have to check with the police. But, for now, let’s work out how many there are and clean them up.
NANNY DEBRA: Good idea, Roger.
Nanny Florence takes a duster and she helps Nanny Debra dust off the puppies. They find several unique spot patterns.
NANNY FLORENCE: Oh, look at this one. These spots look almost like water droplets.
ANITA: I think Splash sounds like a good name for this puppy.
SPLASH (Surprised): How’d she know that was my name?
COBALT: Call it coincidence.
PERDITA: Humans can be quite good at that when it comes to naming dogs.
One puppy has a spot on either side of him that looks like a lightning bolt.
ROGER: Say, isn’t there a dog that came in later in the Thunderbolt tv show that is called Lightning?
ANITA: I do believe so.
NANNY DEBRA: I think it would be an honor for this pup to be called Lightning.
NANNY FLORENCE: And look, this puppy here has a thunder cloud spot pattern.
ROGER: Thunderbolt and Lightning. Those names would be perfect for those two.
Anita wipes Duke clean.
ANITA: Oh my, this puppy is even bigger than Patch.
ROGER: I wonder what we should name this one.
NANNY FLORENCE: I wonder… we’ll have to think about naming this puppy.
DUKE: If only humans could understand us.
It was at this point that Anita caught sight of Fluffy.
ANITA: Goodness, I think this cat wanted to run away from her owner. (checks the nametag): Fluffy. I know this house is crowded with dogs, but, I hope you don’t mind sticking around.
Fluffy shows no objections. Meanwhile, Cruella, Saul, Jasper, and Horace are being escorted to jail by the police. Cruella’s hair had changed colors. The black half turned white while the white half turned green.
CRUELLA: All the furs, all the jewelry… destroyed and gone! The puppies are gone!
JASPER: Oh, shut up!
SAUL: I’ve warned you the law would catch up with us, Cruella.
HORACE: You know, as we’re all here, we could end up appearing on “What’s my Crime?”
JASPER: Ooh, now that doesn’t sound too bad.
SAUL: I never really understood the point of that show. Are they incentivizing criminals? It’s extremely controversial.
HORACE (Ignoring this): Say, I wonder if Meathead Fauncewater is still there?
JASPER: Yeah, we could meet him, too!
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Post by Raine Dearly on Jun 18, 2021 0:34:05 GMT -5
Very entertaining.
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Post by alphawolfbraver on Jun 18, 2021 8:16:22 GMT -5
One chapter left.
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Post by alphawolfbraver on Jun 18, 2021 13:37:19 GMT -5
101 Dalmatians (alphawolfbraver version) Chapter 18: Dalmatian Plantation A few weeks later, the Dearly family was packing to move to their new home.
ROGER: Good job we decided to wait until after New Years to move.
ANITA: Indeed. Since we were the most recent victims of Cruella, her assets were transferred to us. Just as well. She won’t be able to use them for the foreseeable future.
NANNY FLORENCE: I’m certain we’ll put the money to good use. Glad we started with demolishing Hell Hall. I imagine the dogs will have less than pleasant memories of it.
NANNY DEBRA: A good call indeed, Florence.
ANITA: And it’s not just Cruella’s money we received, but, all the other 84 puppies she purchased legally and Fluffy.
ROGER: Right.
Cobalt points to the blue cart.
ANITA: It seems young Cobalt is determined that we return Tommy’s cart. Seeing as he lives close to Hell Hall, I feel that can be arranged.
ROGER: Of course.
NANNY DEBRA: After settling into the new home, I propose we give the other 84 puppies collars.
NANNY FLORENCE: It would certainly help to distinguish them.
Soon, the Dearlys, nannies, the dogs, and Fluffy have moved into Hell Hall, which had been converted into a humble farm.
ROGER: To think this used to be the puppies’ prison. Now, they look so proud to call this place home.
Cobalt happily nuzzles his mother as the two dogs gaze upon their new home.
COBALT: Well, mum, we’ve managed to get a new home. But, I’m still frightened that those scientists examining me discovered that I have mythological dog DNA.
CARAMEL: Even so, the Dearlys persuaded them not to take you away from our family.
COBALT: But, they said that my magic will trigger when I get stressed.
CARAMEL: You know you can always talk to us if you feel gloomy, right?
COBALT: I know.
CARAMEL: You also have a close friend that can help you.
Penny playfully tackles Cobalt.
PENNY: Like me! (giggles): You saved us all from that nutter.
Meanwhile, Cadpig, who had been asleep during the trip, wakes up.
CADPIG (Yawns): Are we there yet? (she suddenly gasps and wears a look of horror): Where’s Patch?!
PONGO (Narration): Not to worry. Patch eventually made it to the new home. But, that’s a story for another day.
The end.
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Post by Two-Tone on Jun 18, 2021 21:03:23 GMT -5
ah nice finale.
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Post by alphawolfbraver on Jun 18, 2021 21:32:01 GMT -5
Thanks. What are your overall thoughts on my adaptation?
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Post by Two-Tone on Jun 19, 2021 0:41:11 GMT -5
it was done really well. and it was a good idea to mix in elements from the novel, both movies, and the tv series too
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Post by alphawolfbraver on Jun 19, 2021 8:56:07 GMT -5
Yeah. Later on, I'll make an adaptation of Patch's London Adventure.
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Post by Two-Tone on Jun 19, 2021 16:12:17 GMT -5
ah cool
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Post by alphawolfbraver on Jun 19, 2021 18:06:53 GMT -5
Expect quite a few differences.
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