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Post by Belchic on Nov 6, 2012 14:13:48 GMT -5
Very good poem, Shadow. I love the emotion in it. Also, Belchic, I think I cud probably do a poem like that. Isn't this topic supposed to be reserved for Shadow's poems? Still, if you think you can do a poem like that, go for it.
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Post by Shadow Dearly on Dec 10, 2012 16:14:37 GMT -5
Okay I haven't uploaded any of my poems here in a while, so I thought I may do so.
Here's a little haiku about the moon.
“A Moon Haiku”
Be one with the moon
Let moonlight heal all problems
Better than the sun
Enjoy this poem =D!
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Post by babclayman on Dec 12, 2012 17:11:05 GMT -5
Ah, you often do like the Moon, don't you, Shadow? ;3
May I ask, why you think the Moon is better than the Sun? ^^;
Still, Nice work, Shadow. ;3 Looking forward to seeing more from you. X3
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Post by Shadow Dearly on Dec 12, 2012 18:32:22 GMT -5
Hehhe well the biggest reason why I like the Moon better than the Sun is that unlike the sun, you won't get blinded by the Moon.
Anyway, new Haiku!
"Money and Jewels"
Money and Jewels
A reason to be selfish
How sad is the world?
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Post by Sweeney Terrier on Dec 12, 2012 18:46:06 GMT -5
Nice work, Shadow. Both of them. Indeed, the moon is better than the sun. Another thing is that the moon isn't, like the sun, a ball of gas, therefore, there's no such thing as a Lunar flare. Plus, 'tis rather beautiful to see the Moon's appearance change monthly. From a rather pretty crescent to a wonderful, amazing, bright full moon. As for the latter, I do like the topic you chose and how you described it. If you think about it, money is nothing but a piece of paper/copper/etc. upon which mankind has put a value on. As for the last line, I'd have to say, (in response to the question), QUITE sad. Hehe But still, VERY good work.
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Post by Shadow Dearly on Dec 12, 2012 22:36:27 GMT -5
Hehehhe thank you Lupus .
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Post by Deleted on Dec 15, 2012 21:50:00 GMT -5
Another awesome Poem, Shadow.
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Post by Shadow Dearly on Dec 15, 2012 22:42:53 GMT -5
Thank you Shawn :3 And lookie here! More poems by me! Here is a cinquain about Snivy, one of the three starter Pokémon from Black and White and Black 2 and White 2. "Snivy Cinquain"Snivy
Mature, clever
Tempting, cunning, fighting
Confident one, serious girl
AwesomeHere is a cinquain about Growlie's hyperactive character Growlie. The cinquain thoroughly explains Growlie's personality. "Growlie"Growlie
Hyperactive
Running, laughing, playing
Playful puppy, happy bouncer
FunnyFinally, the last poem in this set of poems. A short haiku about boredom. I wasn't bored when I wrote this x3. "Boredom Haiku"I am in this room
With nothing to do at all
I'm extremely boredEnjoy these poems you all
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Post by Deleted on Dec 15, 2012 23:29:02 GMT -5
Very nice work, Shadow.
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Post by ℓυηα on Dec 16, 2012 2:19:50 GMT -5
The moon one is so me. As I'm obsessed with the moon. XD
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Post by Snivinerior on Dec 16, 2012 8:28:16 GMT -5
Nice work Shad. And as I said on DA, I give all of them an A. (A+ for the Snivy cinquan XD)
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Post by Shadow Dearly on Jan 23, 2013 1:07:45 GMT -5
Yes, I am coming to all of your attention with this.
I need some ideas for poems. Do any of you have some ideas I could write about?
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Post by Sweeney Terrier on Jan 23, 2013 13:03:39 GMT -5
Perhaps darkness or death, (but that's from the dark side of my mind). Or say, love, and romance, since Valentines' Day is near.
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Post by Shadow Dearly on Jan 31, 2013 15:25:20 GMT -5
Ohmaigawd! A new poem from me!
“The Rhythm of Sound”
The rhythm of sound Can always be found In parks, music, and dog pounds
From all noises from all around Sound is bound to surround Cars and planes and basset hounds And even underground
The rhythm of sound can astound Everyone everywhere around
Hehehe enjoy peoples! ;3.
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Post by Belchic on Jan 31, 2013 21:26:12 GMT -5
I need to think of more topics I'd like to see you write poems about, Shadow.
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