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Post by Belchic on Mar 6, 2007 0:06:39 GMT -5
Everybody seems to be making their own fanfics on getting revenge on Tic-Tac, so I'm going to do one. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Chapter 1 -
Lucky, Cadpig, Rolly and Spot were all playing together one day as usual. Suddenly, something weird emerged from the ground. It looked like an elevator.
Lucky: What is that thing?
(The elevator opens, and Tic-Tac walks out.)
Tac: I was expecting to find you pups here.
Lucky: Oh, great, it's breath-mint boy!
Tac: I HEARD THAT!
Cadpig: Does anyone else feel tension here?
Spot: Wait a minute. Since when does Tic-Tac come out of his shed?
Tac: Since he found his ultimate laser gun! (He displays a laser gun.) I am going to kill you all, starting with the one on the left!
(Lucky, who was on the left of the group, quickly swapped places with Spot.)
Lucky: Well, Spot, it was good while it lasted.
Spot: Hey!
Tac: You are so lame, Lucky! Surrendering your friend for your own life. You are such a selfish pup!
Lucky: Oh, and I suppose you're not, Mr. Stays-All-Alone-and-Hates-Pretty-Much-Everyone-Else-In-the-Family?
(Tac looks at his gun again.)
Tac: On second thought, I need some more planning on how I'm going to assassinate you. Lucky's death calls for something really special...(returns to his elevator)...I'll be back, Lucky, and when I come back, you will be history! (closes the elevator and it goes back underground)
Spot: This looks pretty bad, Lucky.
Cadpig: We can't let Tic-Tac do anything to you! We love you!
Rolly: What are we going to do, Lucky?
Lucky: There's only one other puppy I know of who can help us get away from Tic-Tac. Let's go find Noggin. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------- To be continued...
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Post by Nuke on Mar 6, 2007 0:13:13 GMT -5
cool
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Post by Belchic on Mar 8, 2007 17:09:57 GMT -5
Chapter 2 -
*The pups go into the barn and see Noggin working on something.*
Lucky: Hey, Noggin, what are you doing.
Noggin: Working on another project.
Cadpig: Ooh. Will this be as amazing as your Human Tongue formula?
Noggin: I think it might be.
Jerko: Oh, sure! Like you haven't done that a million times already!
Noggin: Shut up, Jerko.
Rolly: Maybe he's making something food-related.
Lucky: Yeah, like maybe something that'll get us into the chow tower with ease.
Cadpig: Or maybe make the kibble we eat be more delicious than ever.
Rolly: Oh-ho-ho-ho, papa! I'm getting goosebumps just thinking about it!
Lucky: Yeah, me too!
Cadpig: Me three!
Noggin: Will you guys stop thinking with your stomachs instead of your brains?
Lucky: Geez. Sorry, Noggin.
Cadpig: I guess that's what we get when our breakfast of the day is so meager.
Rolly: *peers over* So what's this thing supposed to do?
Noggin: You'll find out when I'm done. So will you guys do me three small favors? Look away, cover your ears, and shut up!
Lucky: *puts his paws over his eyes*
Rolly: *puts his paws over his ears*
Cadpig: *puts her paws over her mouth*
Belchic: Huh! Guess you made monkeys out of them!
Noggin: Laughing at your own jokes again, eh, Belchic?
Jerko: Oh, for the love of the nebula! You guys are so horrible at humor!
Noggin: *shows Jerko his fist* See this?
Jerko: I'm not half as scared as you are Noggin, and I can prove it! I'm going to smack you in the *censored out* head!
Noggin: DON'T USE THAT LANGUAGE!
Belchic: Go away, Jerko!
Jerko: Not a chance!
Belchic: Who brought him into this family anyway?
Noggin: Satin, probably, because he gave birth to him.
Belchic: That's not really a nice thing to say, but I get your point.
Lucky: Man, I'm tired of waiting! I really want to see what Noggin's doing!
Cadpig: Patience, Lucky. I'm sure it'll turn out good in the end.
Lucky: Thanks, Cadpig.
Cadpig: And Lucky? Don't forget what happened to the man who got everything he ever wanted. He lived happily ever after.
Jerko: You stole that from Willy Wonka!
Lucky: What a jerk! He's worse than Mooch!
Noggin: Guys, could you all just leave? I'm trying to concentrate here.
Jerko: *exits* You guys suck, anyway.
Belchic: Shut up, Jerko!
Jerko: Go choke yourself! Quit life!
Cadpig: Before we leave, Noggin, I think Lucky has a quick question for you.
Noggin: What is it?
Lucky: Noggin, Tic-Tac is up to no good. He's determined to kill me.
Noggin: So what else is new?
Lucky: I think he's serious this time.
Noggin: *sigh* Alright, I'll come up with something, but I'll need some time. Tic-Tac is such a superior intelect, and being my arch rival, I'll have to take much in-depth research and what I should do. In the mean time, why don't you guys go play or something.
Lucky: Oh, thanks a lot, Noggin! You're a life saver!
Noggin: Okay, cut the mushy stuff and go!
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End of Chapter 2.
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Post by Two-Tone on Mar 8, 2007 18:48:37 GMT -5
when will I make an entrance?
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Post by Belchic on Mar 9, 2007 0:45:19 GMT -5
With that kind of attitude, I might never put you in here at all.
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Post by ripsta on Mar 9, 2007 1:11:07 GMT -5
With that kind of attitude, I might never put you in here at all. Uncalled for and unnecessary...
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Post by Two-Tone on Mar 9, 2007 5:25:10 GMT -5
*whimper*
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Post by cw on Mar 9, 2007 9:27:46 GMT -5
Well, allow me to say that it looks good so far. I only don't think that Tic-Tac would do such a thing as hesitate and call for more planning. He's a very practical, if evil, puppy. He'll just blast Lucky into dust. BUT, this IS your fanfic... I wonder what Noggin's gonna do....
PS: Dialogue form???
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Post by Tic-Tac on Mar 11, 2007 4:41:50 GMT -5
Tac works behind the scenes. He doesn't let people know he's up to know good until it's too late, and his plan is in motion. He doesn't generally use guns and stuff, consider his plans all domino effects. He doesn't just do one thing, it's mostly connected, and mostly it doesn't come around back to him. This being said, Tac does stuff with a very suitible alabi- he's always somewhere else when it goes down to monitor the next part of his plan...
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Post by cw on Mar 11, 2007 4:50:49 GMT -5
Tac works behind the scenes. He doesn't let people know he's up to know good until it's too late, and his plan is in motion. He doesn't generally use guns and stuff, consider his plans all domino effects. He doesn't just do one thing, it's mostly connected, and mostly it doesn't come around back to him. This being said, Tac does stuff with a very suitible alabi- he's always somewhere else when it goes down to monitor the next part of his plan... I kinda thought so when I read your "Victim" fanfics. He seems a bit different from most villains in that he willingly gets his hands dirty. By the way, does he (or do you) sometimes depend on others for his/your plans?
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Post by Belchic on Mar 11, 2007 19:03:46 GMT -5
To let you guys know, this wasn't really Tac's real assault on Lucky. In fact, that wasn't really Tac at all, it was a decoy he made (little did the pups know). You guys are soon to find out what happens next, cos I'll make the next chapter or two this week.
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Post by cw on Mar 12, 2007 22:37:34 GMT -5
OK, I'll wait.
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Post by Belchic on Mar 24, 2007 0:12:02 GMT -5
I apologize for the delay, guys. I'll try to do another chapter next week sometime.
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Post by Belchic on May 6, 2007 0:10:30 GMT -5
Finally, here's Chapter 3!
*The main pups exit.*
Lucky: Do you think Noggin will be able to help us out?
Cadpig: I have my hopes for him.
Lucky: If Tic-Tac made one appearance so easily, that means he's for sure going to come back with something bigger.
*Cut to Tac in his secret lab in the shed.*
Tac: Those foolish pups. Little do they know, I sent out a decoy to distract them. Do they really suspect me to just come out and do something like that? Ha! But this time, I will kill Lucky for real!
*Back to the pups.*
Rolly: We sure are gonna miss you, Lucky.
Lucky: I'm not going to die! At least not yet.
Spot: What if Noggin's plan fails.
Lucky: We'd better come up with a backup plan just in case.
Cadpig: Yeah, we should discuss it.
Lucky: The problem is, there's no place safe for us to do that.
Spot: What do you mean?
Cadpig: We're nowhere near Tac's hideout.
Lucky: True, but he's probably got security cameras hidden all over the farm, so there's probably no way we can hide from him.
*Cut back to Tac.*
Tac: Curses! They're on to me! Now I gotta work quickly!
*Meanwhile, Belchic was off elsewhere, he discovered something rather odd.*
Belchic: That's strange. I don't remember there being a breakaway wall here.
*Tippy enters.*
Tippy: Hey, Belchy.
Belchic: Hi, Tippy.
Tippy: What are you up to?
Belchic: Tip, does this breakaway wall look familiar to you?
Tippy: You know, I don't think I've ever seen it there either.
Belchic: I'll bet something's beyond it...and whatever it is, it's gotta be something Tic-Tac's responsible for.
Tippy: I say we break it away!
Belchic: Do the honors.
*Tippy sets herself up and runs up to the wall and smashes into it, but it doesn't break.*
Tippy: Wow. I thought this was supposed to be a breakaway wall.
Belchic: Let me try it. *Belchic gives it a try, but it still doesn't break.* Hmm...How about we both try hitting it together.
Tippy: Good idea.
*They both run at the wall, and it doesn't break. They back up further and try one more time, and it still doesn't break.*
Tippy: We're supposed to be working as a team, Belchic.
Belchic: I'm trying.
Tippy: But you're not hitting the wall at the same time as me.
Belchic: I can't run as fast as you, Tippy.
Tippy: There's gotta be a way to combine are strengths and hit the wall at the same exact time with the same speed.
Belchic: Hey, I got it!
Tippy: What?
*Belchic grabs Tippy and whispers in her ear.*
Tippy: I like that idea! Let's try it!
*Belchic climbs onto Tippy's shoulders. Tippy stands up.*
Belchic: Now, let's both put our muscles into it!
Tippy: Puppy power!
*Tippy piggybacks Belchic towards the wall as fast as she can as Belchic gets his arms ready. They smash into the wall, and it finally breaks. Belchic falls off of Tippy, but gets up okay.*
Belchic: Fliggity fall! Tear down the wall!
Tippy: We make a great team!
*Belchic discovers a hole in the ground that the wall was covering.*
Belchic: Is this what was being protected?
Tippy: Shall we check it out?
Belchic: I say we should. After you, Tippy.
*Tippy climbs into the hole. Belchic follows her but ends up getting stuck.*
Belchic: Oh, flimshaw.
Tippy: What is it, Belchic?
Belchic: Tippy? I think I'm stuck. Can you give me a hand?
*Tippy grabs Belchic's paws and pulls him through. Belchic successfully gets in.*
Belchic: I love you, Tippy.
Tippy: I love you too, Belchic.
Belchic: Well, now what do we do?
Tippy: Let's start exploring.
*They start walking around.*
Belchic: I hope there aren't any more narrow tunnels. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------- To be continued...
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Post by Trey_Vore on May 6, 2007 2:58:42 GMT -5
I wondered when Tippy would make her appearance. Wonder what'll happen next...? BTW, like the "Flimshaw" line, Belchic.
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