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Post by Belchic on Sept 25, 2007 23:32:31 GMT -5
Nice chapter, Trey! I liked the little reference you made to one of my screenshot running gags. Oh, I have a bad feeling about what Jerko's plotting...
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Post by Two-Tone on Sept 26, 2007 1:33:48 GMT -5
hmm *jumps down from the totem and goes up to Jerko* hi *kicks him in the rear then resumes her position* okay now we can continue
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Post by Nuke on Sept 26, 2007 14:32:53 GMT -5
nice...
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*takes out a small pipe* i wanna see what happens next
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Post by LoneWanderer Raiden on Sept 26, 2007 14:56:29 GMT -5
Lol, nicely done, Trey.
Great King of the Hill(atleast, I think that's what it was) reference aswell. ^^
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Post by Trey_Vore on Nov 4, 2007 0:57:34 GMT -5
Okay, everyone, here's the next part of the fic! Suspense is building here...  (Admist crowd noise)Lucky: Go on, Wizzer! Get up there! Cadpig: You can do it, Wizzer! I believe!  Tripod: He's close... Sonya: Go, Wizzer! Can't stop now! Star: Yes, go please go!  Slayer: He's doin' it! Sanka: You lookin' good, mon! You lookin' good! Lita: You the pup, Wizzer!  Wizzer: (thinks) Oh, man...I can't bear to look down...Oy, my bladder...  Jewel: Wizzer! Wizzer: Huh?  Jewel: TOTALLY don't think about it!! It's bad enough I'm dealing with Dipstick's fleas... Wizzer: Ok ok, sorry... Dipstick: Jewel, it really hurts my fleas when you insult them.  Raiden: Alright, Wizzer! Konami: Ho ho! You are tougher than 5th Grader!  Lucky: Okay Cadpig. Think you can climb on top of Wizzer? Cadpig: Easy peasy.  Star: Get up there, Cadpig! Go on! Roxy: Yeah yeah! You are ace!  (Crowd noise)Wizzer: (mumbles equivalent to "Cadpig...you're stepping all over my face...) Jerko: This will be cooler than the time I gave that parachute-pants supporting Roxy a present...  Jerko: Heh, it turned out to be a shoebox full of old Garbage Pail Kids cards...  (hearing crowd noise)Jerko: What? Those idiots can't be almost done already!  Jerko: I gotta get this sucker into position...  (crowd noise)Jerko: Go on, Unlucky. I'll make a clown out of ya yet! |
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Post by Two-Tone on Nov 4, 2007 1:00:07 GMT -5
Lucky lookout! Jerko's gonna do something bad!
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Post by Belchic on Nov 4, 2007 1:02:29 GMT -5
This does not look good. I think I know exactly what's going to happen!
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Post by Two-Tone on Nov 4, 2007 2:28:59 GMT -5
Think I should kick Jerko in the face?
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Post by babclayman on Nov 4, 2007 8:19:28 GMT -5
Nice Chapter ;D This defiantally should of been a real episode  Can't wait for more. |
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Post by Trey_Vore on Dec 18, 2007 22:14:15 GMT -5
 Tripod: YES! YES! Sonya: Awesome! Star: I knew you could do it!  Slayer: Alright, man! Success! Lita: You go, pups!  Roxy: That's incredible! Sanka: You ganja be tops, yo! Konami: Ho ho, yeah! Raiden: I never doubted you guys!  Noggin: I don't believe it...  Lucky: You didn't think it was possible, but we all finally did it!  Jerko: Well, let me help ya down, then!    Two-Tone: *gasps*  Two-Tone: YYEEEOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWwwwww...  Rolly: Hey Patch, what's Roger's grill doing there? Patch: You got me.  Jerko: Man! I didn't push hard enough!  Two-Tone: (amidst others)...OOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWW...  Patch: Um...Rolly? You are aware that what goes up must come down, right? Rolly: Yeah...  Two-Tone: OOOOWWWW!!!  (dropping bomb sound effect) All: OH, NO!! WE'RE GETTING FIREBOMBED!!!!! |
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Post by Drake on Dec 18, 2007 23:02:42 GMT -5
Heh, as long as my characters don't get wound up into there.....
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Post by Belchic on Dec 18, 2007 23:39:45 GMT -5
 Holy shikes, I've created a monster!
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Post by Blitz on Dec 19, 2007 0:07:05 GMT -5
i'm not trying to bash your style, or your fic, but I don;t like it. I call things like this a script moreso than a fic.
In summary, I personally do not like it, mostly because of the way it is written, but it doesn't mean it's bad.
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Post by Two-Tone on Dec 19, 2007 1:31:26 GMT -5
grr! *grabs Jerko* you wanna play with fire?! *slams JErko's face into Roger's grill then lights it on fire while holding Jerko's face into the grill* How do you like it you jerk!!!!! Does it feel great!?
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Post by Tic-Tac on Dec 19, 2007 1:34:36 GMT -5
grr! *grabs Jerko* you wanna play with fire?! *slams JErko's face into Roger's grill then lights it on fire while holding Jerko's face into the grill* How do you like it you jerk!!!!! Does it feel great!? .....yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeah. |
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How you holding up?