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Post by Lucky on Jun 4, 2018 17:56:54 GMT -5
Okay, after looking through the Descriptions I'm working on in the series, I figured that it didn't make too much sense, imo, but I still like the Ninja Pups Idea and I want to work on that, I went with the ordinary pup route with Tori and her siblings back on Fanfiction.Net and it didn't turn out like I had planned, so the stories were scrapped.
Anyway, few of the stories or some, may not be seeing the light of day, one is that it could be too short, two they may see the light of day but with a different character, etc.
A good example of this is Rescuing Penny or saving Penny, focuses on Shawn, but focuses on the Mountain Lion being an Antagonist. It was too short and I didn't feel like adding more to it, because I felt that it was already complete, the second one is Battle on the Cruise, as I was working on the Description for that, too many questions were asked by myself.
"Why is Captain R. De Vil after Cruella?" "Why was Roger captured by the evil De Vil Pirate?" "How did the Pirates get on board of the Cruise anyway?" etc.
So, I decided to scrap it and go with a Movie Novel instead.
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Post by Lucky on Jun 6, 2018 17:03:39 GMT -5
This what the stories will be, Bab.
Season 1
1-3 The Farm Life Trilogy, A three part story that focuses on Balance, Shawn, Blake and Shane's first time on the farm, as they try to adjust to the Farm life and living with 95 of their adoptive siblings and parents, and being in the Bark Brigade as well. However a mysterious enemy wants to find them and will stop at nothing to do so.
4. The Christmas Pup. After meeting their new friends, Shawn decides to do something nice for his friends and get something nice for them, however the price for the item that he wants is way too high for him to get it, sad and desperate to get the gift, meets someone he hasn't met before and makes an agreement, but comes to realize that something is fishy about him and his cohorts when they start messing with his family.
5. The Nightmare. Shawn's been having Nightmares about his mother since he feels guilty for not being there for her, Balance notices this and tries to help him out, but what they don't know is that Cruella De Vil, Swamp Rat, Steven The Alligator isn't the only threat out there that would plan on harming them.
6. Mack's Vengence. After feeling betrayed by Sheila and losing Helen, Mack plans to get his Vengence on the pups that have crossed him.
7. Blake's Journey: This actually involves Blake trying to be someone else, but when dangerous enemies attack, Blake learns that if he wants to defend the farm, he has to be himself.
8. Shane the Naturalist: Shane always liked Nature, but someone or something is out to destroy it.
9. Enter Burai, Based on the Shredder Strikes, A German Shepherd has set his eyes on Gruteley and is ready to take on any formidable opponent, TJ warns the pups that a dangerous enemy has appeared in the city, but due to Balance's and Shawn's argument about Obeying TJ's orders or not, Balance storms out to get some fresh air only to get a notice from Burai and has to think about his decision, but almost nearly killing her own sibling leads them to a fight with Burai that could spell the end of their existence forever.
10. Enter August. August has set his eyes on the farm, and the Dearly Pups along with Pongo and Perdy, but due to his last failed attempt (Haven't really decided on the Party Crashers RP or the RP that me and my sister are doing, yet.) Plans to make one last deal with the Dearly's, if they are willing to join, all well and good, if not, there's a price to pay for going up against the Followers of Anubis.
11. Be Careful of what you wish for: The Pups feel unappreciated by some of the pups at the barn, they wish that they were never born, TJ reminds them that wishes are powerful and not to be trifulled with, only for the pups are seeing what the world would be like without them, with the help of their mother.
12-13. Shawn's Choice In this two part story, Shawn has dreams that he and his father would meet again, but Balance, Blake, Shane and Lucy reassure him that he'll be safe when their together, but during a mission that they heard from Jerry, has the siblings separate only for Shawn to confront his father again, but there's a proposal that Shawn can't turn down otherwise his family and friends will get it.
Season 2
14. Adventures in Puppysitting. Lucy insists that Annabelle takes a break from being a mother after realizing that she has been sleep deprived, as she takes care of little Abby, but when Abby goes and leaves Lucy alone while she sleeps, Chaos ensues as she tries to find Abby before Annabelle finds out and before the Coyotes get her.
15. A mate for Valentines Day. *Complete.* It's Valentine's Day, the day of Love and caring, Shawn is excited that he gets to spend it with Renee, a Wolf pup he met when he and his siblings met Ban, Hoji, Shen, Jasmine and Umeko, but what he finds out isn't exactly what he wants to see or hear with his own eyes and ears, it's up to Jewel to cheer him up.
16. Trouble at the Farm. Balance, Shawn, Blake and Shane sees that Astrid a human that hates them with a purple passion has come to the farm to order Anita and Roger to either get rid of their Dalmatians or pay a fine of $3,217 for the farm, realizing this, Shawn tries to find a way to earn that money while Balance and Clayton try to keep him in line.
17. Lucky's date with Two-Tone. *Complete.* Balance along with Shawn tries to have Lucky's date with Two-Tone go along as perfectly as they possibly can with a little help from their brother Blake, however, Mooch and Turner tries to sabotage the date, with Hilarity ensues.
18. Adventures in Cyberspace. Shawn realizes now that Luca is on the farm, Balance doesn't want to spend time with him, but he had a few tricks up his paw that would allow him to spend as much time with his sister as much as he wants, but Shadow, Autumn, Balance, Shawn, Blake and Shane are going to find out that there's something dangerous lurking on Roger's computer.
19. Pup and Cat Alliance Shane has to escort Kurt, Kirby and Thomasina to their owner while avoding the on slaught of Coyotes and Lt. Pug. Marks Jeremy's First Appearance.
20. Attack of the Coyotes Balance leaves the farmhouse only to get some exercise, but as Shawn, Blake and Shane waits for her safe return, she gets ambushed by a group of Coyotes led by their father Damon, as the fight ensues, Balance races back to the farmhouse, it's a fight to the finish as she tries to warn TJ, Pongo, Perdita and her siblings about the Coyote onslaught.
21. Damon Strikes Back. *Based on Shredder Strikes Back Part 1 and 2.* Damon has ordered the Coyotes to attack the farm, Dearly's and his pups, now it's the fight for their lives and survival as the pups, Pongo, Perdy, Roger, Anita and Nanny try to fight for their lives to survive the onslaught.
22. Tales from the Past. *Based on the tales of Leo.* After arriving to a safe unknown area in Gruteley, where Anita's aunt used to live, Shawn, Blake, Shane and TJ tries to talk to Balance in order for her to come back to them, by having her remember the times she was with them.
23. Return to Gruteley *Based on the Return to New York.* Balance and her siblings along with Kendra, Torrance, Lucy, Lucky and Two-Tone tries to convince Pongo, Perdita and TJ that it's time to go back to the farm, but only for Balance to realize that the battle won't be easy since she would have to go up against one pup she had thought would be her ally.
24. Ultimate Battle Part 1 *With Race's Permission of course.* August hasn't given up on exterminating the Human Race, but now he has help in doing so, the Dearly's are up for a challenge that they never will forget, a challenge that they will have to accept rather they would want to or not
25. Mother and Son August checks out the Dearly farm for the third time only to encounter Perdita, he reveals part of his origin to her and the plan only for her to rebuttal against it, then he goes to check up on the subject that he and his allies have captured.
26. Ultimate Battle Part 2 *With Trey's, Belchic's, Bab's and Nuke's permission.* August puts his plans into motion as he along with Epsilon tries to take over the planet, however despite Clayton's and Kendra's Chagrin, Shawn decides to make a deal with the Heartbreakers in order to help them out.
Season 3
27. Astrid's Revenge. After losing her money's worth, she decides to join forces with Mr. Big and Ms. Dibbs in getting revenge on the Dearly's, however she would have to get rid of Lucky, Two-Tone, Balance, Shawn, Blake and Shane in order to execute with her plans, however that's where her two associates come in.
28. Biff's Revenge. On a Training run, Lucky, Shawn, Blake, Shane and Balance take a training session into a Junk Yard, where they encounter Burai.
29. Night with Tara. What turns out to be a date, becomes a Nightmare for Tara, as the organization is after them both.
30. The Night in the City: Lucky and Balance decides to check out the City Life at night, but it turns out that an Experiment is out as well.
31. The Dream Blake has been having dreams where he and his siblings drift apart due to a disaster that destroyed the Dearly Farm, however Balance, Shawn, Shane, Lucy and Two-Tone assures him that there's one thing that would keep them together.
32. The Homeless: While exploring a Junkyard, Shane notices a Stray that wants to find a home, but a Pit Bull wants to prove that he's more of a challenge to Shane.
33. Goodbye Jerry, till we meet again. Jerry decides that it's time to head out as he has an owner to see, however Balance, Shawn, Blake and Shane isn't ready for him to go as they travel with him to his owner's house, only to find out that it's not as good as they thought it would be.
34. Controlling Balance's Anger. Balance has changed since she was away, TJ, along with Shawn, Blake, Shane, Torrance and Lucy have tried to comfort her and let the anger inside her die out, but during one of her training sessions with TJ, she strikes TJ only for him to see that she was right, and lets her go to see an old friend of his, meanwhile Rhonda plans an attack on the farm in order to honor her masters Damon and Burai.
35. Tales of Damon and Jenna. During a Power Outage, Balance recollects what was told to her by their Aunt and Uncle when she went to visit them before the events of Stories 1 through 3, telling not only her brothers and TJ but 95 of her adopted siblings and parents as well of their origin.
36. A Poodle appears, Astrid's been transformed into a dog?? After getting upset with Astrid's failure, Mr. Big decides to dispose of her as he takes her to P.H. De Vil to do so, however instead of vaporizing her, a Poodle somehow got into the machine with Astrid and now Astrid's been transformed, only to get revenge on Balance, Shawn, Blake and Shane along with Mr. Big and Ms. Dibbs.
37. Lone Shawn and Kitten: Shawn stumbles upon a stray kitten, but while he tries to take it to it's mom, a group of dogs plan to take the kitten for dinnertime.
38-39. Time Rift. Shadow, Cecilia, Rosalina, Doc, Balance and her siblings learn that PH De Vil has built a device that will allow them to go through time, but uses it for Cruella to go back and try to convince the Dearly's to stay at the Bachelor Pad that Roger has so she could have the farm, Balance, her siblings and her friends decide to travel back in time to save the past from altering their future.
Season 4
40: The Coyote Siblings. After a battle with the Coyotes, Balance and her siblings meet Ban and his siblings, but little do they know, the five coyote pups are keeping a secret that could change Balance's, Shawn's, Blake's and Shane's lives forever.
41. Computer Bursts? Ruckus and Rackus in Reality?? When Ivy comes to visit the Dearly's, Balance, Shawn, Blake and Shane realizes that she's up to something when she releases her virus's into the real world after extracting them from Roger's computer in order to get rid of the Dalmatians once and for all.
42. Cowabunga Burai. Burai gets bumped in the head and believes that he's Blake as the real Blake leaves the farm to blow off some steam knowing that they had to share the farm with their old enemy, Autumn goes to comfort him reminding him that even though they have broken up, Autumn is still willing to give him a paw when he needs it. While Balance, Shawn, Shane and Burai tries to ruin his own evil scheme as long as they don't say his name. Just so I can throw in some humor into this story.
43. I was in an Alternate Reality While talking to Two-Tone and Lucky, Balance and her siblings are attacked by Biff and Astrid, as they travel through different worlds and time in order to get back to where they came.
44. Tournament. *Based on the Battle Nexus Tournament Parts 1-4.* TJ goes off somewhere only for Balance, Shawn, Blake and Shane to follow him to a bunch of warehouses, where they enter a Tournament to prove themselves worthy of the championship.
45. Gruteley at war Rhonda realizing that she's the only one that can control her kind, she decides to have the aid of Balance, Shawn, Blake and Shane in order to stop a war that could end Gruteley, while the street dogs and the Coyotes fight each other, however Balance, Shawn, Shane and Blake has a decision to make one that would aid Rhonda to save Gruteley or destroy it if they don't.
46. Battle at the Warehouse. After being beaten by his offspring, Damon decides that there's only one thing next. "Revenge."
47. Shane's Nightmares. *Based on what I thought actually happened when I was a kid.* Shane has finally fixed up the Force Field Generator but there's something odd going on that even Shane himself can't see.
48.Coping After a few days during their fight with August, Shawn realizes that Balance was right, Renee has gotten over him real quick and isn't really interested in getting back together with him, but he soon realizes that he has something that she doesn't.
49. Jogging Diamond's Memory: With Shane's help, Diamond was able to recover her memory, but what they find out is something that Diamond would rather forget.
50. Chunin Exam: It's the final exam that TJ is giving his students, but there's one small problem, only Balance, Shawn and Shane are graduating from their Bark Brigade Training, when the Doberman catches Blake watching TV, but is going to give Blake one last chance to redeem himself by finding three pieces of a certain object, but can he do it when his siblings are guarding the three objects?
51-52: Exodus. Burai plans on stealing a rocket in order to find another planet to rule, but Balance, Shawn, Blake, Shane, TJ, Lucky, Rolly, Cadpig, TT and Spot has to find a way to stop Burai at all costs in order to stop his evil plan of taking over another planet and Earth, but they would have to face the Guard Dogs and Rhonda along with Hun and Tatsu in order to get to Burai.
Season 5
53. Nightmares Recycled: Lucky, Two-Tone, Shawn and Shane goes out to find a device that Shane needs to get a piece for Rogers and Anita's Nephew's invention up and running, as they run into Lambo, who is not keen with facing off against an old foe... His own Brother.
54. Games Galore: A Mysterious Package arrives for the pups of the barn, Balance, Shawn, Blake and Shane are the first ones to try it, but Carla is curious on who sent a package to them.
55. The Frog and The Scorpion: Balance, Shawn, Blake and Shane finally meet their counterparts again that went back to August confronting Mr. Big and Ms. Dibbs, but something is wrong when Johnny saves Carla from being attacked.
56. P.H. De Vil's Final Assault Plan: P.H. De Vil plans to strike the Farm in order to impress Malevolent De Vil, meanwhile Pongo tries to spend tine with his children.
57. Halloween Tales: Blake tells two ghost stories, that he claims to be true to three Pups.
58. Going to Play MMO: Shane develops a device that would allow the pups to experience Virtual Reality, but a glitch causes the pups to stay in the game, they can escape, but in order to do that, they need to finish the game.
59. Forget me not: Something is wrong when everyonue has no idea who the pups are, Jeremy seems to have the answer, but a battle for the Antidote begins when Rhonda and the Coyotes get involved.
60. A Heart of Gold: Blake meets a disabled kid, who's in a wheelchair, Blake does his best to impress the kid.
61. Lt. Pug's Blues: While trying to figure out the enemies next move, Lt. Pug interfere's only to think that Balance and her siblings are with the cats, despite TJ's and Two-Tone's not believing this, Lt. Pug drags Tripod along to follow Balance and her siblings to prove that he's right only to find something that one thought never exists.
62. Brains VS Brawn: Shane realizes that he has a competition with a Pit Bull who thinks brute strength is what makes a situation easy, Shane sets out to prove him wrong.
63. Taking it way too far: Blake meets a pup that has an Austrailan Accent with a Dalmatian pup by his side, who likes to troll people, Blake has to stop them in order to keep them from getting trouble, but what if one trick ticked off the wrong group of dogs.
64-65. Duel of the Pups. This is it, the final battle that will determine the Human Race's fate, with the help with their own allies, Balance and her siblings will have to do something that will bring their enemies to the farm, but they will have to take on the most dangerous pup in all of Gruteley.
Novels
Novel 1. Kim Strikes Back. Balance, Shawn, Blake and Shane have drifted apart, since the defeat of their own enemy, Burai, but TJ wishes for the siblings to work together again as they have a new enemy to face, an enemy that they have not known since their existence... An older sister.
Novel 2. August's Last Stand. August has learned that Ms. Dibbs has bailed Mr. Big out of jail before his service was up, which leads him to lash out at the Dearly's for their code of not wanting to kill him off, but also learns that this will also lead into an all out war in Gruteley as well where all the humans will mistreat their dogs if something isn't done. *Based on Movies 2 and 3 of X-Men.*
Novel 3: Days of Future's Past. In this story, the Dalmatians are in deep trouble as they join forces with the Followers of Anubis for one last battle as they battle an onslaught of robotic puppy toys in order to clear their name, however one question remains, who's willing to go back into the past and warn the Dearly's and stop the monster that unleashed the Robotic Hounds in the first place?
Novel 4, 101 Dalmatians TS, The Movie: Kenway tells Pongo and Perdita that they along with Roger and Anita have won a free cruise, but something goes wrong, who set it up and why?
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Post by Lucky on Aug 30, 2018 6:49:43 GMT -5
Battle aboard the Cruise.
I have to say this wasn't really what I had expected when I was making a description of the story, it was suppose to be Captain R. De Vil's first appearance, the idea was that the Dearly's would win a cruise for a week, only for Cruella to join them, where she reveals that her brother was removed cause he loved the open sea, robbing any cruise or ship that was in his sight, Balance, Shawn, Blake and Shane, along with Two-Tone and Lucky, Roger and Anita would tangle with Pirates as they try to find out what Captain R. De Vil wants with Roger and Cruella.
This would also be Kenway's first appearance, just like a character from a Video Game, he isn't very friendly till the end.
As the pups goes to rescue Roger and Cruella, Shawn makes his first kill in the series. Something that he goes and breaks that Balance, Shawn, Blake and Shane. When I was making this story, I pictured that Captain R. De Vil would've been injured unable to move, and knowing that the Pirate would be dangerous, Shawn would attack.
Even though this story may not get made, Balance somehow knows about the killing of one of Cruella's Relatives.
But strangely, this was suppose to be a Musical Episode.
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Post by babclayman on Aug 31, 2018 5:34:05 GMT -5
I have some questions, on this Story.
One is, you claim this Pirate Devil was taken from the Family, cause of his Pirate Activities. Considering, what the other members of the Devil Family is like (with the possible exception of Cecil B. Devil), why would they take issue with Captain R. Devil?
In the case of what you claim with Shawn, considering you said Captain R. would be injured, I assume the Hikari Pups would have been taught some sense of honour, especially when an opponent is injured like that. Cause, if what I read about the context of that scene is correct, that sounds more like some thing Damon would do. Or, would this be considered as some type of “Start Of Darkness”, with Shawn?
Like you post, though; The Story above is not Canon.
With the idea of it being a Musical Episode, it now makes me think of the “Sky Pirates” Episode, Of Duck Tales!
May I ask, what Episodes do you plan to write up, Shawn?
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Post by Lucky on Aug 31, 2018 6:11:11 GMT -5
1. That's a big question, even I don't know, but chances are, they know that he's after their blood or their own Treasure. But since I saw Curse of the Black Pearl, I'd say their blood, mostly because there's something wrong in the membrane and he wants to see if his own blood would lead him to a secret treasure that even Cruella doesn't know about, but for Roger (If you're curious about him.) He was suppose to be the Navigator to the Cove that led toward the hidden Treasure that R. DeVil knew about.
2. It does sound like something Damon would do, Bab, but keep in mind that Shawn is Damon's son, so he does have a war raging inside himself, so it's the temptation of a life time for Damon if not for Shawn, but yeah, this would be actually considered a start in Shawn's turn toward the dark side, as the series finale would've had it to where Shawn somehow turned toward the dark side and judging from the files I still have, Two-Tone, Lucky, Cadpig, Rolly, Balance, Shane, Blake, Clayton, Kendra and Jewel would've tried to get him back, despite him trying to impress his father by capturing both Kendra and Clayton, from there, they would convince Shawn that Damon isn't the father that Shawn needs as Pongo was more of a father to him than Damon.
True.
Hmm, I didn't know that "Sky Pirates." from Duck Tales was a Musical Episode, don't worry, about spoilers, cause I think that the Sky Pirates would sing in Tailspin at one point.
As for the episodes, there are 9 Stories that I planned on writing that never got done and probably won't be done.
I'll be posting them here.
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Post by Lucky on Sept 1, 2018 19:58:47 GMT -5
Protecting Penny
This story actually focus' on Shawn's fear, as he tries to protect Penny despite her telling him not too, when I watched the Scene where a Tiger was taken from it's cage and was implied killed in the 101 Dalmatians, then I heard about animals escaping from the Zoo, and heard about a Mountain Lion attacking an Omega Wolf, it gave me an idea.
What if Shawn actually was watching TV as he channel surfed and was worried about Penny's safety since he was afraid the Mountain Lion would get her? The idea stuck with me in 2012 all the way up to 2014. But as I wrote the idea, it was too short, more like a one shot like. "Mate for Valentine's Day.", "Lucky's date with Two-Tone." and "Mother and Son." however it would've been a short version right after Captain wakes Shawn up. It would've been like 1, 2 or 3 pages long.
But Shawn confesses to Penny on why he was protecting her and try to outsmart the Main Antagonist of the story which was a Mountain Lion that escaped from the zoo.
The reason I've decided not to do this, is because I'm working on the Five Steps to Acceptance with Raven, Hunter, Sam and Taylor. Which has the same brotherly and sisterly bond that both Hunter and Penny share and it would be like retelling that story again.
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Post by Lucky on Sept 28, 2018 18:43:28 GMT -5
August Origin
August's Origin, was suppose to be a dark origin story, we find ut what happened to him when he was a young pup, giving him more sympathy than hate, he's still the way he is, dipping his paw in his victim's blood and actually drawing a circle and placing his own paw print inside it, similar to how Cletus Kassidy did, except he would put in. "CK" that would either stand for his name or Carnage Killer. To indicate that he was here in the area.
But he didn't really go insane when he was born, he was kind, he loved the humans and knew that his original owners before he was taken away, loved him, even though his owner's 2 Year Old granddaughter would be rough on him whenever she was around.
We find out that he grew insane in the membrane and hating the human race, cause the two humans that stoled and adopted him killed his mother with a long ranged weapon sending a bullet toward her head and leaving his siblings with an unknown fate.
The hate further grows when Mr. Big abuses him each time he lost a fight, causing him to resent his owners more and more as time went on, Jonathan seeing this, would teach August how to defend himself, but warns him that if he wants to get close to Mr. Big to deliever the slice and dice, he had to keep losing the matches.
Which August actually agrees, but pretty soon, Mr. Big comes in with a switchblade giving August the look we know from Seifer and Squall to this day, he has a scar that's similar to Seifer's more than anything. After running off, the insanity actually kicks in when he see's his reflection in the water, revealing the scar that Mr. Big actually inflected on him.
He wants to get his revenge on the owners as he rushes back to the house, as soon as Mr. Big and Ms. Dibs finds out that something has changed inside August, they send in Mack (One of the killers of Jenna.), causing a fight to break out as they escape.
August wins the fight and warns Mack to stay out of his way, now August had already recruited Pulse, Jason, David and Rocky, as they go on a rampage in the city that they were in, having enough of the Chaos around them, Jason, David and Rocky leaves while Pulse stays behind.
From there, we actually see a Graphic Scene between August and a pup as they argue only ending with August killing it in the process, revealing that he has no remorse, he has no Jiminy Cricket by his side to tell him from right and wrong. Now the epic fight, this I wanted to bring up at the end of the story, I wanted to show the people that these are pretty much wild, people say that Wolves are wild, and indeed they are, but keep in mind, you wouldn't want to cross paths with a Wolf or a Coyote.
In the fight, I wanted to show that the Coyote is a serious Canine, Rhonda was the Main Antagonist in the story as August duels with her and loses the match but unlike him, Rhonda doesn't go for the kill right away, she would keep him alive long enough for him to see what it's like to face a strong opponent and leaves him to die on his own.
TJ learns about this past from August as they become friends, but August warns TJ that there will be peace but without the human race.
With this story, I wanted people to know that Animal Abuse is out there. But while I was thinking of the abuse that the animals endure but still love their masters or mistresses, I thought what if there was a pup that couldn't stand it? What if that pup wanted to get rid of the abuse by ridding the world of the human race?? That's what this story was about. Yes, this story is darker and edgier than the stories I've written. But since I guess people already know the Origin, I don't think this story is needed.
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Post by Lucky on Apr 9, 2020 8:04:53 GMT -5
What I may do is a short series focusing on one pup at a time, after looking up some Comics I've noticed some characters have a story arc of their own, and I may do the same with Turner, Lucy, Tara and Lisbeth along with Renee and the other OC's of mine, it should fill in the gaps that I may have missed or will miss.
But the stories will just be five Stories, focusing on the pups themselves for example.
Turner Story Link to Story 1 Link to Story 2 Link to Story 3 Link to Story 4 Link to Story 5
While I'm still thinking if I should continue with Blake's and August's stories and still stumped on Shane's story, I'm still working on Episode 9, but also thinking, if I should also do this for a time being as well, cause I feel that while people will get to know Balance, Shawn, Blake and Shane, it would delve down deeper into each characters backstory or depict what the characters are like more. ^^
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