Post by luckyfanpup101 on Jun 1, 2008 15:41:38 GMT -5
A/N: This is my first 101 Dalmatians fanfic, so it may or may not be all that great. If you have any suggestions for improvement, please let me know.
Now That You're Gone
Chapter
Lucky paced back and forth across the barn, his eyes cast to the floor as his mind buzzed over and over again in his head. Rolly was gone. That was that. To Lucky, it seemed like an impossibility. Though Rolly had been the weakest of his gang nor the brightest, it seemed wrong to have him out of the group. The only members left now were Cadpig, Spot, Two-Tone, and Rebecca.
He was thinking about kicking Spot out of the group since she did nothing to contribute to them. Besides, wtih Rolly they had had six members, but now the number of the group was uneven and Lucky would have to debunk of the members to make the number even again. He knew without a doubt that everyone would most likely vote Spot out, but he couldn't be too sure since Cadpig and Spot were close friends.
He kept pacing until he heard a voice.
"Lucky, you okay?"
He turned to see Rebecca behind him.
"Yeah, I'm fine," he replied. "Why would I not be?"
She walked closer to him.
"You seem stressed," she reported.
"Do I look stressed?" he asked.
She looked at his restless face. He hadn't slept or eaten in days.
"Yeah, you do look stressed, pumpkin," she replied. "Why do you not lay down and get some rest or at least eat a bite or two? Here,"
She pushed a bowl of kibble towards him and he pushed it back to her.
"No, I'm fine," he told her.
"Lucky, you've got to be hungry," she stated heavily. "You haven't eaten or slept in almost a week."
"Lucky, I'm not letting yourself go just because Rolly's gone. Here's what you're going to do: You're going to get over it and continue on with your life. Got that? That's exactly waht you're going to do."
"Says you,"
"Lucky, please,"
"Look, I'm exhausted. I'm going to go take a nap."
"Good idea,"
Lucky walked over to a pile of hay and walked in circles several times like a cat before finally laying down.
Rebecca approached him. He rose up and looked at her.
"What?" he asked.
"Join me for supper afterward?" she asked.
"Yeah, sure,"
She gave him a lick on the face and walked out of the barn, leaving Lucky by himself.
A/N: You'll notice that this is double spaced. This is because it makes it easier to read. I'll be sure to post chapter 2 as soon as possible. Until then, read and review.
Now That You're Gone
Chapter
Lucky paced back and forth across the barn, his eyes cast to the floor as his mind buzzed over and over again in his head. Rolly was gone. That was that. To Lucky, it seemed like an impossibility. Though Rolly had been the weakest of his gang nor the brightest, it seemed wrong to have him out of the group. The only members left now were Cadpig, Spot, Two-Tone, and Rebecca.
He was thinking about kicking Spot out of the group since she did nothing to contribute to them. Besides, wtih Rolly they had had six members, but now the number of the group was uneven and Lucky would have to debunk of the members to make the number even again. He knew without a doubt that everyone would most likely vote Spot out, but he couldn't be too sure since Cadpig and Spot were close friends.
He kept pacing until he heard a voice.
"Lucky, you okay?"
He turned to see Rebecca behind him.
"Yeah, I'm fine," he replied. "Why would I not be?"
She walked closer to him.
"You seem stressed," she reported.
"Do I look stressed?" he asked.
She looked at his restless face. He hadn't slept or eaten in days.
"Yeah, you do look stressed, pumpkin," she replied. "Why do you not lay down and get some rest or at least eat a bite or two? Here,"
She pushed a bowl of kibble towards him and he pushed it back to her.
"No, I'm fine," he told her.
"Lucky, you've got to be hungry," she stated heavily. "You haven't eaten or slept in almost a week."
"Lucky, I'm not letting yourself go just because Rolly's gone. Here's what you're going to do: You're going to get over it and continue on with your life. Got that? That's exactly waht you're going to do."
"Says you,"
"Lucky, please,"
"Look, I'm exhausted. I'm going to go take a nap."
"Good idea,"
Lucky walked over to a pile of hay and walked in circles several times like a cat before finally laying down.
Rebecca approached him. He rose up and looked at her.
"What?" he asked.
"Join me for supper afterward?" she asked.
"Yeah, sure,"
She gave him a lick on the face and walked out of the barn, leaving Lucky by himself.
A/N: You'll notice that this is double spaced. This is because it makes it easier to read. I'll be sure to post chapter 2 as soon as possible. Until then, read and review.