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Post by Belchic on Oct 10, 2008 21:06:23 GMT -5
Anyway, here's Chapter 5:
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Ember followed the trail to Fang's cave. Joey and Belchic went ahead and crept in, but Ember stood outside. They quietly looked around and eventually saw Lizzie and Tippy locked up in a cage.
Lizzie: *wagging her tail with excitement* I knew our boyfriends would come for us.
Belchic: What happened here?
Tippy: It's a long story. I'll explain later. Right now, you've got to...
Belchic: Don't worry; we'll get you out of here.
Tippy: No! Belchic, listen to me. You guys have to go back and tell Lucky about this and have him send a big team out to save us.
Belchic: But why do that when we can just get you out right now?
Tippy: There's no time to explain. You have to go do that!
Belchic: No! I won't leave you here!
All of a sudden, there was a loud roar, and Fang appeared from nowhere.
Fang: Well, well, well! What do you know? More puppies for my big feast!
Joey: F-f-f-f-f-feast?
Tippy: Yes. He wants to eat us!
Fang: Come here, puppies!
Belchic: Run, Joey!
Belchic and Joey ran out of the cave. Belchic managed to escape, but Joey fell into one of Fang's traps.
Fang: Dang it! I missed one of them! Oh, well. I'm sure more will come.
Belchic got out of the cave and looked around for Ember.
Belchic: Ember! Ember! *no response* Oh, man, she ditched us!
He then realized Joey was missing.
Belchic: Oh no! Joey!
He then started to head back into the cave but then remembered what Tippy told him.
Belchic: This is the job for all the dalmatians. I gotta get some reinforcements.
Belchic then heard Fang's roar. He sounded close, so he ran as fast as he could. Just then, out of nowhere, Ember swooped in, scooped Belchic onto her back and carried him back to the farm. Back at the farm, Lucky, Rolly, Cadpig and Spot were watching TV. Belchic then came storming in.
Belchic: Guys! We've got an emergency!
Belchic told them everything and then told Lucky to assemble as many pups as he could for this mission. So, he did.
Lucky: Listen up, everybody. Tippy, Joey and Lizzie have been kidnapped by a wolf, and he's determined to eat them. We all need to work together and try to find them and get them out before it's too late. Now, before we go, let's do a roll call. Rolly?
Rolly: Here.
Lucky: Cadpig?
Cadpig: Here.
Lucky: Two-Tone?
Two-Tone: Here.
Lucky: Jewel?
Jewel: Here.
Lucky: Patch?
Patch: Here.
Lucky: Belchic?
Belchic: Here.
Lucky: Noggin?
Noggin: Here.
Lucky: Roxy?
Roxy: Here.
Lucky: Dakota?
Dakota: Here.
Lucky: Raiden?
Raiden: Here.
Lucky: Sonya?
Sonya: Here.
Lucky: Sneezy?
Sneezy: Here.
Lucky: Stickdip?
Stickdip: Here.
Lucky: Silky?
Silky: Here.
Lucky: Clip?
Clip: *waves*
Lucky: Star?
Star: Here.
Lucky: Nuke?
Nuke: Here.
Lucky: Drake? *silence* Drake? *still no response* DRAKE???
Rolly: It looks like Drake ditched us again.
Cadpig: Why am I not surprised? I oughta have a talk with that so-called rebel!
Lucky: Okay, everyone, let's all split up and search for our friends!
So they all embarked on their rescue.
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To be continued...
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Post by LoneWanderer Raiden on Oct 11, 2008 1:11:27 GMT -5
Hm, a rescue party, huh? Well, let's hope they're able to save Joey, Lizzie and Tippy. Great work, man. Keep it up. ^^ Oh, and thanks for including my characters. ^^^Read Above Belch: Edited to include Tippy^^^
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Post by Belchic on Oct 11, 2008 9:15:02 GMT -5
Hm, a rescue party, huh? Well, let's hope they're able to save Joey and Lizzie. Great work, man. Keep it up. ^^ Oh, and thanks for including my characters. Oh, so you don't care about Tippy? Well, I don't think I'll have a new chapter up for a while due to other stuff I need to focus on.
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Post by Deleted on Oct 11, 2008 9:17:04 GMT -5
ok....hey Belchic will you be useing mny of my charsecters in this?
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Post by LoneWanderer Raiden on Oct 12, 2008 0:21:24 GMT -5
Hm, a rescue party, huh? Well, let's hope they're able to save Joey and Lizzie. Great work, man. Keep it up. ^^ Oh, and thanks for including my characters. Oh, so you don't care about Tippy? Well, I don't think I'll have a new chapter up for a while due to other stuff I need to focus on. You know, Belch, I have a feeling you just like getting on my sh*t... I accidentally forgot to mention Tippy, ok? I was kinda pressed for time before I could fix it. Does that mean I don't care about her? Did I even say that? No and no. Point is, I gave you a flippin' compliment. Geez... I really don't need this after just getting off work. -_- Oh yeah, and you're welcome by the way....
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Post by Belchic on Oct 12, 2008 0:42:02 GMT -5
Geez, Raiden! I was just joking!
Anyway, I have my next chapter planned, but I have no idea when I'm going to be able to post it.
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Post by LoneWanderer Raiden on Oct 12, 2008 0:46:55 GMT -5
Well, you coulda let me know... Don't do that. You know I'm more likely to take stuff like that seriously if you don't atleast hint these things out.
'Sides, I'm tired. Sorry if I snapped at ya. Like I said, I took it the wrong way. We cool?
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Post by Belchic on Oct 13, 2008 1:17:06 GMT -5
Chapter 6
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While the search party went out into the woods to save the three missing pups, Joey, Lizzie and Tippy were left hanging in a net on a tree near Fang's cave.
Joey: Oh...I'm too nervous.
Lizzie: I'm also afraid as to what might happen!
Tippy: Don't worry, guys. I trust Belchic, and he'll get us out of here.
Of course, luck would they know it, it wasn't too long until they were spotted by someone. A familiar voice was heard from behind the tree.
Voice: Guys! Oh, thank goodness I found you!
Joey: Who's there?
Voice: It's me, Roxy.
It was indeed. Roxy was the first one to spot the pups, and she revealed herself by coming onto the limb.
Lizzie: Can you get us out of here?
Roxy: I can try.
Roxy swung down from the limb hanging upside down from her legs. She began to chew a hole in the net with her teeth. After chewing off a little, she got tuckered out.
Roxy: Well, that's as much as I can do. I don't think my teeth can take much more of that rope.
Lizzie: Sucks that that hole isn't big enough for us to fit through.
Tippy: Wait. Maybe Joey can fit through.
Joey: Me? But what if I get stuck?
Tippy: Don't worry. We'll help you. What are friends for?
Joey: Okay, I'll do it.
Joey started squeezing through the hole, and he was able to fit.
Roxy: Come on, Joey. Grab my hands.
Joey tried as hard as he could, but he couldn't reach Roxy.
Joey: It's no use! I can't reach!
Tippy: Here, Joey. Let me help.
Tippy picked up Joey and reached him out just far enough so that he could grab onto Roxy. He then climbed over Roxy onto the limb. Roxy pulled herself back up.
Joey: Thanks for the lift!
Roxy: You are one of the few I can.
Lizzie: Hey! What about us?
Roxy: You two, sit tight. We're going to find Belchic and Noggin. I know where they are, and they'll know what to do.
Joey: That's kind of a long way down, isn't it.
Roxy: Joey, get on my back and hold on tight.
Joey did so, and Roxy slid down the tree trunk and started running off.
Roxy: We'll be back in a flash!
Joey: Say, Roxy, you really went out of your way to help me.
Roxy: All in a day's work, I always say.
Joey: I'm not too heavy, am I, Roxy?
Roxy: Are you kidding? You're lighter than Star! Don't tell her I said that.
Eventually, Roxy found Noggin and Belchic and they quickly ran back to Tippy and Lizzie.
Tippy: I knew you'd come back, Belchy!
Belchic: We've got everything under control. Noggin, would you do the honors?
Noggin: With pleasure. *he tries several times to blast lasers out of his sunglasses, but nothing happens* Uh-oh. I must have forgotten to recharge these things.
Roxy: Well, we'll need to think of an alternative.
Belchic: I got it! Tippy!
Tippy: What?
Belchic: You're skinny enough to slip through one of those holes, aren't you?
Tippy: I am? *looks at her body* I mean, I am.
Belchic got underneath the net.
Belchic: I want you to trust me. Slip through that little hole. I'll be waiting down here to catch you.
Tippy closed her eyes and said a prayer to herself. She hesitantly slipped down through that little hole. Unfortunately, she got her head stuck.
Tippy: Oh, I should have seen this coming!
Lizzie: Mind if I lended a paw?
Lizzie started to push Tippy down.
Noggin: Uh...I don't think that's the best solution, but whatever works.
Lizzie pushed with all her might until finally, Tippy popped out and fell right into Belchic's arms.
Belchic: Ta-daa! *puts Tippy down* See? I told you I'd get you out of there.
Tippy: *picks up Belchic* I didn't doubt you for a second, Belchy!
Belchic: What did I tell you, Noggin?
Noggin: Nothing.
Belchic: I am the master of solving problems!
Noggin: And I'm Mary Queen of Scotts!
Belchic and Tippy joined the group.
Belchic: I guess now we can get back with the others and head on home?
Noggin: Yeah, sure. Then everything will get all happy and dandy...DIDN'T YOU FORGET ABOUT LIZZIE???
Belchic: Dear Abby! You're right!
Noggin: "Dear Abby"?
Belchic: Noggin, do you have your pocket knife with you?
Noggin: Sure do.
Noggin pulled out his pocket knife and then slipped on his jet pack.
Noggin: Let's go, Afterburners!
He attempted to start the jet pack, but it failed.
Noggin: I guess it must be Friday the 13th.
Belchic: Wait a sec. I got a plan. Tippy, I want you to stand under the net. I'm going to run up to you while holding Noggin's pocket knife. When I get to you, I want you to boost me up to the net, and I'll cut the net open to set Lizzie free.
Tippy: You got it, Belch.
She went to her position.
Noggin: Gee, Belchic, I thought maybe your plan would be for us to stack up on one another and the one on top would cut the net.
Belchic: Well, fine, if you want to go for the obvious.
Noggin: No, no, I like your original idea better. Go for it.
Belchic: Alright. Get ready, Tippy. Here I come!
Belchic ran up to Tippy, and at just the right time, she boosted him up to the net, and he managed to hang on.
Noggin: Hey, Belchic! Use blade #3! That's the sharpest one!
Belchic did so and cut open the net. Lizzie came tumbling out but still hung on. Belchic slipped and grabbed onto Lizzie's tail.
Lizzie: OWW! OWW! LET GO! LET GO!
Belchic let go, and Tippy caught him.
Belchic: Thanks, Tip.
After Belchic got out of Tippy's arms, Tippy dusted herself off, but then, Lizzie unexpectedly dropped on top of her. Lizzie then ran up to Joey.
Joey: Lizzie, sit. *she did so* Num-num. *she started licking Joey's face* Oh, good girl!
Little did they know, Diana was monitoring them the whole time.
Diana: They managed to escape! But they won't be free for long! *laughs evilishly*
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To be continued...
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Post by Trey_Vore on Oct 13, 2008 14:14:45 GMT -5
Hmm...two new chapters, cool. Wonder what'll happen next...
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Post by Belchic on Oct 13, 2008 20:21:41 GMT -5
Well, I'm glad you're liking it, Trey. After I finish it, I would appreciate a possible review and maybe some illustrations.
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Post by LoneWanderer Raiden on Oct 13, 2008 21:43:06 GMT -5
Ahem.... Nicely done, Belch. ^^
If you're STILL upset about what happened the other night... I suppose I understand. I suppose... -_-
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Post by Belchic on Oct 18, 2008 23:05:17 GMT -5
Raiden and I are cool, and here's Chapter 7... ---
Belchic, Tippy, Noggin, Joey, Lizzie and Roxy managed to reunite with a big handful of the pups. They so far found Lucky, Cadpig, Rolly, Spot, Two-Tone, Sneezy and Star.
Lucky: Hey, Noggin, did everything go well?
Noggin: No comment.
Cadpig: Were they hanging for very long?
Noggin: No comment.
Rolly: What does Mimicron run on? Gas? Electricity?
Noggin: Chicken McNuggets; now leave me alone.
Spot: Boy, he's really onto something, isn't he?
Two-Tone: Where did you come from?
Spot: I always hang out with these three.
Two-Tone: Didn't you forget how much I hated you?
Sneezy: A lot of us puppies don't like you, Spot.
Two-Tone: Say, Sneezy, not only do you look like me, but you sound a little like me too.
Sneezy: Come to think of it, Spot sounds a lot like us.
Spot: Small world afterall, I guess.
Two-Tone: We should get a career like this...but not you, Spot.
Spot: Hey!
Star: Why can't we all just get along? I hate it when you guys fight.
Sneezy: Star sounds familiar too!
Noggin: *laughs* Wow. This is more entertaining than John Ratzenberger's career!
CUT TO FLASHBACK
Hamm: Hey! You guys up for some breakfast?
P.T. Flea: Are you kidding? I'm living with the most pathetic losers on the face of the earth!
Hamm: Shut it, you little bug!
P.T. Flea: Why, I oughta...
Abominable Snowman: Hey, I got some more sno cones!
School of Fish: Blah, blah, blah! *make the shape of a screw ball* You're all losers!
Underminer: Could you guys keep the noise level down? I'm trying to work!
Mack: I could really use a nap right about now. I'm sick of you all talking exactly like me!
END OF FLASHBACK
Noggin: *chuckles* I rest my case.
Eventually, everybody in the party was reunited.
Lucky: Okay, everyone, let's go home!
They all started running, but most of them suddenly fell in a hole. The only ones who escaped were Lucky, Cadpig, Rolly, Spot, Stickdip and Sneezy.
Star: Oh no!
Lizzie: Not again!
Nuke: Oww! I landed on my head!
Two-Tone: I wonder who could have done this?
*Diana's laugh is heard.*
Silky: I know that voice...
Diana's Voice: Prepare for trouble!
Male Voice: Make it double!
Diana and Rob appeared over the hole revealing themselves to the heroes.
Noggin: I should have known!
Dana and Rob stood glamourous.
Diana: To protect the world from devistation...
Rob: To unite all puppies within our nation...
Diana: To denounce the evils of truth and love...
Rob: To extend our reach to the stars above...
Diana: Diana!
Rob: Rob!
Diana: The Heartbreakers blast off at the speed of light!
Rob: Surrender now, or prepare to fight!
Shakila: *jumps in from out of nowhere* Meow! That's right!
Belchic: What do you guys want with us?
Rob: We just wanted to invite you over for dinner.
Diana: And this will be your, shall I say...consumer!
Fang then came and looked down on the defensless animals.
Fang: What do you know? An all-I-can-eat puppy buffett! I guess Little Red Riding Hood can take today off!
Silky: *gulps* He looks hungry.
Roxy: Now I know what the guys of Duran Duran meant when they said they were hungry like the wolf!
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To be continued...
Getting suspensful now, huh?
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Post by Tic-Tac on Oct 18, 2008 23:25:52 GMT -5
Not particuarly...Most of this 'story' is just dialogue with your own character's bouncing around pointless rambling on and on. But that's my opinion.
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Post by LoneWanderer Raiden on Oct 19, 2008 0:14:22 GMT -5
Ahem.. interesting fic so far, Belch. Keep up the good work. ^^
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Post by Drake on Oct 19, 2008 15:32:38 GMT -5
Yup, gotta lot of work to do before you yourself, consider this a fic, especially with my characters yet again, I mean come on, Shakila saying something like "Meow, that's right" wont happen at all, not in a hundred years.
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