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Post by Spott on Dec 2, 2010 11:20:02 GMT -5
One day on Dearly farm,some pups are on the puppy bus. Those puppies are Kaboodle, Twinkle puppy, Curly and Rosy. "This is sooo exciting! We're gonna go get a tree!"Twinkle excitedly said. Kaboodle sniffed the ground. "Hm, I smell something a bit fishy."
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Post by RaceFanX on Dec 2, 2010 11:37:45 GMT -5
This looks like more of an RP post than a fanfic. Parts of a fanfic should really be longer than two sentences and a single line of dialogue. There's no way to get any serious detail in when they are that short, maybe wait a while and just post in paragraphs instead.
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Post by Spott on Dec 2, 2010 11:45:49 GMT -5
I am gonna make it longer,just when I think of something,XD.
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