Post by Nemo on Apr 1, 2011 15:52:46 GMT -5
You guys surprised to see me posting something on here?
I got the idea for this little series (if I get enough inspiration to continue) last night. Just like the title says this fic WILL be twisted and a bit horror-esque. Each chapter or short (if I write them) will center around my characters and their faults, pretty much maxed out.
So if you DO NOT LIKE dark themes or events, then I suggest clicking the back button and not reading, thank you!
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Chapter 1: Jealousy Kills (Lusious)
In the dark of night, 99 dalmatian puppies slept inside the large red barn on the property. A crescent moon shone above the building and past the few clouds outside.
Inside the building pups were sleeping on haystacks, on the floor, or a few were lucky enough to get beds or blankets. Though it didn't matter, since it wasn't very cold. However, it was supposed to storm that night so everything was locked up tight and sealed.
Spotted canines slept in groups cuddled up to one another, and a select few slept by themselves. Then one pup wearing a red collar was in focus, he had odd, ink-blot shaped spots and black eyes. This male was Lusious. He squirmed and writhed in his sleep, accidentally kicking some of his 'bed mates.'
"Nnn.. stop it.." one of the pups groaned in a sleepy manner, it was Lusious' brother Cuddly. Taking action, Cuddly then scooted a ways away so he was closer to another pup, a pup that Cuddly really liked.
Lusious started whimpering in his sleep, the small tuffed head haired male was going through a nightmare. No, multiple nightmares that all had one thing in common.. his feeling of neglect within his instant family.
In the dream, Lusious and his siblings were sitting inside within their old owner's home. It was dinner time and the pups were eating from their food dishes that had their names on them.While Lusious' head was down and eating, he saw a large white paw go over his bowl, which made him rise his head up to see who it was. "Hey mom, what's.... going on?" He asked, wondering why Lily didn't want him eating.
"Since Shadow is a member of the family, you will need to share your food bowl with him until he gets his made." The adult replied, and moved the bowl over to the caped dalmatian standing next to her.
"B-b-b-but mom!" Lusious protested, "that's my bowl!"
"Well until Shadow gets his bowl made it will be yours and Shadow's." Lily said to her birth son.
Seeing this, Shadow grinned happily "thanks for sharing with me, bro" the star spotted pup smiled as he started to eat.
"But.. mom.. I wasn't finished.." Lusious' ears drooped as he looked up to the adult female.
"Too bad, it's Shadow's turn now" Lily smirked at Lusious, giving the pup a feeling of belittlement.
"But.. but.." the ink blotted spotted pup stuck his lower lip out. "Moooom.." he whined quietly, with tears forming in his eyes. As he looked at his bowl on the ground. It was red, and had his name engraved on it in cursive.
Lusious twisted and turned in his sleep, letting out whimpers and whines from his muzzle. "N...nnnnn..." Luckily for him the other puppies were sound asleep, so he didn't have to be awoken by complaints.
Then another frightening mental picture formed in the upset male's mind.
They were outside in front of the Dearly barn. All of Lily's puppies were playing with each other. However, Lusious was focusing on a stick he was holding in his mouth, trying to draw something in the dirt (since it was moist enough from a previous rain shower).
He was forming a spring in the dirt, then lifted up his stick and backed away. It was a cartoonish drawing of a pig. Fat body, small ears, small beady eyes, curly tail, and a large snout. The pup puffed his chest in triumph.
"Finished!" Lusious' tail started to wag, as he turned his head and ran over to Lily. "Mom mom!"
"What is it, dear?" The female kindly asked him.
"I wanna show you a drawing I made!" Said the child, as he lightly tugged Lily's right paw. "Come on, come on!" He barked excitedly, then let go of the adult and rushed back to his drawing, but stopped a few feet before it in horror.
Four paws ran over Lusious' drawing and smudged all of the details. Focusing up on the pup in question, it was the adopted puppy Shadow. He stopped a foot away from the drawing with a ball in his mouth.
"I caught it, Smiley!" Shadow said with the ball in his mouth, tail wagging happily.
It was then Lusious' heart stopped. His hard work, his drawing, it took him thirty minutes to make. He sat on his behind, putting a paw to his chest to make sure he was still breathing.
"Y...y...you..." His eyes widened, completely crestfallen by his ruined drawing. "YOU!!!!" Lusious started to cry.
Shadow tilted his head to the side, confused by his sibling's outburst. "Something.. wrong bro?"
"You...you...you.." the other was like a broken record, repeating the word you.. until he pointed to the ground next to Shadow, the smeared drawing.
"Oh.." Shadow saw it and frowned "oh, I didn't see it, Lusious."
"Yes you did!!!" Lusious shouted. "It took me a long time to make that!"
"I already told you, I didn't see it" Shadow replied, as he tossed the ball back to Smiley who was further away.
"Yeah honey it was an accident" came the voice of their mother, Lily.
Gasping and turning his head, Lusious' jaw dropped. "But mom, you can't be... it was.. my.. my.."
"Lusious dear, you can always make another one" she smiled, stroking Lusious' back with a paw.
"B-but that one took thirty minutes! I counted!" The puppy protested, while noticing Shadow ran back over to where Smiley was playing.
"Accidents happen." Was all Lily said, as she walked back over to Emerald to help her with something.
"But.. but.." Lusious' eyes widened in the nightmare, as his right eye twitched.
"But.. but.. but.." the suffering pup said in his sleep. He then quickly thrust himself up from the ground, breathing hard. Lusious was now wide awake. As he awoke a boom of thunder roared, which made Lusious slightly jump.
"Just.. the storm.." Lusious took a deep breath, trying to calm himself down. He then tilted his head to the left, seeing who he grew a seething hatred for.
The pup with those... star shaped spots and that hideous cape! It made him cringe. This was the guy who took his place in the family! Lusious hated him with a passion.. a passion of a soldier doing their duty.
Steadily getting up on all fours, Lusious loomed over his adopted sibling (who was still asleep.) Just as his eyes glared, a clash of thunder and lightning were heard. Making his eyes flash like the lightning.
"You... you..." Lusious growled, baring his teeth. He then lowered his head over Shadow, grabbing the tied end of the pup's cape between his jaws. At this moment Lusious' heart started to race, from the exhilaration of what he was about to, and from something hidden deep down.
The red collared male had to navigate around and over other dalmatians in the barn who still slept. It was however fairly hard since he was dragging another dalmatian. The dragged dalmatian's hind legs went over bodies of other sleeping dogs. Even nudged a pudgy dog's head, who only reacted with a yawn.
Two pups that were sleeping side by side, one had a red collar and black ears, the right one having three spots on it continued to sleep. While the female next to him with a pinkish colored collar and dragon shaped spots smacked her lips together as she dreamed about eating a gourmet meal.
Minutes dragged on into the night as Lusious made his way outside. Still dragging his brother across the wet ground (which would end up leaving a mess on his cape.) The moon that once lit up the countryside property was now gone, replaced with heavy clouds and a small downpour.
Lightning and thunder roared across the sky, which caused the sleeping male to awaken. He rubbed his eyes and glanced up, seeing Lusious peer down at him. "H.. hey Lusious... w.. why are we outside?" Shadow asked, trying to sit up, but quickly felt a paw on his chest which sent him back into the ground. "H-huh??!!"
"You..." Lusious snarled, a vicious look in his eyes. "You... took them.. away from me."
Shadow was confused, as he struggled to get up. "Took who away? I don't know what you're talking about!"
"Yes you do, you f***ing liar." The red collared pup snarled again, baring his sharp canines. "You took them away from me. My mother! My brothers and my sisters!"
On the ground, Shadow blinked, letting out an "ohhh.." he had a feeling Lusious was a tad jealous of him, but this much? No way! "Well Lusious, that is in no way what I'm trying to do, and if you feel that way then I'm-"
Shadow was cut off by a smack to the face from Lusious, whose claws were sheathed (not out.) "Sorry?! Don't make me laugh! You were doing this on purpose!"
"No I'm not Lusious, now get off me!" Shadow growled at his sibling. Who continued to struggle until Lusious removed his paw, allowing Shadow to get up. "Thank you..." he said, twirling his cape around to see, it was now covered in mud! "You ruined my cape!"
"So?!" The other barked. "You ruined my life!" Lusious started to pace in front of Shadow. Looking to the ground, then looking up to the other dog. "Now all the attention I normally get from mom is diverted over to you!"
"Lusious... I..." A white paw was extended to Lusious, but he wasn't buying it and continued pacing.
"You what?!" Lusious got up in Shadow's face, centimeters away and snapped his jaws. Far enough to not hurt the male. "You ever think about how I feel?!"
Seeing the fangs in his face made Shadow whimper, but he flexed his paws on the ground, trying to stand his ground. And quickly nodded in response to his brother's question.
"Mom... mom's love... I don't even get it anymore because of you!" Lusious stopped pacing, and hurled his body at Shadow.
Quickly acting, Shadow swerved himself towards the ground, avoiding a collision with Lusious. Getting himself back up, Shadow warily turned his head to see the other male.
"Cuddly.. and Smiley.. and Emerald.." Lusious glared daggers at his brother, stalking threateningly towards him. "Spencer.. Mandy.. Foody.. and Flowerpetal.." Shaking his head, he added "they want nothing to do with me now since you walked into our family!"
"Lusious..." Shadow muttered I had no idea he was this upset over it. "Hey, maybe if we talked to mom about it-"
A raise of a paw, Lusious wagged a 'finger' at Shadow to interrupt him. "She's not your mother you a**hole. She's my mother!" He screamed, swiping a paw, again, claws sheathed at Shadow, sending the other male flying into a bush.
As quickly as he could, Shadow quickly got out of the bush and scraped some leaves out of his fur. "Stop attacking me Lusious! We're family!" The caped dalmatian growled, showing he was no coward.
"No we're not" Lusious growled bitterly, his teeth clenched. Another roar of thunder and lightning clashed in the sky above the males, the rain starting to pick up. "You.. stole them from me!" He snapped his jaws as a threat.
Minutes of growls and angry remarks passed, until.. Lusious turned his back to Shadow and walked towards the road.
"Lusious.." Shadow took two steps towards his brother (though still quite a ways away.) "What are you.... doing.." he whispered the last word in his sentence. His eyes now wide in horror.
Lusious was now in the ditch next to the road, turning over his shoulder to look at the other canine. He didn't speak a word, but the anger and sadness on his face gave a hint to Shadow about what Lusious was going to do.
"Lusious... no!" Shadow cried, as he ran in Lusious' direction, but stopped when he was three feet from the road's edge. "This isn't the way!" A gust of wind blew his cape back, and tears were running down his face. "I can help you!"
"....." Silence as the wind howled and the rain picked up. Lusious took the first steps onto the dirt country road, where cars passed daily. Then kept walking... walking until he reached the center of the one lane road.
"Brother please!" Shadow cried "come back!"
Sitting on the road, Lusious turned his body so he could glare Shadow in the eyes.
"You stole them from me..." clear malice was in the ink blot pup's voice. When coming from the left, headlights illuminated Lusious' form against the dark sky and rain.
Alarmed, Shadow gasped and darted to the road edge. Clearly horrified, "you idiot, get out of the road!" He didn't really think Lusious was an idiot, but he was mortified and was trying to think of how to get Lusious away.
"You stole them from me...." Lusious repeated slowly, in a blank, but clearly depressed voice with a hint of anger.
The lights grew brighter, and the sound of a car horn was heard.
"LUSIOUUUUUUUUUUUUUS!!!!!" Shadow cried out. As his paws gripped either side of his face.
"They'll remember me now...."
Another blast from the car horn was heard. The car now partly visible. It was a 2011 Chevy Silverado, black in color.
"When I die."
The car screeched, trying to brake to a stop. But the rain caused the car to slip and slide from both road edges. It was all too soon...
The sound of bones crunching was heard, and a blood curdling scream from Lusious....
All while he glared with hatred at Shadow.
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Character Credits:
Lusious (c) me
Cuddly, Smiley, Lily (c) Cuddly
Other Cuddly siblings (c) Their respective owners
Clayton and Kendra -2 pups hinted in the story- (c) Clayton
I told you guys it was gonna be dark, obviously not the worst, but, yeah. In truth Lusious is a bit jealous of Shadow. This was just a 'what if' scenario, if his jealousy was more deep seeded.
I got the idea for this little series (if I get enough inspiration to continue) last night. Just like the title says this fic WILL be twisted and a bit horror-esque. Each chapter or short (if I write them) will center around my characters and their faults, pretty much maxed out.
So if you DO NOT LIKE dark themes or events, then I suggest clicking the back button and not reading, thank you!
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Chapter 1: Jealousy Kills (Lusious)
In the dark of night, 99 dalmatian puppies slept inside the large red barn on the property. A crescent moon shone above the building and past the few clouds outside.
Inside the building pups were sleeping on haystacks, on the floor, or a few were lucky enough to get beds or blankets. Though it didn't matter, since it wasn't very cold. However, it was supposed to storm that night so everything was locked up tight and sealed.
Spotted canines slept in groups cuddled up to one another, and a select few slept by themselves. Then one pup wearing a red collar was in focus, he had odd, ink-blot shaped spots and black eyes. This male was Lusious. He squirmed and writhed in his sleep, accidentally kicking some of his 'bed mates.'
"Nnn.. stop it.." one of the pups groaned in a sleepy manner, it was Lusious' brother Cuddly. Taking action, Cuddly then scooted a ways away so he was closer to another pup, a pup that Cuddly really liked.
Lusious started whimpering in his sleep, the small tuffed head haired male was going through a nightmare. No, multiple nightmares that all had one thing in common.. his feeling of neglect within his instant family.
In the dream, Lusious and his siblings were sitting inside within their old owner's home. It was dinner time and the pups were eating from their food dishes that had their names on them.While Lusious' head was down and eating, he saw a large white paw go over his bowl, which made him rise his head up to see who it was. "Hey mom, what's.... going on?" He asked, wondering why Lily didn't want him eating.
"Since Shadow is a member of the family, you will need to share your food bowl with him until he gets his made." The adult replied, and moved the bowl over to the caped dalmatian standing next to her.
"B-b-b-but mom!" Lusious protested, "that's my bowl!"
"Well until Shadow gets his bowl made it will be yours and Shadow's." Lily said to her birth son.
Seeing this, Shadow grinned happily "thanks for sharing with me, bro" the star spotted pup smiled as he started to eat.
"But.. mom.. I wasn't finished.." Lusious' ears drooped as he looked up to the adult female.
"Too bad, it's Shadow's turn now" Lily smirked at Lusious, giving the pup a feeling of belittlement.
"But.. but.." the ink blotted spotted pup stuck his lower lip out. "Moooom.." he whined quietly, with tears forming in his eyes. As he looked at his bowl on the ground. It was red, and had his name engraved on it in cursive.
Lusious twisted and turned in his sleep, letting out whimpers and whines from his muzzle. "N...nnnnn..." Luckily for him the other puppies were sound asleep, so he didn't have to be awoken by complaints.
Then another frightening mental picture formed in the upset male's mind.
They were outside in front of the Dearly barn. All of Lily's puppies were playing with each other. However, Lusious was focusing on a stick he was holding in his mouth, trying to draw something in the dirt (since it was moist enough from a previous rain shower).
He was forming a spring in the dirt, then lifted up his stick and backed away. It was a cartoonish drawing of a pig. Fat body, small ears, small beady eyes, curly tail, and a large snout. The pup puffed his chest in triumph.
"Finished!" Lusious' tail started to wag, as he turned his head and ran over to Lily. "Mom mom!"
"What is it, dear?" The female kindly asked him.
"I wanna show you a drawing I made!" Said the child, as he lightly tugged Lily's right paw. "Come on, come on!" He barked excitedly, then let go of the adult and rushed back to his drawing, but stopped a few feet before it in horror.
Four paws ran over Lusious' drawing and smudged all of the details. Focusing up on the pup in question, it was the adopted puppy Shadow. He stopped a foot away from the drawing with a ball in his mouth.
"I caught it, Smiley!" Shadow said with the ball in his mouth, tail wagging happily.
It was then Lusious' heart stopped. His hard work, his drawing, it took him thirty minutes to make. He sat on his behind, putting a paw to his chest to make sure he was still breathing.
"Y...y...you..." His eyes widened, completely crestfallen by his ruined drawing. "YOU!!!!" Lusious started to cry.
Shadow tilted his head to the side, confused by his sibling's outburst. "Something.. wrong bro?"
"You...you...you.." the other was like a broken record, repeating the word you.. until he pointed to the ground next to Shadow, the smeared drawing.
"Oh.." Shadow saw it and frowned "oh, I didn't see it, Lusious."
"Yes you did!!!" Lusious shouted. "It took me a long time to make that!"
"I already told you, I didn't see it" Shadow replied, as he tossed the ball back to Smiley who was further away.
"Yeah honey it was an accident" came the voice of their mother, Lily.
Gasping and turning his head, Lusious' jaw dropped. "But mom, you can't be... it was.. my.. my.."
"Lusious dear, you can always make another one" she smiled, stroking Lusious' back with a paw.
"B-but that one took thirty minutes! I counted!" The puppy protested, while noticing Shadow ran back over to where Smiley was playing.
"Accidents happen." Was all Lily said, as she walked back over to Emerald to help her with something.
"But.. but.." Lusious' eyes widened in the nightmare, as his right eye twitched.
"But.. but.. but.." the suffering pup said in his sleep. He then quickly thrust himself up from the ground, breathing hard. Lusious was now wide awake. As he awoke a boom of thunder roared, which made Lusious slightly jump.
"Just.. the storm.." Lusious took a deep breath, trying to calm himself down. He then tilted his head to the left, seeing who he grew a seething hatred for.
The pup with those... star shaped spots and that hideous cape! It made him cringe. This was the guy who took his place in the family! Lusious hated him with a passion.. a passion of a soldier doing their duty.
Steadily getting up on all fours, Lusious loomed over his adopted sibling (who was still asleep.) Just as his eyes glared, a clash of thunder and lightning were heard. Making his eyes flash like the lightning.
"You... you..." Lusious growled, baring his teeth. He then lowered his head over Shadow, grabbing the tied end of the pup's cape between his jaws. At this moment Lusious' heart started to race, from the exhilaration of what he was about to, and from something hidden deep down.
The red collared male had to navigate around and over other dalmatians in the barn who still slept. It was however fairly hard since he was dragging another dalmatian. The dragged dalmatian's hind legs went over bodies of other sleeping dogs. Even nudged a pudgy dog's head, who only reacted with a yawn.
Two pups that were sleeping side by side, one had a red collar and black ears, the right one having three spots on it continued to sleep. While the female next to him with a pinkish colored collar and dragon shaped spots smacked her lips together as she dreamed about eating a gourmet meal.
Minutes dragged on into the night as Lusious made his way outside. Still dragging his brother across the wet ground (which would end up leaving a mess on his cape.) The moon that once lit up the countryside property was now gone, replaced with heavy clouds and a small downpour.
Lightning and thunder roared across the sky, which caused the sleeping male to awaken. He rubbed his eyes and glanced up, seeing Lusious peer down at him. "H.. hey Lusious... w.. why are we outside?" Shadow asked, trying to sit up, but quickly felt a paw on his chest which sent him back into the ground. "H-huh??!!"
"You..." Lusious snarled, a vicious look in his eyes. "You... took them.. away from me."
Shadow was confused, as he struggled to get up. "Took who away? I don't know what you're talking about!"
"Yes you do, you f***ing liar." The red collared pup snarled again, baring his sharp canines. "You took them away from me. My mother! My brothers and my sisters!"
On the ground, Shadow blinked, letting out an "ohhh.." he had a feeling Lusious was a tad jealous of him, but this much? No way! "Well Lusious, that is in no way what I'm trying to do, and if you feel that way then I'm-"
Shadow was cut off by a smack to the face from Lusious, whose claws were sheathed (not out.) "Sorry?! Don't make me laugh! You were doing this on purpose!"
"No I'm not Lusious, now get off me!" Shadow growled at his sibling. Who continued to struggle until Lusious removed his paw, allowing Shadow to get up. "Thank you..." he said, twirling his cape around to see, it was now covered in mud! "You ruined my cape!"
"So?!" The other barked. "You ruined my life!" Lusious started to pace in front of Shadow. Looking to the ground, then looking up to the other dog. "Now all the attention I normally get from mom is diverted over to you!"
"Lusious... I..." A white paw was extended to Lusious, but he wasn't buying it and continued pacing.
"You what?!" Lusious got up in Shadow's face, centimeters away and snapped his jaws. Far enough to not hurt the male. "You ever think about how I feel?!"
Seeing the fangs in his face made Shadow whimper, but he flexed his paws on the ground, trying to stand his ground. And quickly nodded in response to his brother's question.
"Mom... mom's love... I don't even get it anymore because of you!" Lusious stopped pacing, and hurled his body at Shadow.
Quickly acting, Shadow swerved himself towards the ground, avoiding a collision with Lusious. Getting himself back up, Shadow warily turned his head to see the other male.
"Cuddly.. and Smiley.. and Emerald.." Lusious glared daggers at his brother, stalking threateningly towards him. "Spencer.. Mandy.. Foody.. and Flowerpetal.." Shaking his head, he added "they want nothing to do with me now since you walked into our family!"
"Lusious..." Shadow muttered I had no idea he was this upset over it. "Hey, maybe if we talked to mom about it-"
A raise of a paw, Lusious wagged a 'finger' at Shadow to interrupt him. "She's not your mother you a**hole. She's my mother!" He screamed, swiping a paw, again, claws sheathed at Shadow, sending the other male flying into a bush.
As quickly as he could, Shadow quickly got out of the bush and scraped some leaves out of his fur. "Stop attacking me Lusious! We're family!" The caped dalmatian growled, showing he was no coward.
"No we're not" Lusious growled bitterly, his teeth clenched. Another roar of thunder and lightning clashed in the sky above the males, the rain starting to pick up. "You.. stole them from me!" He snapped his jaws as a threat.
Minutes of growls and angry remarks passed, until.. Lusious turned his back to Shadow and walked towards the road.
"Lusious.." Shadow took two steps towards his brother (though still quite a ways away.) "What are you.... doing.." he whispered the last word in his sentence. His eyes now wide in horror.
Lusious was now in the ditch next to the road, turning over his shoulder to look at the other canine. He didn't speak a word, but the anger and sadness on his face gave a hint to Shadow about what Lusious was going to do.
"Lusious... no!" Shadow cried, as he ran in Lusious' direction, but stopped when he was three feet from the road's edge. "This isn't the way!" A gust of wind blew his cape back, and tears were running down his face. "I can help you!"
"....." Silence as the wind howled and the rain picked up. Lusious took the first steps onto the dirt country road, where cars passed daily. Then kept walking... walking until he reached the center of the one lane road.
"Brother please!" Shadow cried "come back!"
Sitting on the road, Lusious turned his body so he could glare Shadow in the eyes.
"You stole them from me..." clear malice was in the ink blot pup's voice. When coming from the left, headlights illuminated Lusious' form against the dark sky and rain.
Alarmed, Shadow gasped and darted to the road edge. Clearly horrified, "you idiot, get out of the road!" He didn't really think Lusious was an idiot, but he was mortified and was trying to think of how to get Lusious away.
"You stole them from me...." Lusious repeated slowly, in a blank, but clearly depressed voice with a hint of anger.
The lights grew brighter, and the sound of a car horn was heard.
"LUSIOUUUUUUUUUUUUUS!!!!!" Shadow cried out. As his paws gripped either side of his face.
"They'll remember me now...."
Another blast from the car horn was heard. The car now partly visible. It was a 2011 Chevy Silverado, black in color.
"When I die."
The car screeched, trying to brake to a stop. But the rain caused the car to slip and slide from both road edges. It was all too soon...
The sound of bones crunching was heard, and a blood curdling scream from Lusious....
All while he glared with hatred at Shadow.
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Character Credits:
Lusious (c) me
Cuddly, Smiley, Lily (c) Cuddly
Other Cuddly siblings (c) Their respective owners
Clayton and Kendra -2 pups hinted in the story- (c) Clayton
I told you guys it was gonna be dark, obviously not the worst, but, yeah. In truth Lusious is a bit jealous of Shadow. This was just a 'what if' scenario, if his jealousy was more deep seeded.