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Post by Dark Knight Oreo Shellhound on Mar 10, 2011 20:34:08 GMT -5
I guess its about time I make a bio for my awesome pup. Ballade Gender: Male (unless the aliens came O.O) Breed: Dalmatian Height: about the same as Lucky Weight: a couuple pounds heavier than Lucky Age: Same as the other pups Eyes: Blue (my friend suggested blue) Collar: Red Sexuality: Monk but in the scheme of things, straight (likes girls) Martial Status: Free Alignment: Neutral Friends: EVERYBODY! Spot Pattern: right black ear and left speckled ear. His upper body is black up to his neckline and he has a stripe of speckles on the belly part. His hind end was normal spotted. (his upper body looks like a jacket that isnt zipped up :3 cosmicbrambleclaw.deviantart.com/gallery/?offset=24#/d3zezia 2nd from the left is Ballade) Bio: Ballade was born into a family of high up dogs. He had a rich family, top notch wealthy folk. Even though his owners were rich they were really nice people. One day Ballades owners took him and his family for a walk in the dog park. On the way home though a bus driver swerved to miss a child running in the street and sadly hit his family. Ballade grew up on the streets after that and one day found a hat on the sidewalk. It became his signature fedora. He was taking a joyride in the back of a truck one day and fell asleep. When he woke he was at the Dearly Farm. There he met all his new friends and decided to settle down. It might not be as exciting as life on the streets but he had a home. And a family. (and the world gave a collective sigh)
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Post by babclayman on Mar 11, 2011 7:21:28 GMT -5
Hmmm, This Bio sets up, Ballades Stats and items on that line. ;3
However, I do feel, there could be a little bit of Backstory to him. X3 You know, Like, What's his Origins, Anything happen to him in the Past, What is his Personality like, How he gets along with others. ;3 You know, Items along that like. X3
Still, Seems Okay, so far and I look forward to seeing how you can develop this. ;3 Looking forward to hearing more on this. X3
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Post by Dark Knight Oreo Shellhound on Mar 11, 2011 8:34:54 GMT -5
Its not entirely done yet, Belchic just wanted a bio so he could do something
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Post by Belchic on Mar 11, 2011 13:25:00 GMT -5
I agree with bab. This bio could use a little work. His bio needs a bit more detail, and he could use a backstory and such. Also, since he's your character, you should know what his height, weight and eye-color are. Let me know when you've made these updates, Oreo.
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Post by growltarist on Mar 11, 2011 14:51:00 GMT -5
Ohhh, nice start - yeah, I'd agree with Bab and Belch, I'd like to know a little more about this character. owo The question marks make me feel like you're probably still thinking about it, so that's cool. If you're trying for appearance, you can always just do some raw sketching and experimenting - that's usually how I come up with stuff like that. And personalities are fun to experiment too ~ I hope to see more from Ballade, Oreo. I will be... waiting... -sits on doorstep- OwO ...
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Post by Dark Knight Oreo Shellhound on Mar 11, 2011 16:28:55 GMT -5
Holy cow I came home to find Growltarist at my door! oh this explains why XD
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Post by Nemo on Apr 27, 2011 17:23:14 GMT -5
Topic has been moved to proper area.
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Post by Dark Knight Oreo Shellhound on Apr 27, 2011 20:39:27 GMT -5
Thanks Nemes ^_^
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Post by Belchic on Apr 27, 2011 20:44:47 GMT -5
FYI, I'm still waiting for some updates on his bio.
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Post by Dark Knight Oreo Shellhound on Apr 27, 2011 20:45:46 GMT -5
Oh right updates ;3 I'll work on it
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Post by Belchic on Apr 27, 2011 20:56:07 GMT -5
I don't mean to sound rude, Oreo, but do you have a short-term memory or something? Again, I'm sorry if I may sound offensive, but I just want to know.
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Post by Dark Knight Oreo Shellhound on Apr 27, 2011 21:08:48 GMT -5
Eh sometimes ^_^
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