Post by LoneWanderer Raiden on Dec 23, 2005 17:16:44 GMT -5
Ok guys, I'm finally going to write an introductory fic for my main character, Raiden... Hope y'all like it, enjoy.
In the downtown streets of Gruelty, a lone, Dalmatian/Akita puppy by the name of Raiden was walking down the street. All by himself, cold, tired, and hungry. He had recently gotten into a fight with a doberman pup, that is how he got the x-shaped scar on his muzzle.... He won against the other dog though and gotten abit of a momento(his scar) from the battle.
However, it was bittersweet... He still missed his parents very much, his real mother fell to illness and died a few months after he was born; his real father had been hit by a car several years later but while his father was still alive, he taught him to defend himself, how to play poker, how to steal sausages from the vendor without getting caught, taught him everything he knew to help his son survive out on the street and a good all-around dad(also gave him his camo doorag and lightning collar, which was originally Raiden's father's when he was once a pup) what he remembers of him... He doesn't really remember much about his mother, 'cept that she was very beatutiful. Tears now started to form in his eyes as he thought about his decesed parents, but he quickly blinked them away and continued walking down the street as he had said to himself, "C'mon Rai, ya have to be strong.... for their sake and for your own... So don't start cracking now."
Raiden continued walking and walking until he was out of the city/town and was going into the countryside. Then a little later he had encountered a huge farm, Dearly Farm; quite possibly his salvation.... He came onto the property, it was spacious and beautiful, the perfect place to spend the night. As he found a hay bale, laid down on it, and drifting off to sleep as he tried to dream of peaceful thoughts. As he awoke, he found a Dalmatian pup with a red backwards baseball cap and a red collar with a Chevy dogtag on it. Raiden slowly opened his eyes and....
"Aahhh!! Dang man, ya scared me half-to-death... Don't do that!", Raiden exclaimed. Then he asked curiously, "Who are you anyways?"
"Oh hehe, sorry 'bout that.", the other puppy said nervously. "The name's Sparky, what's yours?"
"Raiden. And by the way, don't sweat it", he said outstretching his paw in friendship.
"Thanks", said Sparky, shaking paws with Raiden and smiling slightly. "So hey, where ya from?"
"Off the street."
"Oh, interesting."
"Yeah, so what about you? Where are you from?"
"Well actually, I've always lived here...."
"Ok, seeing as you know so much about this place and I don't.... Mind givin' me the grand tour?", said Raiden, cocking an eyebrow.
"Sure, follow me", said Sparky cheerfully.
"Alright..."
The two started walking together for abit around the place. "...And over there is the chow tower," Sparky said pointing to the chow tower. "That's where we get our food from."
"Interesting," said Raiden.
"Next to that's the farmhouse, that's where our pets live. Ah, by pets I mean humans."
"Ah cool...."
"Soo, wanna meet the guys?", said Sparky.
'The guys? Yes! Other dogs to talk to....', thought Raiden. "Yeah sure, I'd like that." he said happily.
"Ok, they're in the barn. Some of 'em anyway, the others are usually down at Hiccup Hole around this time."
"Um, what's Hiccup Hole?", asked Raiden.
"A little pond where everyone goes to swim or hang out."
"Cool," said Raiden.
"Yup."
As they enter the barn they see three pups and a chicken lounging around, talking amongst each other.
"Oh hey guys," Sparky says. "I'd like to introduce a new friend of the farm, this is Raiden."
"Hey man, what's up?", says the puppy with the horsehoe pattern of spots on his back. "I'm Lucky, this is Rolly, Cadpig, and Spot the chicken."
"Hey, you know where I can find any food around here?", the portly pup known as Rolly said.
" 'Fraid not, sorry." says Raiden as he gave a slight laugh.
"Oh hello there, I'm Cadpig....nice to meetcha," said the small girl puppy, sliding up next to him. "By the way, have you thought about inner peace?"
"Uhh, heh....." Raiden looks very puzzled and backs away from Cadpig, slowly.
"Sorry about that," Lucky laughs nervously. "Not now, Cadpig.....don't scare this one away, ok?"
"Heh heh, sorry.....", Cadpig said sheepishly.
"Hi," says Spot meekly.
"Well, I gotta get goin'.... Sparky here is givin' me a tour of the farm, so I'll see y'all later."
"Ok, see ya around, man.", Lucky nodded.
As they leave the barn, an inverse colored pup walks by and starts to enter the barn, she then sees Raiden.
"Oh hey, I don't believe I've seen you here before... What's your name?"
"Oh, it's Raiden."
"Hm, interesting," she says extending her paw. Raiden and her shake paws. "Mine's Two-Tone."
"Cool. I can see how the name fits you.", Raiden said as he gave a chuckle.
"Hehe, yeah.", she giggled a bit. "Well, I'm going to visit Lucky for abit so I'll cya later... Nice meeting you by the way.", she said as she smiled politefully.
"Same here, cya.", said Raiden as he returned the smile.
Finally after reaching Hiccup Hole, Raiden gazes upon a very attractive female Dalmatian pup about his size and age laying down beside the edge of the water. Then she suddenly looked up at Raiden, smiled and winked at him.
"Wow, who is that?", asks Raiden with interest.
"Oh heh, that's Sonya....she arrived on the farm a few days ago, she's new here too.", says Sparky.
"Beautiful," says Raiden, almost entranced by her.
"Yup, wanna go talk to her?"
"Huh? Umm... sure," Raiden says before walking up to her.
"Hey so, you're new here too huh?"
"Yea, I'm new here..." she says before blinking in suprise and turning to the source of the voice in confusion. "Who are you?"
"Oh, I'm Raiden. You?"
"Sonya. Very cool name you have, Raiden.", she smiled.
"Thanks, same here...", he says as smiled and blushed a bit.
"You're welcome, and thanks yourself by the way..." Sonya says, smiling and blushing back.
At first there was a bit of an awkward pause as they just looked at each other, blushing and occasionally smiling. Raiden then spoke up.
"Soo, you wanna just hang out sometime, maybe?"
"Yea, I'd like that.", Sonya smiled.
"Great. Well, I'll catch ya later then."
"Ok pleasure meetin' ya. Later.", Sonya says as Raiden is walking away.
Now walking back to the barn, where he encounters Pongo and Perdy.
"Oh hi Mom an' Dad, I found a new friend today, his name is Raiden", Sparky says.
"Well hi there, I'm Pongo and this is my wife; Perdy. You can call us Mom and Dad or Mr. and Mrs. Dearly, which ever you prefer.", said the large male Dalmatian.
"Ok, thank you."
"So, have you thought about joining the Bark Brigade?" Perdy asks.
"Um sure, what is it?", Raiden asked, confused.
"It's an athletic/paramilitary training course for the Dearly Farm canines", says Pongo proudfully.
"Oh ok, sounds fun.", Raiden replied, genuinely interested.
Next morning;
"Alright cadets! Sit down, shuddap, and pay attention.....we have a new cadet joining us today," said a small dog with a huge mouth by the name of Pug. "What's your name, cadet??"
"Raiden, sir."
"Well in that case......drop down and give me twenty paw push-ups, right now! All of you!! You call that a paw-push up?! You're weak, cadet! Weak!!" yells Pug. "Next, marching drills!"
'Oh man, what did I get myself into?', thought Raiden.
To Be Continued
"Ch. 2 In the Army Now"
Hope y'all like it....btw incase y'all don't know this the revised version of the original; changed a few things around and added some new stuff, but really it's pretty much the same story line as the original fic from Jake's board....so R&R plz ;D
In the downtown streets of Gruelty, a lone, Dalmatian/Akita puppy by the name of Raiden was walking down the street. All by himself, cold, tired, and hungry. He had recently gotten into a fight with a doberman pup, that is how he got the x-shaped scar on his muzzle.... He won against the other dog though and gotten abit of a momento(his scar) from the battle.
However, it was bittersweet... He still missed his parents very much, his real mother fell to illness and died a few months after he was born; his real father had been hit by a car several years later but while his father was still alive, he taught him to defend himself, how to play poker, how to steal sausages from the vendor without getting caught, taught him everything he knew to help his son survive out on the street and a good all-around dad(also gave him his camo doorag and lightning collar, which was originally Raiden's father's when he was once a pup) what he remembers of him... He doesn't really remember much about his mother, 'cept that she was very beatutiful. Tears now started to form in his eyes as he thought about his decesed parents, but he quickly blinked them away and continued walking down the street as he had said to himself, "C'mon Rai, ya have to be strong.... for their sake and for your own... So don't start cracking now."
Raiden continued walking and walking until he was out of the city/town and was going into the countryside. Then a little later he had encountered a huge farm, Dearly Farm; quite possibly his salvation.... He came onto the property, it was spacious and beautiful, the perfect place to spend the night. As he found a hay bale, laid down on it, and drifting off to sleep as he tried to dream of peaceful thoughts. As he awoke, he found a Dalmatian pup with a red backwards baseball cap and a red collar with a Chevy dogtag on it. Raiden slowly opened his eyes and....
"Aahhh!! Dang man, ya scared me half-to-death... Don't do that!", Raiden exclaimed. Then he asked curiously, "Who are you anyways?"
"Oh hehe, sorry 'bout that.", the other puppy said nervously. "The name's Sparky, what's yours?"
"Raiden. And by the way, don't sweat it", he said outstretching his paw in friendship.
"Thanks", said Sparky, shaking paws with Raiden and smiling slightly. "So hey, where ya from?"
"Off the street."
"Oh, interesting."
"Yeah, so what about you? Where are you from?"
"Well actually, I've always lived here...."
"Ok, seeing as you know so much about this place and I don't.... Mind givin' me the grand tour?", said Raiden, cocking an eyebrow.
"Sure, follow me", said Sparky cheerfully.
"Alright..."
The two started walking together for abit around the place. "...And over there is the chow tower," Sparky said pointing to the chow tower. "That's where we get our food from."
"Interesting," said Raiden.
"Next to that's the farmhouse, that's where our pets live. Ah, by pets I mean humans."
"Ah cool...."
"Soo, wanna meet the guys?", said Sparky.
'The guys? Yes! Other dogs to talk to....', thought Raiden. "Yeah sure, I'd like that." he said happily.
"Ok, they're in the barn. Some of 'em anyway, the others are usually down at Hiccup Hole around this time."
"Um, what's Hiccup Hole?", asked Raiden.
"A little pond where everyone goes to swim or hang out."
"Cool," said Raiden.
"Yup."
As they enter the barn they see three pups and a chicken lounging around, talking amongst each other.
"Oh hey guys," Sparky says. "I'd like to introduce a new friend of the farm, this is Raiden."
"Hey man, what's up?", says the puppy with the horsehoe pattern of spots on his back. "I'm Lucky, this is Rolly, Cadpig, and Spot the chicken."
"Hey, you know where I can find any food around here?", the portly pup known as Rolly said.
" 'Fraid not, sorry." says Raiden as he gave a slight laugh.
"Oh hello there, I'm Cadpig....nice to meetcha," said the small girl puppy, sliding up next to him. "By the way, have you thought about inner peace?"
"Uhh, heh....." Raiden looks very puzzled and backs away from Cadpig, slowly.
"Sorry about that," Lucky laughs nervously. "Not now, Cadpig.....don't scare this one away, ok?"
"Heh heh, sorry.....", Cadpig said sheepishly.
"Hi," says Spot meekly.
"Well, I gotta get goin'.... Sparky here is givin' me a tour of the farm, so I'll see y'all later."
"Ok, see ya around, man.", Lucky nodded.
As they leave the barn, an inverse colored pup walks by and starts to enter the barn, she then sees Raiden.
"Oh hey, I don't believe I've seen you here before... What's your name?"
"Oh, it's Raiden."
"Hm, interesting," she says extending her paw. Raiden and her shake paws. "Mine's Two-Tone."
"Cool. I can see how the name fits you.", Raiden said as he gave a chuckle.
"Hehe, yeah.", she giggled a bit. "Well, I'm going to visit Lucky for abit so I'll cya later... Nice meeting you by the way.", she said as she smiled politefully.
"Same here, cya.", said Raiden as he returned the smile.
Finally after reaching Hiccup Hole, Raiden gazes upon a very attractive female Dalmatian pup about his size and age laying down beside the edge of the water. Then she suddenly looked up at Raiden, smiled and winked at him.
"Wow, who is that?", asks Raiden with interest.
"Oh heh, that's Sonya....she arrived on the farm a few days ago, she's new here too.", says Sparky.
"Beautiful," says Raiden, almost entranced by her.
"Yup, wanna go talk to her?"
"Huh? Umm... sure," Raiden says before walking up to her.
"Hey so, you're new here too huh?"
"Yea, I'm new here..." she says before blinking in suprise and turning to the source of the voice in confusion. "Who are you?"
"Oh, I'm Raiden. You?"
"Sonya. Very cool name you have, Raiden.", she smiled.
"Thanks, same here...", he says as smiled and blushed a bit.
"You're welcome, and thanks yourself by the way..." Sonya says, smiling and blushing back.
At first there was a bit of an awkward pause as they just looked at each other, blushing and occasionally smiling. Raiden then spoke up.
"Soo, you wanna just hang out sometime, maybe?"
"Yea, I'd like that.", Sonya smiled.
"Great. Well, I'll catch ya later then."
"Ok pleasure meetin' ya. Later.", Sonya says as Raiden is walking away.
Now walking back to the barn, where he encounters Pongo and Perdy.
"Oh hi Mom an' Dad, I found a new friend today, his name is Raiden", Sparky says.
"Well hi there, I'm Pongo and this is my wife; Perdy. You can call us Mom and Dad or Mr. and Mrs. Dearly, which ever you prefer.", said the large male Dalmatian.
"Ok, thank you."
"So, have you thought about joining the Bark Brigade?" Perdy asks.
"Um sure, what is it?", Raiden asked, confused.
"It's an athletic/paramilitary training course for the Dearly Farm canines", says Pongo proudfully.
"Oh ok, sounds fun.", Raiden replied, genuinely interested.
Next morning;
"Alright cadets! Sit down, shuddap, and pay attention.....we have a new cadet joining us today," said a small dog with a huge mouth by the name of Pug. "What's your name, cadet??"
"Raiden, sir."
"Well in that case......drop down and give me twenty paw push-ups, right now! All of you!! You call that a paw-push up?! You're weak, cadet! Weak!!" yells Pug. "Next, marching drills!"
'Oh man, what did I get myself into?', thought Raiden.
To Be Continued
"Ch. 2 In the Army Now"
Hope y'all like it....btw incase y'all don't know this the revised version of the original; changed a few things around and added some new stuff, but really it's pretty much the same story line as the original fic from Jake's board....so R&R plz ;D