|
Post by Sweeney Terrier on Aug 31, 2012 4:49:08 GMT -5
A couple of weeks ago, while thinking about the phrase Shadow had on MSN, I came up with this poem. I first submitted it on deviantart.com. Although, I figured that some of you might like to see it here. The first line of the poem, (under the title), is his phrase on MSN. The poem focuses on Shadow's, (the OC's), interest in the darkness and shadows.
'..I am the Dal of the Dark'
Wrapped in Darkness, I am the Dal of the Dark.
Hear my mystical and never-ending bark.
I lurk in the shadows, hidden from the light,
For where I belong, is deep within the night.
The darkness is my friend, an ally if you will.
While the darkness gives me warmth, it gives others chills.
Wrapped in Darkness, I am the Dal of the Dark.
Hear my mystical and never-ending bark. - Up until last spring, when I learned how to write/type a cinquain, these types of poems, (ones that rhymed in pairs of two), were my strength. Reply, leave your opinion, and comment on what you think of it if you wish.
|
|
|
Post by Shadow Dearly on Aug 31, 2012 13:10:06 GMT -5
Hehhehee thanks for doing this poem Lupus You really got Shadow's dark side(I don't mean evil) down perfectly
|
|
|
Post by Sweeney Terrier on Aug 31, 2012 14:08:09 GMT -5
Indeed, I did, Shadow.
|
|
|
Post by Sweeney Terrier on Aug 31, 2012 14:08:25 GMT -5
And you're welcome.
|
|
|
Post by babclayman on Sept 1, 2012 10:51:06 GMT -5
Oooh, Looks like a pretty good poem, Lupus! =3
Really gets what Shadow often ploclaims to be like.
Also, if you wish to add stuff to a post, you can edit your post and nod add another post on. ^^;
Still, Good Poem, Lupus, ;3 Looking forward to seeing more from you. X3
|
|
|
Post by Sweeney Terrier on Sept 1, 2012 10:53:30 GMT -5
Thanks, Bab
|
|