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Post by Paws on Feb 13, 2014 13:05:24 GMT -5
Thanks guys ^^ I'll see if I can doodle up a little modification. Glad you guys like it!
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Post by Paws on Feb 13, 2014 17:12:39 GMT -5
Okey-dokey!! So I made a few modifications (moved the Mickey spot down and added a few more spots on the foreleg to make it look more "natural"), and I added the scarf-collar. Still stuck with red for the color, however I have two different versions of it. Again, this is temporary, and we can always switch the color back to green or even something else, if you guys prefer. I have... One version with stripes on it, a la Muddy's design
and one version without stripes
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Post by Stirfry on Feb 13, 2014 17:49:06 GMT -5
Yes, I like the placement of the Mickey spot, but I still think Mac's original scarf colour is best. Red and Green clash too much.
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Post by Paws on Feb 13, 2014 17:53:48 GMT -5
Third time's the charm?
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Post by babclayman on Feb 13, 2014 17:55:58 GMT -5
Puppies...I think we have a design! 83
Awesome work from Growlie, General & Paws! <3 Know how Brilliant she looks!? ;3
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Post by Stirfry on Feb 13, 2014 17:57:22 GMT -5
Yes, that will do nicely. I like it.
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Post by Paws on Feb 13, 2014 17:59:09 GMT -5
Hurray!! I'll update the mini-ref on the other page as well :3 glad you guys like her!! And good work as well, General and Growlie. I really liked your designs as well ^u^
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Post by RaceFanX on Feb 13, 2014 18:08:00 GMT -5
It's fun to see all this development in action.
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Post by Mac on Feb 13, 2014 19:27:03 GMT -5
Third time's the charm? Ah wow, that looks fantastic -- I love how this mesh of ideas ended up coming together! I agree with Bab on the face smudge; I think it looks a lot better like this because it's not as widely prominent, and I love how you were able to add in the mickey spot and a few other intricacies of your own. I think this finalised design achieved a nice balance between being too simple or too complex. Seeing the development with this (especially so quickly) is really exciting, I've gotta say! (Now I'm finding it hard to avoid getting excited about the webcomic idear even though I tried so hard not to give in to the temptation...herp de durp). Nice work on meshing together that finalised design Paws, which I like even better now due to having contributions from all three of us~ You put it together very well, I must say. Perhaps we could also get some discussion going on some personality ideas -- it'd be especially cool to hear from those who haven't offered too many ideas yet. The sense of teamwork going on so far is really fantastic.~ Now this thread is giving me a reason to check into Sparky's more often. C:
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Post by babclayman on Feb 13, 2014 19:32:17 GMT -5
Well, I did consider she'd have a bit of a street personality. Maybe make her a bit Jazzy and as Growlie puts it, Hipster! ;3
What you Pups think she be like? X3
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Post by Nemo on Feb 13, 2014 20:57:09 GMT -5
Such a fab design <3
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Post by Paws on Feb 13, 2014 21:35:28 GMT -5
Thank you Nemo c: Speaking of which the mini ref-sheet on the other page is finalized, because I totally did not realize that when I edited it previously I accidentally ended up mirroring her spots but now it's fixed. As for personality... I do agree on the notion that she should be naturally outgoing and inquisitive, as well as sporty and even a little reckless. And I do also agree that her interests should be more city-esque and hip compared to the farm's lifestyle.
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Post by Belchic on Feb 13, 2014 23:51:52 GMT -5
All of those drawings are awesome IMHO.
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Post by babclayman on Feb 14, 2014 4:53:26 GMT -5
I like the inquisitive idea! It means she can ask questions and learn about the Dearly Dalmatians with the reader.
Any other suggestions on Personality, Pups? ;3
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Post by Stirfry on Feb 14, 2014 7:32:31 GMT -5
She is a stray. She joined the bark brigade for a sense of belonging, and then transferred to the dearly regiment because it is full of dalmatians like her.
So she wants to be normal, but on the dearly farm she finds she's the most normal pup there is.
So let's make a list of personality traits here so we can keep track of what has been suggested.
Hipster, city pup reckless, inquisitive spunky outgoing
Okedly dokedly all that kind of contrasts from my little lost puppy idea up there... I was thinking she would be the one sane pup, but we've had enough of those on TV, in movies and... everywhere. I like this better.
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