Post by babclayman on Oct 4, 2013 11:57:06 GMT -5
HEY PUPS! ;3
Let's see if we can get some Creative Juices flowing here. I have written a Fic, focusing around some of General's Pups.
I hope you Pups like the Fic! ;3
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My name is Blotches! I’m a Dalmatian that’s Six Months Old! I live on the Dearly Farm, with My Brothers, My Sisters, Pongo, Perdita, Their Puppies, Their Step Puppies, Other Dogs, Two Cows, A Horse, A Cat, Some Pigs, Sheep…
…And a Goose! But today, is the first day of ‘Bark Brigade’! It’s going to be fun! Like when I found that old doll thing in that Creepy House, I was taken to when they let me out of my cage!
I’m standing between two other Puppies. I know their names; I was there when they did. The one on my right is called; Growlie and she’s as happy as me! On my left is this Patchy Eye Puppy named Kit, I’ve seen him do these crazy moves when music plays!
I see a Sheep Dog called ‘The Colonel’ talking to a Pug called…actually, his name IS Pug…NEAT!
The Pug is a Lieutenant in ‘Bark Brigade’ and he’s also our Teacher! He makes us do these things like attacking these bags with Kitty Faces drawn on them, although every time I lick the bags (they taste like Shortbread), Pug shouts at me and says these weird words that I don’t know the meaning of. The other Puppies always seem to look shocked when he does though, so maybe those words are very difficult to say…sometimes he states random facts too, like that my Mother was a Female Dog and I’m her son!
This happens every time I got to Bark Brigade for the next Seventeen Days. Pug always seems to use those strange words and then makes me do Press Ups. Once, he made me do Twenty Eight, then Fifty, Then Forty Seven. Pug always seems to like making me do press ups, I must be good at them or something. He doesn’t really have a good memory though. Each time he talks to me, He either calls me Bleach, Braces or Burpess. He is silly like that, and when I tell him that I’m Blotches, he shouts at me even more.
However, the day he decided to make me do Sixty Five, something happened!
Hr was saying stuff like how smelly I was or how I had less Q.I (Or something like that) of a rock, I heard a voice. The voice sounded like that Rat who lives in that old Smig Washing Machine in the Swamp, except…nicer!
It said; “You’re going to far, Lieutenant!”
Pug’s face froze. He looked away from me and over to another Puppy who had these long floppy ears…he looks funny.
“WHAT WAS THAT!?” Pug shouted, louder than he usually does.
The Pup spoke again; “I said…You’re going too far…”
Pug was then like “Well, Well! Lookie here!” We got ourselves a Short Pot who thinks he can tell me how I may or may not run my Unit! Well, Listen here, Cadet Herb Weed! This is MY Unit and I may address any Flea Ridden Cadet HOWEVER I SEE FIT! Now drop and give me E-Eighty-F-S-N-FOUR!”
Usually, Pug would have did something funny and take a nap on the spot, but the long ear puppy said something that made this…warm thing happen inside me…and I’m sure I wasn’t pregnant.
“No! You may be so righteous in being our Officer, but that doesn’t work as an excuse to act like a Politically Incorrect Backside of a Swine! The Little Fella’s not hurting any body and he clearly doesn’t want to hurt. So, It would be so right as for you not to try and turn him into an Ignorant, Self-Loathing Rat, like you.”
Every Pup there had their mouths wide open, there were some who has jaws nearly hitting the ground!
The Pug looked really mean and angry then! He must have drank that cough thing that Roger has when working late, since he began shaking and his eyes twitched really fast!
A lot of the Puppies around me began to cover their heads and duck down! Must been a game, so I joined in too.
My paws were over my ears, so I couldn’t hear a lot, but I did hear some of Pug’s screaming to the long eared Pup. Again, those weird words, even one that Perdita told me to never say after I began saying lines from this movie I saw on January Eighteenth, which had a cop, explosions, walking on glass (and he was having fun because he was going ‘Yippay’ before saying the word I can not say). Christmas Songs began playing when a lot of names began rolling up the television…
But when Pug used those words, I also think he gave Long Eared Puppy the ‘Bark Brigade’ boot, or something like that! Must be a high honour. I bet it tastes yummay!
Pug then stomped to a tree stump near an old Train Car nearby, behind the Barn!
I heard the funny voices or Wizzer & Dipstick talking after that.
Dipstick was like; “Erm, I’ve never seen anyone talk to Pug like that before!”
And Wizzer was like; “Either he has a deth wish, or he really likes his friend!”
The grass was wet beneath Wizzer, he always makes things wet with a funny smell (and taste to them)…Wait…Friend? He’s my Friend!?
YIPPAY!!!
I ran very fast! I know he went to the forest! I saw him walk this way after Pug talked on giving him a boot, and there’s not much on the way, except six apple trees, an old tractor, a fence, a weird shirt in the ground that tastes like Dish Towels, a waterbu-OH! HEY! IT’S HIM!”
“Hi!”
The Puppy was at the entrance of the forest, but he did hear me, cause he looked around!
He saw me too and was like; “Oh…Hey…”
“Are you my friend?” I ask him “Cause a lot of the Puppies said that you are, because what you said at Pug was really nice for me…”
“Ah, Any excuse to avoid Pug’s class…” The Puppy responded “I’m sure your friends are looking for you, so you better hurry alo-“
“I don’t have any friends…” I told him “But everyone says you did something nice for me! So that means you’re my friend!”
“Look, You’re Sweet and-“
“No, Silly! I’m Blotches!”
The Puppy paused “Erm…My Name’s…”
“Chive!” I yip “I know your name! Roger was looking at a Grocery List when he was naming you! There was also Milk, Bread, Cinnamon, Apples, Yummay Liver Kibble…”
“Uou got a good memory then?” Chive asked me “You could probably tell me your life story, if we had the time…”
“Oh, Yeah!” My tail wagged “It was dark at first, but then everything got pretty bright and then my Mother was cleaning me in a box on this checker board kitc-“
“You can tell me all that later.” Chive said “You said your name was…Blotches?”
“Yeah!” I nod “Your memory is better than Pug’s, or was he playing a game? I like games, like this old doll th-“
Chive spoke before I could tell him about the Doll.
“That sounds too generic sounding. Is it alright I call you, Camera?”
Camera? You can call me Camera? YIPPAY!
I began jumping around! I like that name! I like it a lot!
I leapt on top of Chive and began licking him; “You’re Nice! Actually, you’re Chive! But you’re Nice as in Nice kind of Nice! You’re Chive, My Friend!”
Chive has an odd look on his muzzle, when I licked him, but then he seem to start smiling!
He was like; “Well, You’re nice too. You actually ain’t so bad, Little Buddy!”
I’m going to like him a lot! And I might have more friends since Chive then said to me…
“How’s about I introduce you to Lilly?”
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That's the Fic, I've got another big one in the works at the moment too and I'll try to get that up as soon as I can.
What you Pups think of the Fic then? =3
Let's see if we can get some Creative Juices flowing here. I have written a Fic, focusing around some of General's Pups.
I hope you Pups like the Fic! ;3
---------
My name is Blotches! I’m a Dalmatian that’s Six Months Old! I live on the Dearly Farm, with My Brothers, My Sisters, Pongo, Perdita, Their Puppies, Their Step Puppies, Other Dogs, Two Cows, A Horse, A Cat, Some Pigs, Sheep…
…And a Goose! But today, is the first day of ‘Bark Brigade’! It’s going to be fun! Like when I found that old doll thing in that Creepy House, I was taken to when they let me out of my cage!
I’m standing between two other Puppies. I know their names; I was there when they did. The one on my right is called; Growlie and she’s as happy as me! On my left is this Patchy Eye Puppy named Kit, I’ve seen him do these crazy moves when music plays!
I see a Sheep Dog called ‘The Colonel’ talking to a Pug called…actually, his name IS Pug…NEAT!
The Pug is a Lieutenant in ‘Bark Brigade’ and he’s also our Teacher! He makes us do these things like attacking these bags with Kitty Faces drawn on them, although every time I lick the bags (they taste like Shortbread), Pug shouts at me and says these weird words that I don’t know the meaning of. The other Puppies always seem to look shocked when he does though, so maybe those words are very difficult to say…sometimes he states random facts too, like that my Mother was a Female Dog and I’m her son!
This happens every time I got to Bark Brigade for the next Seventeen Days. Pug always seems to use those strange words and then makes me do Press Ups. Once, he made me do Twenty Eight, then Fifty, Then Forty Seven. Pug always seems to like making me do press ups, I must be good at them or something. He doesn’t really have a good memory though. Each time he talks to me, He either calls me Bleach, Braces or Burpess. He is silly like that, and when I tell him that I’m Blotches, he shouts at me even more.
However, the day he decided to make me do Sixty Five, something happened!
Hr was saying stuff like how smelly I was or how I had less Q.I (Or something like that) of a rock, I heard a voice. The voice sounded like that Rat who lives in that old Smig Washing Machine in the Swamp, except…nicer!
It said; “You’re going to far, Lieutenant!”
Pug’s face froze. He looked away from me and over to another Puppy who had these long floppy ears…he looks funny.
“WHAT WAS THAT!?” Pug shouted, louder than he usually does.
The Pup spoke again; “I said…You’re going too far…”
Pug was then like “Well, Well! Lookie here!” We got ourselves a Short Pot who thinks he can tell me how I may or may not run my Unit! Well, Listen here, Cadet Herb Weed! This is MY Unit and I may address any Flea Ridden Cadet HOWEVER I SEE FIT! Now drop and give me E-Eighty-F-S-N-FOUR!”
Usually, Pug would have did something funny and take a nap on the spot, but the long ear puppy said something that made this…warm thing happen inside me…and I’m sure I wasn’t pregnant.
“No! You may be so righteous in being our Officer, but that doesn’t work as an excuse to act like a Politically Incorrect Backside of a Swine! The Little Fella’s not hurting any body and he clearly doesn’t want to hurt. So, It would be so right as for you not to try and turn him into an Ignorant, Self-Loathing Rat, like you.”
Every Pup there had their mouths wide open, there were some who has jaws nearly hitting the ground!
The Pug looked really mean and angry then! He must have drank that cough thing that Roger has when working late, since he began shaking and his eyes twitched really fast!
A lot of the Puppies around me began to cover their heads and duck down! Must been a game, so I joined in too.
My paws were over my ears, so I couldn’t hear a lot, but I did hear some of Pug’s screaming to the long eared Pup. Again, those weird words, even one that Perdita told me to never say after I began saying lines from this movie I saw on January Eighteenth, which had a cop, explosions, walking on glass (and he was having fun because he was going ‘Yippay’ before saying the word I can not say). Christmas Songs began playing when a lot of names began rolling up the television…
But when Pug used those words, I also think he gave Long Eared Puppy the ‘Bark Brigade’ boot, or something like that! Must be a high honour. I bet it tastes yummay!
Pug then stomped to a tree stump near an old Train Car nearby, behind the Barn!
I heard the funny voices or Wizzer & Dipstick talking after that.
Dipstick was like; “Erm, I’ve never seen anyone talk to Pug like that before!”
And Wizzer was like; “Either he has a deth wish, or he really likes his friend!”
The grass was wet beneath Wizzer, he always makes things wet with a funny smell (and taste to them)…Wait…Friend? He’s my Friend!?
YIPPAY!!!
I ran very fast! I know he went to the forest! I saw him walk this way after Pug talked on giving him a boot, and there’s not much on the way, except six apple trees, an old tractor, a fence, a weird shirt in the ground that tastes like Dish Towels, a waterbu-OH! HEY! IT’S HIM!”
“Hi!”
The Puppy was at the entrance of the forest, but he did hear me, cause he looked around!
He saw me too and was like; “Oh…Hey…”
“Are you my friend?” I ask him “Cause a lot of the Puppies said that you are, because what you said at Pug was really nice for me…”
“Ah, Any excuse to avoid Pug’s class…” The Puppy responded “I’m sure your friends are looking for you, so you better hurry alo-“
“I don’t have any friends…” I told him “But everyone says you did something nice for me! So that means you’re my friend!”
“Look, You’re Sweet and-“
“No, Silly! I’m Blotches!”
The Puppy paused “Erm…My Name’s…”
“Chive!” I yip “I know your name! Roger was looking at a Grocery List when he was naming you! There was also Milk, Bread, Cinnamon, Apples, Yummay Liver Kibble…”
“Uou got a good memory then?” Chive asked me “You could probably tell me your life story, if we had the time…”
“Oh, Yeah!” My tail wagged “It was dark at first, but then everything got pretty bright and then my Mother was cleaning me in a box on this checker board kitc-“
“You can tell me all that later.” Chive said “You said your name was…Blotches?”
“Yeah!” I nod “Your memory is better than Pug’s, or was he playing a game? I like games, like this old doll th-“
Chive spoke before I could tell him about the Doll.
“That sounds too generic sounding. Is it alright I call you, Camera?”
Camera? You can call me Camera? YIPPAY!
I began jumping around! I like that name! I like it a lot!
I leapt on top of Chive and began licking him; “You’re Nice! Actually, you’re Chive! But you’re Nice as in Nice kind of Nice! You’re Chive, My Friend!”
Chive has an odd look on his muzzle, when I licked him, but then he seem to start smiling!
He was like; “Well, You’re nice too. You actually ain’t so bad, Little Buddy!”
I’m going to like him a lot! And I might have more friends since Chive then said to me…
“How’s about I introduce you to Lilly?”
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That's the Fic, I've got another big one in the works at the moment too and I'll try to get that up as soon as I can.
What you Pups think of the Fic then? =3