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Post by Lucky on Aug 29, 2016 17:07:34 GMT -5
I know, but I just don't like how it ended in a cliffhanger, like I do have a scene for a cliffhanger where Shawn stalls Rob long enough for Balance and Kendra to execute their plan, but with a price of going it alone and getting severely injured cause of it, leaving his fate unknown till the RP starts up again, I don't know if Nuke would be up for that idea or not, but I thought it was pretty good idea for a cliffhanger. ^^
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Post by Lucky on Dec 17, 2016 22:38:36 GMT -5
Just something for the Parents to look at before they have their kids read it, but please remember, the most graphic ones that would be R Rated, are uploaded on Fanfiction.Net.
Sex/Nudity 1/10
Just the occasional Kiss between Pups.
Violence and Gore. 7/10
A Grown up dog attacks a pup.
Four pups fight off the foxes. (Way more lighter than the darker version)
Two pups attack each other, but only grunts and groans are heard by their siblings and friends
A dark figure tells a Coyote to finish the job that the pups have started. (I.E. Kill.), with a Fox, the expression that the fox has, explains what's going to happen to him. (Death happens Offscreen.)
A Brother and his sister argue from time to time sometimes leading into a Physical Fight. (Read more info in the Frightening/Intense Scenes.) Four Pups get ambushed by a group of Coyotes.
A Chicken disobeys an order and rides in the back of the truck. (Not really graphic or anything, just played for laughs, if you recall a certain scene from Toy Story.)
Two Male Pups fight, with the fight ending with blood on one of the pups, After being convinced to leave one alone, the other tries to convince him to come back and fight him again.
The pups get badly beaten by a German Shepherd.
A gang attacks the habitants at the farm.
A German Shepherd Taunts a couple of Robbers then attacks them, blood is seen spilt outside the alleyway. (Dark)
A Pup kills a human (Offscreen)
A Pup attacks a bully and his comrades (Offscreen)
Four Pups attack another pup. (This is by far the most violent one of all the stories I've made yet.)
Three Pups and their mentor try to save the farm from a group of Foxes.
A Pup attacks it's Mentor.
A Pup challenges a Grown up to a fight while two others Spectate.
A Pup fights another pup
A Pup Scolds a group of her family members for trying to disobey an order from their enemy. (Implying that August will now try to kill them all.)
A Pup is tortured (Offscreen) To the point where it goes insane and attacks it's sibling.
A Female Pup rescues a baby from a group of Coyotes.
A robotic dog cather tries to catch two dogs only to be sliced in half.
A pup lunges at another pup (See Frightening/Intense Scenes for more Details.)
A Dog talks about feeling remorsed for what she did to the four pups mother, considering that she is a mother of an adopted pup.
A Pup fights another pup (See Frightening/Intense Scenes for more Details.)
Profanity 7/10
Just the regular film PG-13 Language back in the 80's and 90's, the only strongest one is B******, the rest is pretty mild.
Alcohol/Smoking 3/10
Cruella Mentions just like she did in "Home is where the Bark is." About her smoking habit.
Frightening/Intense Scenes 7/10
A pup makes a decision to kill someone (Even though he makes a decision, the action never takes place as it's strongly implied by a Female Pup that he went too far.)
It's implied that a Father abused his pup. (Can be emotional and can upset some readers that have had a rough childhood with their parents.)
A pup dreams that his mother neglects him, since she believes that he was involved with her death. (Can be pretty emotional to readers.)
A Male Pup talks about how much his owners mistreated him (Not as graphic as his Origin Story is, but can upset some readers.)
A Doberman tells the pups what really happened to their mother. (Can be emotional to readers that lost a mother or a father.)
A Male Pup almost kills his brother which Lt. Pug doesn't seem to mind, as Balance tries to stop her brother from doing so. (Can be intense.)
As a Pup lunges at another, the pup makes the hardest decision that she's ever faced. (Can be more emotional than graphic.)
As a fight breaks out between two pups, one drops a Large Hay Bale on top of the other. (Can be graphic if you think he died, but turns out that the pup is okay.)
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Post by Lucky on Feb 12, 2017 6:00:41 GMT -5
Okay, I've been doing some thinking, I'm still going to try and get Season 1 out this year, but I don't know, Writer's Block keeps coming back every now and then, but I don't know where to post this, so I guess this is a good spot, but I do have something to say before the series can continue, I can use Pulse, one of Luna's characters that's been given to a person on this board, she rarely shows, but I plan on using Pulse till the last story, meaning once that story is done, I won't be using her anymore. Hence why when I talked to Luna, Seasons 1-4 and Novels 1 2 and 4 will be known as the Luna Ownership era since she had Pulse when I was planning this stuff out as she calls it.
Including the RP I was doing with my sister, which should be up if or when we can finish it, though I may do a reboot of it, see how it goes with you guys.
But getting back to the subject, August will have a new partner after that, since Days of Future's Past resets the timeline, but for now, I'm looking at the present and trying to get these stories done, once that's done and over with, I doubt I'm going to be doing stories like this again, don't get me wrong, I'm still going to make stories, it's just going to be one shots instead.
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Post by babclayman on Feb 12, 2017 12:25:41 GMT -5
I can understand that case, Shawn. A possible idea, I can suggest, is that you write the Synopsis of the Story, before you write it ot. That way, You Know where you plan the Story to work to; You Know, what I mean? ;3
Hm, I wonder who August's Partnr may be, Eh? B3
You try an RP, with your Sister? May I ask, what the Story of that one is, Shawn?
I guess doing some Shrtr Stories may help a case too, help us see how your Dalmatians act, before the Large Season Long Stories; You Know, what I mean, Shawn!? ;3
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Post by Lucky on Feb 13, 2017 5:38:01 GMT -5
Yeah, I'm not sure where I found the idea of doing this, but the idea seems tempting, because I've done it with an RP that I want to give a try, though I doubt that would see the light of day.
Well, I can honestly say she's pretty.
The story focuses on Balance and her siblings and Luca as they along with Roger goes to see their original owner, however something strange is going on at the Hotel that they are staying at, as August tries his best to recruit the four pups.
True, there are short stories with August, Will, Shawn and Shane in the Fanfic Section, I believe.
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Post by babclayman on Feb 13, 2017 6:41:55 GMT -5
Well, I do know there is an IM RP Section, where others can post their IM RP, if they wnt to. Think you may try that, with the RP, with your Sister, should she be Okay with doing so?
Think you can also post links, to your Shrt Stories, here, Shawn!? ;3
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Post by Lucky on Feb 13, 2017 18:33:10 GMT -5
I think so.
Yep, I can, though I don't know if I should post them here or on a different thread.
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Post by babclayman on Feb 14, 2017 6:50:33 GMT -5
To check, Shawn; where do you post what, May I ask?
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Post by Lucky on Feb 14, 2017 19:59:29 GMT -5
Think you can also post links, to your Shrt Stories, here, Shawn!? ;3 There's your answer.
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Post by Lucky on Apr 24, 2017 17:18:54 GMT -5
Okay, some people are probably confused with what I meant in the RP Board, but what I meant was the RP's and the stories I write are similar in a way to the Sonic The Hedgehog Comics before they went down hill to this day after the Genesis Wave, but here's what I mean, some of the Sonic Comic's that we read would lead to Sonic Universe (Current), Knuckles the Echidna and the Super Sonic Special (Past).
Still confused? Well, during the ChristmasTime at the Park RP (Yes, I still remember it, I haven't forgotten it.), I started thinking that Part 3 of the Life on the Farm Trilogy would lead up to it, then the RP itself would lead into The Christmas story I've been working on, the Christmas Time at the Park led me and Lupus to do an RP where Balance and Shawn would exact revenge. Which Balance explains to Shawn who is going to help them out in Shawn's Nightmare.
With me so far...?
Well, for the Party Crashers RP, I started thinking, August experiencing Thunderbolt's bad chaperoning skills, Amber attacking his (August's Teammates.), etc. (Flo, if you're reading this, don't think I'm taking these actions out on you.) With this it got me to thinking that August would remember this when I get to Story 7, realizing that he will probably mock the pups for not defending themselves and letting the adults do the fighting for them after hearing about how Lucky, Cadpig, Rolly and Spot took care of Cruella and her family and Swamp rat. Which now he believes is a lie.
But these are just ideas.
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Post by babclayman on Apr 24, 2017 19:37:44 GMT -5
So, you mean that some of the RP, on here, are in the Canon of your Stories?
I am thinking that can work, as some thing we plan to do, when we get an RP actve, is that there is Continuitie between the multiple RP.
That does get me thinking, we REALLY do need to try an RP, here. There any Pups able to suggest an RP Idea, or would like to try any of the RP Ideas suggestd, too?
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Post by Lucky on Mar 15, 2018 23:58:36 GMT -5
Okay, the descriptions for Season 1 is almost complete, though I have a surprise for these People when I can get around doing the story. These people are: FlowglibabclaymanBelchicShadow DearlyPawsStirfrySweeney TerrierSnivineriorNemoI could say TT and myself, but we use the Canon characters and well... My characters are still adjusting to the farm life at this point, so I'll be using them to begin with. But in the meantime, I won't spoil the ending, because I want that to be a surprise.
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Post by Sweeney Terrier on Mar 16, 2018 0:20:26 GMT -5
I should point out I don't read the fics made on here. ^^;
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Post by babclayman on Mar 16, 2018 19:02:28 GMT -5
So, you are implying that some of our Dalmatians shall begin to appear in your Story, Shawn?
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Post by Lucky on Mar 16, 2018 19:19:05 GMT -5
Yes and no.
Bab, if the people that I just mentioned won't read the story will just have their character be mentioned or have a cameo in some way. Maybe both.
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