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Post by Raine Dearly on Sept 8, 2015 5:54:11 GMT -5
It was a busy time in Devil Ville and Dimsdale was welcoming everyone into the village. " I hope you all have a happy time and enjoy the village while it lasts. Oh if you get hungry please join me in the best restaurants humans don't work there only happy dogs and dogs who will listen with big smiles." He said.
" How is this possible l, how can dogs work in a restaurant happily of all things?" One of the visitors said.
" Good question I don't know I guess they just want the visitors to have a good no great no a fabulous time a time that you will never ever forget." Dimsdale said.
The visitors carried on.
The scene moves to the restaurant and Melanie and Jacob are cooking up a meal. Melanie has whip marks on her face, chest and back but can't feel because of the happy curse.
" Jacob finish boiling the beans and then add them to the egg mixture obviously we are making rumble tumble. Once you have done that wash up. I am going to do the dessert." Melanie said.
"Sure thing Mella and we can finish our own rumble tumble." Jacob said winking at her.
Melanie winked.
Suddenly Dimsdale comes in to the kitchen and grabs a long metal rod and whacks Melanie on the legs and says" Why haven't you gotten on with the dessert and why is he so slow? YOU USELESS EXCUSE FOR A DOG." thumping Melanie on her back, face and all over her body for 30 minutes.
But of course she can't feel it because of the curse.
First part is done.
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Post by Raine Dearly on Sept 8, 2015 9:58:40 GMT -5
We start with Melanie on the floor in a bloody mess and Dimsdale yells" Get to work now or you will one less toe and thumbs if you don't do as your told. "
Melanie got up slowly but happy.
We turn our attention to Rebecca and she is a show dog or street entertainer. She acted with Antonio. " This crowd is amazing and helpful but most importantly happy. She was also a carriage dog also along side Antonio and her Mother.
Dimsdale would say thinks like " Why I you like slow and unreliable. Get on your paws and 200 push ups in 20 mins all of you."
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Post by Deleted on Sept 15, 2015 1:11:19 GMT -5
Again.. why is a dog cooking? How can Dimsdale understand Melanie? Are they anthros? Why is Rebecca some street performer instead of a.. you know, carriage hound? This still makes no sense Raine.
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Post by Lucky on Sept 15, 2015 14:10:01 GMT -5
I do have to agree with Mizan, plus when Dimmsdale beats Melanie, don't you think that's actually dark, Raine?
I've got to say that it should be censored in a way here, but yeah, that's just me dude.
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Post by Raine Dearly on Sept 15, 2015 19:09:27 GMT -5
Sorry Melanie responds in actions not in words. Yeah alright I'll censor it. I'm trying to explain why Melanie is where she is.
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Post by Deleted on Sept 18, 2015 16:23:25 GMT -5
are they anthros? It'd make more sense to me if they were. I just can't see a four-legged DOG with a cooking job
and again why is Rebecca a street performer? You hadn't really explained that.
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