Post by randy22 on Apr 12, 2016 6:42:18 GMT -5
This story is in the main character's POV (point of view) (I went with this because I want to try something different)
2 DAYS AGO, I was separated from my owner, Jacob. We were supposed to go to Lake Wakefield together, and I would accompany him fishing. But during one of our stops as a gas station, he went off without me by accident. I tried chasing him as fast as my puppy feet could run
But he was long gone.
I am now on the road, walking as I try to find him, after I spent the last 2 days at the gas station where I was left off by my owner. Sometimes I wonder if there are other dalmatians like me. I've heard about a farm called the Dearly farm, which had 101 dalmatians. 101? That's a lot. They're lucky not to be separated from their owners, unlike me. They're lucky to have siblings to be with, unlike me. You see, I was separated by my parents at a Pet shop in Grutely. At that time, my parents were sick, and I heard that my siblings have been adopted. Jacob eventually adopted me and gave me a name
Dante
It's evening now, I walk along the road as I see a sign that says: "LAKE WAKEFIELD: 4 MILES". 4 miles. I supposed that won't be a problem for me to walk to the lake at that distance. I am a puppy that loves to walk, as I like to move my body around. I've been walking for 2 hours ever since I left the gas station and at the same time, rest my body. Now, I run as fast as I can, as if I'm chasing something. In the middle of my journey to find my owner, I come across a dark forest....
.....where the straight way was lost.
How can this be? I've followed the road before and I was pretty certain that it ONLY went straight. Oh well, it isn't the end of the road. In the forest, I take a left. As I walk that way, I can hear whispering, calling my name
"Dante...", the voice in the woods say. I try to stay calm. What kind of forest is this? Just then I hear a cries for help. It comes from deep in the woods to my right. I run towards the direction. There, I see a duffel bag moving. And there I realized that the cries for help came from the bag. I decide to help whoever's trapped in there. There I rescue 3 dalmatians named Lucky, Rolly, and Cadpig. I also rescue a chicken named Spot, who happens to be their friend. They say they got in the bag because Cadpig thought someone was in trouble. Also they say they got lost and separated from their owners and siblings during their way to Lake Wakefield. I eventually cooperate with them to go to Lake Wakefield with me
*
Lucky, Rolly, Cadpig, Spot and I walk along the curvy paths in the forest. I notice that the moon is up in the sky. It's night now. I can hear crows flying in the sky and more sounds in the forest. Seconds later, I look behind me
A shadowy figure is behind us. The figure is in the shape of a dog, with only yellow eyes and sharp teeth. He begins to chase us!
"Guys! run!", I yell out to the pups and Spot, who realize the situation when she looks back as well. We run as fast as we could, but the shadow catches up. We run along every curve we see on the road, then I see a road heading straight out of the forest!
"Come on Dante! We can make it!", Lucky says as he leads the way out. He gets out first, followed by me and Rolly. I run past Spot, who is trying to keep up. I then see the figure aiming for a tired Spot
"Oh no you don't!", I say to the figure as I protect Spot. The shadow figure speeds towards me, and he enters my body. My body gets pushed far and I get slammed on the path
"Dante!", Spot says as she tries to help me
I struggle to get this shadow figure out. Then the figure comes out of my stomach and says "Your end is now, Dante". I scream as my vision goes black
*
Just then, I wake up. I find myself surrounded by Lucky, Rolly, Cadpig and Spot. I see other dalmatians playing at the lake. I see a couple talking with...Jacob!. I look around my surroundings. I see that we're at Lake Wakefield! How come!?
"Dante you okay?", Lucky asks
"Yeah, you just woke up from your sleep 2 hours ago", Rolly says
I become confused. "Didn't I find you guys at a dark forest that had NO straight ways? And that we were chased by a shadow figure?", I ask them. They shake their heads
"What's going on!?", I yell.
Cadpig and Spot calm me down. They explain the situation, what really happened and how come I am with them: First, they met me and Jacob at the gas station, where Jacob says that his car broke down and needs repairment, so the pups and Spot's owners, a couple named Roger and Anita, offered me and Jacob a ride to Lake Wakefield. Spot also adds that I slept throughout the entire trip from the gas station to Lake Wakefield. So everything that happened to me: the dark forest, the voices, and the shadow figure; it was all just in my head while I was sleeping. A bad dream in other words
Just then, a 3 legged dalmatian with a green headband comes to us. "Hey guys!", he says
"What's up Tripod?", Spot says to him.
"Roger and Anita just said that Jacob notices that we were comfortable with Dante. He wants to give Dante to us! We have a new sibling!"
I become shocked, but smile at this. The pups and Spot hug me in happiness. I am a new member of their family. I finally have siblings.
The End
2 DAYS AGO, I was separated from my owner, Jacob. We were supposed to go to Lake Wakefield together, and I would accompany him fishing. But during one of our stops as a gas station, he went off without me by accident. I tried chasing him as fast as my puppy feet could run
But he was long gone.
I am now on the road, walking as I try to find him, after I spent the last 2 days at the gas station where I was left off by my owner. Sometimes I wonder if there are other dalmatians like me. I've heard about a farm called the Dearly farm, which had 101 dalmatians. 101? That's a lot. They're lucky not to be separated from their owners, unlike me. They're lucky to have siblings to be with, unlike me. You see, I was separated by my parents at a Pet shop in Grutely. At that time, my parents were sick, and I heard that my siblings have been adopted. Jacob eventually adopted me and gave me a name
Dante
It's evening now, I walk along the road as I see a sign that says: "LAKE WAKEFIELD: 4 MILES". 4 miles. I supposed that won't be a problem for me to walk to the lake at that distance. I am a puppy that loves to walk, as I like to move my body around. I've been walking for 2 hours ever since I left the gas station and at the same time, rest my body. Now, I run as fast as I can, as if I'm chasing something. In the middle of my journey to find my owner, I come across a dark forest....
.....where the straight way was lost.
How can this be? I've followed the road before and I was pretty certain that it ONLY went straight. Oh well, it isn't the end of the road. In the forest, I take a left. As I walk that way, I can hear whispering, calling my name
"Dante...", the voice in the woods say. I try to stay calm. What kind of forest is this? Just then I hear a cries for help. It comes from deep in the woods to my right. I run towards the direction. There, I see a duffel bag moving. And there I realized that the cries for help came from the bag. I decide to help whoever's trapped in there. There I rescue 3 dalmatians named Lucky, Rolly, and Cadpig. I also rescue a chicken named Spot, who happens to be their friend. They say they got in the bag because Cadpig thought someone was in trouble. Also they say they got lost and separated from their owners and siblings during their way to Lake Wakefield. I eventually cooperate with them to go to Lake Wakefield with me
*
Lucky, Rolly, Cadpig, Spot and I walk along the curvy paths in the forest. I notice that the moon is up in the sky. It's night now. I can hear crows flying in the sky and more sounds in the forest. Seconds later, I look behind me
A shadowy figure is behind us. The figure is in the shape of a dog, with only yellow eyes and sharp teeth. He begins to chase us!
"Guys! run!", I yell out to the pups and Spot, who realize the situation when she looks back as well. We run as fast as we could, but the shadow catches up. We run along every curve we see on the road, then I see a road heading straight out of the forest!
"Come on Dante! We can make it!", Lucky says as he leads the way out. He gets out first, followed by me and Rolly. I run past Spot, who is trying to keep up. I then see the figure aiming for a tired Spot
"Oh no you don't!", I say to the figure as I protect Spot. The shadow figure speeds towards me, and he enters my body. My body gets pushed far and I get slammed on the path
"Dante!", Spot says as she tries to help me
I struggle to get this shadow figure out. Then the figure comes out of my stomach and says "Your end is now, Dante". I scream as my vision goes black
*
Just then, I wake up. I find myself surrounded by Lucky, Rolly, Cadpig and Spot. I see other dalmatians playing at the lake. I see a couple talking with...Jacob!. I look around my surroundings. I see that we're at Lake Wakefield! How come!?
"Dante you okay?", Lucky asks
"Yeah, you just woke up from your sleep 2 hours ago", Rolly says
I become confused. "Didn't I find you guys at a dark forest that had NO straight ways? And that we were chased by a shadow figure?", I ask them. They shake their heads
"What's going on!?", I yell.
Cadpig and Spot calm me down. They explain the situation, what really happened and how come I am with them: First, they met me and Jacob at the gas station, where Jacob says that his car broke down and needs repairment, so the pups and Spot's owners, a couple named Roger and Anita, offered me and Jacob a ride to Lake Wakefield. Spot also adds that I slept throughout the entire trip from the gas station to Lake Wakefield. So everything that happened to me: the dark forest, the voices, and the shadow figure; it was all just in my head while I was sleeping. A bad dream in other words
Just then, a 3 legged dalmatian with a green headband comes to us. "Hey guys!", he says
"What's up Tripod?", Spot says to him.
"Roger and Anita just said that Jacob notices that we were comfortable with Dante. He wants to give Dante to us! We have a new sibling!"
I become shocked, but smile at this. The pups and Spot hug me in happiness. I am a new member of their family. I finally have siblings.
The End