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Post by Belchic on Mar 30, 2008 15:04:59 GMT -5
Before I begin this fic, here's a brief introduction. I've noticed that Otis doesn't seem to be getting much appreciation as he should on this board. I've been expecting him to make a cameo in Trey_Vore's current fic, but so far, no such luck. So, I thought I'd write my first fanfic episode with him. Basically, this episode is about how he first came onto the farm, and this first chapter will talk about his background story. This way, you'll know a little more about my little sealion. -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Otis was born and raised in the circus. He was one of four pups that belonged to a mother and father sealion who performed circus acts.
A lot of times, Otis didn't feel like he really fit in. Otis had a love for 80's music, but everyone else in his family hated it. He also had something weird about himself that made him different from other sealions; whenever her got happy or excited, he would pant like a dog, and this irritated his family a lot, but he couldn't help it; it was a habbit he couldn't get out of. Otis got into a lot of arguments with his parents about all these thing he did that annoyed them. Eventually, he became fed up with it.
Since Otis was the oldest of the four pups and old enough to make his own decisions, he decided that he should depart from his family and live his own life. One night, while the circus train was moving to its next destination, Otis jumped out of the train leaving behind a note saying: "Dear Family, It has occurred to me that I am getting on your nerves. I've decided to go set out into the world and live my own life. Please do not try to stop me. I'm old enough to make my own decisions, and I've decided to leave the family. I will miss you all, but hopefully, I'll have the time of my life where ever I go. Love you always, Otis"
After the train was long gone, Otis began his journey.
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Post by Tic-Tac on Mar 30, 2008 15:57:39 GMT -5
it's a good start.
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Post by Trey_Vore on Mar 30, 2008 18:02:01 GMT -5
Don't give up hope, Belchic. What the future holds may surprise you...
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Post by Belchic on Apr 1, 2008 22:28:28 GMT -5
I'll continue this sometime later.
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Post by Belchic on Apr 5, 2008 1:45:45 GMT -5
Here's Part 2 of the Story: -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------
It was already late at night when Otis left his train. He continued to walk through the forest, which is often a dangerous place to be at night. He soon got tired. So, he decided to go to sleep until morning.
Morning soon came, and Otis woke up. He needed to find water. So, he went on. It wasn't long until he found a little pond. This pond happened to be Hiccup Hole. "I guess I could swim around in here," he thought. He jumped into the swimming hole. Even though he was a salt water animal, he didn't seem to mind the fresh water.
Just then, Otis heard someone walking by. Otis peeked up to see who it was. It was Roxy. Roxy turned around and caught Otis, but then she jumped in shock. "It's okay, I'm friendly," said Otis. Roxy came up to Otis wondering about him. "Are you a sealion?" she asked. "Yep, I'm a sealion," Otis answered. "Well, this is totally rad," said Roxy. "It's not every day I see sealions around here. I thought they were coastal animals." "I'm kinda lonely here right now," said Otis. "You want to jump in and play?" "That'd be the bomb, dude!" cheered Roxy. She jumped in. "So what's your name?" asked Otis. Roxy replied, "I'm Roxy." "Nice to meet you, Roxy," said Otis. "My name's Otis." "So, Otis, where'd you come from?" Roxy asked. Otis told his story. "I'm a pup to a couple of circus sealions. My parents were annoyed by my obsession with 80's music and this weird habit I have of panting. Basically, I just ditched my family so I can live my own life." "Is that so?" Roxy started. "Yep," said Otis, "and so far, it feels great. The circus has gotten annoying to me, anyway." "I think you'll love it here," said Roxy. "It's very peaceful here. Would you like me to show you around the place?" "Sure," said Otis, "but first, why don't we play around a little more?" "You know, Otis," said Roxy, "being a sealion, I bet you'd be a very fast swimmer!" "Oh, you want to see how fast I can swim?" asked Otis. "Well, climb aboard, and I'll give you a little ride!" Otis moved up toward the surface, and Roxy climbed onto his back. Otis swam really fast, and both of them had a lot of fun.
A few minutes later, the two of them got out of the water, and they decided to sit and talk with each other. "So, Otis," Roxy started, "did you tell me earlier that you were into 80's music?" "Yeah," said Otis, "but my parents hate it." "I'm like totally stoked that you're into it! I totally love everything about the 80's!" "You are? Well, that's cool," said Otis. "That was definitely a good decade." Silence then broke for a few seconds as each one tried to think of something to talk about. Suddenly, Roxy's stomach growled. "Oops. Excuse me," Roxy said blushing. "I guess I'm a little hungry." Otis almost giggled, but he didn't so that Roxy wouldn't be embarrassed. "You hungry, Otis?" she asked. "Not really," Otis answered, "but I could eat. Do you know where we could get food around here?" "Sure," said Roxy. "Follow me." Roxy led Otis to Dearly Farm. As they walked, they talked to each other. "So what kind of stuff do you eat?" asked Roxy. "I like to eat lots of stuff," said Otis, "but my absolute favorite food is fish." "I don't know if we get fish around here," said Roxy. "Even if we did, it's not something I'd go for. There are certain kinds of foods that don't settle well in my stomach, and fish is one of them." "My stomach can handle anything," said Otis. "I used to eat all the carnival food that got thrown into the ring during some of our circus performances. Some of our shows were pretty bad." "Wait'll you meed my friends, Otis," said Roxy. "I've got like the coolest friends ever. I live on a farm that's owned by a married couple, and they have one hundred and one dalmatians." "Wow," said Otis. "That's a lot of dogs." "They're all puppies, except for the two parents, of course," Roxy continued. "There are other animals on the farm who are pretty cool friends too." "I look forward to seeing them," said Otis.
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Post by Drake on Apr 5, 2008 4:08:01 GMT -5
Here's some advice, just add in the enter thing, you know a new line after they talk to start what the next person says on a whole new line, makes it a bit easier to read that way
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Post by Trey_Vore on Apr 5, 2008 8:05:32 GMT -5
Good idea.
I like the story so far.
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Post by RaceFanX on Apr 18, 2008 23:06:35 GMT -5
This is getting interesting
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Post by Belchic on Apr 19, 2008 2:33:27 GMT -5
Glad to hear that it is. I'll post up a new chapter tomorrow night.
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Post by Belchic on Apr 20, 2008 2:48:18 GMT -5
Part 3: -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Otis followed Roxy onto the farm, but then he heard something. Without letting Roxy know, Otis went exploring to see what the sound was coming from. It wasn't until a few seconds later when Roxy discovered that Otis was missing. "Now, where did he go?" she wondered. Roxy thought it would be wise to go look for him, but she was still hungry and didn't know what to do at this point.
Meanwhile, Otis came around to what he heard. He saw two pups having a conversation with each other. It was Belchic and Tippy.
"Hi," said Otis. Tippy and Belchic were rather surprised. "Slippery Slay. When did we get to the bay?" Belchic blurted out. Otis introduced himself, "My name is Otis. I'm new around here." "Pleased to meet you," said Belchic. "I'm Belchic." "That's kind of an odd name for a dog," said Otis. "I'm Tippy," said Tippy, "I'm Belchic's soul mate."
"So what's your story, Otis?" asked Belchic. "Well," explained Otis, "I've escaped from the circus to live my own life. As I was wandering, I found my way here. I think I like it here. I was told that a bunch of Dalmatian puppies live here, and you're the first two I've met so far. Uh...do you guys happen to know about a little fox named Roxy?" "Oh, yeah," said Tippy. "That cute little vixen pops up around here very often." "We happen to be friends of hers," said Belchic.
"You two said that you were boyfriend and girlfriend, right?" said Otis. "Yep, we sure are," said Belchic with a grin. "Well, this may sound kind of odd," said Otis, "but I kinda have a crush on Roxy." Belchic and Tippy looked at Otis oddly. Otis went on, "I know that sounds a little crazy. I know she's a vulpine and I'm a pinniped, but hey, nobody's perfect, right?"
"So, what are you saying, exactly?" asked Belchic. "I was wondering if you could give me some advice," said Otis, "on how to get her to like me enough for her to be my girlfriend." "Sure, I'm willing to help you," said Tippy with a smile. Otis then started a topic on something he was trying to get. "I have this habit of panting whenever I get really happy or excited, kinda like how you dogs do. This is part of the reason why I left my old home, because my family was annoyed by this habit. Now that I've met Roxy, my dream is to do something that'll make Roxy so happy that she would do the same."
"Well, I'm not sure if we could help you too much on this deal," warned Belchic. "We're not sealions or foxes. We're dogs. However, every animal has their own special peculiarity on what they do or like to do. Take a look at Tippy for example. I happen to know of something she really likes." Belchic demonstrated by petting Tippy on the head; Tippy responded by panting and wagging her tail. "Aww, that's cute," sighed Otis. Belchic continued, "And I know that there's nothing a girl likes better than a tickle on the tummy!" Belchic tickled Tippy's tummy, and she rolled with laughter. "So you see, Otis, that's my advice to you. Keep stuff like that in mind, and come up with something that you think might make her happy, but try not to go overboard." "Thanks, Belchic," Otis responded.
"I'm sure you can gain her heart somehow, Otis," said Tippy. "Most of the girls on this farm are total sweethearts. I for one am one of them. Personally, I love Belchic so much, and I wouldn't trade him for any other pup." "I kinda know how you feel now, Otis," said Belchic. "There was a time when I didn't have a girlfriend. I didn't think I'd ever have one, because I stink, and also because I'm so fat." "You're not fat," said Tippy, "you're big-boned." "What? Big-boned?" exclaimed Belchic grabbing his stomach and shaking it as he spoke. "This is not bone! Bone does not jiggle like this!" "Okay," said Tippy, "I stand corrected.
"Anyway, Otis," Belchic continued, "before Tippy and I were together, I always loved to watch some of the other pups give each other piggyback rides. One couple in particular was a pup named Lucky, and his soul mate, Two-Tone. Every time I saw Two-Tone give Lucky a piggyback ride, I just couldn't help but admire how cute they looked. Of course, I always sighed at such. Most of the girl pups on this farm are small, and I thought that I would never get a piggyback ride from a girl because I was so heavy. But then, I met Tippy, and then the clouds lifted."
"That was a very interesting story, Belchic," said Otis. "Now that I think of it, Tippy sure is a tall pup. She must be pretty strong." "You bet I am!" said Tippy. "Still, I don't believe she can possibly lift you, Belchic, judging by how fat you are and how skinny she is," said Otis. "You wanna bet, Otis?" Tippy poked in. Tippy then demonstrated by grabbing Belchic, lifting him up, and putting him on her shoulders. "Now do you believe how strong I am?" "Wow," said Otis. "That's incredible, Tippy!" "Yeah, a lot of the pups here are a lot stronger than they may seem," added Belchic.
Otis then turned away. "Well, it was nice meeting you guys, but I gotta move on. I'm gonna get acquainted with some of the other livestock on this farm. Hey, come visit me at Hiccup Hole and come swimming with me sometime." Belchic and Tippy waved goodbye to Otis as he scooted off.
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Post by Belchic on May 9, 2008 2:06:29 GMT -5
Sorry for the delay, guys. Here's Part 4: -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Meanwhile, Roxy had just turned around and noticed that Otis wasn't with her. "That's funny," she thought. "Where did Otis go?"
Just then, Lucky, Cadpig, Rolly and Spot approached her. "What's up, Roxy?" Lucky greeted. "Oh, hey, guys," said Roxy. "How's it going?" "Not much," said Lucky. "We were going to go have some fun elsewhere. Would you like to tag along?" "Uh, well, I..." Roxy started. She paused for a few seconds as she didn't know what to say. She was still thinking about Otis. "Girl, are you feeling alright?" asked Spot. Roxy uttered, "Well, yeah...but I...I..." She paused again. Before Roxy could say anything, her stomach growled in the most embarrassing way. She jumped into shock and blushed red. "Hmm," said Cadpig. "It sounds to me like Roxy is hungry." "Yeah," Roxy said blushing, "I haven't eaten anything all day. You don't know how embarrassing this is." "Oh, of course we do," said Lucky with confidence. "We've all been there." "But I think Rolly has more than any of us," said Cadpig. "Really?" asked Roxy. "I guess it must suck to be him." "That's okay," said Rolly, "I'm used to it."
Just then, Belchic and Tippy came in. "Hey, yall!" Belchic greeted. "Have we got some news to tell you!" said Tippy. They were about to tell the other pups about Otis, but before they can start, Noggin came out of the barn to join the party. "Say, what's all the commotion?" he asked. Lucky filled Noggin in, "Well, the four of us were going to do something. The thing is, we don't know what yet. Belchic and Tippy were about to tell us some exciting news. However, Roxy is hungry." Thinking quickly, Noggin came up with a great idea. "Let's go into the barn and make some pizza," he suggested. "What?" said everyone else. "Noggin, do you realise that we're going to need a lot of required ingredients and materials to make pizza?" Spot butted in. "Where do you think we're going to find an oven?" "Um...in the barn?" said Noggin. "Really?" said Rolly. "Who put an oven in there?" asked Lucky. "Well, it's amazing what you'd find in barns these days," said Noggin. Of course, little do the pups know, Noggin actually built the oven, which he built in his laboratory underneath the barn (which is secretly unknown to the other Dalmatians).
A smile then went onto Roxy's face. "Pizza?" she said. "That sounds delicious." She started rubbing her belly and licking her chops as she was thinking about it. She then said to the pups, "I like mine with lots of cheese!" "Alright," Noggin said, "then let's make some pizza!" "Oh, papa!" Rolly exclaimed excitedly. The group then went into the barn. "I'll get the toppings ready," said Lucky. "I'll make the sauce," said Tippy. "I'll grate the cheese," said Cadpig. "And I'll get in the way and make a big mess!" said Belchic. Everyone laughed. -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Starting to sound exciting yet?
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Post by Tic-Tac on May 9, 2008 14:24:12 GMT -5
Starting to sound exciting yet?
Not really....sorry. Keep at it though!
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Post by Belchic on May 11, 2008 1:08:25 GMT -5
Part 5: -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------
In the upper loft of the barn, the pups all worked together putting together their pizza. Roxy waited patiently on the lower level. As she was waiting, she continued to think about Otis. Little did she know, Otis was continuing to get acquainted with the other livestock on the farm. It just so happened that he was talking with Patch and Jewel at this very moment.
As the pups were cooking their pizza, Belchic told the others about Otis. All of the pups were excited about meeting him...except Noggin; he was left uninterested. Eventually, the pups mega cheese pizza was completed. Belchic took the honors of serving the first slice to Roxy. "Hey, Roxy!" he called down to her. "Heads up!" Belchic attempted to toss down the slice so that it would land right on the plate in front of Roxy. Roxy was looking up. However, Belchic's aim was a little off, and the slice landed right into Roxy's face! Cadpig looked down and saw the inncodent. Jokingly, she just simply said, "That's Amore."
After the pups all finished eating, that was about the time Otis came in. The main pups were surprised, Belchic, Tippy and Roxy were happy, and Noggin was still uninterested. "Otis! I knew you'd come back!" Roxy said happily. Otis introduced himself to Lucky, Rolly, Cadpig, Noggin and Spot and told them the same story he told everyone else. "I've decided that I'm going to live in Hiccup Hole," he said. "I hope that one day, I'll invite a lot of the pups here over to have a pool party with me there." "Sounds like fun," said Lucky, "but I think we may need to get permission from Lucy first." "Who's Lucy?" asked Otis. "Lucy's a crabby old goose who lives around here," said Cadpig, "and she acts like she's the owner of Hiccup Hole, when she's really not." "She tends to get really mad at us when we splash around at that pond," said Lucky.
Lucky, Cadpig, Rolly and Spot decided to show off some after-meal entertainment by doing some jamming. They all got up to their band equipment and played Dire Straits' "Walk of Life" (an 80's song for Roxy's and Otis' sake). After they played, everyone else applauded. Noggin then butted in, "Did they get the rights to play that song?" "Shut up, Noggin," said Belchic.
Soon, it started getting late. Otis said his goodbyes to everyone and finally, Roxy. "Will I see you tomorrow, Roxy?" he asked. "You bet!" said Roxy. "I also promise that I'll go swimming with you too!" "Alright!" shouted Otis. "I'll see you tomorrow, then!" So, Otis went back to Hiccup Hole and went to sleep.
The next morning, Otis woke up. He was really excited about seeing Roxy again. "Oh, I can't wait!" he said to himself. "This is going to be so much fun getting to play with Roxy again!" He waited patiently for her to show up. However, it seemed that Roxy wasn't showing up. Otis waited and waited and waited for her. Eventually, Otis stopped waiting. "This is getting ridiculous!" he said. "If she's not coming for me, I'm just going to have to go up there and get her myself!" And that's just what he did.
When he arrived at the farm, he looked all around for Roxy, but he couldn't find her anywhere. Eventually, he came to the front of the barn, and he found Cadpig. "Hi, Otis," she said. "Is there something you need?" "Do you happen to know where Roxy is?" Otis asked. "Oh, she's right behind that tree," Cadpig said pointing to the big tree next to the barn. So Otis went right over to that tree. When he looked behind it, his eyes grew big! Otis was shocked to see Roxy in the arms of the Dalmatian pup known as Kit! Terrified to see the two making out, Otis cried out, "ROXY!" Roxy and Kit turned to Otis. Roxy was shocked, and Kit looked rather annoyed. "Roxy, how could you?" Otis cried out as tears came to his eyes. Roxy tried to say something to Otis, but before she could, he bursted into tears and ran away crying. Roxy started to run after him, but it was too late; hearing his crying made her feel his pain. "What the heck was that all about?" Kit asked amazed. Roxy remained silent. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Things are starting to get dramatic now!
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Post by Trey_Vore on May 11, 2008 3:09:03 GMT -5
Taking a few pictures a little too personally?
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Post by Belchic on May 23, 2008 1:12:27 GMT -5
The next chapter: -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------
A few minutes later, Roxy got together with Lucky, Rolly, Cadpig, Belchic and Tippy. "Hey, Roxy," said Lucky, "do you know what Otis has been up to? We were planning to go swimming with him." "Sounds like fun," said Roxy, "but I don't think he'd be in the mood." "How come?" Lucky asked. Roxy explained, "Otis is really upset. A few minutes ago, he just ran away crying because he saw Kit kissing me." "He must have thought you two were in love," said Cadpig. "Well, we're not," said Roxy. "You know that Kit does get confused a lot." "Well," Cadpig replied, "I wouldn't expect a fox like you dating a bisexual dog anyway."
"Tough times with women, huh?" Belchic butted in. "When it comes to love, you really gotta watch what you say and what you do," Tippy added. She then gave an example by turning to Belchic. "Belchy, how do I look?" she asked. "Tippy, you look beautiful!" Belchic answered. "Really?" Tippy denied. "I thought I was really skinny." "I'm not gonna go there," said Belchic. "I've always done my best to watch what I say to women...ever since that time I met Kate Moss."
-Flashback-
It's a catwalk. Kate Moss walks out as "Around the World" by Daft Punk plays. The audience cheers.
Kate Moss: I'd like to turn the whole world on!
Within the cheering audience is Belchic.
Belchic: *howls, woofs and pants* Man, look at that sexy stomach! I've seen pancakes fatter than that!
The record scratches. Kate gasps at Belchic's remark.
Kate Moss: PERVERT!
She kicks him in the head with her high-heel.
Belchic: Owwie. That's gonna hurt in the morning!
-End of Flashback-
Tippy: Aww, I don't mind, Belchy.
Belchic: I swear, Tippy, I've never met anyone as generous as you.
Cadpig: Okay, you two. Cut the cutesy stuff. You're not the stars of this episode.
While the group was talking Cruella was visiting with the Dearly's. She had just then left the house. Lucky decided to listen in. "Thank you, Anita, dear," Cruella said. "It sure was nice to have a visit." As soon as she was out of Anita's site, Cruella pulled out her tape recorder. "Memo to myself: Make updates on my master plans to steal the Dearly's farm." Lucky was the only pup who caught that. He had to warn the others.
"Guys! We've got some trouble!" Lucky shouted. "Curella has some sort of master plan to steal the farm, and it's worse than she's ever done!" "And I suppose we're gonna have to stop her, right?" Cadpig assumed. "That's totally unhip," said Roxy. "I've got a master plan to stop her master plan," said Lucky with a grin. "Ooh, I like where this is going!" Belchic said getting excited. Lucky then explained his plan: "If you guys may have noticed, Cruella's plans have always been stopped by Spot, Rolly, Cadpig and me. But now, I think it's time we gave her a little surprise by sending in an army of puppies to take her out!" "Now I REALLY like where this is going!" Belchic remarked. "Okay," Lucky ordered, "everyone go around the farm and recruit as many pups as you can. We're all going to work together to make an invasion on Cruella's maste plan!"
And so, that's just what they did. All six of them recruited as many pups as they could get to join forces in this battle. They managed to get a lot, and in the end, the team turned out to be Lucky, Cadpig, Rolly, Two-Tone, Belchic, Tippy, Noggin, Konami, Sneezy, Roxy, Sanka, Tripod, Jewel, Patch, Wizzer, Dipstick, Drake, Star, Tripod, Raiden, Sonya, Slayer, Lita, Nuke, Buzzsaw, Daisy, Silky, Doc, Clayton and Kendra. "Alright! Are we all ready?" Lucky shouted. The pups answered, "YEAH!" "LET'S SAVE THE FARM!" Lucky yelled as they all charged towards Villa De Vil.
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------- It's starting to get intense now!
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