Post by Belchic on Sept 16, 2015 15:02:33 GMT -5
It's been almost three years since anyone has touched this thread!
Since I posted a new mini fanfic recently, I shall post the database for it here:
Title:
Joey's Foxy Rescue
Chapters:
1
Plotline:
Joey attempts to spend a day with Roxy and some of his friends until they get an unexpected visit from the Heartbreakers. Diana is determined to turn Roxy evil again and have her work for her. Will this be Joey's chance to save her and gain her as a friend?
Characters who appear in the Story:
Roxy, Joey, Lucky, Rolly, Cadpig, Two-Tone, Belchic, Tippy, Clayton, Lizzie, Diana, Emma and Stealth
Facts:
- This was my first trade-off story I wrote in exchange for getting an art piece from a client. In this case, Trey_Vore was my client, and this was in exchange for the two part drawing he did of the Dalmatian pups rein acting a part from the Littlest Pet Shop episode, "If the Shoe Fits".
- Trey told me I could write at my own will, so I did.
- The scene with Cadpig taunting Stealth was something I wanted to do for two reasons:
1) I didn't want to make it seem like I was glorifying my characters.
2) I wanted to show off the personality of a character who was cannon.
Continuity:
This story takes place after the events of the RP, "Hunt Through Mt. Grutely", as many references to it were made to it in the story.
Inside References:
- The "Honorary Pup" thing is a shoutout to babclayman's Christmas fanfic he wrote back in 2008 when Roger gave Roxy a collar.
- The events of the "Hunt Through Mt. Grutely" RP were brought up a lot in this story.
- Roxy thinking back to when she carried Star on her back is a reference to the scene from Trey's fanfic, "Domana-Trix Aren't for Pups".
- The scene where the Heartbreakers are piled up spying on the pups and getting into their disguise is a reference to another image that Trey_Vore drew for me about a year ago.
- "Code 2-5-3-8" is a reference to babclayman's fanfic, "Scorch Scraper", when the main pups assembled their totem.
Real World References:
- The Pokemon episode Joey refers to that he, Roxy and the others watch all together is Season 1, Episode 27: "Pokemon Fashion Flash".
- Diana bragging about the disguise being perfect is a shoutout to Zoe saying the same thing at the same time in the Littlest Pet Shop episode, "If the Shoe Fits".
- Tenant is a shoutout to David Tenant, one of the most popular actors to portray the Doctor in "Doctor Who".
- Clayton clearly knowing that the disguised Heartbreakers are really three pups in a trench coat is in some ways a shoutout to "Bojack Horseman" where the title character says this about "Vincent Adultman".
- Belchic mentions an overused cliche that happens a lot in pop culture when characters hypnotize other characters to think they are something else. Most of the time, they always default to making their victims think they are chickens. It's happened in "Alvin and the Chipmunks", "Adventures of Sonic the Hedgehog", "Garfield and Friends", "Earthworm Jim", and countless other shows.
- Tippy acting as a step stool allowing the pups to hop onto her over the wall one by one is a reference to to the "Pound Puppies" episode, "Elementary, My Dear Pups", when Pepper did such to let the Super Secret Pup Club pups out the window.
Deleted Sequences:
- The argument between Belchic and Clayton was going to go on a little longer and have much deeper dialogue, but I decided to cut it short as I feared some of the things that were said would arouse drama on the board.
Feedback:
So far, nobody has given me any feedback on this story.
Just a suggestion: Should this topic be moved to the "Fanfic Discussion" thread?
Since I posted a new mini fanfic recently, I shall post the database for it here:
Title:
Joey's Foxy Rescue
Chapters:
1
Plotline:
Joey attempts to spend a day with Roxy and some of his friends until they get an unexpected visit from the Heartbreakers. Diana is determined to turn Roxy evil again and have her work for her. Will this be Joey's chance to save her and gain her as a friend?
Characters who appear in the Story:
Roxy, Joey, Lucky, Rolly, Cadpig, Two-Tone, Belchic, Tippy, Clayton, Lizzie, Diana, Emma and Stealth
Facts:
- This was my first trade-off story I wrote in exchange for getting an art piece from a client. In this case, Trey_Vore was my client, and this was in exchange for the two part drawing he did of the Dalmatian pups rein acting a part from the Littlest Pet Shop episode, "If the Shoe Fits".
- Trey told me I could write at my own will, so I did.
- The scene with Cadpig taunting Stealth was something I wanted to do for two reasons:
1) I didn't want to make it seem like I was glorifying my characters.
2) I wanted to show off the personality of a character who was cannon.
Continuity:
This story takes place after the events of the RP, "Hunt Through Mt. Grutely", as many references to it were made to it in the story.
Inside References:
- The "Honorary Pup" thing is a shoutout to babclayman's Christmas fanfic he wrote back in 2008 when Roger gave Roxy a collar.
- The events of the "Hunt Through Mt. Grutely" RP were brought up a lot in this story.
- Roxy thinking back to when she carried Star on her back is a reference to the scene from Trey's fanfic, "Domana-Trix Aren't for Pups".
- The scene where the Heartbreakers are piled up spying on the pups and getting into their disguise is a reference to another image that Trey_Vore drew for me about a year ago.
- "Code 2-5-3-8" is a reference to babclayman's fanfic, "Scorch Scraper", when the main pups assembled their totem.
Real World References:
- The Pokemon episode Joey refers to that he, Roxy and the others watch all together is Season 1, Episode 27: "Pokemon Fashion Flash".
- Diana bragging about the disguise being perfect is a shoutout to Zoe saying the same thing at the same time in the Littlest Pet Shop episode, "If the Shoe Fits".
- Tenant is a shoutout to David Tenant, one of the most popular actors to portray the Doctor in "Doctor Who".
- Clayton clearly knowing that the disguised Heartbreakers are really three pups in a trench coat is in some ways a shoutout to "Bojack Horseman" where the title character says this about "Vincent Adultman".
- Belchic mentions an overused cliche that happens a lot in pop culture when characters hypnotize other characters to think they are something else. Most of the time, they always default to making their victims think they are chickens. It's happened in "Alvin and the Chipmunks", "Adventures of Sonic the Hedgehog", "Garfield and Friends", "Earthworm Jim", and countless other shows.
- Tippy acting as a step stool allowing the pups to hop onto her over the wall one by one is a reference to to the "Pound Puppies" episode, "Elementary, My Dear Pups", when Pepper did such to let the Super Secret Pup Club pups out the window.
Deleted Sequences:
- The argument between Belchic and Clayton was going to go on a little longer and have much deeper dialogue, but I decided to cut it short as I feared some of the things that were said would arouse drama on the board.
Feedback:
So far, nobody has given me any feedback on this story.
Just a suggestion: Should this topic be moved to the "Fanfic Discussion" thread?