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The Box
Dec 29, 2009 17:36:50 GMT -5
Post by Shadow Dearly on Dec 29, 2009 17:36:50 GMT -5
Hey Shadow here with another poem. I hope you'll like it. And i think it's a good idea to create a Poem Section on Sparky's. So I hope you'll enjoy this.
The Box
In a burden old wasteland
yields a man in a box
The box is filled with grief and sadness waiting to pull him in
With all of his might, he tried to escape the box's grasp, but no avail.
The man became one of them.
This poem is dedicated to Cuddly Dearly.
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The Box
Dec 29, 2009 18:21:08 GMT -5
Post by Cuddly Dearly on Dec 29, 2009 18:21:08 GMT -5
Cool poem, Shadow!! Reminds me on myself.... actually, on one part of my life that is fortunately over
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The Box
Dec 29, 2009 18:25:14 GMT -5
Post by Shadow Dearly on Dec 29, 2009 18:25:14 GMT -5
Glad you liked my poem Cuddly ^^. Wow, I didn't know that. ^^
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The Box
Dec 29, 2009 18:38:53 GMT -5
Post by Cuddly Dearly on Dec 29, 2009 18:38:53 GMT -5
Thanks for dedicating it to me
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The Box
Dec 29, 2009 18:40:51 GMT -5
Post by Shadow Dearly on Dec 29, 2009 18:40:51 GMT -5
You're welcome Cuddly ^^
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The Box
Dec 29, 2009 19:06:12 GMT -5
Post by Drake on Dec 29, 2009 19:06:12 GMT -5
I say, if you want to, you could make a thread and leave it in the Misc section, you know, one that's for poems and to talk about them.....although, the poem idea doesn't sound too bad, bring up the idea in the New Idea area and see how many people will want such a thing.
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