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Post by Cadpig on Oct 6, 2022 0:56:46 GMT -5
Ooh, if I had to come up with an action scene to insert on the part with Pongo and Damon, I could. I gotta tell you, that is one aggressive Father! I'm really digging the in take references in these as well! And awww that was some cherishing ending there! I'm really digging how this is going? I'm also glad to see how Balance saw the error in her ways and was able to made amends with her and Shawn, as well as for him to forgive his sister and make up like that! I feel there is some enchanting thing going with Jewel and Shawn in their future! ^^
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Post by Lucky on Oct 6, 2022 4:41:22 GMT -5
Yep, he's actually not a good father to Balance, Shawn, Blake and Shane. When I was recreating this story, I was thinking of the Batman Origins fight with Batman VS Deathstroke. But was going to be completely original, unfortunately I couldn't come up with anything.
Same, I try to make the stories original, yet throw in references to other shows, video games and movies I've seen or played. ^^
Yeah, there was a part where Balance would've experienced a near death experience. However I didn't like that idea very much.
Yep, I'm going to be sticking with this couple whenever I write something for the Sparkyverse. ^^
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