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Post by Belchic on Jan 11, 2010 17:07:15 GMT -5
I think this is probably the best way to do it. We don't need a whole thread dedicated to poems.
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Post by Shadow Dearly on Jan 11, 2010 22:46:00 GMT -5
Now let me ask you this, where am I going to post my poems for everyone to see?
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Post by Shadow Dearly on Jan 13, 2010 10:37:30 GMT -5
Okay, here's two I wrote. Enjoy "Bugs"Why do you creep on me
on a lake or in a tree
Why do you follow me wherever I go
it's getting annoying don't you know
I know that you have to live and eat
Now please leave before you get beat
I know you don't like me saying this
but here's my foot and I won't miss
Now here's the end where the bug and I roam
I took him for myself and brought him home.Now what bug do you think was in this poem I wrote? "Shadow's Night"In the cold dark night
I stood outside looking at the stars
I was dressed in a cape and barefoot
but that didn't bother me
Suddenly I felt light on my feet
I wondered why; what's going on
Soon my bare feet lifted from the grass
I flew up looking at the ground
There were no one out, I became worried
I flew to a house and opened up a curtain
To my surprise, the people stared at me
I flew away quickly as fast as I can
wondering if they caught a good glimpse of me
After a while I landed at my home
thinking about the adventure I experienced
I went inside the barn
and driftly fell asleep
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Post by Cuddly Dearly on Jan 13, 2010 13:07:53 GMT -5
how nice poems!! I know what insect are you talking about in the first poem, but I won't say it. And the second is very nice, about your character I like it very much
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Post by Shadow Dearly on Jan 13, 2010 13:09:56 GMT -5
thank you Cuddly^^ I'm glad you won't reveal the insect. I'm really glad you like my poem about my character.
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Post by Shadow Dearly on Jan 13, 2010 17:33:17 GMT -5
Okay, I have another poem out. It's pretty obvious of what this poem is about. Enjoy "How Shadow Met Rosalina" Near a clear blue lake
I see her standing there A beautiful Dalmatian with gold hair and beady spots She is simply gorgeous, I think I'm in love As I looked at her, I thought of what to say I hope I'll don't say anything stupid After a few minutes, I walked to her She smiled at me and said her name was Rosalina In my mind I heard angels singing
In my eyes I imagined we were the only ones left on Earth I told her my name was Shadow she smiled at me and we began to talk moments later, we became boyfriend and girlfriend
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Post by Cuddly Dearly on Jan 13, 2010 18:45:26 GMT -5
Oooh, a poem about your characters. It's sooooooooo romantic and cute <3
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Post by Shadow Dearly on Jan 13, 2010 19:01:18 GMT -5
Thank you Cuddly ^^ That was very thoughtful of you ^^
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Post by Shadow Dearly on Jan 15, 2010 9:15:44 GMT -5
Okay guys, new poem today ^^
The In Crowd
At a school in a nearby town
lies a boy sitting alone
In his mind he wonders why
why no one ever notices him
Just a few meters from the boy
lied the popular crowd
Everyone liked the popular crowd
The paid attention to the crowd
Every time the boy walks to the crowd
they reply by "Get lost you punk"
The next day he decided he wanted in
He walked, hoping he would get in
All he got was a wedgie and a swirly
When he returned home he began to think
He thought about joining the crowd
At school the next day, he met with the crowd
They looked at him, he looked at them
Moments later he began to walk away
The crowd stopped him by saying "Wait"
The boy walked back and they welcomed him in
The boy finally got what he wanted
He's finally part of the In Crowd
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Post by Cuddly Dearly on Jan 15, 2010 15:29:59 GMT -5
Wow, cool one. What did change the crowd's mind about the boy?
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Post by Shadow Dearly on Jan 15, 2010 15:30:55 GMT -5
The crowd felt remorse ^^
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Post by Cuddly Dearly on Jan 15, 2010 15:47:17 GMT -5
that's nice I just hope that he didn't change his style to make them like him
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Post by Shadow Dearly on Jan 15, 2010 15:50:14 GMT -5
He didn't. They let him in to let them know they're sorry.
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Post by Shadow Dearly on Jan 15, 2010 17:25:54 GMT -5
Here's another poem I wrote.
"No Privacy"
Everyday and everynight
people are butting in my life
In my home, the danger zone
Privacy does not exist
They're butting in my life
telling me what to do, what to say, and what to wear
I want it all to stop
'Cause frankly, I can't take it anymore
When I try to talk to them
they refuse to listen to me
I really want my private life back
It's so close, I can feel it
But soon it gets taken away
and I am left scared, alone, and crying
I really hope this will end
so I can have my privacy back
This poem is dedicated to Nemo Dearly AKA NemoTVChampion
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Post by Nemo on Jan 15, 2010 17:34:32 GMT -5
you pretty much got my emotions down perfectly. thank you very much Shadow
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