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Post by Shadow Dearly on Jan 9, 2010 12:21:05 GMT -5
Hey guys. Shadow here. I decided to open my own poem thread here. So enjoy my poems.
Here's my first one. It's gives an inlook of how Shadow appreciates his friendship with Smiley.
SMILEY
Everyday at the dusk of dawn
I see him standing on damp lawn
He turns around and looks at me
The expression on his face always makes me laugh
I asked him where do you wanna go
he replied how should I know
I decided to lie down 'cause I'm beat
seconds later, he massaged my feet
When he was finished, I thanked him so
he told me I'm good don't you know
I got up and he followed me
We took a rest on a nearby tree
And before we knew, the day was done
We got up and began to run
My heart was full of glee
because I spent my day with my best friend Smiley
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Post by Cuddly Dearly on Jan 9, 2010 12:40:09 GMT -5
Oh how nice of you to start a poem thread with a poem about my character Smiley *blush*. Thank you so much for this, Shadow And you know what do I think about this poem
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Post by Shadow Dearly on Jan 9, 2010 12:44:45 GMT -5
Thank you so much Cuddly. You can say I care about your character Smiley ^^ Okay. Here's my next poem. I wrote this poem about Nemo. Hope you enjoy.
A Poem For Nemo
Everyday I sit and wait
For the arrival of my sweet mate
But she has yet to show
And I'm worried oh so-so
I'm wondering now where's she's at
she hasn't come I'm worried sick
When my parents told me she was coming, I was so excited
only to be disappointed yet again
Someday we will meet again
to share our day together and to heal my stress
But until then, I have to wait
I'm now wondering what's our fate
If it's good or if it's bad
I know one thing, I'll be glad
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Post by Cuddly Dearly on Jan 9, 2010 12:46:41 GMT -5
I've already commented this one in the other thread And I'm so glad that you like my character Smiley
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Post by Shadow Dearly on Jan 9, 2010 18:07:29 GMT -5
^^ I'm glad too. Okay, time for another poem of mine ^^
Bullies
Hey bully, pick on someone your own size
or prepare to meet your own demise
Quit pulling that girl's hair
or stop hitting that boy with a pear
Stop threatening kids with your fist
'Cause frankly, you're gonna miss
Everyday it's the same thing
You threatening people which you don't give a dang
Hey bully, please stand down
before I send you to the bully pound
Now tell those people you're so sorry
otherwise you won't see your partner Kairi
Hope you enjoyed it. And like Cuddly's poems, try to figure out what the poem is about.
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Post by Cuddly Dearly on Jan 9, 2010 18:13:51 GMT -5
Definitely about a violent person, but who....? however, good poem pup
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Post by Shadow Dearly on Jan 11, 2010 12:27:30 GMT -5
Thank you Cuddly ^^ Okay, here is another poem I recently wrote today ^^.
“Deletion Puzzlement”
Why are you deleting my stuff
that took me too long to draw
This is not right; not fair
I worked so hard to post
I posted everyday and every night
and now it’s gone
Gone like the day is fading
Gone like the melting snow
All of the other artists were so shocked
to see their masterpieces gone
All their hard work and determination
have been sent to the virtual File 13
Need not to worry, for everything’s okay
The thread might be gone
but there’s one thing that stays
The thing that stays is our passion to post again
And now as you can see our threads are back
Back as the blooming flowers
Back as the first snow of the season
The artists were tired, but were glad
to see their art thread back again
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Post by Flowgli on Jan 11, 2010 13:12:29 GMT -5
Nice poem, Shadow. It really tells all about the threads that got deleted in the Drawings section of this board on Christmas.
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Post by Shadow Dearly on Jan 11, 2010 13:29:58 GMT -5
Thank You Flo ^^. Wow, you're the first person to figure out the meaning of my poem ^^
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Post by babclayman on Jan 11, 2010 15:19:35 GMT -5
Hehe, i guessed what the plot of the poem was as soon as i saw "Delete" =P
Nice poem, Shadow ;3
Looking forward to more ^^
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Post by Shadow Dearly on Jan 11, 2010 15:21:39 GMT -5
You will expect more poems ^^
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Post by Cuddly Dearly on Jan 11, 2010 15:23:10 GMT -5
Interesting poem, pup like it =3 also looking forward for more
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Post by Shadow Dearly on Jan 11, 2010 15:32:37 GMT -5
Thank You Pups. So you want another poem huh? Your wish is my command. Here's my next poem. It's dedicated to Cuddly Dearly.
"Moving"
Why do you have to move
and leave my heart unsoothed
Why do you let our companionship fly away
like a barrel of hay
What will we do with our precious memories
that we kept for all eternity
For if you leave, there will be a hole in my heart
A never ending hole of sadness and grief
I know that you’ll return here someday
A day that I cannot wait
For now I guess this is goodbye
I wish you could have stayed
So until you return here again
I’ll be waiting…waiting…waiting
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Post by Cuddly Dearly on Jan 11, 2010 15:37:19 GMT -5
it almost made me cry again.... *sniff* This is so nice of you Shadow, thank you so much...
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Post by Shadow Dearly on Jan 11, 2010 15:43:37 GMT -5
You're very welcome Cuddly *hugs*
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