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Post by Blitz on Apr 2, 2008 21:19:58 GMT -5
Ok, I got a little impatient about waiting to post it, so i'll give you chapter 1 ahead of schedule... enjoy.
Chapter 1
It was a calm night, a few clouds, but still clear enough to see the bright crescent moon and the stars that illuminated the sky. A figure stood on the Cliff side, a Dalmatian. His hair was of medium length, about to his shoulders, was a red color and it was spiked in the front. He wore dark blue jeans, folded at the ankles and black boots. He was bare chested as he stared into the moonlight with his emerald green eyes. An “X” shaped car presented itself across his left eye. The only spot on his body was a large oval shaped spot on his back, towards the left side. At his side he carried a custom made double barreled revolver pistol, complete with dual loading chambers. The handle was plated with polished wood, and the barrels had flying dragons engraved into them on the sides. He drew his gun and cocked both hammers. Holding it to his temple he said “The only way to end it’s life… is the end my own…”. As he prepared to pull the triggers, a young female’s voice echoed behind him.
“NO! Don’t do it, please!” she cried. She was very young, and wore a turquoise tank top and a pair of jean shorts. A dalmatian, her paws, tail and ears are all black. She has 30 spots on her back and side, most of which aren’t visible through her top. Tears filled her crystal blue eyes as she watched Sano standing in the moonlight.
“Kunai… go to sleep…”
“No! I won’t let you do it, Sano!”
“…What do I have to live for?... All I do is sit around until this beast takes over… and then I kill… I kill because I have no control… not because I have to… one day I’ll end up hurting you… all of you…”
“Sano… please…” Kunai cried running towards him. She was short, only standing as tall as Sano’s chest. She wrapped her arms around him from behind, pressing her face against his back. “You and Katana are the only things I have left… You’re family to me…”
“If it weren’t for you kid… well, I don’t know what I’d do…” Sano said with a short lived laugh.
With a sigh Sano took the gun away from his head. He aimed the gun up pointing it at the crescent moon. He pulled the triggers firing both shots into the night sky, and then placing the gun back into it’s holster.
About a mile away, a black lab sat on a wooden stool inside a small bar in jeans a green wind breaker jacket. Fans on the ceiling spun round and round blowing a cool breeze across his face, taking the smoke from his cigarette with it. The polished wooden floors gleamed with the lights above shining down on it. Hearing the gunshots, he removed the cigarette, tapping it in an ash tray. “Maybe the fool finally shot himself…” he murmured returning the cigarette to his lips, closing his dark green eyes.
“Don’t say things like that…” said a tall dalmatian mixed great dane standing behind the bar, wiping out a glass with a rag. He had large black splotches all over him, most of them touching one another, and very little white on him at all. He wore only a simple white tee, which his spots were visible through and a pair of dark denim jeans, held up by a black belt.
“How many times has he tried now?” asked the lab.
“I don’t know, Musashi… I understand his situation though… in most cases, suicide is an extreme but…”
“I don’t really care… he’s never done anything for me… but I have nothing against him…”
Several hundred miles away, in a third floor apartment, a young male Dalmatian sat in front of his desktop computer. He had a nuclear hazard symbol on both his ears. He had a few spots elsewhere, such as his right arm and tail, but he didn’t have an abundance of them. The room was untidy, and clothes littered the floor, and even the couch. His radio was blaring heavy metal at an intolerable level, as he tap his foot with the beat, nodding his head in sync.
“HEY! NUKE! TURN THAT CRAP DOWN! IT’S TOO LOUD!” the complex owner yelled outside of his door.
“IF IT’S TOO LOUD, YOU’RE TOO OLD!” Nuke yelled back as he complied and adjusted the volume to a more tolerable level.
As soon as he turned down the volume his phone rang, and he ran to pick it up off of the table. He pushed the “talk” button and answered, “What now?!”
“Fine, if you wanna be rude about it, I’ll just hang up…” the young female voice replied.
“Oh! Hey, Fay.”
“Yeah… um, I was wondering if you were still going with us?”
“Going with you?”
“The road trip, doofus…”
“Oh! Yeah, you bet!... won’t seem quite right with Volkner gone, but…”
“You think I’M taking it lightly?”
“Well, no, but…”
“I gotta go… just meet us tomorrow at my place… and Nuke…. DON’T BE LATE AGAIN!”
“That’s my ear you’re yellin’ in!” Nuke said as he hung up.
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Apr 2, 2008 21:30:27 GMT -5
Post by puffypup on Apr 2, 2008 21:30:27 GMT -5
Nice start,keep it up!
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Apr 2, 2008 21:38:52 GMT -5
Post by Nuke on Apr 2, 2008 21:38:52 GMT -5
heehee, cool chapter so far.
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Apr 2, 2008 23:45:43 GMT -5
Post by Blitz on Apr 2, 2008 23:45:43 GMT -5
Thanks guys
Chapter 2
It was early in the morning, and the sun had barely risen when a blue a 1996 Chevrolet Corvette GRAND SPORT (C4) with white racing striped pulled in front of a mid sized white house. There were flowers outside of it around the windows, and the yard was very well kept. Nuke stepped out of the car and knocked on the door, wearing his cadet cap and his nuclear emblem necklace. A tired female in a pink nightgown opened the door. She had blue eyes, black ears, a spot on the right side of her muzzle, heavily spotted back, but that was covered. She had scarcely spotted sides that were also covered, and her legs are heavily spotted. Her arms have almost no spots. Her most distinctive feature is the ring of spots around the middle of her tail… not to mention she was 2 months pregnant, and her belly was a bit round.
“Nuke…ugh, what are you doing?” she said with a yawn.
“Told you I wouldn’t be late!”
“That doesn’t mean I wanted you hear at five in the morning…”
“But I-“
“GO HOME!” Fay said slamming the door.
Nuke had a disgruntled look on his face as he returned to his car. He sat inside and pulled his cap over his eyes. “I’ll sleep to pass the time…”
Later that afternoon in the bar from before, Musashi sat at the exact same barstool, smoking a cigarette, as usual. Tsuba was again behind the counter cleaning and such. A white furred kitsune walked in, the tips of her furs accented with a blue color, as well as her paws. She had three tails, that instantly caught Musashi’s eye, and she wore a red dress that nicely contrasted her blue tipped fur. Her long, braided hair was dark blue, and she was barefoot. Musashi’s eyes grew to a un proportionate anime size, and his cigarette fell out of his mouth.
“Musashi… stop staring at the girl… it’s rude…” Tsuba said, still cleaning.
“Not often we get anyone here… especially someone who looks like THAT!!!”
“Quiet your mouth, Musashi…”
The young fox sat down in the stool next to Musashi, and winked at him. His knees became week and he gave a laugh like an old perverted man as his nose dripped a small bit of blood.
After ordering a drink, she swiftly drank it up and left in a hurry.
“…you didn’t card her…” Musashi said.
“Huh?” Tsuba replied with a blank look.
“You didn’t card her… she could be underage… you aren’t immune to her looks either.” Musashi laughed.
As she stepped outside she pulled two photos out of her pocket.
“That’s definitely them… heh… we got ‘em… AND their bounty…. Oh, Kyne!” she sang as she ran off. As she was running, Kunai passed by her, and looked at her as she went inside.
“Who was that? She looked… overjoyed…” Kunai said, with a finger on her muzzle like she was thinking.
“KUNAI!... how many times have we told you?! Stay out of the bar during business hours! Are you TRYING to get us arrested?” Tsuba complained.
“I’m sorry…” Kunai said as she went back outside.
“Crazy kid…” Musashi said, lighting another smoke.
A long ways away, a red 2002 Isuzu Rodeo Sport was cruising down a major highway, jammed inside were Oddy in the driver’s seat, and Creed in the passenger seat. In the back, Nuke was crammed against the right side door, with Luci, Amaranth, Fay, Holly and Candi all packed in with him. The girls were swaying back and forth singing a girly song that was playing one the radio, except for Holly.
“Make it stop!...MAKE IT STOOOOP!” Oddy complained.
“Oh boy….” Creed added with a grunt, resting his head on his right hand.
“Oh! You think YOU have it bad?!” Nuke said as the girls swayed towards him slamming him into the inside wall of the truck.
Behind them, a silver Dodge Viper SRT-10 was following them. Vincent was driving, and his mate Rose was in the passenger seat. Vaughn was in the back, with his eyes closed, like he was thinking.
“Speed it up, Oddy, sheesh!” Vincent nagged. Vincent beeped his horn at Oddy several times.
“Oddy gave a growl as he pushed down on the gas havily. The girls stopped singing, and started screaming as the force pushed them back on their seats.
“GAH!....MY….EARS!!!!!” Nuke said as if he were in pain.
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Apr 2, 2008 23:55:32 GMT -5
Post by Nuke on Apr 2, 2008 23:55:32 GMT -5
lol! girls cant take some G-Force? *ears bleed*
nice chapter.
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Post by oddball on Apr 3, 2008 0:22:34 GMT -5
Umm...
Celeste is Vincent's sister, Rose is his mate....
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Apr 3, 2008 18:00:25 GMT -5
Post by Blitz on Apr 3, 2008 18:00:25 GMT -5
Oops.... *huge smile* *fixes it*
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Apr 3, 2008 18:33:39 GMT -5
Post by Nuke on Apr 3, 2008 18:33:39 GMT -5
one more thing, the Viper only have 2 seats....
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Apr 3, 2008 18:47:01 GMT -5
Post by Blitz on Apr 3, 2008 18:47:01 GMT -5
............. THEN USE YOUR FREAKIN' IMAGINATION!
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Apr 3, 2008 18:48:17 GMT -5
Post by Nuke on Apr 3, 2008 18:48:17 GMT -5
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o-o-o-ookay
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Apr 3, 2008 18:48:38 GMT -5
Post by Deleted on Apr 3, 2008 18:48:38 GMT -5
lol omg
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Apr 3, 2008 19:08:37 GMT -5
Post by Blitz on Apr 3, 2008 19:08:37 GMT -5
Chapter 3
It was late at night in the nearly deserted town. The town was in a desert like setting, red dirt covering the ground, no roads. Not many people lived there really… a perfect place for a group like The Killer 10, some of which you’re already familiar with. That bar has an upstairs, where some of them live. The rest live in a restaurant in the same town, also with an upstairs housing area. On top of the restaurant’s flat roof, a wolf with dark grey fur sat cross legged, in a pair of jeans and a simple white tee. He overlooked the small village like town, and saw a small figure kneeling down, picking up a flower. He watched her with his deep blue eyes, and bowed his head as he shut them, slowly.
“Kunai… such a young soul… and yet you have more heart than all of us… you weren’t born to be a killer… we made you a killer… one day, you’ll learn that…” He said to himself. He opened his eyes as he stood to his feet and opened a door on the roof, climbing down a ladder back inside.
“Kojiri! We’ve got work…” spoke Tanto, a small fellow. Though eighteen years old, you’d never guess it. He’s only slightly taller than Kunai! He has one green eye and one brown eye, one black ear and one white ear, as well as three spots on the top of his head, and six on his back, which were covered by his red hoodie.
“Oh? From who? And what for?”
“Well, his voice was… menacing to say the least… he didn’t me his name. Says we’ll see him in due time…”
“Very well… what’s he having us do?”
“There’s someone coming our direction… he wants them taken out.”
“How descriptive…”
“How many people come HERE? We’ll just wait for the next person headed this way to show, kill them, and get our money!”
“I’ve got a better idea…” Kojiri said as he left. He busted into the bar not far away. It was after hours, and a few of The Killer 10 were hanging around.
“Sano! You’ve got work…” Kojiri said.
“Good… my trigger finger is getting itchy…” Sano replied.
“Bring a rifle… you need to keep your distance… but you may want to keep you pistol on your side… just incase.”
“I’ve been in this business long enough to know that, Koji…”
“Do NOT address me by that name!”
“Whatever…” Sano said walking out the door.
“Where do you think you’re going? I haven’t even told you what to do!”
“Oh.. yeah…”
“You know that one straight road that goes through here? Wait somewhere outside the town, and snipe any vehicles that come through…”
“What if we kill someone who isn’t the target?”
“Then they shouldn’t have been in our way…”
“got it…” Sano replied as he left once more.
As Sano walked through the small town, he passed by Kunai, still admiring the same flower from before.
“Sano… where are you going?” she asked.
“We got business.” Sano replied as he kept walking.
Kunai walked towards the bar, and as she entered, Kojiri addressed her.
“Good, you’re here… we need that road coming through the town… You, Katana, and Musashi are in charge of that.
“Oh…ok…” she replied, walking back out, Katana, a beautiful young female Dalmatian. deep blue eyes, and straight black hair with a pink blossom in it. She has two spots on her left cheek, twenty on her back and sides, a lot of which are covered by her black sleeveless half shirt, and three on her right leg, towards the bottom, so they are visible because of he shorts. She has seven spots lined down her tail.
“Why are you giving Sano the good work?” Musashi chuckled as he put out a cigarette and followed.
Cruising down the highway, the girls were sleep in the back, and Nuke gave a sigh of relief.
“We should probably stop for the night at that dinky little town up there.” Oddy said with a yawn.
“You should let Vincent know we’re stopping…” Creed said.
“He’ll figure it out.” Oddy laughed.
In the distance, Sano was crouched behind a large rock in the desert nearby, his sniper rifle resting on the rock, and his left eye close, his right one looking into the scope. He got Oddy’s truck in his sights and moved his finger to the trigger.
“Say goodnight…” he said as he pulled the trigger. The bullet just barely missed, skidding across the front window, and cracking in a little on the small impact.
“…the hell?!” Oddy said.
“If I didn’t know any better, I’d say someone just shot at us…” Creed replied.
“They’ll have to do better than that!” Oddy said pressing hard on the gas.
“So you don’t go fast enough on the highway, then we get out in the middle of freakin’ nowhere and you speed!” Vincent complained mashing the gas harder to catch up to Oddy.
They neared the town, and saw Katana, Kunai and Musashi standing in the round. Oddy hit the brakes hard and started to skid across the asphalt. Katana drew out a blade and swiftly dashed passed the drivers side door, then replaced it in it’s sheath.
“What was that?!” oddy said as the door to driver’s side door fell off his truck.
“Wh- what?!” He said in shock, as Musashi grabbed him by the collar of his shirt and threw him onto the ground.
“You don’t have a hope in hell now…” Musashi said, pulling out an oversized katana from a sheath on his left side.
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Apr 3, 2008 21:00:17 GMT -5
Post by LoneWanderer Raiden on Apr 3, 2008 21:00:17 GMT -5
*applauds* Oh, man.. Sorry I hadn't seen this until just now... but awesome fic, man. Keep up the excellent work. ^^
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Apr 3, 2008 22:22:59 GMT -5
Post by Blitz on Apr 3, 2008 22:22:59 GMT -5
Glad you all like it.
Chapter 4
“Who put you up to this?” Oddy asked standing to his feet.
“He didn’t reveal himself to us yet…” Musashi replied.
“But I will now…” a dark voice said. A very large figured Dalmatian wearing a black cloak approached then, he had splotches, kind of like Tsuba, but not as many.
“FIGHT MUSIC!” Nuke exclaimed pushing a button on the radio, playing “Shockwave” by Black Tide.
“Are you TRYING to make this fic corny?” Creed said opening his door and stepping out.
“It’s my job!” Nuke said, stepping out of the gaping hole.
“Huh?” Amaranth said as she woke up. “Oh no! Not him!”
“What are you talki- Holy crap, that’s Sigurd!...but Volkner…..” Nuke said as his words were cut off.
“Killed me? HAHAHAHA!... That fall gave me no more than a headache…” Sigurd said with a manic laugh.
“I take it you’re our client… where’s the cash?” Musashi said pointing his blade at Sigurd.
“There is no money, you idiot… You pose a threat to my plan… so I gathered you all… my old enemies… their new accomplices… and you guys… the Killer 10…. But I only see 3 of you…” Sigurd said.
“Well, we had no intention of stopping your plans, and we didn’t even know you had any… so looks like you brought this on yourself…” Nuke said pulling out a Navy SEAL combat knife.
“What’s goin’ on out there?!” Vincent said as he sat in his car, watching.
“I suggest you leave…. Soon…” Sano said approaching Sigurd from behind, his body engulfed in white blue flames.
“Hmph! No way can I take him on if he transforms…” Sigurd thought to himself. “You haven’t seen the last of me…” He said running off.
“You’re just gonna let him get away?!” Nuke complained.
“This is giving me a headache…” Oddy said.
“It’s obvious we aren’t enemies… come with us… we can explain to each other. And if you need shelter for the night, you got it.” Musashi said.
“Thanks, we appreciate it… wake up, girls.” Oddy said shaking hands with Musashi.
“Are they you’re friends too?” Katana asked pointing at Vincent’s car.
“Yeah, that’s Vincent, Rose and Vaughn…” Nuke replied.
Every member of the assassination team, The Killer 10, as well as the others sat around in the restaurant.
“So… that guy tried to use Amaranth for… something, I dunno, and his son supposedly killed him, and apparently he didn’t, but his son is locked behind a gate….. what the hell?!” Kojiri said a bit confused.
“Yeah, basically…” Nuke replied.
“Hmm… well… we’ll help you figure this guy out, and finish him… for a price…” Kojiri said.
“KOJIRI! We could’ve killed them tonight! Don’t you think we owe them?!” Katana said.
“I…. guess you’re right….”
“HEY! Where’s Sano?” Kunai screamed, noticing that Sano wasn’t around.
“Oh no…” said Bushido, an elderly Dalmatian. He is blind in his left eye, and his right eye is severely damaged, but still functional. His fur appears a bit wrinkled, due to aging, and he has a pretty basic spot pattern with no features worth noting.
“You guys wait here.. Katan, Bushido, and Kunai… come with me…” Kojiri said.
“Kunai.. you’re the closest to him… where would he be?” Katana asked.
“The cliff….” Kunai replied
“We’d better hurry…” Katana replied as they ran off.
When they arrived at the Cliffside, Sano was standing over the cliff, the flames still surrounding him.
“Sano, please…” Kunai cried running towards him. When she got close, a strange energy shot her back.
Kunai hit the ground with a thud, and coughed up a bit of blood as she stood to her feet.
"Don't you see?... I'm a monster... stay the hell away from me... I don't want to hurt anyone else..." Sano said, staring into the clear starry sky, the blue white flames still engulfing him.
"Running from your problem isn't going to fix it! Just let us help!" Bushido said slowly walking forward.
"I SAID STAY BACK!... the only way any of you could possibly help me is by feeding my insatiable thirst for blood... do you really want to do that?..." Sano replied walking close to the edge of the cliff. "May God d**n my wicked soul to hell..." he said dropping off the edge of the cliff as the other's stared in awe.
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Apr 3, 2008 23:59:55 GMT -5
Post by puffypup on Apr 3, 2008 23:59:55 GMT -5
:oWhoa,this is sure one action-packed story,Keep it up,Man!!!!
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