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Post by Nemo on Jul 22, 2013 20:04:28 GMT -5
Honestly, this is not a poem I would call dark. I think, emotional, lonely, or sad would fit better. It's still a VERY good poem though
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Post by Shadow Dearly on Jul 22, 2013 20:08:56 GMT -5
Ooooor we can combine those and call it an emotional, lonely, sad, dark poem. =D
But glad you like the poem! ^^
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Post by Shadow Dearly on Oct 23, 2013 0:56:55 GMT -5
Okie...I got a new poem just done a few minutes ago. Please tell me what you think of this. x3. I worked so hard on this.
"Forever Trapped"
Forever trapped within despair Paralyzed with fear
And no one dares to try to care To get me out of here
People here are just the same Filthy jerks and careless
And they think it's just a game In making me a mess
My heart breaks from all this sadness Pain and misery
And fills me up with tons of stress Upon this injury
With no way out, I am done... For there's no way to run...
And no...this poem is not about ANYONE here...just to clear that out. Enjoy
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Post by Sweeney Terrier on Oct 25, 2013 12:01:49 GMT -5
Honest-to-God, DS, I LOVE this poem. It makes me think of how I find, least the male students at, to say the least, my previous school district. They annoyed me, and the teachers, to the point of rage/fury, but they found it as a mere game to make us lose our sh*t and sanity. They found it entertaining when they jeered and messed with each other, but DEFINITELY fun/funny when others lost it bcuz of them. Like I said, I LOVE this piece! <3
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Post by Shadow Dearly on Oct 25, 2013 12:13:16 GMT -5
Hehhee thank you Lupus! :3.
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Post by Sweeney Terrier on Oct 25, 2013 13:19:08 GMT -5
You're welcome, Shadow.
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Post by Shadow Dearly on Nov 20, 2013 13:40:40 GMT -5
Okay, Shadow here with a new poem that I wrote last night! I was listening to this song here and it inspired me to write this poem!
www.youtube.com/watch?v=AvMfleD06PU
The poem is in the words of Shadow Dearly, it's from a recurring dream that he has.“Will You Be My Friend?”Will you be my friend? I’d love you ‘til the end Until the end of time Our bond would be sublime
When in doubt, count on me To fill your heart with glee And when you have a frown To turn that upside down
I’ll never let you go You are mine and do you know If you leave, I will be forced To unleash my wicked worst
Come and put this collar on And with this leash, we’ll be alone Doing friendship stuff together You and I as one forever
Friends for all eternity for publicity Though if you refuse Your heart I will abuseEnjoy you all. Pleasant dreams!
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Post by Deleted on Dec 4, 2013 19:01:52 GMT -5
Awesome Poem, Shadow.
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Post by Shadow Dearly on Dec 29, 2013 22:29:49 GMT -5
Alas a new poem from me. A Poem in the words of Shadow.
"The Times"
From all the times I was with you Each and almost every day You shone a light inside of me That I believed was new But now you're gone forever more After you left the wooden door Leaving me to be alone Inside this rusty home I stay frozen on the floor In hopes you'd come through the door But alas, again I'm wrong I was wrong all along
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Post by Deleted on Dec 29, 2013 22:36:18 GMT -5
Fantastic poem, Shadow. I always enjoy your writing.
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Post by Shadow Dearly on Dec 29, 2013 22:39:47 GMT -5
heheh thanks Boeing :3. Now, remember in Shadow's bio, it listed that Shadow likes to act like he's not himself? Well this the "creepy" version of him. I use this version of him to write up poems like the one you just read.
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Post by Shadow Dearly on Apr 11, 2014 12:23:51 GMT -5
Egad! A new poem from me!
"The Loner"
Some say he was a loner in this crazy mixed up world Forever being outcast All without an owner
When his owner died, his heart died with him turning him into a monster A monster filled with rage and vim looking a tad grim
He longed to leave this world so that he could look away From all the things that reminded him of how his life unfurled
He preferred to be alone having no need for friends For he believed that would ruin his sadness that was shown
He passed away with no one by his needy side His deepest darkest fear came true His hauntings had begun.
Enjoy you all. Yay to dark poems!
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Post by Deleted on Apr 11, 2014 13:26:27 GMT -5
Cool poem, Shadow, yet sad at the same time.
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Post by Shadow Dearly on Apr 11, 2014 13:44:29 GMT -5
Thank you Shawn.
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Post by Deleted on Apr 11, 2014 14:08:39 GMT -5
You're welcome, Shadow.
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