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Post by Deleted on Apr 11, 2014 14:17:04 GMT -5
Great work, Shadow.
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Post by Shadow Dearly on May 27, 2014 9:28:31 GMT -5
Okie, a new poem from me Shadow. Now I found a gothic poem generator online and I used it to write this poem because I wanted to make sure that I don't make it sound emo. That's what irks me. Writing goth poetry that ultimately sounds emoish when read aloud. Anyway, enough chit-chat. Here's what I came up with.
“Consumed”
What have you taken away? A shadow of agony as perceptions bleeds. Once we tasted paradise, Wide-eyed and untainted But your love perished A feverish fever of darkness- Drops of blood follow bitterness follow hate, Love left to die. In a storm of sorrow, I still love you.
Also wrote this one too!
"untitled"
what have you done? a dark black shadowy cloud of betrayal as memories darken. once we experienced innocence, open and wide-eyed, but your desire drifted away. a vengeful vision of hatred - emotions follow blood, follow death, love left to die. in a rush of sorrow, i condemn you.
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Post by Deleted on May 27, 2014 10:10:16 GMT -5
Nice ones, Shadow. =3
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Post by Shadow Dearly on May 27, 2014 17:48:19 GMT -5
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Post by Shadow Dearly on May 28, 2014 23:30:49 GMT -5
Got a new dark poem for y'all.
"Empty Voids"
The dark empty void that is my soul can never be purified The bitter wickedness in my heart destroys all things pure and joyful.
I am left to rot in the one place I call home with no one by my side
"Wishing only wounds the heart" is a quote that I once knew I call it my philosophy that I truly must follow.
No friends, no allies No one is here with me
They are gone forever.
Deep, huh?
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Post by Shadow Dearly on Dec 10, 2014 15:59:51 GMT -5
Lo and Behold, a new poem from me. It's about Shadow and the possibilities of him not being very well known/being an introvert.
"Shadow"
On a farm not far from here, lies Dalmatians far and wide Except for one, a spotted one, who chose to stay inside The fellow pup was Shadow, a Dal with an unknown past He preferred to be alone and to be the only outcast. It was very well seen that this puppy was lonely His only friends were figures that no one could see He wasn't for adventures, not even wanted to play All he seemed to care about was to fade away.
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Post by Shadow Dearly on May 19, 2015 20:22:51 GMT -5
Hey-ho, let's go! Another poem!
“Alone”
I am all alone With no one around No place to call home It’s lonely
I prefer to be in solitude, don’t want to be disturbed It’s my only plea When you see me, go the other way If you want to see another day
I have no need for putrid friends It’s the same, through and through When they see me for who I am really am, Our “friendship” ends; they bid adieu
My name is Shadow, I’m a Dalmatian You don’t want to get to know me If you do, you will regret it So leave me alone, for good.
“Deep within the dark shadows Is where you’ll usually find me But beware, my deathly stare Or you’ll be six feet under.”
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Post by Shadow Dearly on May 20, 2015 7:41:17 GMT -5
And yet, another poem! This is one is based off The Dark Reflection Creepypasta. I'll link you to the creepypasta as well. “Dark Reflections”There is an old legend About a ritual That’s done after sunset, six hours before dawn Known as the Dark Reflection Once you start, you cannot stop Until it is complete The question though, on every mind Is “Are You Up For It?” Stare yourself in the mirror To release negative energy Breathe in the mirror, anoint with it Link yourself to the energy Set fire to the mirror, agitate the spirits It won’t be long now Until the spirits get their revenge From you provoking them Break the mirror, unleash dark energy I suggest you start running If you want to survive the dead air night From impending gruesome luck Bad luck may start as small instances Like a chipped nail, or a flat tire But they will grow to escalate To become life-threatening So, if you like to see another day Do not do this ritual For if you do, get yourself ready For one heck of a night The Dark Reflection Creepypasta: creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Dark_Reflection_Ritual
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Post by Shadow Dearly on Jun 24, 2015 8:02:41 GMT -5
Guys, I just wrote another poem, but this one is so dark, so dark, I'm deeming it not appropriate for this board! So, if you want to view it, ask me on Skype.
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Post by Shadow Dearly on Jul 19, 2015 17:57:21 GMT -5
I really should get some comments on my poems. Comments always appear on artwork—no offense to Nemo, Bab, and Olwe—but not literary arts. How would I know what to improve on, if nobody comments? Anyway, enough rambling. Here's another poem, and no, it's not dark.
"Serenity"
It's quiet and calm when I'm in here by myself to disappear To be away from the outside world so to keep everything well furled
Whenever I want to be alone I go to the place I call my own A deep, luscious forest I always roam and a place I can call home
The sounds of nature is calling me to run, to play, and to be free From anybody whom dares to intrude for which, the act is just plain rude
I simply go to relieve stress it comes easy, I must confess Singing birds calm me down and makes me dance all around
Serenity is number one from now, until the day is done Playing within the summer's sun running around and having fun
Enjoy this poem, all!
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Post by Shadow Dearly on Sept 30, 2015 16:45:50 GMT -5
TOTAL OUTCAST
No one remembers who I am They see me as a ghost Someone who they don’t recognize Is rather quite absurd
Why do they do this to me? Rip my heart out, and leave me here to bleed They find enjoyment in causing me pain Screw this, I’m out, I don’t have time for this From this day on, I’ll be a total outcast
What should I do? Should I make them remember me? Or should I not give a dang And leave forevermore
Well, I’m out. Can’t deal with this anymore So long, farewell, you won’t see me again An outcast is what I’m destined to be Won’t get in the way much longer I don’t care what you say, I won’t be coming back You are part of the problem of my life
New poem. Edited for Sparky's because the original, contains a swear word.
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Post by Shadow Dearly on Dec 25, 2015 20:56:34 GMT -5
Just felt like posting this. This may even be a song =D
“An Imaginative, Ideal Picture (Of You)”
Nothing in the world is ever the same Lights pass by and it’s bringing me down Never again will I listen to you Shut your mouth, I’m done talking to you Thanks to you, I’m caught in this circle of lies
But there’s something I cannot explain A feeling of need, want, and compassion
What I’m trying to tell you is . . .
I have loved you ever since the day that we first met I thought you were the one who’ll make my life complete Ever since I saw your true colors, that magic faded away And I’m left standing here Realizing I loved an imaginative, ideal picture of you
Don’t even attempt to change my mind (it won’t work) I don’t even want to deal with you anymore (go away) For all I care, you can beg, plead, and cry on your knees (that’s pathetic) But that won’t bring me back (trust that it won’t) No, it won’t ever bring me back to love in your arms
But there’s something I cannot explain A feeling of need, want and compassion
What I’m trying to tell you is . . .
I have loved you ever since the day that we first met I thought you were the one who’ll make my life complete Ever since I saw your true colors, that magic faded away And I’m left standing here Realizing I loved an imaginative, ideal picture of you
It’s too late for us You had your chance, but you blew it, ruined it Let this be a lesson for you So you won’t pull this mistake again
I have loved you ever since the day that we first met I thought you were the one who’ll make my life complete Ever since I saw your true colors, that magic faded away And I’m left standing here Realizing I loved an imaginative, ideal picture of you
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Post by Shadow Dearly on Jun 7, 2016 22:50:42 GMT -5
Here we go! My first poem of 2016, and we're already getting halfway through the year!
"The Rain"
I'm staring out into the rain with nothing else to do All life has been drained from me All I feel is I'm at a loss, I'm demented, I'm lonely I am wrapped in the confides of my existence A mystery I'll never understand My life is so complex It's as if nothing will ever fix me up All the things are exactly the same But I cannot leave Because if I do, my paws always lead me . . . Back here Back in the perpetual, unbroken abyss That is my life.
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Post by ArtyJayWolf on Jun 8, 2016 9:46:54 GMT -5
Wow... Just... Wow. You've got a talent, man. I can really related to the "Total Outcast" poem... Describes the majority of my life, really... Amazing, Shadow.
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Post by Shadow Dearly on Jun 8, 2016 9:56:16 GMT -5
Heheh thank you for the comment there, DJ. Glad you liked "Total Outcast!"
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