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Post by Deleted on May 15, 2006 13:11:25 GMT -5
wow!
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Post by Trey_Vore on May 15, 2006 18:06:11 GMT -5
Chapter 7: Enter the Black Market
Back in Tic-Tac's lair, Tac is in his laboratory with his other scientists.
Tic-Tac: ...Interesting.
Scientist: What is it?
Tic-Tac: This research I was doing on the PDS syndrome...it may come to our advantage.
Duke enters the lab.
Duke: Tic-Tac, your mercenaries have picked up frequencies from Persian Pete.
Tic-Tac: Yes?
Duke: He and the others were captured by Lucky and his team. But they escaped.
Tic-Tac: Good. I was afraid I would have had to break off my ties to Persian Pete.
Lt. Pug enters the lab.
Lt. Pug: Tum-Tum, the convoy is ready to escort you to Downtown Grutely.
Tic-Tac: As enticing as a little 'entertainment' is, nothing can compare to seeing Lucky squirm.
He hands his research over to another scientist.
Tic-Tac: Continue to develop this research. It may prove...useful.
It was near end of day two when our heroes were tracking Dipstick's signal to Downtown Grutely.
Cadpig: Oh, how adventure broadens the mind!
Blaze: Lucky!
Lucky: What is it, Blaze?
Blaze: According to Noggin's scanner, they should be located at the bottom of this hill.
Spot: But why would they stop here?
Two-Tone: This might only be a pit stop.
Tripod: All right. We should split into two teams.
Patch: Agreed.
Little Dipper: Two teams...yeah! Good idea!
Belchic: Yeah. Some should go down there and act as a distraction, while the rest of us try to figure out a way to catch Tac and his goons!
Jewel: Belchic, I like the way you think, and some junk!
Lucky: Well, I can't go down there. Tac would recognize me.
Rolly: Ok, so who should be in what team? I don't have any straws.
Little Dipper: From Rolly, that's a surprise!
Rolly: Hey!
Lucky: Ok, here's how it'll go: me, Belchic, Jewel, Patch and Oddball will try to set up a trap for Tac. Cadpig, Two-Tone, Rolly, Tripod, Spot, Blaze and Little Dipper, you guys all try to distract him.
Spot: Gotcha, Lucky.
Lucky: We might not have much time, so let's move!
With that, the two teams made their run for their targets.
The particular spot in Grutely turned out to be an alleyway, which was being used as a black market. Tic-Tac and his goons watched as a disguised circus group consisting of Blaze as the ring leader, Cadpig and Two-Tone as his lovely assistants, Rolly and Tripod as a pair of strongmen, and Spot and Little Dipper as two clowns. As soon as an intermission was called, Tic-Tac and Persian Pete got to business.
Wizzer: (to Dipstick) This isn't exactly a friendly neighborhood. It might be a good time to move out.
Dipstick: C'mon, Wizzer. We gave our word to Lucky. Do you want to get in trouble?
Wizzer: I know, but...
Wizzer then saw Two-Tone beckon him to come over.
Wizzer: Hold that thought.
Dipstick: We've got to stay in this until...
Dipstick sees Wizzer is gone.
Dipstick: Wizzer?
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Post by Deleted on May 15, 2006 18:14:25 GMT -5
its getting cooler
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Post by Belchic on May 15, 2006 20:46:51 GMT -5
lol! Flimshaw?
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Post by Trey_Vore on May 16, 2006 13:04:17 GMT -5
Chapter 8: A series of unfortunate events (Lemony Snickett free)
Nearby, on the top of the road, Lucky, Belchic, Jewel, Patch and Oddball found a discarded birdcage on the inside of a familiar-looking truck. Now, how to get it down there...
Lucky: That cage should hold him.
Patch: Yeah, but how will we get it down there?
Jewel: We'd better radio in the others.
Belchic: I'm on it like the white on rice!
In the meantime, Dipstick looked near a bunch of overturned garbage cans to find his missing partner. Unexpectedly, Rolly and Blaze jumped him, and within seconds, Dipstick found himself tied up alongside Wizzer. Together, our heroes revealed themselves.
Dipstick: W-What are you guys doing here?
Focus shift to Tic-Tac and Persian Pete.
Tic-Tac: I am pleased with your insights on warriors, Persian Pete. Now...once I finally kill Lucky, what if I was to share the farm with you?
Persian Pete: We'll see what left of the farm after the crisis is averted...
Focus shift to the heroes.
Dipstick: Two-Tone, Cadpig, Rolly, Spot, Tripod...but who are you two?
Little Dipper: I'm Little Dipper! I'm the best there is!
Blaze: And I'm Blaze. We are both searching for Domino. We think he might have gotten captured.
Belchic: Cadpig! Two-Tone! Anyone!
Cadpig: (on radio) Yes, Belchic?
Belchic: I think we may have what we need.
Focus shift to Tic-Tac and Persian Pete.
Persian Pete: ...what I am saying is my protege has ties to Cruella...
Tic-Tac: Are you saying I will fail in the same way she does?!
Persian Pete: She might be able to make better use of the land.
An argument escalates as Cadpig concludes her conversation with Belchic.
Cadpig: Ok...yep, all right...Cadpig, out. (to the others) We got ten minutes to leave.
Tripod: Ten minutes, got it.
Spot: What's the plan?
Cadpig: We go and trap Tic-Tac inside a birdcage.
Blaze: So we should untie them.
Rolly and Little Dipper untied Wizzer and Dipstick.
Two-Tone: You guys go. 10 minutes.
Outside, a separate face-off occurs between Tic-Tac (on his side, he has Duke and Lt. Pug) and Persian Pete (he has Mooch and Scorch) and their goons.
Persian Pete: This conclave is over!
Tic-Tac: You will pay for your insolence, Persian Pete!
And at the top of the hill, Lucky and Oddball are in the back of the truck, about to lower the birdcage down to Jewel, Patch and Belchic.
Lucky: Okay, guys, are you ready?
Jewel: Yes, let's...
Their plot was interrupted as a drunk driver sped up (causing Jewel, Patch and Belchic to run out of the way) and rammed into the back of the truck, sending it downhill.
Belchic: Whoa, way past uncool!!
At the bottom, Wizzer and Dipstick happened to be in the wrong place at the wrong time...
Wizzer: We only have ten minutes. Things can't get worse.
...like, say, in the middle of Tic-Tac and Persian Pete's feud...
Wizzer: I was wrong. It got worse. Dipstick, get my back.
Wizzer tried to reason with Persian Pete and Dipstick with Tic-Tac (they had to, it might be the only way out alive) with expected results.
Persian Pete: (to Wizzer) Whose side are you on?
Wizzer: Is there only two choices?
Tic-Tac: (to Mooch) Mooch, is this your man?
Mooch: Yes, he's mine.
Tic-Tac: (to Dipstick) You dare to interfere?
Dipstick: ...yes! Um...you shouldn't fight your ally when Lucky's troublemakers are all over!
Tic-Tac: What?! Show me these troublemakers!
Dipstick: (looks outside a mirror with the incoming truck) ...There!
From the side, Cadpig, Two-Tone, Rolly, Tripod, Spot, Blaze and Little Dipper notice Wizzer and Dipstick betraying their trust.
Rolly: What are they doing?
Blaze: They...they're ratting us out!!
Tripod: I KNEW they couldn't be trusted!
Little Dipper: Are we...trapped?
Belchic radioes Cadpig.
Belchic: Cadpig! We've got a real problem. Abort mission! Repeat, ABORT MISSION!!
Cadpig listens...
Cadpig: ...Guys, you all know that I always try to think happy thoughts, but...we're in serious trouble!!
Mooch: If we're in here while that truck crashes...
Duke: Do we turn the other cheek?
Tic-Tac: EVACUATE IMMEDIATELY!!
Quickly, Tic-Tac and all his mercenaries made a run for cover. Cadpig, Two-Tone, Rolly, Tripod, Spot, Blaze and Little Dipper, knowing the only way out was to run out together with Tic-Tac and get captured, could only hide and hope they would survive.
On the truck, Lucky and Oddball knew they needed to make an escape or face something nasty.
Lucky: Oddball, we need to jump!
Oddball: But Lucky, we could be really hurt!
Lucky: It's better than being dead, come on! (Oddball obeys) Now, on three...three!
Lucky's strange method of counting left Oddball confused; as soon as Lucky said 'three!' he jumped alone and went flying into a garbage can, which tipped over. Lucky soon heard the crash, which was soon followed by an explosion. So many questions popped up; where were Jewel, Patch and Belchic? Are the others okay? Did Oddball jump off in time? Is Tic-Tac dead? Anything can happen in that confusion!
After a few minutes, Lucky noticed something from the curb; it was Tic-Tac, Persian Pete, Scorch, Mooch, Duke and Lt. Pug--some of his most hated enemies, outside Cruella--all still alive and well. Adding to this hall of shame was Wizzer and Dipstick, have they betrayed their trust? Even worse, he noticed them and their thugs rounding up Cadpig, Two-Tone, Rolly, Tripod, Spot, Blaze and Little Dipper, leading them inside a five-foot tall Robo-Rolly (similar to P.H. DeVil's, but much bigger...maybe that was how the other pups got pupnapped?)...indicating they were all captured. Knowing any attempt to save them now would be a suicide mission, Lucky had no choice but to let his closest allies inside the jaws of an insane pup. Not to mention Oddball. God knows where she is now.
Lucky felt pretty low right now; these guys were only trying to help save his own hide and he let them fall victim to Tac. And tomorrow was the due date for his decision. If Oddball was...no, can't think that way...It's only down to him, Jewel, Patch and Belchic.
Lucky: What can I say? I failed. I'm doomed.
Lucky's last words before he fell asleep in the garbage can.
Back at the top of the hill, two figures stood up looking at the truck from a distance.
Jasper: (to Horace) You left the truck running again, didn't you?
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Wow, this was a long chapter. Hope you liked it. I know it looks grim right now, but just hang in there.
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Post by Belchic on May 16, 2006 19:12:53 GMT -5
It's too suspensfull for me to be left hanging on the cliff! I hope it gets better!
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Post by Deleted on May 17, 2006 1:12:39 GMT -5
its cool man I like it
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Post by Trey_Vore on May 17, 2006 14:22:31 GMT -5
Chapter 9: Tic-Tac's new guests
It was pitch dark inside the Robo-Rolly. Yet, Cadpig, Two-Tone, Rolly, Tripod, Spot, Blaze and Little Dipper knew one thing was for certain: Wizzer and Dipstick are not to be trusted. Soon, they arrived at their destination and were brought to the heart of Tic-Tac's fortress, where there was a huge pit with closed blast doors. Were the other pups down there?
Tic-Tac: Impressed, are you? My fortress made from an abandoned military base. Duke: take Wizzer and Dipstick to the training room. They are honored guests; for it was they who foiled that assassination attempt. Persian Pete, Scorch, you are both welcome to stay here. After all, you made the connection to Mooch and his gang.
Tripod: (to Blaze) Great. Tic-Tac's forces are doubled.
Tic-Tac: Now, to offer activites for my 'guests'. (looks at Cadpig) Hmm...the runt...
Cadpig: I HATE BEING CALLED THAT!!
Cadpig started struggling against the guard, lunging for Tic-Tac.
Tic-Tac: Such prowess.
Lt. Pug: Tuck!
Tic-Tac: What is it, Pug?
Lt. Pug: According to sources, Catpick is one of Louie's best friends!
Tic-Tac: Interesting. Mooch, take her to the laboratory.
Mooch: Told you ya shouldn't have dumped me, Cadsy-Pie.
Tic-Tac: She'll make a fine specimen. And Mooch?
Mooch: Yeah?
Tic-Tac: Make sure Noggin is watching.
Mooch: With pleasure.
Cadpig: YOU'LL PAY FOR THIS, TAC! THIS IS BAD KARMA!!
Mooch takes Cadpig down to Tic-Tac's laboratory.
Duke: Tic-Tac, what about them? (refering to Little Dipper, Spot, Blaze, Tripod and Rolly)
Tic-Tac steps up to the chicken, German Shepard and three male dalmatians.
Tic-Tac: Pug, take this quintet of Lucky mercenaries to interrogation.
Lt. Pug: Your demands, Tap?
Tic-Tac: They will talk...and throw them in with the others. (to Two-Tone) Take Two-Tone to my private living quarters. I have some...favors to ask.
Little Dipper, Blaze and Tripod made lunging gestures toward Tac as they were dragged off to interrogation.
Duke: Wizzer, Dipstick, come with me. You made a good choice siding with us.
Two-Tone turned to face the traitors on the way. She glared at them in disgust.
Wizzer: (to Dipstick) Did we make the wrong choice?
Dipstick: Lately, something doesn't feel right.
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Post by Rocketlucky on May 17, 2006 14:28:08 GMT -5
pretty good story there Trey_Vore
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Post by Two-Tone on May 17, 2006 14:57:06 GMT -5
this should be interesting, based off the movie huh?
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Post by Belchic on May 17, 2006 15:45:29 GMT -5
...I'm nervous
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Post by Trey_Vore on May 17, 2006 20:22:37 GMT -5
Double digits now, hold on...
Chapter 10: Friends amidst the hard times
Soon, Domino and Noggin's new conversation was interrupted by Lt. Pug.
Lt. Pug: All right, Noodle, come with me!
Noggin: Now what do you want?
Lt. Pug: Tuc-Tip's got a little surprise for you.
Pug's guards lifted up Noggin and reshut the cell.
Noggin: Hey! Not so tight! What are you doin', fallin' in love?...
Lt. Pug: Go! Throw 'em in!
Pug's guards reopened the cell and threw in the new prisoners. Domino's new cellmates turned out to be Little Dipper, Blaze and Spot.
Domino: Little Dipper? Blaze?
Blaze/Little Dipper: Domino!
Domino, Blaze and Little Dipper bumped each other.
Spot: So you're Domino?
Domino: Yep! Blaze, Little Dipper and I were all teammates...til I got captured.
Blaze: Let's not celebrate yet. They have Tripod and Rolly in interrogation!
Little Dipper: Yeah, we gotta spring 'em like clockwork!
Spot: So how will we escape?
Little Dipper, Blaze and Domino all stare at Spot.
Spot: ...What?
(Cuts to a shot of Little Dipper, Blaze and Domino using Spot as a lockpick.)
Noggin soon found himself inside another cell, this one planted inside a laboratory, with other scientist dogs experimenting on something. Tic-Tac entered the lab.
Tic-Tac: Ah, Noggin! Are you enjoying the show?
Noggin: Hardly. There's no popcorn, soda, not even interactivity. What kind of show is this?
Tic-Tac: Oh, I'm sure you'll enjoy it. (to scientist) Open the chamber.
The chamber being a large, white-colored cylinder with electronic doors, and siren lights on top. The mutation chamber opened up to reveal Cadpig, sitting strapped down to a seat with a virtual reality helmet on her head.
Tic-Tac: It's magificent.
Noggin could not stand to see his girlfriend being tormented like this.
Noggin: What are you doing to her, you maniac?!
Tic-Tac: I am educating her, Noggin. She will be the perfect protectorate.
Cadpig thrashes about, hating the images she was seeing.
Tic-Tac: (to scientist) Is that a reaction to the programming? What are you showing her?
A scientist flips a switch to show a whole series of disturbing images, including that of war, corruption, death and animal cruelty.
Tic-Tac: Hmmm....why would she find that merely educational material so horrible?
Noggin: She's not a lunatic, that's why!
Tic-Tac approaches the cage.
Tic-Tac: You are in no position to name call. (to scientist) Excellent work. See that she is ready for combat within 24 hours. I have another guest to tend to.
Tic-Tac leaves the lab.
Noggin: See, this is why you don't pair two geniuses together.
Meanwhile, Tripod was cuffed to a wall as Rolly was strapped to a table. As the guard prepared to torture Rolly, Tripod looked edgy; he wasn't sure Rolly could withstand the degree of torture to be inflicted. He started turning a crank to make the table grow longer...but Rolly didn't find anything wrong.
Guard: Wha--?
Tripod chuckled, knowing the guard wan't able to do anything.
Guard: Don't laugh, three legs! You're next!
Tripod growled at the guard as he left. Afterwards, Tripod turned his attention to Rolly, amazed that he could stand that type of torture.
Tripod: Man, Rolly, how do you keep yourself from yelping?
Rolly: I'm a lot taller than I look.
Voice: Hey, guys!
The voice came from the door, though the bars on the jaildoor. Though it, they found Little Dipper, Blaze, Domino and Spot.
Rolly: Hey! You guys escaped!
Domino: Don't worry about anything, guys, we'll get you out. Spot?
Spot: Yeah, yeah.
Little Dipper started using Spot as a lockpick.
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Post by Deleted on May 17, 2006 20:32:44 GMT -5
these are awsom
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Post by Belchic on May 17, 2006 20:42:31 GMT -5
Poor Cadpig! I hope Lucky and Rolly will reunite with her.
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Post by chevy24 on May 17, 2006 20:56:17 GMT -5
I love that game
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