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Post by Trey_Vore on May 18, 2006 20:19:55 GMT -5
Chapter 11: Enter the mystic
Back on the streets, Jewel, Patch and Belchic continued in vain to search for Lucky and the others. Patch finished searchig the umpteenth alley when Belchic came up.
Patch: Any luck finding Lucky?
Belchic: Like the tree said to the lumberjack, I'm stumped.
Patch: Nothing here.
Jewel came up to the boys.
Patch: Any signs, Jewel?
Jewel: Like, sorry. I haven't seen Lucky. Or Oddball.
Belchic: Well, it's getting late. We'd better go home. Man, this bites.
Jewel: We'll find them.
As Jewel, Patch and Belchic left, we put focus back on Lucky, still asleep in the garbage can.
Lucky wasn't having a good night, the only thing he could dream about was him failing, losing Oddball in the crash and letting his siblings/friends get captured. Not exactly pleasant dreams...
We return to Lucky's subconscious. He was alone on the farm, having failed to give into Tac's demands. Without his siblings, there was nothing to stop Tac from capturing everyone else. Some hero he turned out to be...
...then, seemingly by an outside force, in the blink of an eye, he was summoned to a psychedelic universe. There were bright colors everywhere; Lucky wasn't even sure of what he was standing on.
Lucky: W-where am I?
Voice: Oh, Lucky...
Lucky turned around to see a familiar face.
Rebecca: 'Top o' the evenin', Lucky.
Lucky: R-Rebecca??
Rebecca: Aye, tis I.
Lucky: I...I thought you were gone.
Rebecca: Do 'na despair. Wha's on yer mind?
Lucky: I...I...
Rebecca: Aye canna help but think yer bearin' a terrible burden.
Lucky: I am. My siblings all were captured by my nemesis and all of my worst enemies. My remaining siblings and friends swore their alligences to me but I let them all get captured.
Rebecca: 'Tis na yer fault, Lucky. 'Twas simply an accident.
Lucky: But...I...
Rebecca: Little things happen. But ya canna let it get ya down.
Lucky: Well, yeah. I still have Jewel, Patch and Belchic.
Rebecca: Is there nothin' else?
Lucky: Well, there is Oddball, but...I don't know what happened to her.
Rebecca: She is na dead.
Lucky: How do you...know she's not?
Rebecca: Trust me. Aye know that the real goodbye is when we stop believing.
Lucky: Okay...
Rebecca: Aye believe in ye, Lucky.
Lucky: ...thank you, Rebecca.
Lucky's dream came to an end, and he slowly awoke from sleep.
Lucky: Whoa, what happened? ...Oh, geez, I'd better find Jewel, Patch and Belchic and get to work! Everyone's counting on me!
Lucky got out of the garbage can and made a mad dash for home.
On the road to recovery. Hope you liked this chapter.
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Post by Deleted on May 18, 2006 23:19:54 GMT -5
cool....and I like seeing Rebbecca to
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Post by Trey_Vore on May 19, 2006 1:18:05 GMT -5
Chapter 12: My date with a madman, two traitors and a spotless Dalmatian
Inside of Tic-Tac's living quarters, Tac had some favors to ask of Two-Tone. There were artwork on the walls and couches. Two-Tone was now having her private conversation with Tic-Tac.
Two-Tone: You were still just a runt. And a bully. Like my sister Cadpig and my former gang leader Mooch. Time and time again you were always trying to kill Lucky. Yet...you don't succeed.
Tic-Tac: You were once evil. Surely you've enjoyed it.
Two-Tone: I was never evil! I only like boys who have a certain inner beauty. That's what I saw in Mooch before. But why do you think I left Mooch's gang? It was because I learned my true feelings belong with Lucky. And I have no plans to go back!
Tic-Tac: We'll see how you feel...after I break his neck.
Two-Tone: *gasps*
Tic-Tac: But there is one thing I don't understand. Why am I still called insane? Is it wrong to miss my mother? All I want to do is make the farm secure! And to do that, I feel the need to create the perfect protectorate guard dog! Cadpig will be the first of many, they will be loyal only to me and eliminate any and every threat to the farm.
Two-Tone is left dumbfounded.
Elsewhere in Tic-Tac's fortress of evil, Tripod and Rolly's torturer was trying to find a few new tools to make his prisoners talk. He found one: electricity! And he would have gotten to use it, if Wizzer and Dipstick weren't there to knock him out. Acting as though searching for someone, they walked into the cell...but upon entering, Rolly tackled Wizzer, and Blaze and Domino double-teamed on Dipstick! Tripod, Spot and Little Dipper stood by.
Tripod: (angry) Well, if it isn't the two who double-crossed us!
Little Dipper: You sold us out!
Rolly: We're all doomed because of you!
Wizzer: (mumbles something)
Little Dipper: What was that you just said?
Rolly: It'd better not be what you're named for!
Spot: I think he might have said a salute to Tic-Tac!
Wizzer: (mumbles again)
Spot: I think he might have said something useful.
Tripod: All right. Rolly.
Rolly releases Wizzer from his weight.
Wizzer: I just said *cough* "You've got the wrong guys!"
Tripod: What are you talking about?
Blaze and Domino release Dipstick.
Wizzer: We aren't here to help Tac! We're here to help you!
Blaze: Why would you do that?
Dipstick: Well, partly because we'd get in trouble if we didn't...
After pleaing their case, Tripod, Spot, Little Dipper, Blaze, Domino and Rolly agreed to give Wizzer and Dipstick another chance.
Tripod: All right. Now, we need to find Cadpig and Two-Tone. Rolly, you try to find Cadpig. Everyone else, we need to free Two-Tone from Tic-Tac.
All: Right!
Back on the Dearly Farm, Jewel, Patch and Belchic talk to Pongo about their plight.
Pongo: So you are saying Tic-Tac is responsible for the pups' disappearance?
Patch: Yep.
Belchic: And he's ransoming Lucky for their release!
Pongo: And to think Roger's been trying to pin the crime on Cruella...
Belchic: But there's a problem. We tried to stop Tac earlier, but we ended up losing Cadpig, Two-Tone, Rolly, Tripod, Spot, Blaze and Little Dipper!
Jewel: Yeah, and in the process, we totally lost Lucky and Oddball!
Pongo: Where were they last?
Patch: Downtown Grutely. But that's only because Tac was there.
Jewel: And since then, there's been no trace of either of them anywhere!
Voice: I'm baaaaack!
Jewel, Patch and Belchic turned around...and it was Lucky!
Jewel/Patch/Belchic: LUCKY!!!
Together, the three pups ran to Lucky. Jewel jumped and hugged Lucky, happy to see her brother was safe. Belchic jumped on Jewel...
Lucky: Ok, guys, um, guys...
Patch jumped on top, causing Lucky to collapse under their weight.
Lucky: All right, all right, let me up!
Jewel, Patch and Belchic got off Lucky and the four remaining pups turned to Pongo.
Pongo: I'm relieved to know you're safe, Lucky.
Lucky: Thanks, dad. I'm okay, but I can't help but blame myself.
Pongo: Lucky, whatever happened is in the past. If the others were captured, the only thing to do is save them.
Lucky: It's not that. Oddball was with me, and...
Suddenly, a voice came from Belchic's radio.
Voice: Hello? Is anyone there?
Jewel: That voice! It's...
Lucky/Jewel/Patch/Belchic: ODDBALL!
Quickly, Belchic responded to her call.
Belchic: Roadkill cafe, you kill 'em, we grill 'em!
Oddball: I just wanted you guys to know I'm okay.
Lucky: That's great, Oddball! But...how did you survive?
Oddball: I was able to jump and land on a canopy in time. I also noticed that the others were captured! I'm speaking on Cadpig's radio.
Lucky: Where are you now?
Oddball: I'm outside Tic-Tac's fortress. I followed them here. But please hurry, I don't think I can hide forever!
Jewel: Way to go, Oddball!
Lucky: We're on our way.
Belchic held up Noggin's tracking device.
Pongo: Do what you can.
Lucky: Yes, dad.
Together, Lucky, Jewel, Patch and Belchic joined arms in unity.
Lucky/Jewel/Patch/Belchic: Yeah!
And with that, the four pups sped off to save their siblings.
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Post by Deleted on May 19, 2006 1:26:27 GMT -5
this just gets better and better
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Post by Belchic on May 19, 2006 1:48:45 GMT -5
I hope nobody dies in this story!
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Post by Trey_Vore on May 19, 2006 20:20:34 GMT -5
Chapter 13: Two-Tone vs. Tic-Tac
Meanwhile, back in Tac's private living quarters...
Two-Tone: Absolutely not, Tac!
Tic-Tac: Why not? All great empires would need a successor. After I crush Lucky, you should be honored to be considered as a ruler's mate. You will have the capability to do as you please while I do every drop of hard work!
Two-Tone: Well, considering how you treat my sister, you plot to kill Lucky and you imprisoned my adopted siblings, all I will say is...Fat chance!
Two-Tone then attacked Tic-Tac with kicks and punches, taking no prisoners and making a mess out of his private living quarters. Tic-Tac wasn't putting up much of a fight for some reason, maybe because he knew his fight wasn't with her? Anyway, Two-Tone was really wailing on him, until her allies appeared.
Blaze: Two-Tone!
Spot: Two-Tone!
Tripod: We're coming, Two-Tone!
Little Dipper: Save a piece of him for me!
Suddenly, Tripod, Spot, Blaze, Little Dipper, Wizzer, Dipstick and Domino raced into the room. Two-Tone was surprised to see Wizzer and Dipstick with her friends.
Two-Tone: What...what are you guys doing with Wizzer and Dipstick? They betrayed their trust!
Spot: They're with us, believe it or not!
Tripod: We need Tac alive to free the other pups!
Domino: I'm with them.
All Tac needs is one moment of indecision. He slips into an air-tight chamber.
Two-Tone: No!!
Tic-Tac was now inside a protective alcove, while Two-Tone, Blaze, Wizzer, Domino and Little Dipper pounded against the glass.
Spot: Hey, let me at him!
Suddenly, behind the heroes, the doors close and lock.
Spot: Uh, guys?
Domino: What is it?
Spot: Something tells me we walked right into a trap!
A faint hissing is heard.
Little Dipper: What was your first clue?
Tripod: Knockout gas! Guys, we've got to get out of here!
Unfortunately, there was no way out. Tic-Tac watched with glee as one-by-one, Little Dipper, Spot, Two-Tone, Dipstick, Wizzer, Domino, Blaze and Tripod all slumped to the floor.
Tic-Tac stared and laughed evilly.
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Post by Deleted on May 19, 2006 20:27:14 GMT -5
wason that most be a 2 part yes
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Post by Trey_Vore on May 20, 2006 19:41:37 GMT -5
The fight's not over yet. Here's Chapter 14.
Chapter 14: Noggin's revenge
The next morning...
As Lucky, Jewel, Patch and Belchic made it through the woods tracing Dipstick's signal...
Lucky: All right, guys, keep an eye out for Oddball, we will need all the help we can get.
Jewel: Right!
Patch: Gotcha!
Belchic: Sounds like a plan!
Lucky seriously hoped this plot would work, there was a lot riding on it. Not to mention Cadpig, Rolly, Two-Tone and the others...
Down in Tic-Tac's laboratory, Noggin was finally alone with Cadpig while the guard was busy reading. He successfully picked the lock and grabbed a nearby lab coat. Upon looking inside the chamber, Cadpig's fur was now painted green and the insides of her ears where orange. Swearing revenge on what Tic-Tac was in the process of doing, Noggin now had a chance to see Tic-Tac's lab notes.
Noggin: (quietly, to himself)...Oh, geez...He's galvanizing the PDS syndrome?! He'll make a zombified killer! (breaking the fourth wall) Well, Belchic would think it's cool...Hmm...
He clicked a few icons. Noggin found a computer option for 'Mutation Termination'. He hit the 'download' command when a pop-up icon appeared.
Noggin: Aw, no...it'd better not be one of those 'You may have already won a million dollars' type pop-ups...
Instead, the computer pop-up read "Shutdown of Mutation Process will require 2 hours. Are you sure you want to abort?"
Noggin: Sigh...we might not have that much time...
He clicked a new option...
"Slowdown of Mutation Process will require 5 seconds. Accept?"
Noggin approved. With the acceptance of slowdown, Noggin changed the station. Cadpig started seeing static. The hateful images where soon replaced with the Inner Pecae Channel. Cadpig liked this new viewing experience.
In the command center of Tic-Tac's fortress, Wizzer, Dipstick, Little Dipper, Spot, Two-Tone, Domino, Blaze and Tripod were chained together on a catwalk. Tic-Tac, Persian Pete, Scorch, Mooch, Duke, Lt. Pug and a good number of Tac's foot soldiers were there, waiting for the moment to arrive. It would appear that Tic-Tac wants a captive audience for his ultimate victory.
Tic-Tac: (to the heroes) It's interesting; if you had worked as a team instead of as competitors, you might have succeeded in stopping me.
Mooch: What do we do in the meantime?
Tic-Tac: The time is nearly up. We will wait out the timeframe.
The timer continued to tick...
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Post by Two-Tone on May 20, 2006 20:20:28 GMT -5
hmm if this ends the way I think it will
*Dipstick and Tac are ready to fight when El Diablo suddenly teleports on screen and grabs Tac, everything goes black as the sounds of loud yelping is heard, the darkness fades as El Diablo in one of Akuma's poses stands over Tac's dead body having killed him with the Shun Goku Satsu*
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Post by Deleted on May 20, 2006 20:28:09 GMT -5
ill read it later theres a race on FX
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Post by Belchic on May 21, 2006 0:02:01 GMT -5
^I wouldn't get my hopes up Two-Tone. This is Trey's story, so it'll end the way he decides. Oh, btw, Trey, great story! Keep going!
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Post by Trey_Vore on May 21, 2006 19:06:39 GMT -5
Chapter 15: A terror is released
Lucky, Jewel and Patch succeeded in subduing three of Tic-Tac's guards while Belchic scouted ahead.
Belchic: Hey, guys! Say hello to my little friend!
Oddball appears.
Lucky: Oddball! Glad to see you're safe!
Patch: Any ideas on how to crack this can, Luck?
Oddball: I found a grate over there, c'mon!
Inside of Tic-Tac's laboratory, Noggin continues to mind his own business in the lab...until the guard's attention is sharpened.
Guard: Hey, what are you doing?!
Noggin: What's it to ya?
The guard looked on the screen to discover the programming altered...and the cell was empty.
Guard: Nothing, huh!?
The guard shoved Noggin into the side of the cage and went to call security. Noggin wasn't going to take this lying down; he grabbed a fire extinguisher and whacked the guard in the back of the head. The impact sent the guard reeling into the laboratory power box, shorting out the electricity. The lab was now in a very dim blue hue as Noggin and the guard continued fighting. But midway through the fight, the guard witnessed something truly frightening...a small, green-colored runt snarling and grunting...Cadpig was now loose!!
Using her enhanced power, Cadpig lifted up the guard and...well, for now, only Noggin could say what happened...
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Post by Deleted on May 21, 2006 20:20:57 GMT -5
now im cought up on both....grate Trey_Vore
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Post by LoneWanderer Raiden on May 21, 2006 20:50:12 GMT -5
Yup, awesome fic so far, Trey_Vore. ;D
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Post by Belchic on May 22, 2006 0:12:23 GMT -5
What they said. Cadpig had some enchanced power in her already, but this must be really enhanced power!
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