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Post by Trey_Vore on May 23, 2006 18:12:52 GMT -5
Chapter 16: A buddy inside the beast
Outside the fortress, Jewel, Patch and Oddball removed a grate and now Lucky, with Belchic, where hanging onto a rope going down a shaft.
Inside Tic-Tac's fortress, time was ticking...and it reached it's limit.
Tic-Tac: Pug, has Lucky given a response to the radio?
Pug checked it out...
Lt. Pug: No, sir.
Tic-Tac: What a pity...for the guests. Open the chamber.
Pug opens the hostage pit...
After a few twists and turns, Lucky and Belchic found another grate up above. Belchic opened the grate and the two heroes found themselves inside of Tic-Tac's laboratory. Looking around, they found the lab guard, literally twisted into a pretzel. Who--or what--could have done this?
Belchic: (whispers) Lucky, this place is as clear as mud!
Lucky: (whispers) I know, but you've got to keep quiet! I've seen movies with a set-up like this...
Belchic: (whispers) Oh, right, like...
Suddenly, without warning, Lucky was jumped by something small and green!
Belchic: Lucky!! Aye, carumba!!
Lucky was having the life choked out of him by this monster...and he couldn't see who or what it was! Belchic didn't know what to do, if this thing killed Lucky, what was to stop it from killing him too? Suddenly, he heard the door open...
At the last moment, Cadpig finally made out the facial features of her brother.
Cadpig: L-Lucky? ...Help...me...
Lucky: Cadpig? What did he do to you?
Belchic: Guys? I think we may have company...!!
Quickly, Lucky, Cadpig and Belchic hid from this new entrant, it might be an attack squadron...but only one pup could be seen. Belchic attacked it...
Pup: Ow! Hey!
The pups recognized that voice!
Lucky/Cadpig/Belchic: Rolly??
Rolly: Oh, there's where you guys are. I was wondering where you were. I was sent by Tripod to find Cadpig.
Lucky: Rolly? It's good to see you're safe. But...I don't think you'll like this...
Rolly finally noticed Cadpig, painted green.
Rolly: Whoa, Cadpig! You're...you're...
Cadpig: A beast, I know!!
Cadpig started crying, her PDS fully galvanized.
Belchic: What exactly happened to her??
Voice: It's about time you guys showed up.
Lucky/Rolly/Belchic: Noggin??
Noggin: This could have been avoided if only you got here quicker. I was a witness to everything.
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Post by pongo57 on May 23, 2006 19:56:39 GMT -5
Very impressive story telling Trey_vore. Keep up the good work.
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Post by Belchic on May 23, 2006 22:06:53 GMT -5
This is getting better!
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Post by Deleted on May 24, 2006 21:35:15 GMT -5
I cant what for 17
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Post by monkey on May 24, 2006 21:39:29 GMT -5
Yes, very good indeed.
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Post by Trey_Vore on May 25, 2006 0:23:10 GMT -5
Chapter 17: Fighting in every corridor
Up above, Tic-Tac was delievering his speech to his 'guests'.
Tic-Tac: Lucky cares too little for you, my dear guests. Too little to sacrifice himself for you. Too little to even monut any degree of rescue. Your friends along with Lucky called me an insane pup. It's fitting; for you do not deserve the martial dignity of a euthanasia, no! You shall killed BY an insane pup! A terror born of my high intelligence!! (to Pug) Raise the chamber!
Down in the lab, Noggin finishes telling Lucky, Rolly and Belchic the story of Cadpig's mutation.
Noggin: Tac's scientists tried to make her a brainless killer. She would be no more if I didn't slow down the mutation process.
Belchic: Noggin, English please!
Noggin: (Sighs) In short, without me, Cadpig would be gone. I had a hand in keeping her Cadpig.
Belchic: Oh.
Lucky: Can you fix her, Noggin?
Noggin: I would need some time, but there's nothing I can't experiment on.
Rolly: That's good. Green's not really good on Cadpig...
The mutation chamber's siren lights switched on.
Noggin: That must be the signal. Tac's ready to see his beast. Lucky, Tac is expecting you. Will you be that beast?
Lucky: Um...okay...
Belchic: You'll make a good zombie killer, Lucky!
Up on top, a strip opened up to connect the hostage pit with the hole where the mutation chamber rose up. Tic-Tac, Persian Pete, Scorch, Mooch, Duke, Lt. Pug, Wizzer, Dipstick, Little Dipper, Spot, Two-Tone, Domino, Blaze, Tripod and all of Tac's mercenaries watched as the mutation chamber rose up out of the ground.
Spot: Two-Tone...do you think that might be Cadpig?
Two-Tone: (Sadly) It might be...
The doors opened...and who should jump out but Lucky! He lept out from the chamber and jump kicked Tac in the chest.
Two-Tone: Yes!
Blaze: All right, Lucky!
Tripod: Get 'em, Lucky!
As Duke stepped forward to protect Tac, Lucky holds Tac in a 'you move and I'll break his neck' stance.
Duke: You wouldn't!
Lucky: I will! Move and you're all out of work!
Lucky said, hoping that Jewel, Patch and Oddball were working their way inside...
Tic-Tac: Kill the other pups!
Quickly, Lucky threw Tac aside and pushed the button on a control panel. This shut the hostage pit. Knowing it could simply be reopened, Lucky grabbed a nearby water dish and threw it on the panel, shorting out the controls. Lucky made break for a nearby rubble wall as Lt. Pug ordered the troops to attack.
Together, Tripod lead the others into breaking free from the pipe. They were stopped by a guard but Domino threw a rock to distract him while Tripod kicked him off the catwalk. They all made their way to join Lucky. Wizzer and Dipstick managed to make it to Lucky first.
Dipstick: In a forgiving mood, Lucky?
Lucky: Just free the others and all past charges will be dropped, all right?
Duke ordered his squad to the wall, but they literally fell victim to a cave-in in the floor...created by Rolly and Belchic! As Belchic made a break to join Lucky, Duke struck a battle stance while Rolly did a sumo stomp. A wrestling match ensued.
As Wizzer and Dipstick made a run for the lower level, Persian Pete and Scorch stared in their direction. Knowing Wizzer and Dipstick were responsible for Lucky's entrance...
Persian Pete: ...All that's left is revenge...
Persian Pete said as they followed their traitors.
Surely enough, Jewel, Patch and Oddball made their way in...
Rolly slammed Duke into the ground...their combined strength so great, they crashed through the floor.
As Little Dipper, Spot, Two-Tone, Domino, Blaze and Tripod made their way to Lucky, they were stopped by Mooch.
Mooch: Alright, no one move!
Tripod: I'll handle him. (to Mooch) You and me.
Mooch: You'll regret your actions!
Mooch said as started a Dashing Bite attack, but Tripod countered with a sliding sweep. With Tripod tied up fighting Mooch, Little Dipper held back some Tac troopers so Spot, Two-Tone, Domino and Blaze went to join Lucky and Belchic. Amazingly, he was winning.
Little Dipper: Yahooey! Ratchu! (to Lucky) Hey! What'd I miss?
Lucky: Find Wizzer and Dipstick and free the other pups!
Two-Tone: (to Lucky) We'll do what we can.
Lucky: All right. Go.
Two-Tone, Spot and Little Dipper made one team while Domino and Blaze teamed up again. One the way, they all helped Lucky fight off the Tac troopers.
Focus shift to Tic-Tac and Lt. Pug, who was on the computer trying in vain to search for something.
Tic-Tac: Where is Cadpig?!
Lt. Pug: I-I don't know! It's all coming down!
Tic-Tac: Find her! Cadpig was supposed to be perfect!
Lt. Pug hit a button to get the laboratory option. On screen, Cadpig and Noggin were decimating Tac troopers in the lab.
Tic-Tac: She's fighting my troops?! Grr...Noggin must have altered the programming!!
Suddenly, on the TV monitors, all the animals on the farm came to fight off Tac's forces!
Lucky: (to Belchic) Looks like Dad sent reinforcements!
Belchic: All right!
The wall of TVs was now blaring the phrase, 'TOTAL SECURITY ALERT'.
Tic-Tac: Then...defeat is possible. (to Pug)...And what are you doing about it?!
Lt. Pug: Um...uh...
Tic-Tac: You are my lieutenant! Get out there and fight!
Lt. Pug: Um...yessir?
Tic-Tac: NOW!!
Pug did as told.
Meanwhile, Jewel, Patch and Oddball met up with Wizzer and Dipstick.
Jewel: Like, they're okay!
Patch: It's great to see you guys are safe.
Oddball threw her arms around Dipstick.
Oddball: Me too!
Jewel: Yep! Now, c'mon!
Oddball: Um, if it's all the same to you, can I go with Dipstick?
Jewel: Alright, then. See you on top!
As Jewel and Patch left to take care of some other business, Wizzer had other plans.
Wizzer: Sayanora.
Dipstick: Where are you going?
Wizzer: Dipstick, considering how good we've been, I don't see any reason for us to continue.
Dipstick: What's wrong with you, Wizzer? Lucky and the others are fighting upstairs. The least we can do is help...
Wizzer: Yeah, and we were giving our pledge to Tac earlier. Or, were about to. And where's the glory in this?
Oddball: Why is that important?
Wizzer: It's what everyone wants! Now, are you coming with me or not? Maybe before this place crumbles we can find something worthwhile.
Dipstick: No thanks, Wizzer. (to Oddball) I already found something worthwhile.
Dipstick and Oddball leave Wizzer confused.
Wizzer: I don't get it!
Dipstick: I know you don't.
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I promised fighting, here ya go! Hope you liked this chapter.
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Post by Deleted on May 25, 2006 0:36:46 GMT -5
ive said al I can say about this hole fic......I love it its badass
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Post by Belchic on May 25, 2006 0:55:44 GMT -5
I totally agree with Slayer, Trey! This whole fic is so awesome! My only question is, when will it end?
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Post by Deleted on May 25, 2006 0:58:20 GMT -5
hopefuly not for a long time....never
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Post by Two-Tone on May 25, 2006 3:25:20 GMT -5
this oughta be good
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Post by Trey_Vore on May 26, 2006 14:20:11 GMT -5
Chapter 18: It's ain't Frankenstein's monster
Tripod and Moooch continued their fight in the corridor.
Tripod was knocked backwards into a wall as Mooch taunted.
Mooch: Get up, you wimp! You ain't getting off that easy!
Tripod: I don't intend to...
Tripod jumped jumped towards Mooch with a kick, low punch and a backhand punch.
Mooch: Ow!
Tripod: That's not it!
Tripod jumped in again with a punch, standing punch and followed with a Double Dread Kick.
Tripod: Were my killer combos to much for you Mooch?
Mooch: Ooh, man...
Tripod: The only thing you'll lose is...ow!
Tripod said as he got hit on the head by Lt. Pug.
Mooch: You thought I'd give up that easy?!
Lt. Pug: You got double trouble now, Tricycle!
Voice: Make that...Triple Trouble!
Blaze said as he and Domino stood back to back.
Domino: You're goin' down, Pug!
Lt. Pug pulled out a remote.
Lt. Pug: Don't move! Do it and I activate Robo-Roll-on!
Tripod whacked the remote out of Pug's hand...which shattered.
Lt. Pug: You imbecile! Now there's no way to control it!
In the distance, the Robo-Rolly was activated...
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Post by Trey_Vore on May 29, 2006 7:28:00 GMT -5
Chapter 19: Final Showdown! Lucky vs. Tic-Tac!
In the meantime, Jewel and Patch made it to the control room with their reinforcements with Lucky and Belchic against Tac's.
Jewel: Lucky!
Lucky: Jewel! Patch!
Jewel: There's still no sign of Tac or the other pups.
Lucky: How do you like that? All this trouble and he goes hiding.
Suddenly, Tic-Tac appeared on his wall of TVs.
Tic-Tac: Hiding? What do I have to afraid of, you? You scurry about, fearing the purity of unarmed combat!
Lucky: Well, let's hope your fighting style is better than your TV programming.
Tac suddenly appeared behind Lucky.
Tic-Tac: Turn and face me, then!
Patch: Lucky, don't do it! That's exactly what he wants!
Lucky: No, no, Patch. That's what we both want. Now, Belchic, Jewel, Patch, everyone, leave. Get the other pups out. If I don't leave in 15 minutes, go without me. (breaking the fourth wall) Man, I love these action hero quips.
Patch: (to farm animals) Move out!
Tic-Tac: (to guard dogs) Troopers, out!
Their respective forces gone, Lucky and Tic-Tac stand face-to-face.
Tic-Tac: Are you ready for me, Lucky?
Lucky: As I'll ever be.
And the battle for the future of the farm begins.
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Ooh, getting tense...
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Post by Belchic on May 29, 2006 12:03:45 GMT -5
This is sounding freakishly awesome!
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Post by Trey_Vore on Jun 1, 2006 22:02:17 GMT -5
Chapter 20: Game Over...?
As the Tripod/Mooch fight rages on, Tripod is able to headbutt Mooch, finally ending their fight.
Tripod: I think you've had enough.
Mooch stood up.
Tripod: No...
Tripod kicks Mooch, and he falls over.
Tripod: Now you've had enough.
In the meantime, Domino and Blaze were doing what they could to dodge Lt. Pug's attacks, and avoid his grenades.
Domino: This is easier than I remember. And my hands are still cuffed!
Lt. Pug was now getting angry.
Lt. Pug: That's it!
Lt. Pug leapt into the air and tossed a flurry of knives.
Blaze: Incoming!
He missed, and Lt. Pug pulled out his baton. He charged them...
And now, for the main event, Lucky and Tic-Tac were fighting in the inside of Tac's main control room.
Lucky and Tic-Tac appeared to be evenly matched; neither got the upper hand until...
Tic-Tac: You'll have to do better than that!
Lucky: Okay...(punches Tac across the face) That's for Cadpig! (punches him again) For Rolly! (kicks Tac) Two-Tone! (again) Ninety-five more to go!
Until Tic-Tac finally elbowed Lucky and Scissor Kicked him. As Lucky stood up, he felt dizzy. Tic-Tac continued the attack...
Down in Tic-Tac's training room, Spot and Little Dipper were continuing to search for the other pups as they ran into two more Tac troopers. Upon defeating them, Spot talked to the conscious member.
Spot: The other pups! Where are they?!
Little Dipper grabbed the guard dog, wound up and Roundhouse kicked him across the room.
Little Dipper: Now, where are those other pups?
Suddenly, a certain five-foot tall robot appeared...
Spot/Little Dipper: ...Not cool...!!
Tac managed to throw Lucky. Lucky was able to counter with a sweep.
After taking a few Roundhouse kicks, Tic-Tac tried to punch Lucky, but Lucky kicked him into a large conrol panel. Tic-Tac got zapped into unconsciousness. Lucky finally got a chance to let down his guard.
Voice: Lucky?
Lucky: Who is...oh, Two-Tone!
Two-Tone: You...you did it! Tac's been defeated!
Lucky: Yep. I...I did it.
Two-Tone and Lucky nuzzled; the victory claimed. Lucky then got in touch with Jewel with his radio.
Lucky: Jewel, this is Lucky.
Jewel: Lucky! Like, you're okay!
Lucky: Yes, I'm with Two-Tone.
Jewel: What's Tac's condition?
Lucky: He's conscious.
Jewel: There's fighting everywhere. Patch and I still haven't found the other pups.
Unbeknownest to Lucky and Two-Tone, Tac was revitalized by his computer.
Lucky: I have some volunteers looking...
Two-Tone: Um, Lucky?
Lucky: What?
Two-Tone: Tac is missing...?!
Soon, Lucky and Two-Tone turned around and they found...Tic-Tac, still alive and standing! He was now wearing a pair of gloves and boots. He slowly extended his arms...and shot a bolt of electrical energy into Lucky! The force blasted Lucky into Two-Tone and they both hit the rubble.
Jewel: Lucky, I need to tell you, there's a monster-sized Robot Rolly and it...it...it seems...Lucky? Are you there?
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Tac's not done yet...
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Post by Belchic on Jun 2, 2006 1:14:57 GMT -5
My God, how much longer must this terror go on???
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