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Post by Trey_Vore on Jun 4, 2006 11:58:51 GMT -5
Chapter 21: Beware the Robo-Rolly
Down in the corridor, Domino and Blaze managed to dodge Lt. Pug's grenades.
Domino: He's getting desperate.
Lt. Pug: C'mon! What else you got!?
Blaze performed his running jump kick on Pug, slamming him into a wall. Pug was then crushed underneath the wall piece knocked down by Rolly and Duke, who simply continued wrestling.
Blaze: Works for me.
Voice: Domino! Blaze!
The two gang busters turned around to find Cadpig and Noggin.
Blaze: Cadpig! You're ok! You're...green?
Cadpig: Don't ask.
Noggin: She's had a bad day. We'll explain later.
Domino: No problem, we're happy you're safe.
Blaze: Have you found the other pups?
Noggin: Not yet. But...
Suddenly, within view came the Robo-Rolly.
Cadpig: You know, I love to talk out problems. But for now, let's run!!
With that, Cadpig, Blaze, Noggin and Domino made a run from the captive taking Robo-Rolly.
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Post by Tic-Tac on Jun 4, 2006 20:55:02 GMT -5
dude, how long do you plan to drag this out
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Post by Belchic on Jun 5, 2006 0:08:15 GMT -5
You should definately become a novelest for this stuff!
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Post by Tic-Tac on Jun 5, 2006 1:25:06 GMT -5
yeah, this writing would never sell. Ever. Sorry mate, but the truth.
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Post by Two-Tone on Jun 5, 2006 2:16:02 GMT -5
Tac, with psycho powers? better call in some heavy reinforcements
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Post by Trey_Vore on Jun 11, 2006 17:11:34 GMT -5
Sorry for the delay, but I had some stuff to take care of (and some requests to finish) anyway, here's...
Chapter 22: All in danger
Down in Tic-Tac's private living quarters, Mooch opened Tic-Tac's safe and pulled out a chest, sure to be full of kibble. Crime was about to pay.
Mooch: Luckless won't take this from me, that's for sure.
He heard someone come up to the door...
Mooch: Or that three-legged loser.
As Mooch leaves, Wizzer enters the private living quarters. Seeing the safe was looted...
Wizzer: There's gotta be something.
He spies a gold statue, which he takes. He then goes to the computer screen...
Wizzer: Now where's that front door...?
Voice: Hey!
Wizzer: Wha--?
It was Belchic.
Belchic: What are you doing?
Wizzer: I'm trying to find...(sees Dipstick and Oddball) Dipstick! Oddball! Where are you two going?
Wizzer and Belchic see Persian Pete and Scorch sneaking up from the other door.
Wizzer: Dipstick! No, don't...!
Belchic: Hey, yo bro! You're heading into a trap!
In the training room, Dipstick and Oddball were trying to find the hostage pit. Luck was minimal...and got worse when Oddball was captured under a cage by Scorch.
Dipstick: Hey! Let her go!
Back in the main control room...
Lucky: Tic-Tac...how...what about the purity of unarmed combat?
Tic-Tac: This is merely superconductor electromagnetism. It levitates bullet trains from Tokyo to Osaka. And here's another thing it levitates...
Tac's boots glew. Surely enough, it did levitate him.
Two-Tone: Lucky, what is this?
Lucky: Not a clue, but I may need your help.
Tic-Tac used his boots to fire himself at Lucky and Two-Tone. The fight was not over...
In the meantime, Dipstick was avoiding Scorch's attacks the best he could, but it got a lot harder when Persian Pete attacked him from the side.
Persian Pete: You will pay for betraying your trust, Dipstick!
The fight continued up until Dipstick was finally cornered. Oddball couldn't bear to watch...until Persian Pete was hit by a golden statue!
Dipstick: Wizzer! Belchic!
Wizzer and Belchic have come to make this fight fair.
The fight between Lucky, Two-Tone and Tic-Tac continues to rage with Tic-Tac appearing to be winning...
Tic-Tac: Something wrong? You came here prepared to fight a lunatic, and instead, you found a god?!
Elsewhere in the base, Jewel and Patch had found Tripod and they continued to search for the other pups.
Tripod: Any luck finding them?
Patch: Nothing.
Jewel: Tripod, something's wrong. Lucky isn't responding to our calls, and some junk!
They suddenly met up with Domino, Blaze, Cadpig and Noggin.
Patch: Hey guys, have you found the other pups?
Tripod: Cadpig?
Cadpig: Long story.
Noggin: We'll talk.
Domino: In the meantime...
The Robo-Rolly crashed through the wall.
Domino: I think we might have found Spot and Little Dipper.
A bunch of claws popped out of the Robo-Rolly.
Tripod: For now, let's try not to get captured.
The claws swung around trying to snag the heroes, but they missed...how long could this continue?
Blaze: We can't keep this going forever!
Noggin: It must have a weak spot...
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Post by Trey_Vore on Jun 15, 2006 21:47:10 GMT -5
Chapter 23: Reflections and an overload
As the Belchic/Scorch and Wizzer and Dipstick/Persian Pete fight goes on...
Scorch again swipes at Belchic with his claw, but Belchic counters with a sweep.
Persian Pete knocks Wizzer aside and turns his attention to Dipstick. Dipstick managed to hit Persian Pete with a punching bag. And in a demonstration of his power, Persian Pete clawed open the bag with one claw swipe!
Belchic finally succeeded in knocking Scorch's claw off, and with one of his trademark burps, Scorch started to wish his sense of smell wasn't so keen; he was knocked out.
At the same time, Wizzer, Dipstick and Persian Pete are finishing their battle, without an overwhelming victor to be seen. Finally, Wizzer and Dipstick slam Persian Pete with a respective spin kick and low punch. As Dipstick and Belchic free Oddball from the cage, Wizzer leaves behind his gold statue for Persian Pete.
Wizzer: Here you go, Persian Pete. If I didn't know you, I might have become you.
Oddball: Um...what does that mean?
Wizzer: Not a clue.
Belchic: So let's make like Michael Jackson and beat it!
Wizzer, Dipstick, Belchic and Oddball leave the training room, leaving the fallen Persian Pete with his unconscious prize fighter.
Back in the corridor, Cadpig, Tripod, Noggin, Blaze and Patch were trying to save Jewel and Domino from the Robo-Rolly's claws, while trying to evade capture themselves.
Tripod: It's no use, we can't overpower it!
Cadpig: Grr...
In anger, Cadpig began to spark. Noggin noticed Cadpig's body sparkling with electricity.
Noggin: Hey, Cadpig!
Cadpig: What?
Noggin: Your body was sparking! I may have an idea. Guys, you distract it. Cadpig, you're with me. *winks*
Cadpig: Okay!
As Cadpig and Noggin avoided the claws, they made their way to the Robo-Rolly where Noggin discovered a door. Quickly, Noggin unscrewed it.
Noggin: Cadpig, ladies' first.
Cadpig jumped into the latch, touched the circuit board and got angry. The electric energy in her body began to overload the Robo-Rolly. After a few seconds, it collapsed.
Patch: All right!
After Jewel, Domino, Spot and Little Dipper were freed from the Robo-Rolly, it began to spark with power.
Blaze: That thing looks like it'll blow!
Patch: (to Cadpig) Any ideas?
Cadpig: I got one. Patch, Noggin, Domino, I'll need your help. The rest of you, try to find the other pups. We will join you soon.
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Post by Belchic on Jun 17, 2006 0:19:33 GMT -5
I don't know what else to say.
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Post by Trey_Vore on Jun 22, 2006 20:08:55 GMT -5
I'm nearing the end, I promise. Here's Chapter 24...
Chapter 24: Tic-Tac's last stand
The final advantage appears to belong to Tic-Tac: with his powers he is drawing from his fortress, Tic-Tac has been single-handedly beating both Lucky and Two-Tone. They both managed to land a few hits, but their damage appeared to be minimal.
Tic-Tac: Why bother fighting, Lucky? You're only delaying the inevitable. Doing so will only make your death more painful.
Tic-Tac used another electric bolt which again zapped Lucky. He and Two-Tone were nearly unconscious with pain and were struggling to even stand.
Suddenly, a loud crash comes from a nearby door; it was a computer panel, crunched by the Robo-Rolly! Cadpig, Patch, Domino and Noggin appeared in the now wide-open doorway.
Noggin: Payback time!
By now, warning lights and sirens start to blare, telling there is a power overload.
Tic-Tac: If I go down, you're coming with me!!
Tic-Tac swoops in yet again, but with a combined kick from Lucky and Two-Tone, Tic-Tac is rocketed backwards. At this moment, the Robo-Rolly exploded, blasting Tic-Tac out through a brick wall. Lucky and Two-Tone dodge the blast, and knowing there is nothing more that needs to be done except escape, and with an explosion imminent, Lucky and Two-Tone rendez-vous with Cadpig, Patch, Domino and Noggin and rush to reunite with their siblings/allies.
Domino: Tic-Tac, you're off the air!
Cadpig: This whole place is going to crash!!
Two-Tone: Lucky, do you think the others found the other pups?
Lucky: Let's hope so, 'cause we're out of time!
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Post by Two-Tone on Jun 22, 2006 21:07:07 GMT -5
whoa, talk about explosive
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Post by Belchic on Jun 23, 2006 2:16:22 GMT -5
Please let this have a happy ending! I don't want to see Lucky, Cadpig and Rolly seperated anymore!
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Post by Trey_Vore on Jun 28, 2006 11:56:00 GMT -5
Chapter 25: The Great Escape
Thanks to some further help from Wizzer and Dipstick, together, they, along with Little Dipper, Belchic, Oddball, Blaze, Jewel, Spot and Tripod finally, finally found the pit door...but it had an electronic lock.
Jewel: This will only take a minute.
Little Dipper: One side.
Little Dipper punched the keypad...to be faced with enormous pain.
Little Dipper: OW!! Ow, ow, ow!!
Tripod: Let me try.
Tripod kicked the keypad, smashing open the lock. This allowed the other pups to escape.
Jewel: Maybe less.
The other 87 pups bolted out from the door.
In the meantime, the Rolly/Duke fight just seemed to go on, with no end in sight...until the others made their appearance.
Spot: Rolly, c'mon! We have to go!
Rolly pushes Duke away.
Rolly: Sorry, man. Can't play now.
Rolly made a run for cover while Duke taunted his 'playmate'.
Duke: Chicken! Come back and finish our fight! (sees Mooch) Mooch!
Mooch came up with his chest.
Duke: Mooch, why are you running? The enemies of peace and freedom are at our walls!
Mooch: Are you off your nut, Duke? Tic-Tac's the evil one. Luckless and all these guys are here to stop him! Now beat it! Save yourself!
Duke: Tic-Tac is...a bad guy? If you know this, then why do you serve him?
Mooch: He paid me my weight in kibble, moron!
Mooch ran for it while Duke stood confused.
Duke: You got...paid?
Lucky, Cadpig, Two-Tone, Patch, Noggin and Domino had rejoined the team, and everyone was now running for the doors, it would be their only chance to escape the explosion.
Jewel: Keep heading for the daylight!
But there was a problem. The blast doors were closing!
Lucky: Oh, geez!!
Quickly, Cadpig jumped under the door.
Cadpig: C'mon, guys! I can't hold it forever!
With that, Lucky, Two-Tone, Wizzer, Dipstick, Jewel, Patch, Belchic, Tripod and Little Dipper tried to save them all by lifting the blast doors.
Patch: Everybody, lift!!
But they were losing ground fast, and time was running out...
Tripod: No...good...they won't be able to get out!
Suddenly, another outside force started aiding the pups in lifting the door...surprisingly, it was Duke!
Duke: Hurry! This way!
Elsewhere, Mooch was about to escape when he was stopped by Persian Pete, Scorch and Lt. Pug. They escaped out through a trap door...
Finally, the last couple of remaining pups, as well as Rolly, escaped, meaning Duke no longer needed to hold the door open.
Two-Tone: Was Rolly the last one?
Cadpig: Yep.
Duke released the door.
Lucky: All right, let's move, move, move!
As the timer ticked down to zero, the pups, farm animals and Tac troopers ran as far as they could...
Lucky: Hit the dirt!!
The fortress exploded with reckless abandon.
As soon as Mooch, Scorch, Persian Pete and Lt. Pug were far enough away...
Mooch: We should be safe here.
Lt. Pug: All right, why don't we open Moron's chest?
Persian Pete: I'll open it.
Persian Pete used his claw to pick Mooch's lock...only to find birdseed. Lt. Pug shook his head in defeat, Persian Pete laughed defeatedly, Mooch was left kicking himself, and Scorch just helped himself.
Jewel: Congradulations, Lucky! Like, this mission was a total success!
Cadpig: I'm so happy!
Belchic: (holding up a pair of nunchucks) Cowabunga!!
Tripod and Rolly high-five, Domino and Blaze 'bash' each other, Wizzer and Dipstick stand proud, Jewel and Patch handshake, Little Dipper jumps onto Spot toppling her, Noggin and Cadpig hug, Belchic held his arm up in victory and Lucky and Two-Tone nuzzled. Duke, in the time being, gave a thumbs up.
Within two weeks...
Things appeared to be under control. Tic-Tac was incarcerated, and Noggin had succeeded in demutating Cadpig to her sweet regular self. The Main Pups were now kicking back, watching TV...until they announced Cruella's new plot for a clothing line...grass!
Cadpig: Uh-oh.
Rolly: What's 'uh-oh'?
Cadpig: Where do you think Cruella will try to steal grass from?
Lucky: Good point. We'd better assemble the team.
Cadpig/Rolly/Spot: Right!
Belchic and Noggin enter.
Noggin: Honey, I'm home.
Belchic: Hey, guys! 'Sup?
Lucky: We think Cruella may be up to something. C'mon, you guys can help us.
Noggin: Sure. Doesn't mean I'll do it...
Cadpig: C'mon, Noggin. For me?
Noggin: Sure, Cadpig. *winks*
Soon, we see Cruella alongside Jasper and Horace in a bizarre gigantic-sized lawnmover.
Cruella: (to Jasper and Horace) We need grass you goons! And the Dearlys are a prime grass market! Once their lawn is decimated, they'll beg me to take the farm!
Jasper/Horace: Yes, ma'am.
We change focus to Lucky, Cadpig, Rolly and Spot. As the camera pans back, we see Two-Tone, Tripod, Belchic, Noggin, Jewel, Patch, Blaze, Domino, Little Dipper, Oddball, Wizzer, Dipstick and Duke.
(fade out)
Lucky: Dearly pups, go!
THE END
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Thanks for reading, all who read it. I hope you enjoyed it.
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Post by Belchic on Jun 28, 2006 19:27:30 GMT -5
Hey, Trey_Vore! That was an awesome conclusion to your story. As for overall, all I can say is...nice job! You managed to depict the character's personalities perfectly. While I'm not too huge of a Street Fighter fan, the whole thing was really good. Again, great job. It was long, but it was still worth reading. I hope you keep writing.
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